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[Reviews - 94]
Summary:

Evelyn Campbell starts her new job at a top property development company. She gets the shock of a lifetime when someone she thought she had left behind long ago returns to her life with a vengance; and he is determined to make her pay for leaving him.

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 5238
Read Count: 12914
Published: February 28 2011
Updated: August 07 2012


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

What happened to the baby?



Author's Response: I'm getting to that..

Reviewer: Stories Signed star
Date: August 05 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 207]
Summary:

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Shenai always wanted to be with Jeremy but with so many obstacles in her way it was impossible. Now that Jeremy’s father has passed away he’s rushed the next girl that best fit his father description to the altar. Shenai sees her window of opportunity with Jeremy quickly boarding up and wants to take the nails off the boards that are going keep her away from Jeremy forever but she doesn’t have the will to do it. Shenai truly believes after Jeremy is married; her life will be over but little does she know it’s only the beginning of chaotic a life and just maybe she might get what she’s always wanted in the beginning.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 38343
Read Count: 37537
Published: April 21 2011
Updated: February 02 2014


Title: Chapter 11: After the Reception

I don't understand.  You have now turned your protagonist into a druken slut?  Having unprotected sex with two brothers in less than 24 hours.  It may not read as such, but for Jerimiah to have had sex with her was wrong, even if she sobered up a bit she was still hurt from Jeremy's rejection.  And with no protection there is always the chance of a pregnancy...for twins...who's the dad.  Your female protagonist seemed so strong, now shes a slut.  If she was meant to end up in the brothers bed, she shouldn't have stopped in her "best friends"bed first.  Her actions helped Jeremy cheat on his fiance, her second actions helped Jerimiah cheat on his girlfriend.  Is that all she is got for?

Reviewer: Stories Signed half-star
Date: July 05 2012

Title: Chapter 18: Letters

Are the twins indentical or fraternal?

Author's Response:

fraternal

Reviewer: Stories Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: October 18 2013

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[Reviews - 348]
Summary:

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Tyler could count on one hand the number of attempted, but failed relationships that he had; had. It was getting to the point that he just was ready to give up on finding love or the right person he could give his entire self to. Most of the women he had a relationship with didn't last long not because they didn't want it, they just couldn't handle his faults or flaws. Tyler Hollis had a secret an extremely large secret that over the years, he had learned how to control to an extent, but at some point in the relationship, it would become the topic of conversation and downhill the relationships would go. He was looking for that one special woman that wouldn't mind them; he wasn't sure if she was the one, but the way he was feeling about her he wanted to make her the one. It wasn't very many women he had wanted in his thirty-eight years, but her he felt he couldn't live without.

♥ ஒ Love ஒ ♥...

Kayla had only had two real relationships in her life, okay let's be honest one and she wasn't even sure that was the real thing. It had been over seven years ago. She had always focused on her career, she was what they called a workaholic, her best friends India and Traci would tell her she was sexually deprived, that she needed to started living before she woke up one morning and life had passed her bye. However, never in her right mind did she think she would be in a predicament like this, it was totally out of her character to let something like this happen, and to let it happen like this. It was overwhelming more like surreal an impulsive act, or so she thought. Could it have been a calculating move on his part or was it just something that happened to happen. But if they both were completely honest with themselves it had been building ever since that faithful snowy morning.

♥ ஒ Love ஒ ♥...

Disclaimer: There is no Copyright Infringement intended. The names and characters in this story are of my own creation, so any similarities to any person or person's in this story dead or alive fictional or non-fictional is purely coincidental. Any and all recognizable characters involved in the images are solely owned and the property of their respective owners or by an unknown developer THAT IS NOT ME!! I do not own it/them and will not make money on them. The author of this story is in no way associated with the franchise/franchises of any creators, producer, owner or any media that may be used along with this story.

© Kaleah, 2011.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female, Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 47
Completed:Yes
Word count: 218680
Read Count: 114531
Published: October 03 2011
Updated: January 01 2013


Title: Chapter 37: Driven To a Better Understanding

Tyler needs therapy...seriously.  The number one cause of death in pregnant women is homicide at the hands of the childs father.  Kayla has no family, few friends, no acceptance coming from her baby's grandmother...she needs time away from Tyler. Imagine losing her job and being financially dependant on him.  No good.  From the physical pain during sex to emotional abuse...they need time away from each other. He more so than her needs to get his head together.

