Penname: Navaura [Contact]

Real name: Brandy

Member Since: November 12 2008

Membership status: Member

Bio:

WOW. Just typing in my user name bring up websites I don't recall signing up for but imagine the suprise when your name and password actually works. I love to write and I am still holding out on the idea that I will get published. When? When God says it's the right timing. I'm an author who knows her worth when it comes to fleshing out a good story. I'm really good at creating plots and conveying emotions well enough to make people assume that I must have experienced what ever my characters have. The truth is, I try to make my characters appeal to readers forming the basis that they are actual people. In my mind the character is real and while I write I'm experiencing what they experience as I articulately describe the beauty of the place situations and people that are surrounding the main character/s and anyone else involved. No one is ever there, just to be there, they all have a purpose, whether big or small.



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Reviews by Navaura


Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 89]
Summary:

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Merri Tallon is a fifty year old widow that wants to have some fun.  Her single adult children think that she should sit in the corner and knit, but Merri has something else in mind!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Challenges: Can I Tell You My Fantasy?
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 14750
Read Count: 7546
Published: April 05 2013
Updated: April 09 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Merri's Plans

I like this, it's nice. I would love to see where Caleb and Merri take this. To know how her kids are going to react and how they will react to one another. I'm sure there will be issues with her being an older woman and he a younger man, even though he's in his thirties. Anyway, great story and I enjoyed it. It even had me laughing. Lovely

Reviewer: Navaura Signed
Date: May 29 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 86]
Summary:

Everyone has that someone who made them feel perfect and brilliant. How do we lose sight of those great loves and what happens when they come back into your orbit? Amelia and David were college sweethearts who run into each other 2 decades later-after marriages, divorces, kids, and careers--can they still be crazy in love?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9837
Read Count: 16835
Published: April 17 2013
Updated: June 12 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Cast Pics

I'm sorry, I can't give you a positive review because this was a bad short story to me. It was an ok read but there was virtually no information or even developed back ground on the characters, nor development of a sincere effection or love between two people needed to reconnect and have after a two decade relationship. It could have been better. 



Author's Response:

Hi You're entitled to your opinion and that simply means my story wasn't for you--the chamber is filled with stories that don't click for me--I don't feel the need to give readers every tid bit of information on a character to push the message forward--it was a simple and short story which if I had given all background to the readers would have been a very long story--which is not what I created. Thank you for reading and reviewing hopefully you'll find other submissions by those brave enough to put their creative musings out for public review. Peace

M.

Reviewer: Navaura Signed
Date: June 22 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.