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Summary:

He was the last person that she thought would want to help her.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: The only thing that matters
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 54189
Read Count: 107072
Published: March 04 2012
Updated: March 04 2016


Title: Chapter 8: {Eight} Blurry

Got my Concrete Dog fix and I am HAPPY. This is one of my favorite stories. You are awesome UPDate PLEASE!!!!!

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Date: September 01 2013

Title: Chapter 4: {Four} When he has your scent

This story is just so magnificent. I love the way you write. i love the way you think. It just flows onthe screen and I never tire of reading your work. I love Trace and Lauren. I love that your stories weave together and MAKES sense. I think that that is so cool. UPDATE ( look who's talking about update LOL)

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Date: April 30 2012

Title: Chapter 9: {Nine} From Blurry to Clear

I am so grateful that you have returned to write. I know the struggle. This story is just too good to let go. I LOVED this chapter. I love that Trace and Lauren are together and will face Parker that way. I can't wait for the next gift....YOU ROCK

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Date: February 29 2016

Title: Chapter 3: {Three} What she means to the Wolf

Dude! You got me jumping from one foot to the other waiting on an update. The Concrete Dog is excellent. I love this story. I can barely think of my own stuff without Trace standing there looking at me. You have created a character that will live in my mind everytime I think of writing. I love Lauren with him.She is the softness and comic to his hardness and I take no shit attitude. This is so well done. It flows it, smacks you , it is AWESOME!

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Date: March 20 2012

Title: Chapter 1: {One} Between a Rat and a Wolf

Talk about Love is Blind. Everyone can see his hate tattoos but she only sees the wolf on his arm!!!. The Concrete Dog is excellent!!! I love your Trace and Lauren is so funny sometimes. I love this story. UPDATE!!

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Date: March 05 2012

Title: Chapter 2: {Two} There are things we have to do

I love me some Concrete Dog. I love him like no other. I love lauren. I think she is funny and has no idea what that concrete man of hers will do to her and for her. I love the way you write you are Marvelous...Oh yeah UPDATE

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Date: March 10 2012

Title: Chapter 1: {One} Between a Rat and a Wolf

I've waiting forever man. When are you going to update this. Please update please I am begging you. I am a sick woman(really sick headache and stuffy) do it for the ill woman. Thank you Spiderbite

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Date: May 16 2012

Title: Chapter 10: {Ten} Allow me to introduce her to you

Just plain AWESOME please say that you are updating soon. I love this story

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Date: March 17 2016

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Summary:

Jane Flowers loved her accounting job at the prestigious firm of Greene and Associates. She had a specific plan on how her life would evolve, and it did not include the loud and bold cowboy millionaire Carter Thorne.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Opposites Attract
Series: The only thing that matters
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 45166
Read Count: 75967
Published: March 20 2012
Updated: April 07 2016


Title: Chapter 9: {Nine}{revised-new text added}

Trina has finally done it.! NOt only is she a greedy , lowdown conniving bitch; she is a rapist of her brother!!! YUCK!!! She almost makes Deanna look tame( I said almost) Can this bitch add! She thinks Carter will think its his The math is all wrong and she is pshyco and dangerous!

Is Gregory going to help Jane or make it worse. it is hard to tell what he is thinking since he has never done it before. I need to find out.

Carter is the man> I love that he took Jane away from this to regain her composure. She knew that they were coming but not while she was weak. I think thta he will helpher see that she is already stronger than Deanna and none of her retarded words mena anything. I love that he told her not to worry about anyone loving her. I think that is all that Jane needs.

TRULY AWESOME STORY!!! UPDATE

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Date: September 01 2013

Title: Chapter 8: {Eight}{revised -new text added}

YES you are back!!! And once again Trina jusr amazes me with her plans and tricks. Trying to pawn a baby off as Carter's and have Deanna do it for her. She is trying to keep herhands clean by using a souless woman and a guttless man. I hate these people.

I know that Jane is storng but your Mother is supposed to love you that is some mind blowing stuff when she does not. That recovery sometimes takes a lifetime but there is Carter and I lnow that he will help and protect her because I feel that more evil is coming

AWESOME UPDATE!!!

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Date: September 01 2013

Title: Chapter 10: {Ten}

Okay I maybe, no  I think that I am the only one to say this.PLEASE DON'T KILL GREGORY! That man is fighting for his family and Trina that BITCH is just not gonna let him do it. Deanna was alright for a year and a half and this evil tart just screwed that up. Please don't kill him. Trina is going to get into Carter's house. how else is he going to watch her. I just know that she is working with Randall's ASS and she is screwing things up because now she wants Carter. He better get his shit together becasue all of this is his fault. Should have went with what he wanted the smart independant woman. Now Jane is gonna have to watch them together but we all know that Carter don't do what he should do! EXCELLENT!

