Penname: Anni Grey [Contact]

Real name: Margaret Johnson

Member Since: May 31 2012

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I'm 36 and have lived my life believing in the beauty and the power of words, both written and spoken. I have written fanfiction for a number of years to hone my craft and even though I'm still learning, I'm ready to move on to the next chapter of my life and share with the rest of the world.


When I'm not writing, I work- hard. I just graduated from the University of Phoenix with a Bachelors of Sciene in  Communication. I do plan on going for my Masters but I'm on the fence on which program to tackle. A decision for a different day.


All in all, I just want to share my perspective through the written word. I hope you enjoy the journey...


 


***Update***


Writing has been some what of a hit or miss with me lately and I've had to do some rethinking. With that reflection, I've decided to take Underneath It All down and a few other stories. At this point, I'm not sure whether I'll ever be published but it is not out of the realm of possibilities. I want to thank all of those who read and enjoyed my work. Your insight and feedback has been invaluable.


 


Thanks :)


 



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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 89]
Summary:

Love, loss and redemption are found in the most unlikely places.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active, Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 114
Read Count: 34090
Published: February 05 2013
Updated: March 15 2013


Title: Good Grief

WHOOO HOO...Now...THAT'S what I call make up sex. The chapter was blazing  ( I'm still trying to come down from that, lol). I'm speechless, utterly speechless. The only thing left to say is PHENOMENAL work!

PS...I'm glad that Sienna got her man back.

 

Great work



Author's Response:

Thanks Anni. Lol 

Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 09 2013

Title: Good Grief

Now that was a chapter!  Loved it, simply loved it!  I'm excited about Sienna and Jason's next move!   I can't wait for more!

 

Excellent work!



Author's Response:

Thanks Anni! More to come very soon. :)

Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed
Date: March 13 2013

Title: Good Grief

Sean never died....Right?? RIGHT??? Omg...it's a must...A MUST that this continue. Excellent cliffhanger!

Boy oh boy...I'm starting to get the meaning of the next title..

Great work!



Author's Response:

Lol.. I'm not saying! But I'll post Duplicty first chapters this weekend. Let me know what you think! Thanks

Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 15 2013

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Summary:

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Jayden made the biggest mistake of his life when he let the love of his life slip through his fingers.  Could he make it right and start anew?  Tamaeya had been burned by Jayden once and had no intentions of being burnt a second time, but it seemed that the heart had it's own mind.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 4965
Read Count: 108475
Published: February 06 2013
Updated: April 19 2017


Title: Regret

I LOVED this chapter!  I like that  Jayden seems to be able to handle himself more around Tam, like she gives him the strength to overlook his phobias. I also like that he's bolder when it comes to Tam and that he's expressed that he wants something more.  Now it's up to Tam to see this through.

I have to admit, when Dana prayed for him, my heart nearly stopped. I was by far, the best scene in the chapter.

Excellent work!



Author's Response:

Thanks Anni:

Tam is the key to Jayden getting better.  I read up on this disease and one woman wrote how her husband's love for her helped her to conquer and control  her urges.  She's not totally cured, but she says that she is a whole lot better.  This is what I'm doing with Jayden.  

Thanks for your review.  More is coming soon.

Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed
Date: February 22 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 In The Beginning

And instantly, I'm hooked! Can't wait to see what kind of sparks fly between Jayden and Tam.  She's already admitted to herself that she was in love with him and if that necklace is any indication, that she never fell out of love. She's angry that he didn't choose their love over the status quo.

The story promises to be a rollercoaster of emotions.

Phenomenal start!



Author's Response:

Thanks Annie:  I love your stories so your review means a lot!  Looking forward to your next update!

Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 07 2013

Title: Regret

Excellent chapter! I'm glad that Jayden finally stood up ( somewhat) to his father. Although he still has quite a ways to go, I somehow feel that Tam's going to be  an asset...Now if only she can recongize that. I can't wait to see what happens next, especially now that Jayden's definitely into Tam.

 

Great work!



Author's Response:

Annie Grey, you are da bomb!  LOL .  I love your story!!!  I'm so glad that you like mines.  Jayden realizes that things are going to have to change because now he's a father and he wants to be responsible.  He and his parents will knock heads.  More is coming!

Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed
Date: February 08 2013

Title: Regret

Ugh... Jason and Nancy...I shudder to think that these are his parents; they're banking on him failing, which of course is par for the norm with manipulative people. They are the eptiome of control.  

As for Jayden, I applaud him for stepping out on faith and trying to make headway. It's gotta be hard for him to know he has kids but his phobia nearly stops him in his tracks. I believe he wants to be there and wants to be a better father. I'm pulling for Jayden here.

