Penname: xbelivex [Contact]

Real name: Kelsie

Member Since: July 21 2012

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 415]
Summary:

 

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* ON THE CHAMBER'S TOP TEN MOST FAVORITE STORIES LIST

& NOW KINDLE VELLAS TOP 250 FAVORITES LIST *

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When the lines are drawn, will you risk your life to cross them for love?

In the Summer of 1988, tragedy hits home for Charlene Jacobson and her father when her little brother is killed playing a game of basketball in their Detroit housing projects.  She soon finds herself living in the small rural town of Millersville, Georgia, with her estranged grandmother. Millersville is a place where time stands still and the racial divide is as prevalent as the 1950s.  Secrets, lies, and betrayal lurk in every corner. Yet, through it all she finds solace in the arms of Ryan Quinn, a white senior track star and the son of the town Sherriff.  

Will their love cross the finish line?  

EDIT:  Crossing the Finish line has been removed from this site and a revised version with added new content has been published on Amazon Kindle Vella (as of November 2022) under the penname, Shelly B Williams. To those of you who have left reviews, added me to your Favorite Authors and Story Alerts, and helped to make CTFL one of the Top Ten Most Favorited Stories on Valent Chamber, I trully appreciate all the support you have shown me over the years. I hope you will continue to support me as I begin the next phase of my journey as a published author. I couldn't  have done this without you. 

Much Love!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Deep, dark, and mysterious
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5758
Read Count: 214471
Published: November 07 2010
Updated: January 09 2014


Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Aww, their first time was special. I love it. Please update soon!

Reviewer: xbelivex Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 19]
Summary:

They were young and stupid, years ago. They have a past together. Both tried to forget, for different reasons. Thinking they would never see each other again. When fate seems to bring these two together again, can they rekindle a very beautiful thing they once shared? Maybe its too damaged now, too far gone. Only time will tell.

The thin line between love and hate, They walk it everyday. 

 

This story will contain sex, mild viloence, profanity, and drugs but not drug use.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 6050
Read Count: 3535
Published: December 19 2012
Updated: March 27 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Nice start, i cant wait to see how their relationship develops. Oh and jason can get it any day of the friggin week !



Author's Response:

I say the same thing about Jason ;) 

- Danielle

Reviewer: xbelivex Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 19 2012

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 64]
Summary:

Aubrey is living the perfect life or so it seems. With her demanding boyfriend, Vincent and his quick temper, she doesn't know how much more she can take. Things take a turn for the worse when Chase a co-worker steps in . . or maybe a turn for the better?

 

This story contains - Violence, Abuse, Sex and Rape (further into the story)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 24078
Read Count: 11047
Published: December 20 2012
Updated: October 31 2013


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Five

Aww! Aubrey needs a hero and I'm so glad it's Chase! I hope she leaves Vincent forreal this time.

Reviewer: xbelivex Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 06 2013

Retired
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 629]
Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 287695
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17

This chapter was so touching. I want more!

Reviewer: xbelivex Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30 2013

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 PREVIEW

This has got to be one of my favorite stories on this site. Please update quickly!

Reviewer: xbelivex Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 11 2013

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1032]
Summary:

   

 

A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196744
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Oh hellllll no! She must not have much of a backbone, cause I definitely would've cussed all of the people at the table out, or at least left!



Author's Response:

haha! Thank you for reviewing! I understand your frustration but we see Sasha become more mature and have a greater sense of her own worth as the story continues!

Reviewer: xbelivex Signed
Date: June 02 2013

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

This chapter took me by surprise! Their interactions are adorable.



Author's Response:

:-) Thank you for your review! I aim to surprise. lol

Reviewer: xbelivex Signed
Date: June 02 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 39]
Summary:

I experienced him on paper long before I witnessed him on film. In my mind, he was so much more than a villain to be conquered and killed. He deserved his own story, love and maybe a family. I decided to give it to him. My friend said, "He would make a great character for a story" I couldn't agree more. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Books
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Fantasy
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 10330
Read Count: 9401
Published: November 13 2013
Updated: September 23 2014


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This story has definitely caught my attention. I love your writing style.



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: xbelivex Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 14 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 29]
Summary:

Rule One:  Keep your regular life and your Domme life separate.

Rule Two:  Keep your relationship with your sub professional.  It is a business transaction.

Rule Two:  Never fall in love with a sub.

 

Talia Lawrence is a photographer by day and private dominatrix when she is not behind the camera.  All is balanced in her life until one of her subs moves clear across the country, leaving her with an empty spot in her schedule and on her spanking bench.  When a chance meeting turns out not to be so random, she has to ask herself if the new sub who offers himself presents too much of a risk to all three of her rules. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: BDSM
Challenges: Bottom Bitches
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 13578
Read Count: 6556
Published: December 09 2013
Updated: December 11 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow this new story has definitely got my attention. Its nice to see the girl as the dominant instead of usually a male.

Reviewer: xbelivex Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Some things are better left unsaid.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Psychological
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 11637
Read Count: 10008
Published: December 13 2013
Updated: April 23 2014


Title: The Writer

This girl is scaring me.

Reviewer: xbelivex Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 01 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.