 

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Date: April 07 2016

Title: Chapter 3: {Three}

What are you doing lettingthis just sit there. there are people who need to be trampled and a Jane that needs some Carter loving. I lvo ethis story so UPDATE it pronto!!!

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Date: May 11 2012

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William Lucas Kapori was a self-made millionaire. At 40 he had everything he ever wanted, a beautiful twenty something girlfriend, a luxurious mansion, and a job that he loved. His life was perfect, so why was he pursuing Ana Kay.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 52745
Read Count: 76033
Published: March 29 2012
Updated: April 10 2014


Title: Chapter 4: {Four}

I love will. Ana has no need to worry about Frederick.  I love these two

I wished Vincent would have stabbed his brother but marking him for life is good. You can see him coming. Frederick is GONE! He needs to face Will and we will see how a rat with fair with a beast. AWESOME update. I love this story

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Date: April 30 2012

Title: Chapter 1: {One}

Where the HECK have you been!!! This is a beautiful and awesome story. I love your characters and I can't wait for more of the backstory. I love Ana. I already know that. Gretchen is my road dog. Mr. William Kapori I can see something happening here. I want more and I am off to read it

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Date: April 01 2012

Title: Chapter 2: {Two}

I know that I am one to talk but you HAVE to give Ana a happy ending! Finish this story. This chapter; the WHOLE smyphony of your writing was absolutely beautiful. I loved the flowers. I love Will that man is a MAN. FINISH THIS I AM BEGGING YOU WITH ALL THAT I HAVE

Spiderbite

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Date: April 01 2012

Title: Chapter 5: {Five}

This chapter was excellent! I love the way that Will protects Ana. Crazy Frederick does not stand a chance. I love the slow and methodical wy that Will is going about bring Ana out of her prison! I think that he is PERFECT for her! I love these two together!

Glenna surprised me! I did not think that she had that kind of humanity. I take back everything tht I thought abut her. Glenna is alright in my book. It takes strength to give up something that you love.

i love this chapter

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Date: September 29 2012

Title: Chapter 6: {Six}

Tis story is fabulos and beautiful! You are a marvelous writer. I love these two! Please update again PLEASE I love it!!!!!

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Date: September 29 2012

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Summary:

All Kenneth Squire wanted to do was save his sister from her over-zealous boss, James Norden. So asking Secret Agent Nick Viking to be Morgan's boyfriend was the most logical step.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 20104
Read Count: 35301
Published: May 05 2012
Updated: December 09 2017


Title: Chapter 2: {This is my cast}

AWESOME PICTURES!!!!!!

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Date: May 11 2012

Title: Chapter 1: {Will you date my sister?}

LOVE THIS!!!!! I love Kenneth and what he will do for his sister. Nick is a MONSTER. I love him already. PLEASE UPDTAE

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Date: May 11 2012

Title: Chapter 3: {Mother knew best}

THIS STORY IS THE SHIZNIT!!!!!!!

I LAUGHED AND LAUGHED MY WAY THROUGH THIS MASTERPIECE OF WRITING> WHY IS THIS NOT ON THE REC BOARD? WHY!!!!!

I LOVE NICK. Morgan is SO LUCKY!!!!!!!!! Nick's team is so funny. I love how they are with Kenneth and the earmuff thing LOL. Kenneth is just a pain in my side from laughing. That boy is the cause of all of this. AWESOME.

I could just maim Kendal and Tucker. That part where she thinks that Nick woudl want her made me want to kick a whole in my computer screen.

I LOVE THIS STORY!! AWESOME UPDATE

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Date: June 26 2012

Title: Chapter 4: {The Boyfriend Benefits}

You know that I love you right? This story is one of my two fav's next to the Concrete Dog. You are awesome and yep I'm recommending this  right sfter I'm done here. This is just Awesome .

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Date: June 26 2012

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The Redtips Wolf clan wrongfully accused of hunting humans on Vampire Lord Jye's land; must give the only maiden of their pack,Sarason as concubine, to save their clan from destruction.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Fantasy, Horror, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 33031
Read Count: 32032
Published: May 31 2012
Updated: August 10 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue~

AWESOME OPENING! I am loving this already excellent!

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Date: September 08 2012

Title: Chapter 2: One~

Tis story is spectacular!!! I love these characters. You writing is so powerful and dramatic! I am envious and floored!! 

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Date: September 08 2012

Title: Chapter 3: Two~

Flawless, beautiful, powerful,marvelousand done with excellence your writing is magnificent! I love this story

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Date: September 08 2012

Title: Chapter 4: Three~

I sincerely apologize for not reading this INCREDIBLE story earlier! This is truly one of the best stories that I have read! I absolutely love Jye Unudrea, Sarason, Phen, Arabella, Dina,Khale, Orrin, the healer Alex, The Redtips Clan, The Vampire Nation, I love EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS STORY!!!!!!

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Date: September 08 2012

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