Penname: OrangePeelings [Contact]

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Member Since: April 25 2012

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The Warrior's Bride by Spiderbite
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 219]
Summary:

Lieutenant Brady Sloane was a good man, but always seemed to finish last with women, until now.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Love Is Blind
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 16076
Read Count: 24538
Published: March 03 2012
Updated: May 06 2016

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Title: Chapter 4: Four

These two are so passionate and captivating. I love the way that you write them. I love this story!!!!!! Please UPDATE

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Date: May 07 2016
Title: Chapter 1: One

Ahhh yeah! I love this already but I am going to read the rest

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Date: April 04 2016
Title: Chapter 2: Two

I am in love with this story. I love Pen and Brady they got MAD chemistry. She is exactly what he needs. He needs to know that he can attract a woman because I don't think that he would do it on his own. Brady is HOTTNESS and Pen is ON FIRE! LOL love love love this story

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Date: April 04 2016
Title: Chapter 3: Three

Brady, Brady, Brady this man is so freaking HOTT. He and Pan together is like mount St Helen. You made me tear, up, laugh and want to take a cold shower all in one chapter. Honey please Harvey is that kind of guy that would go get the ex girlfriend to fight his battle because he is a coward like Brady said. Pen that girl is so BAD! I LOVE HER!!!! LOL. Brady and Pen forever! 

P.S I keep hitting the next button but nothing happens(shrugs)

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Date: April 04 2016
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Will and Ana by SafeHaven
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 450]
Summary:

 

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William Lucas Kapori was a self-made millionaire. At 40 he had everything he ever wanted, a beautiful twenty something girlfriend, a luxurious mansion, and a job that he loved. His life was perfect, so why was he pursuing Ana Kay.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 52745
Read Count: 78020
Published: March 29 2012
Updated: April 10 2014

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Title: Chapter 1: {One}

This story is going to be a classic. I love your writing already. This story is so gripping and it just started.

Will and Ana already have chemistry and they are not together yet. I loved the part where Will was checkingher out. I loved the way you wrote that.

GIVE ANA HAPPINESS PLEASE. What happened to her attacker nad thier messed up family?  Will needs to make her smiel and feel safe.

Gretchen is my girl:) Elle is so sweet and I love how Will treats her as a princess. I love Will and Ana

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Date: April 30 2012
Title: Chapter 2: {Two}

This was beautiful and violent. I loved it.  You are amazing!

 Reviewer: OrangePeelings Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 30 2012
Title: Chapter 3: {Three}

Your eyes are PERFECT! Oh this story is AMAZING. I am going to recommend it for the wall. It deserves the attention. I love Will and Ana.

 Reviewer: OrangePeelings Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 30 2012
Title: Chapter 4: {Four}

You are building a beautiful and powerful story here. this update was excellent. You answered so many questions and it just flowed it was not as if you just stopped and wrote it as an afterthought. You are wonderful.

Will is my new boyfriend. that man will KILL Frederick if he sees him. i am so glad he got rid of that picture. i don't want Ana to see that. I want these two safe and together. I want babies too LOL You write them sexy and Hmmmmmm.

Will Vincent appear inthis story. Maybe?

You must update soon please. I am your new fan

 Reviewer: OrangePeelings Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 30 2012
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Dominion by WalkingPapers
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 168]
Summary:

 

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The Redtips Wolf clan wrongfully accused of hunting humans on Vampire Lord Jye's land; must give the only maiden of their pack,Sarason as concubine, to save their clan from destruction.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Fantasy, Horror, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 33031
Read Count: 32745
Published: May 31 2012
Updated: August 10 2013

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Title: Chapter 7: Six

I love this story you are an amazing writer and storyteller. This is just awesome!

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Date: September 26 2013
Title: Chapter 8: Seven~

PLEASE update !!!!!!! I love this story and I need more! you have are such an amazing writer I am hooked on this. Jye and Sarason, Raven and Ararbella. War, love, hate family jealousy, give it to me,

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Date: September 26 2013
Title: Chapter 5: Four~

I see danger and betrayal ahead  becuase lady Cors is a bitch and jealousy is hard to stop! I am happy that Dina will finally have some relief and that Arabella spoke! MORE

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Date: September 26 2013
Title: Chapter 6: Five~

Love it!!!!!!

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Date: September 26 2013
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue~

Intense and perfection! Love this

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Date: September 26 2013
Title: Chapter 2: One~

Absolutely AWESOME!!!!! Love this and I am hooked on these characters! Awesome job

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Date: September 26 2013
Title: Chapter 3: Two~

I love Sarason and Jye together. Thier chemistry is awesome!!!! 