Reviewer: Stories Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: August 16 2012

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 427]
Summary:

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Sometimes when it comes to family and their issues, a lie is more acceptable than reality.

 

Acceptable Lies is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 93404
Read Count: 94661
Published: December 23 2011
Updated: January 19 2013


Title: Acceptable Lies

Please give this OLD WHITE FREAK vd.  At lease herpes or something...but only after he takes care of Franklin the rapist.

Reviewer: Stories Signed
Date: November 23 2012

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 250]
Summary:

21 year old Tatyana Dragovich has been an honorary member of the Aleksandrov crime family since childhood. Known as the Aleksandrov Princess, her life as an under ground street racer was perfect with Nikolai and Mikhail, the current heads of the family. What happens when a super sexy cop moves in next door and Tatyana finds herself in bed with law enforcement AND the mob? HELP!



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 41094
Read Count: 110025
Published: April 04 2012
Updated: April 17 2013


Title: Chapter 13: Need a Ride?

My understanding is that Ana's father was Russian (I'm assuming white) and her mother was Black American.  Why are the police saying that her father was Black (African American)? 

Reviewer: Stories Signed starstarstar
Date: July 10 2012

Title: Chapter 14: Stealthy Limo's

Sometimes people through their own stupidity or enflated sense of importance bring problems to themselves.  What young, single woman lives the way Ana does?  Doesn't lock her doors?  Doesn't have a security system when she knows how the real world work?  Whatever happens to her will be her own fault.  I can't feel sorry for someone who is too arrogant or stupid to make simple changes to safeguard the one life she's been given.

Reviewer: Stories Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: July 31 2012

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[Reviews - 302]
Summary:

 

Esther Hendrickson has loved teaching young children, mainly because she cannot have children of her own. What was once society's trophy wife, her abusive past has led her deep into dementia, but the love of hardened FBI agent A.J. Thomas may be just what she needs to heal her torn heart.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 46765
Read Count: 75326
Published: June 14 2012
Updated: January 03 2015


Title: Chapter 8: E is for Eager

This story is great.  Could you please, please make your chapters longer?

Reviewer: Stories Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 05 2012

Title: Chapter 10: G is for Gnashed

You are a good writer but your chapters are not long enough.  With such short chapters you may not get reviews in a timely matter because your readers will wait until you have written several chapter to read your story.

Reviewer: Stories Signed
Date: July 12 2012

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 231]
Summary:

Nyla Rogers is a 26 year old widow, she has just rrecently begun to live again when she meets handsome Dr. Gavin McKeough. She doesnt feel she'll ever love again. Gavin wants to pick up the peices of her shattered heart will she let him?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:No
Word count: 70273
Read Count: 217297
Published: August 23 2012
Updated: August 29 2014


Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14-Merry Christmas

That's it? Did I miss something?

Reviewer: Stories Signed
Date: January 09 2013

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[Reviews - 252]
Summary:

Matt was the love them and leave them type till he met Azalea. She turned the tables on him but not for the reasons he thinks. Will he forgive her when he learns the truth?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 45561
Read Count: 65815
Published: August 25 2012
Updated: June 02 2014


Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Yes, Z kept Chase from her father but at the time she did what she did for his own good.  As famous as he is there is a POSSIBILTY with a wife and child he may not have been where he is.  Having said that, you can't undo the past ESPECIALLY when Matt has heard what his mum did to Z.  He has not discussed it with Z he is still using his anger against Z.  He is manipualting her by using their child.  Chase is a CHILD, parents make decisions for their children.  Since Matt has custody of Chase then if he wants her own tour then so be it.  Manipulating Z into going on tour is unfair is all ways.  Should she become his kept baby mama?  Becoming totally financially dependant on him.  Where will she be then?  Matt has crossed all sort of lines, what's next?  Sex in exchange for staying in her own child's life?  She has a career that she has fought to atain and she did it as a single mum.  So she is supposed to give up her career for Matt?

Chase has a right to her father but his actions (in the real world, not in a story) would push any woman to swallow her pride, call her father and get her trust fund released so she can find a real lawyer.  NO JUDGE in his right mind would have given sole custody of a female child to it's father unless the mother was unfit somehow, and a primary school teacher spearheading a pilot learning program is not unfit.  Z let Matt steamroll her into this crazy custody situation over her guilt about Chase not having a father. 

