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Member Since: October 22 2012

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Retired
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 629]
Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 287720
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Everytime I think Val is more secure she throws a curve ball.

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Date: October 06 2013

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

This chapter was amazing and full of depth and detail. 

I cannot wait to see how Val over processes the night. 

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Date: June 30 2013

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Sometimes in your life you want to divorce from your parents. 

 

Great chapter. 

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Date: September 24 2013

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Sometimes in your life you want to divorce from your parents. 

 

Great chapter. 

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Date: September 24 2013

Title: Chapter 23: QUESTION

Don't change a thing.  Henry's pov would be nice but is not necessary.  If you're readers want to know where story is heading they should read first chapter because you started with the ending. 

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Date: January 26 2014

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

A beautiful chapter.

The last few lines reminded me of poetry.

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Date: October 16 2013

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

I'm glad Henry is trying to breakdown Valerie's defensive walls. 

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Date: June 30 2013

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Great chapter.. the walls are coming down. 

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Date: June 30 2013

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

I hope she can trust her instincts. 

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Date: July 07 2013

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

I'm so happy for Val and Henry. 

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Date: July 16 2013

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 18 pt 3

No no no!

 

I don't want Val to be hurt.

 

California men are looking like jerks. 

 

 

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Date: January 25 2014

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 19

This is another WOW chapter.  I was so proud for her being strong and having a clear resolve about her future but that went away once Henry dropped the L word.

 

Poor Henry, living a facade and not opening up fully to anyone.

I don't know how Valerie can fix him while trying to right herself. 

 

Congratulations on finally being FEATURED!!

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Date: April 16 2014

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 20

All I can say is wow.
I hope that they both get the help and guidance that is needed.

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Date: July 07 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 53]
Summary:

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No place for beginners or sensitive hearts
Sentiment is left to chance
No place to be ending but somewhere to start
No need to ask He's a smooth operator


A peek into the lives of three male escorts.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: Smooth Operator
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5674
Read Count: 6963
Published: May 11 2013
Updated: May 27 2013


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

How did she find out. 



Author's Response:

We shall see ;-)

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Date: May 20 2013

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

A kinky and different type of happy ending.



Author's Response:

Thanks :-)

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Date: May 27 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 19]
Summary:

Chickens come home to roost and have lasting consequences.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 27
Read Count: 12869
Published: May 12 2013
Updated: May 15 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Coming home to roost

I think that I'm hooked.

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Date: May 13 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 70]
Summary:

Masks

 

“We understand how dangerous a mask can be. We all become what we pretend to be.” 
 Patrick RothfussThe Name of the Wind

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: The Masquerade
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6636
Read Count: 8473
Published: May 14 2013
Updated: July 08 2013


Title: Chapter 2: When One Door Closes

This was an excellent start and I can't wait to read the life decisions he makes.

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Date: July 21 2013

Title: Chapter 3: Grief Is A Complicated Business

Big brother to the rescue.

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Date: July 21 2013

Title: Chapter 4: Betting On The Losing Team

Whatever he says to her it better be spectacular with a lot of groveling.

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Date: July 21 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 417]
Summary:

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Benjamin Cunningham III decided to finally open the box that his adopted parents had given him which would reveal his past.  Little did he know that its contents would change his life forever.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Rape
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 82948
Read Count: 53952
Published: May 15 2013
Updated: September 05 2014


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Deception and Lies

wow

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Date: May 19 2013

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 A Baby Named Justice

Killing a main character. . didn't see that coming.



Author's Response:

I know.  I know.  My muse is bruised up with me fighting her, but she won out in the end.  More is coming!

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Date: June 12 2013

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Playing With Fire

I didn't see that coming.

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Date: May 31 2013

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Moving Forward...Moving Backward

Raymond is a snake. 

Your stories always have some type of redemption but I can't see his.

 



Author's Response:

Nope.  No redemption for Raymond.  LOL

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Date: May 29 2013

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Turning the Tables

Young love and first love is a beautiful thing. 

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Date: June 07 2013

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Pain and Healing

They all need some family prayer and group hugs.

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Date: July 08 2013

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