And of course , Tam. She can deny all she wants, and spout that nonsense that they're going to be friends and that's it... I call her on it. It's a load of malarky. She's still in  love with Jayden. Eventually, she will acknowledge it. I can't wait for that moment.

LOVED the chapter! Excellent work!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review Annie.  Jason and Nancy are in for a rude awakening.  LOL  As for Tam, she's gonna put up a fight, but who can reisist those green eyes and buttery voice.  I see panties dropping in the future...More is coming!

Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed
Date: February 11 2013

Title: Regret

Excellent chapter! I LOVED the children...they kept me in stitches. Poor Jayden though, he's trying but his children want to do the very things he despise. This week will definitely be interesting.


Great work!



Author's Response:

This whole trip is a major adjustment for Jayden, but he's determined to make it work.  More is coming!

Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 14 2013

Title: Regret

I absolutely...ABSOLUTELY adored this chapter. It tugged on my heartstrings. I love that Jayden's pushing Tam to see what is right in front of her and how Tam fully understands how futile resistence really is. All her resistence amounts to is fear- she's not certain that if she cast her lot with Jayden that he'll stand for her when it counts. I think we're seeing  a tremendous amount of change from Jayden and he's allowing it because he truly wants the family he's wanted.

 Of course, when Jayden sees  his Grammy in Dana's eyes I nearly lost it. He's found some comfort and maybe, just maybe, he'll get better.

Loved this chapter sooo much!

Excellent work!

Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 25 2013

Title: Regret

Excellent chapter! I can't believe I missed this! Jayden's  finding his center, he's pushing his limits to  makie himself ready for Tam and his children. I just hope he's not building himself up just to fall. I really  feel for Jayden and I want him to find that happiness that's eluded him for so long.

Such a great chapter!

Excellent work!



Author's Response:

Yes, Jayden has been through a lot and more of his hellish background is about to be revealed.  So stay tuned!

Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 01 2013

Title: Regret

WHAT A STEP! Jayden didn't feel the need to wash immediately afterwards is a huge step in the right direction. Despite the fact that it's all talk right now, I feel like Jayden does have it in him to overcome all of the obstacles in his life. I think that he'll go back to New Haven, tell the rents the business and he'll go back to Tam- OR, he might regress and  leave Tam hanging...I hope that doesn't come to pass, I want Jayden to be happy!

Excellent chapter:D I loved that Jessica essentially told Tam to p*ss or get off the pot. Do something, make your move...Solve the problem. Jessica's the truth :D



Author's Response:

Yes Jayden made more progress than he even realizes.  He has some major hurdles to face when he returns to New Haven and its not going to be pretty.  MOre is coming soon.

Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed
Date: March 03 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 In The Beginning

I forgot to rate :D

Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 03 2013

Title: Regret

I'm astounded! What a great chapter...For once I would love for Tam to just listen to her kids. No, Jayden's not in a dungeon but there is something amiss! Nancy should feel like crap; she's the one who went crazy and pushed Jayden down. I hope Jayden comes back soon- he's going to be over the moon about this new development!

Excelllent chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks Anni:  Tam is so insecure, and she jumped to the worse conclusions.  The trip is going to happen and soon.  More is coming!

Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 05 2013

Title: Regret

Ha! The cat's out of the bag fo sho! That Bean... I knew he was bad news. Glad to see that Tam finally got the news and is on her way to see Jayden. I just hope it does some good. Somehow, with Dana involved, I'm sure there's going to be some laying of hands. Cannot wait for that!

Great job!



Author's Response:

LOL Anni!  Yes Dana still has her oil remember!  More is coming soon!

Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 10 2013

Title: Regret

I absolutely adore Dana. She tells everyone the business and shoots it straight from the hip. She's kind of like Jason in that manner. I love that Dana's gotten under Nancy's skin and most of all, I love that  Tam finally admits to the love she has for Jayden. I just hope that the next chapter has Jayden waking up. It's time for him to have some happiness.

 

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 30 2013

Title: Regret

I love...LOVE the chapter! I really love Dana and her convictions; despite everything, she's willing to put it aside to right the water. The only thing I didn't like was Tam's stubborn inability to see  the situation for what it was. Nancy, in her own way, was trying to make things right. Tam was blinded by her own dislike to see that it was strangling her. Other than that, this chapter was love.

PS...Jayden watching them unawares was just too hilarious.

Excellent work!

Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 05 2013

Title: Regret

That Tam....she's a bit too stubborn for my tastes. True, Nancy did some dirty stuff but the time for that is through. Recognize and move on. Besides, Tam wants to raise her children the right way, right? How right of her was it to castigate  Jayden's parents in front of the children? That's teaching them that despite everything else, as long as you get what's bothering you off of your chest, you're all good... Not a good  lesson to teach impressionable children, IMO.