Z needs to put on her big girl pants, she is not a doormat for Matt to take his angst out on, nor should she tolerate Matt using Chase to manipulate her into going on tour.  What's next?  Matt getting her into bed.  Her having SEX with a man who still has issues with her; as much as Matt wants Z, he still HATES her for keeping Chase from him. He won't even call his mum on the bullshit she did.  It's ALL Z's fault.  Matt needs to GROW up.  Fall on his knees and thank GOD that Z did not abort his child, give her up for adoption or hook up with a loser to help her raise Z.  Z's own mother has issues which is why Z did not ask her father for her trust to help her pay for A DECENT lawyer but was quick to point out what Z did WRONG in reference to Chase and Matt.  Hindsight is always 20/20.

You are an EXCELLENT writer but I will be disapointed if this whole story is about Z acquiescing to Matt over Chase's first four years of life.  Z is a good mum but a good mum also shows her daughter how strong she is by not being a doormat.  She apologizes for her mistakes, tries to do better and does not let someone (like a man) use her mistakes to break her down or manipulate her.  Put Chase in family theraphy if she feels the need but stop letting Chase (and Matt) manipulate her.  Chase is not stupid, she damn well knows her father is not going anywhere and she is also smart enough to have figured out the family dynamics and to stop manipulating her parents by asking them to kiss.  Children will try you, its up to you to stop them.

Sorry for writing so much, I just saw the story going somewhere that in the real world would not pass the smell test.  Don't stop writing; you're good at it.



Author's Response:

I love the feedback but I feel Matts justified in his anger. Sometimes I want to yoke Z up my dang self. She has never humbled hersrlf to apologize. Matt can't help his attraction to her though.  Thanks for the in depth review. I especially like those to see if people sre receiving the story the way it's intended. 

Reviewer: Stories Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 04 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 63]
Summary:

Bastien wasnt expecting her and Cameron never wanted him.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5158
Read Count: 9416
Published: December 03 2012
Updated: April 14 2013


Title: Chapter 3: Authors Note

There has to be something to be held over Cameron's head because once she reaches her majority she can undo whatever "arrangement" her father got her into.  Unless the father has no idea what his arrangment is actually giving her which is her freedom.

Reviewer: Stories Signed
Date: February 04 2013

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[Reviews - 217]
Summary:

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In desperate need to be loved, Camille Sullivan was willing to do anything... even if it meant sleeping with the devil.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 3430
Read Count: 49942
Published: December 12 2012
Updated: July 18 2019


Title: Teach Me How To Be Loved

People like Camille don't learn.  If Xavier decides not to have anything to do with her (after all he doesn't know her) and if Tasha decides that she has had enough (she's been telling Camille to leave); Camille will go back to Dice and now that Dice sees her as just another trick he will let his boys have her.  His protection was the only thing keeping them away before.  Along with Dice and Greg she will have to service the clients that Dice tells her to and the profits will be going to Dice.  You would have thought that Camille would have been smart enough to use protection since she knew that Dice was having sex with the other girls. 



Author's Response:

You're right some people like Camille don't learn. I'm trying to make the story a bit realistic even though some parts aren't. But if you actually think about it, you do have people out here that act just like Camille. They put themselves in a terrible situation but always looking for someone to bell them out or they keep going back to the same person that caused them pain. Everyone in the world aren't as rational as we would hope them to be. And that's what I'm trying to show with Camille. She's very flawed and naive (even though I know some might say stupid lol) when it comes to a lot of things. You've made great points.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!! =)

Reviewer: Stories Signed half-star
Date: March 19 2013

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Summary:

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Jayden made the biggest mistake of his life when he let the love of his life slip through his fingers.  Could he make it right and start anew?  Tamaeya had been burned by Jayden once and had no intentions of being burnt a second time, but it seemed that the heart had it's own mind.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 4965
Read Count: 108469
Published: February 06 2013
Updated: April 19 2017


Title: Regret

I LOVE this story.  As a Christian its hard sometimes to find stories that you can enjoy without feeling guilty about the "sex".  This story is the pefect combination.

