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Will and Ana by SafeHaven
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 450]
Summary:

 

stories/2011/images/William_Kapori.jpg        stories/2011/images/Ana.jpg

 

 

 

William Lucas Kapori was a self-made millionaire. At 40 he had everything he ever wanted, a beautiful twenty something girlfriend, a luxurious mansion, and a job that he loved. His life was perfect, so why was he pursuing Ana Kay.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 52745
Read Count: 78020
Published: March 29 2012
Updated: April 10 2014

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Title: Chapter 4: {Four}

I love will. Ana has no need to worry about Frederick.  I love these two

I wished Vincent would have stabbed his brother but marking him for life is good. You can see him coming. Frederick is GONE! He needs to face Will and we will see how a rat with fair with a beast. AWESOME update. I love this story

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Date: April 30 2012
Title: Chapter 1: {One}

Where the HECK have you been!!! This is a beautiful and awesome story. I love your characters and I can't wait for more of the backstory. I love Ana. I already know that. Gretchen is my road dog. Mr. William Kapori I can see something happening here. I want more and I am off to read it

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Date: April 01 2012
Title: Chapter 2: {Two}

I know that I am one to talk but you HAVE to give Ana a happy ending! Finish this story. This chapter; the WHOLE smyphony of your writing was absolutely beautiful. I loved the flowers. I love Will that man is a MAN. FINISH THIS I AM BEGGING YOU WITH ALL THAT I HAVE

Spiderbite

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Date: April 01 2012
Title: Chapter 5: {Five}

This chapter was excellent! I love the way that Will protects Ana. Crazy Frederick does not stand a chance. I love the slow and methodical wy that Will is going about bring Ana out of her prison! I think that he is PERFECT for her! I love these two together!

Glenna surprised me! I did not think that she had that kind of humanity. I take back everything tht I thought abut her. Glenna is alright in my book. It takes strength to give up something that you love.

i love this chapter

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Date: September 29 2012
Title: Chapter 6: {Six}

Tis story is fabulos and beautiful! You are a marvelous writer. I love these two! Please update again PLEASE I love it!!!!!

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Date: September 29 2012
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Dominion by WalkingPapers
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 168]
Summary:

 

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The Redtips Wolf clan wrongfully accused of hunting humans on Vampire Lord Jye's land; must give the only maiden of their pack,Sarason as concubine, to save their clan from destruction.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Fantasy, Horror, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 33031
Read Count: 32745
Published: May 31 2012
Updated: August 10 2013

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Title: Chapter 1: Prologue~

AWESOME OPENING! I am loving this already excellent!

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Date: September 08 2012
Title: Chapter 2: One~

Tis story is spectacular!!! I love these characters. You writing is so powerful and dramatic! I am envious and floored!! 

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Date: September 08 2012
Title: Chapter 3: Two~

Flawless, beautiful, powerful,marvelousand done with excellence your writing is magnificent! I love this story

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Date: September 08 2012
Title: Chapter 4: Three~

I sincerely apologize for not reading this INCREDIBLE story earlier! This is truly one of the best stories that I have read! I absolutely love Jye Unudrea, Sarason, Phen, Arabella, Dina,Khale, Orrin, the healer Alex, The Redtips Clan, The Vampire Nation, I love EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS STORY!!!!!!

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Date: September 08 2012
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue~

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!

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Date: September 08 2012
Title: Chapter 5: Four~

This story is perfection! I am so happy that I found. You are a amazing writer. Tis story is flawless

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Date: September 16 2012
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Just Ordinary by Forks and Knives
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 193]
Summary:

Carmen Shelly preyed on married men and usually won her sought after prize. Business is booming until her partner sets his sights on her single sister.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 41535
Read Count: 39601
Published: July 29 2012
Updated: February 28 2016

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Title: Chapter 1: Just Ordinary Cast

I like the opening picture black and white and a beautiful Lotus flower. I like the cast too

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Date: September 15 2012
Title: Chapter 2: One - Target sighted

This Carmen woman is a stank bitch! I can smell her from here! I do not like her AT ALL! The way she treats her family and the way she thinks and acts makes me want to slap her!!! AWESOME JOB

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Date: September 15 2012
Title: Chapter 3: Two -The Invasion

What kind of disgust runs through this woman's veins. Why does she treat Nichole with such disdain. She can't live without aman looking ather and if they don't she attacks them! That bitch is crazy. I want MORE interaction with Richard and NIchole.!!!! Carmen will hate it but I won't. EXCELLENT 

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Date: September 15 2012
Title: Chapter 4: Three Counter-attack and the retreat

LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!! YEAH Nichole finally has found someone that is not affected by Carmen. Carmen hates it and I DON'T CARE IF SHE CRIES!!!!! I hate that bitch! EXCELLENT

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Date: September 15 2012
Title: Chapter 5: Four- I declare...War {glimpse into the mind of a psychopath}

It's confirmed that girl is psyhco! You captured her perfectly! I want Richard to always be there to protect Nichole. I want more of them! Yes I am begging

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Date: September 15 2012
Title: Chapter 6: Five- Drawing a line in the sand

Drawing a line in the sand.  AWESOME!!!! MORE I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!

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Date: September 16 2012
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Knight In Shining Armor by AntiVenom
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 71]
Summary:

A knight in shining armor is not always the righteous and kind-hearted man. Sometimes, he's the one that speaks his mind and uses his fists. He is not perfect but if he loves you....he loves you



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: The only thing that matters
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 17229
Read Count: 11381
Published: March 01 2016
Updated: December 29 2017

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Title: Chapter 1: ~Chapter One...~

So cool linking all your stories I Love it. Please update want to know more about Kelsey , Nickolas and rat Randall

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Date: March 17 2016

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