Different But Same
I LOVE reading all types of fiction and non-fiction. I LOVE reading the stories on The Chamber and look forward to reading more of the most WONDERFUL stories written by some of the most TALANTED writers I've read!
SIGH, Nikki got HIS Sunshine back to him safely. I'm in AWE of your wirting Onimosity. I'm going to give a more detailed review later because it is so much yummy goodness in this chapter; Can't wait for part 2!
Chel
Reviewer: miquerida Signed
PLEASE DO NOT DELETE THIS STORY! THIS IS A GOOD STORY! Yes, it has a lot of spelling and other errors, but you are just getting back into writing if I read your bio correctly.
I read all the comments. Some of them were VERY HARSH, but the majority of the comments were CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM. I HOPE you did not take any of my comments has harsh or negetive; that was not my intention. If I did get you upset with my comments, I owe an you an apology. I AM SORRY. It takes guts for a person to post their writing to the masses , and sometimes people are just HARSH. But, I don't think ALL readers and writers on this site are like that (I can only speak for myself) Myself, I LOVE reading QUALITY writing that has me sitting on the edge of my desk waiting for the next chapter. Life's Lesson is one of those stories that have me like that.
When I offered to see if you wanted a beta reader, I was not trying to be a smart ass or funny or condesenting. I was only trying to see if you wanted help with your writing. Having a beta reader is GREAT tool for some writers because the beta can see errors or can give suggustions that the author may have missed. If you are like some writers I know, they get so caught up in writing the story, to get what is in their imagination on paper that they sometime can't get across the motives of the characters andor story to the reader. The reader CAN NOT read what's on the writer's mind; it's up to the writer to get their vision on the page.
I see GREAT POTIENTIAL in your writing; you are weaving a story that has people wanting to read more. I enjoy reading Faded Love and Life's Lesson. I'm REALLY getting into Life's Lesson.
DO NOT GIVE UP because of what you percieve as negetive comments or harsh criticism. Again I can only speak for myself, but my intentions what to let you know what a GREAT story you have and to point out what areas that I thought needing improving.
If you want to delete or recreate this story it's your decision. I will say that your read count is VERY HIGH for a newbie, errors and all. That should tell you that people are interesting in hearing your stories.
Good Luck and Peace be to you either way you decide to go.
Chel
Reviewer: miquerida Signed
Natasha Roberts is a paediatrician with a healing touch and warm smile at 30 years of age, she is a beautiful woman with a broken spirit which she keeps hidden. When with her group of friends she is the listner, understander and the one her friends depend on for all the answers. Her secret is she that is unable to have children which is the reason her ex-husband gave her for their divorce, she lives to heal children even if it reminds her of what she can never have.
Angelo Luciano Salvatore is a mob boss and the head of the Salvatore Crime Family. He likes to think of himself as a business man when most would call him a ruthless bastard. The day his wife died he become a heartless shell who begins to neglect his son turning to his business for comfort. Until his son is taken to the hospital for a simple check up and is found to have the very disease that killed his mother Polycystic kidney disease. which in time would have killed him if not for Natasha who falls in love with the Christopher’s loving soul and finds herself as a match to donate one of her own kidneys to save his life. When Angelo meets Natasha he is cold and hurtful , Natasha in turn gives him a piece of her mind. Hands on her hips her eyes spitting fire she tells him off then walks away leaving Angelo to reflect on her words and the beautiful woman that Saved his son and made him whole once again.
(The Banner is a temp until I can make something better. I just wanted to give the reader an idea of the characters I have in mind.)
YES! So happy to see this up! I LUV your work!
I also LUV gangsta and cillivan loves stories and this is going to be DA BOMB.
Queen Latifah and Daniel Craig??!?!? AWESOME CHOICE LUV IT LUV IT LUV IT!
Can't wait for the next installment!
Chel
Thank you for the review, Im glad you enjoyed the story thus far.
Reviewer: miquerida Signed
Ares, The Greek God of War meets Irene Hart a woman who brings fire and her own brand of peace to his life. Can he win this battle and convince Irene that he's more than a fighter and a lover but a man to keep for all eternity?
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LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ares and Irene are so smokin' hawt that they need their own spot!
You know, it would not be a bad thing if you wrote a story for Pandora, the beginning of Theo/Gloria love affair, etc. These are stories that are screaming to be told. . . .
Subtle I ain't! chel ducks
Fantastic as always! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Chel
Hey Chel, Glad you enjoyed it.
I have stories for Pandora, Apollo, Dash, Sean and Dion in mind and hopefully they will stay there until I get these guys squared away. I literally have a world in my head with these people and they are talking to me but I'm trying to ignore them.
Don't worry girl I got you and I am going to try to remain on some type of schedule with this.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: miquerida Signed
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.