Reviewer: Stories Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 25 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 23]
Summary:

the maroon

 

Runaway Black-Seminole Tehya barely escapes the noose of Blackhart Plantation, dragging her reluctant sister right behind. But when their old master takes away everything that she holds dear Tehya must learn put her faith in her newfound savior, her master's own brother. Yet even his lifestyle makes her question if freedom is truly better than enslavement.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 8233
Read Count: 7473
Published: March 26 2013
Updated: February 14 2014


Title: Chapter 4: T H R E E : Promises

Maybe I'm closeminded; but slavery and multiple wives?  Both are men exploiting women for their own uses.  Both brothers are not as different as we may believe.  The worst kind of slavery is when the victim stays, in this case replacing one master with another.  Wish you luck with this story, you are a good writer but to each his own and I honestly will not be continuing with the story.  It caught my attention at the beginning both I'm not comfertable with the storyline.



Author's Response:

Not closeminded at all, just varying in opinion! It's unfortunate the elements of the plotline perturb you so, but iwill say you made a fascinating connection in regards to the Blackhart Bros that i wasnt aware i had made so transparent yet. in any case, thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Stories Signed half-star
Date: February 09 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 275]
Summary:

Laura MaCalister is an aspiring fashion designer. While on her way home from work her world collides with the dark life of Nicholi Gorbachev. Nicholi is the boss of the Mogilevich Family. He has plans for the young and inexperienced Laura. However she wants nothing to do with him. Her mind is telling her he is nothing but trouble but her body goes up in flames just from hearing his name. What will become of this couple? When all their secrets are exposed the only thing that can keep them together is love but love could also tear them apart.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 30777
Read Count: 41264
Published: March 31 2013
Updated: March 31 2014


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8-Second Meeting

I'm really liking this.  And how often you update.



Author's Response:

Thanks!!! School is slow right now so i have some free time, once things start picking up i might not have that much time to post.

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Stories Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 03 2013

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 86]
Summary:

For Elyshia Jenkins, one night will change her life forever.
If it is for the better or worse, only time will tell.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 16634
Read Count: 37828
Published: September 03 2013
Updated: January 03 2014


Title: Chapter 6: Contract

Sometimes making a story "mysterious" ends up turning your readers off (they will lose interest).  There was a great story on here with the characters of John and Sienna (I think) but I had to stop reading it...it gave me a headache...trying to figure out who, what, where.  I'm sure the author knew what was going on...I don't know if the reader did.

Rape stories, what can I say?  Both parties have to have a couple of screws loose when the rapist doesn't know or doesn't care that he is a rapist and the "victim" is attracted to her rapist...after the rape.

BTW, what is Liam going to do?   Kill the brother?  She already spent the money he gave her and if the money he gave her wasn't going to pay for ALL of her brother's medical needs why did she ALLOW this man to make her a whore.  Yes, a whore ($ for sex). 

Even if Liam magically falls in love with his mark (that's what she is; this can't be the first time he has done something like this, pick a mark based on the mark's financial needs) she will never have the upper hand.  He paid for her body and he then used it.  Oh my, just had a thought...my apologies for calling him a rapist.  He is a John and he used what he paid for.

Considering Medicaid pays for a whole lot including transplants and even experimental treatment (hubby is a Cardiothoracic Surgeon ), just don't get why she had to pay with her body.



Author's Response:

i understand, I should warn you this story is not for everyone and could get worse, well the interactions between my cars will probably get even worse.  I don't really understand much about medicard, but from what I understand it pays only about 80 percent of the bills but not all. Either way, its a fictional story and its not for everyone.  Thank you for reading it though and commenting, I will try and work on the mysteriousness of the story

Reviewer: Stories Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: January 04 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 47]
Summary:

Brody has been in love with his best friend Jordan for years. Technically she is bi sexual so he is hoping he has a shot. She's only dated women since forever so the shots in hell but he is willing to take it. Because he has 2 weeks to get her to give them a chance at being more than friends. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Homosexuality, Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 11584
Read Count: 4558
Published: January 13 2014
Updated: June 11 2019


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

My brother in law is a physician like my husband and has told us worse stories of what his adult patients went through as teens.  Keep writing, bring abuse like this to light.  Family members who sanction rape as a "cure" (don't mean to offend) needs to be raped themselves.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the encouragement. I cant imagine the burden or pride your family must feel when help someone who has gone through something like this. Please is you have any insight let me know. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Stories Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 06 2014

