I dont want it. i wont do it . you cant make me . Queen my ass.
That was a nice start. I'm interested to see where you'll take us!
Reviewer: kimloanies Signed
She's a mess he can't help wanting to fix.
amazing start! Can't wait for the rest.
Reviewer: kimloanies Signed Still not ready to open her eyes but ready to acknowledge him she angles her head. With her lips lightly grazing his jaw and the coarse stubble she whispers. “I want you to stay”.
Fantastic start! I'm interested to see where your going take us with this story. Congrats!
I'm going to try to take this somewhere, I think lol. It's happening I promise. Thank You for the review!
Reviewer: kimloanies Signed In a world built on blood and violence, where the merciless thrive, falling in love carries with it its own special set of risks. Never was that truer than for Carter Gerring, an electronics expert with a unique skill-set. Carter is hired by Larry Hooks, a ruthless underworld kingpin with a number of potential legal problems he wants to disappear. While eliminating the various forms of incrimination Hooks and his men create, Carter finds himself falling for the boss’s daughter.
Tamryn Hooks is the much-loved daughter Larry Hooks would gladly kill to protect. For most of her life, she’s been shielded from many of the harsh realities of her father’s business. Then, a seemingly innocent favor for her doting father places her in the middle of an impossible situation she sees no way out of. As Tamryn searches for a solution and an escape, her dilemma is further complicated by an ongoing feud with her sister and her deepening feelings for Carter, the unassuming intellectual with a dark reputation.
When Carter and Tamryn find themselves entrenched in the mire of her father’s criminal enterprise, the secrets they and others keep, and their need for one another, will their forbidden love be their saving grace? Or will it be the Achilles’ heel that ultimately leads to their demise?
I say do your thing girl!
Duly noted. Thanks Kimloanies!
Reviewer: kimloanies Signed Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