I feel so bad for Dina and Arabella! 

This story is so beautifully done!

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Date: September 26 2013
Title: Chapter 4: Three~

I love Jye and Sarason! The way you write is so sexy!!! This story is so excellent!

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Date: September 26 2013
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Just Ordinary by Forks and Knives
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 193]
Summary:

Carmen Shelly preyed on married men and usually won her sought after prize. Business is booming until her partner sets his sights on her single sister.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 41535
Read Count: 39601
Published: July 29 2012
Updated: February 28 2016

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Title: Chapter 1: Just Ordinary Cast

I love this cast. Not a weak picture in the bunch

 Reviewer: OrangePeelings Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 30 2012
Title: Chapter 2: One - Target sighted

Carmen is a stank ho bitch! How coudl any family pu up with her. I feel so bad for Nichole because Carmen is sooooo jealous of her because Richard wnats her. She is the type of woman that thinks all men should want her. The fact that Richard does not drives her to do stupid things. NEXT chapter. GREAT START

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Date: July 30 2012
Title: Chapter 3: Two -The Invasion

Carmen wants all the men. I love how she says that she does not dwell on the past. She can't stop thinking about how Roman one of highschool road dogs picked her ordinary sister over her. That just eats at her and drives her to do what she is doing now. The only difference is that Richard is immune to her. I love htat Audrey knows that and is working undercover to get her Nichole some loving from a strong and capable man.

I love the scene between he and Nichole. They deserve to be together but I know that Carmen ain't going to allow that becuase she thinks that Richard is Roman. However, she is finding out that he is his own man.

Any woman that would use underhanded methods on their own sister or anybody use needs a beat down. Carmen is due for more. She is  bitch and you write her so well . (not that I am saying you got bitch trndencies down but I'm saying you write bitch tendencies verl well)

Is Victoris Khale married to Manteri that would be STELLAR!!

PLEASE CONTINUE

THIS UPDATE WAS EXCELLENT

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Date: July 30 2012
Title: Chapter 4: Three Counter-attack and the retreat

OMG I love Nichole and Richard. I love Richard's plan to see if she is interested in his new way of thinking. I love their interaction. Nichole DESERVES some love GIVE IT TO HER!!! I LOVE that Richard told the ho that she ain't getting his you know what in you know where LOL. Carmen cried. SO!!!! I wished he pushed her downthe stairs. I hope that Roman makes her cry too! I lvoe this story!!!!

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Date: August 15 2012
Title: Chapter 12: Eleven ~Rest for the Wicked

This story was so good. The ending was right on point because that bitch is crazy! Lol. I enjoyed this story and hope there is a sequel. You do write crazy well lol

 

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Date: March 07 2016
Other Half by Briella
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 34]
Summary:

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Other Half has come out with their latest model. Jae finds himself owner of the most lifelike robotic companion yet.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Work in Progress
Challenges: Made to Order
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 6404
Read Count: 5142
Published: September 12 2013
Updated: November 07 2013

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I like it so far

 Reviewer: OrangePeelings Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 16 2013
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Knight In Shining Armor by AntiVenom
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 71]
Summary:

A knight in shining armor is not always the righteous and kind-hearted man. Sometimes, he's the one that speaks his mind and uses his fists. He is not perfect but if he loves you....he loves you



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: The only thing that matters
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 17229
Read Count: 11381
Published: March 01 2016
Updated: December 29 2017

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Title: Chapter 3: ~Chapter Three...~

Norvi is gonna mess around and get hurt. Does he think that he is still in a gang and can have what he wants...then he needs more attitude adjustments. I love Norvi but I LOVE Nickolas. He is a knight and as a knight he will protect. I think he might have other feelings starting to get mixed into the protection thing but only time will tell. I do know now that no one is to touch Kelsey no matter what she does. I love this story

 Reviewer: OrangePeelings Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 29 2016
Title: Chapter 1: ~Chapter One...~

 A total rewrite and It is connected as all your stories are. I love that! I hate Randal and his critique of Kelsey and how he can make her better. Please have Nickolas whip his ass! Lol

 Reviewer: OrangePeelings Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 07 2016
Title: Chapter 2: ~Chapter Two...~

The gang is together....well some of them. Loving Kelsey that girl is TOUGH! I love that and Nickolas has that calm aggression . You don't know what he is going to do next. I want James and Norvi to tell them what's going on. Is Lionel Parker bad Parkers  brother? They want Nickolas for his money. I doubt that Parker has the money to get Lauren. Love the banter and the possible triangle with Nickolas, Kelsey and Patrick. Love it .....more

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Date: March 19 2016

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