Penname: cocoablue [Contact]

Real name: Terry Walker

Member Since: March 14 2012

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[Reviews - 415]
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* ON THE CHAMBER'S TOP TEN MOST FAVORITE STORIES LIST

& NOW KINDLE VELLAS TOP 250 FAVORITES LIST *

FIVE STARS ON AMAZON

When the lines are drawn, will you risk your life to cross them for love?

In the Summer of 1988, tragedy hits home for Charlene Jacobson and her father when her little brother is killed playing a game of basketball in their Detroit housing projects.  She soon finds herself living in the small rural town of Millersville, Georgia, with her estranged grandmother. Millersville is a place where time stands still and the racial divide is as prevalent as the 1950s.  Secrets, lies, and betrayal lurk in every corner. Yet, through it all she finds solace in the arms of Ryan Quinn, a white senior track star and the son of the town Sherriff.  

Will their love cross the finish line?  

EDIT:  Crossing the Finish line has been removed from this site and a revised version with added new content has been published on Amazon Kindle Vella (as of November 2022) under the penname, Shelly B Williams. To those of you who have left reviews, added me to your Favorite Authors and Story Alerts, and helped to make CTFL one of the Top Ten Most Favorited Stories on Valent Chamber, I trully appreciate all the support you have shown me over the years. I hope you will continue to support me as I begin the next phase of my journey as a published author. I couldn't  have done this without you. 

Much Love!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Deep, dark, and mysterious
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5758
Read Count: 214661
Published: November 07 2010
Updated: January 09 2014


Title: Crossing the Finish Line

No it's all good I just need to familiarize myself with this story again because it has been so long in between updates and take a look back at some of these characters again

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed
Date: October 26 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 287]
Summary:

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"Power is the ultimate aphrodisiac.”- Henry Kissinger

 

In the game of social politics not everyone has power and some don’t understand the power they wield. The power to make and break lives rest in the hands of one man but be careful, he is always watching.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 36415
Read Count: 69896
Published: December 14 2010
Updated: November 09 2012


Title: Chapter 17: Climax

Yes,it was worth the wait! Eager for more to be revealed and for some reason,I feel that Amelle deep down feels more than hate for Harrison.This was a wonderful surprise to see this update.Ready for the end and the Sequel!!! ;)

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 09 2012

Title: Chapter 17: Climax

It has been so long since an update...I hope you will be back to update or finish this story,I know real life has it's place and continues on, but this story captivated me from the beginning and would love to read more so if the muse has left,I hope it makes an appearance real soon...lol Anxious for MORE!!!

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed
Date: October 04 2012

Title: Chapter 18: Million Dollar Man

To see this story updated again is a grand surprise!!! Thanks Drogheda and I hope we can be surprised with another update soon because I've absolutely enjoyed it thus far...

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed
Date: November 10 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 111]
Summary:

Smiling got her through the deaths of her parents. Therefore smiling will get her through her guardian's wedding. Not that she loves him or anything...

 

 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:Yes
Word count: 8390
Read Count: 18202
Published: December 20 2010
Updated: March 24 2012


Title: Chapter 7: Authors Note

Well this sucks...lol

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed half-star
Date: May 03 2012

Title: Chapter 6: Until We Bleed Part 2

Maybe I missed something but Im getting confused on the timeline.There are times the wording makes me think this takes place in another time period then a modern phrase sneaks up on me...Need confirmation please!

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Date: May 03 2012

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Summary:

Farewell

 

She didn't choose this Life. He chose It for her. And for that, he must pay the Ultimate Price.

Exceedingly Dope Banner by my homeskillet Valhalla.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Horror, Mystery, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 32
Completed:No
Word count: 92749
Read Count: 99692
Published: January 24 2011
Updated: March 20 2014


Title: Chapter 5: Just a Little Closer

Oh no,dont mess with Joey!!! Falling for team Joey right now...this just snuck up on me...lol  Sorry Vlad

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 24 2012

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Summary:

 

You have had life mapped out at a young age. Get into a performance arts college. Own your own dance studio and stay away from boys.... But what happens when you meet the love of your life?  Then come to find out he has a girlfriend? But, he has eyes for only you...

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 30
Completed:No
Word count: 181242
Read Count: 80216
Published: April 05 2011
Updated: December 24 2017


Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 You And Me And All Other People

Reading a new update about Justin and Jalena was just great,I almost forgot about them,I had been looking for an update for so long and didn't recognize the title when I saw it, but I'm glad they're still on your mind,now it's time for a consummation between them already,lol.Justin needs to realize what his heart already knows and have some  hot and heavy JuLena time with Stacy plotting to break them up.Enough angst, good loving requested ;))))

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 03 2012

Title: Eyes For Only You

I liked this chapter and want to know if this is the end,cause I would feel a little let down if there's no closure between Justin and Stacey with a declaration of love between Jalena and Justin along with consummation of that love.Been waiting a long time to finally see them together with no ties to others and being happy for once,but I am glad you updated this story cause I thought it was forgotten...Thanks!