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[Reviews - 296]
Summary:

Sally McDonald is not who anyone thinks. Her life is filled with secrets. Some she doesn't even know about. But when Storm Monsello sees the terrified girl one night, he never expects how much her secrets would reveal the dark actions of the people he trusted the most.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Character Death, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 43
Completed:No
Word count: 133222
Read Count: 423577
Published: September 21 2014
Updated: April 26 2020


Title: Chapter 33: Secret and Lies

I been following this story; I'm thinking I missed something due to the time between updates. Was Salina unaware she was not a virgin when she first had sex? She is in the medical field and never looked at her own medical records? The person she is; with her need to know everything about herself; I'm thinking she would have read them. Was the man with Churn one of her rapists? Her subconcious obviously remembers him. What is the time frame from rape to leaving the hospital after the coma, did she bare a child by her rapist? Also; what is to stop her from being killed now that the other players know they are not going to get any additional monies from her father's estate? There is no more incentive to keep her alive, unless there is a child to inherit.  in fact it makes more sense to kill her, use her land for nefarious purposes and by the time anyone figures out the port is being used they would have made more than enough money to just abandon the port. Sorry for the questions but I feel as if I am lost or maybe I'm confusing this story with another. 

Reviewer: Stories Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 11 2017

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Summary:

 

COMPLETED! (CHAPTER 30 & 31 UPDATED ON 4/20)

 

Thirty-seven-year-old Sugar Wallace used her bitter divorce as a sweet inspiration to pursue her lifelong dream of opening a trendy dessert and wine restaurant called Sugar Mama. Her friends and family want her to dive back into the dating game, but Sugar refuses to open her heart to another. Not when the man she gave her heart to for eighteen years of marriage crushed it after cheating on her with a young Instagram model. She's perfectly content with a busy life of running a successful business. Then one night, she witnesses a forty-six-year-old beaten man get pushed from a car and everything changes.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 119166
Read Count: 280806
Published: July 18 2017
Updated: April 20 2019


Title: Chapter 13: Tasty Offering

I'm right about Lance having "sand" in his balls...that baby boy isn't his...nor those the baby belong to the baller. Mariah will get what is coming to her. Good update.



Author's Response:

LOL, "sand in balls" 

Reviewer: Stories Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 11 2017

Title: Chapter 1: Bittersweet

Why would Sugar walk away from a marriage where she is responsible for her husbands sucess by PUTTING HIM through college with basically nothing? It's not pride; its stupidity. All that I don't need his money, I have my PRIDE only lets a man get away with treating us like shit. OK, so she "only" needed 88K thousand...so what? All that pride is what keeps the first wife economically surpressed while hubby is off with the next "wives"living la vida loca". You are a good writer and I'm waiting with baited breath to see how you are going to give Sugar her happy ever after. Please make the baby not his and he is actually sterile, Please let the SEC take all his money, Please, Please let her sister kick that sack of shit in the nuts...and get TWO signature drinks,well maybe three; The BETTER BITCH, The MAURY (you are NOT the daddy) and The WLLLB (pronounced WillyBee, WhoLaughLastLaughBest) LMAO, Can't wait to read the rest. I'm tracking this. 



Author's Response:

LMAO, you are too much! More to come. 

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Date: July 19 2017

Title: Chapter 1: Bittersweet

Not that I don't love my hubby...but CHEF...Lawd Have Mercy...More please



Author's Response:

LMAO!

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Date: July 26 2017

Title: Chapter 7: Hot Soup

We @The Chamber got your back...so...Grade Level Partner? Give her students sugar (Sugar LOL) on the DL. Hyperness should drive her crazy. Anyway, Loving the story can't wait for Sugar and Chef to get together...FIRE 



Author's Response:

LOL! Most of the time, kids are hyper without the sugar!

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Date: July 30 2017

Title: Chapter 8: Yummy Cake

Oh My Fucking God...Where is my Chef?



Author's Response:

He's something else!

cool down

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Date: August 03 2017

Title: Chapter 10: Hot Affair

Leaving this review 1/2 way through the chapter. YASSSS Can't wait for the shit to hit the fan and blow up in BOTH Mariah and Lance's face. 



Author's Response:

LMAO! I hope you enjoyed the last half of the chapter too!

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Date: August 13 2017

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