I still loved this chapter and my heart went out to Dana after that firebreathing Tam gave her...Poor Dana!

 

Great work!



Author's Response:

Dana will be fine.  Tam is stubborn and more like Nancy than she wants to admit.  She too is stubborn and a bit controlling like Jayden said.  The difference is that Tam had loving parents to guide and nurture her.  

No, she shouldn't have done what she did in front of the children.  She did it to get her point across that Nancy was a bad person.

 

Jayden has his work cut out for him seeing that his mother is in denial and his fiance has already made up her mind to keep his parents at arms length.

Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 15 2013

Title: Regret

I get that Tam is trying to look out for her kids, I even get that she was offended by Jayden's parents  past behavior but I have to ask, when do you grow up, pull up your big girl panties and move on? Either you deal with this or you take Jayden to court for shared custody- this bickering back and forth isn't good for kids, for Jayden, and definitely not good for Tam in her current condition. I love this story, and I really like Tam and Jayden together but honestly, she's being a bit more theatrical than Dana and Nancy put together. It's called a past, learn from it, deal with it and crack on.

Whes, sorry for the rant but I just couldn't really let that go unsaid.

Excellent chapter!

Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 27 2013

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[Reviews - 121]
Summary:

A sequel to Good Grief, Duplicity is full of mystery and intrigue. Will love conquer all things or are some things broken by nature?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 114
Read Count: 19934
Published: March 18 2013
Updated: May 14 2014


Title: Duplicity

Already, I'm salivating for more!  Good gracious,this is entrhalling. I have a couple ideas as to who 'Ralph' is  but I'll let them simmer. I'm thoroughly excited about all of the possibilities.

Definitely one to watch!

 

Excellent start!



Author's Response:

Thanks Anni! You always are so encouraging. :) More chapters coming today. 

Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 18 2013

Title: Duplicity

 Absolutely fantastic chapter!  I knew it was Sean!   Sienna's pregnant! They're getting married! And even though Sienna's got mixed feelings about Sean's return, she's opened her heart to him. I loved this chapter so very much...

PS Jason could console me any day...

Excellent work!



Author's Response:

Lol Yep, lots of discoveries in this chapter 1. Sienna is going to be conflicted for a while. She's ecstatic he's alive and back in her life but she's fearful of what trouble he's in. And its going to be hard for her to understand that Sean is a different man. But she'll continue to ground him throughout this whole ordeal. Yea I was thinking that too- Jason, Jason Jason... just console me baby! ;) Thanks Anni!

Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 20 2013

Title: Duplicity

Loved this chapter! Sorry it took almost three days to review  but life...  What I loved about this chapter was that there was so much happiness in it. Sienna can't stop beaming, Jason is so wickedly in love with Sienna, her happiness filters onto his, and Layla finally found that last piece to click into place. I'm wondering however, who the mysterious visitor is. Can't wait to read!

 Great chapter !



Author's Response:

Thanks Anni! You always come through. I'm glad you liked this chapter. Sienna and Jason are in their own little world. :) It'll definitely be interesting how the stranger and Layla will react.

Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 25 2013

Title: Duplicity

OMFG....that was simply brilliant! I loved that Layla's getting the business from Merle/Sean. This chapter gave me the smile that I needed :D. Brilliant, I say,brilliant!

Excellent chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks Anni- That really means a lot. Aww Im so happy this chapter made you smile. I always smile when you leave your encouraging comments. Just keep smiling girl! Your awesome. :-)

Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 25 2013

Title: Duplicity

Very good looking cast!



Author's Response:

Thanks Anni!

Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 28 2013

Title: Duplicity

Again, it took me forever but I finally got a chance to read!  Excellent chapter! i  have to say, I really love Merle but sooner or later, Layla's going to find out the truth. Question is, will she be able to handle it?

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Lol no worries Anni- I'm just glad you were able to read it. I always look forward to your comments. :) Thank you very much for your continued support. I know poor Layla is going to be completely devasted when she finds out about Merle's real identity. I guess only time will tell if she'll be able to get over it. 

Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 03 2013

Title: Duplicity

WHOO HOO...How quick can we say HOT?  Yum for real but serioulsy, Sean needs to come clean. Layla's already fallen for Merle ; despite the astronomical sex, will she be so forgiving when he finally does the big reveal?

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks Anni. He sure does need to come clean. Hopefully it'll be soon. Thanks for comenting and rating.

Reviewer: Anni Grey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 09 2013

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