Author's Response:

Oh thank you, and nooo so not done have at leas 3-4 more chapters :) I wouldnt leave you hanging like that Im not trying to be internet stabbed lol and no I not a forogtten story just a busy life but if you ever want to know my status on the story please feel free to pm me I wont let this story go I know how that is to read something then months even a year goes by and nothing yeah not going to do that.. :) Thanks againg for leaving me a review. :)

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed
Date: October 18 2012

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 You And Me And All Other People

Where are YOU!!!!!!

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed
Date: October 10 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 207]
Summary:

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Shenai always wanted to be with Jeremy but with so many obstacles in her way it was impossible. Now that Jeremy’s father has passed away he’s rushed the next girl that best fit his father description to the altar. Shenai sees her window of opportunity with Jeremy quickly boarding up and wants to take the nails off the boards that are going keep her away from Jeremy forever but she doesn’t have the will to do it. Shenai truly believes after Jeremy is married; her life will be over but little does she know it’s only the beginning of chaotic a life and just maybe she might get what she’s always wanted in the beginning.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 38343
Read Count: 37562
Published: April 21 2011
Updated: February 02 2014


Title: Chapter 4: Un-regrettable Events

Hawt!!! Shenai is a bad girl and that Jeremy...Wow   Wondering whats giong to happen next?

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed
Date: July 06 2012

Title: Chapter 5: The Best Shower Ever Taken

Uhoooh!!!

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed
Date: July 06 2012

Title: Chapter 7: Everyone Lies

Aaaaauh...Sad

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Date: July 06 2012

Title: Chapter 8: A Friend In Need

Aaaauah,that was so nice!

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed
Date: July 06 2012

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Summary:

For married author Dove Morgan, the trip to the big city was the first in a series of things she never thought she'd do. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 44246
Read Count: 29157
Published: July 27 2011
Updated: April 08 2012


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Wow!!!

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 09 2012

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                                                                                     (Banner by Missus James)

 

Lucas Spaulding waited three years before he could claim his woman his mother brought into their privilaged home. She swore that she would never leave, now it looks like she needs to be reminded who she belongs to. she's on notice. Lucas is on the hunt and he doesn't intend to play fair.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Chains & Whips Excite Me
Series: The Alphas of Spaulding Inc.
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 41598
Read Count: 74122
Published: August 17 2011
Updated: July 26 2012


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Thanks for this taste of a chapter,can't wait for the rest!!!

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 28 2012

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Mina is a walking contradiction.The last chapter she was being strong making the right decisions for her well being or so she thought,but this chapter she has reverted back to being needy again in my opinion and settling to being only the submissive to Lucas alpha...Still can't wait for their alone time if you know what I mean,lol

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 03 2012

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Glad you updated so quickly,but I personally think it is taking too long for Mina and Lucas to consummate and a continuous rhythem between the last few chapters is off.It can be confusing, especially the sexual interaction between Mina and Lucas.I still love this story  and the concept.



Author's Response:

I can't say that I see what you are talking about.  Shoot me an email to give me some examples when you can okay?

 

Thanks for the critique and for reading.

 

CL

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed starstarstarstar
Date: May 05 2012

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Tara does something she never thought she'd do, save one of the living dead. Now she's being hunted by the Authority. Eric is the only one who can protect her-that's if she agrees to give him what he wants in return.

Takes place during S4E9 Let's Get Out of Here. JUICY LEMONS! Tara/Eric with a little Sam/Tara and Alcide/Tara flirting on the side (just because I can't resist a little Tam and Talcide)



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Tara Thornton
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge, Deep, dark, and mysterious
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:Yes
Word count: 76043
Read Count: 48323
Published: August 28 2011
Updated: September 08 2015


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Body Language

Loving it!!!! I'm so glad you're back.Sad to say I haven't seen any of season five because of work,but I've heard a little about it and I'm so siked to began as soon as I'm off week-ends.Tara as a vamp..whoa...i'm guessing she will be a cold bad-ass and fanfic about Vamp Tara and Hoyt? Don't really know cause I find him sweet but very boring...

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed
Date: July 12 2012

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Cat and Mouse

High five on the update!

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Date: April 28 2012

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Be Mine

Well I really can't call it but I think it would be interesting if she came back as a vampire cause it would drive her insane to come back as that... True Blood...WooHoo!!!!!

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 11 2012

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - The Heart of Anubis

Loved this chapter...Can't wait for mor!!!

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed
Date: September 05 2012

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Special Delivery

Tara standing by her man while another waits to take up the slack if the other expires,lol Tara is one lucky Hookah!!! lmbo ,you gotta love her...

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed
Date: September 05 2012

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Family Ties

Totally love Eric,also with Tara...Very intrigued by the baby mystery,but I'm guessing as a long shot that somehow the supposed baby is Erics'...Eagerly waiting for more!!!

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed
Date: October 08 2012

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Seek and You Shall Find Him

I knew it...Eric wasn't shooting blanks afterall,lol

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed
Date: October 17 2012

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.