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Member Since: October 22 2012

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[Reviews - 1032]
Summary:

   

 

A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196730
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015


Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Sasha should have been stronger by now and she should not run and cower away from her past.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar
Date: January 29 2014

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Who's knocking on the door?

 



Author's Response:

We'll see... ;-)

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Date: June 26 2013

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Good chapter.  I'm glad Sasha is getting a backbone.



Author's Response:

Yes, she is definitely beginning to see her worth and realize that she doesn't need their friendship as much as she thought she did. Her relationship with Dmitri has helped to spur this growth. Thank you for your review! More coming soon!

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Date: June 14 2013

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Bravo! You have given your fans another great chapter. 



Author's Response:

Yay! Thank you!

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Date: July 03 2013

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Who knew Sasha could be a little freak.



Author's Response:

I know, right? Dmitri brings out the bad girl in her. lol Thank you for your review!

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Date: July 05 2013

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

I wanted Dimitri to change early in the story but I'm glad that time and determination has opened his eyes to love.

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Date: June 25 2014

Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

I love the strength in Sasha and I can't wait to see Dimitri's strength when he confronts his father.

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Date: July 04 2014

Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

This was a great story and I'm sorry it's over.

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Date: October 26 2014

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Summary:

 

Quitting love is never easy; no matter the situation. That saying seems to follow Jake Ryder in the once vibrant form of Sierra Lewis. The cycle doesn't seem to stop, or maybe he just doesn't want it to.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content
Series: Impossible to Kill
Chapters: 13
Completed:Yes
Word count: 43800
Read Count: 20048
Published: June 08 2013
Updated: May 27 2014


Title: Chapter 5: One Weary Rode.

This story is a tear jerker.



Author's Response:

Sorry if it had you teary eyed 1nadali. But thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 11 2013

Title: Chapter 2: Circles.

It's so sad when a relationship fails due to substance abuse. 

 

That is a period that will change you forever.

 

 



Author's Response:

I've seen what drugs can do to the people using and those around them; it's such a sad sight.

Thanks for reading.

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Date: June 08 2013

Title: Chapter 3: Rock Bottom.

This was a very powerful chapter.

Keep it up.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! :)

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Date: July 02 2013

Title: Chapter 4: Press Delete.

Great chapter, I hope Sierra will be able to accept the help that is needed.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! 

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Date: July 02 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary:

 

 

Lady Of The Rose

 

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"True, I am courtesan.  I do not deny my purpose is to entice, seduce- to love love and to enjoy its rewards. To be ensnared by its trappings... that is where the trickery begins."

 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 1515
Read Count: 1437
Published: June 29 2013
Updated: June 29 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So will this story have flashbacks to past and present. 



Author's Response:

It was originally constructed to be 1500 or less for a contest, so due to restraints an idea never surfaced.  But now that i released here who knows?  

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 29 2013

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So she is a high class prostitute who snubbed  someone in an elite social circle and he isn't accustomed to rejection. 

Sounds like a wicked affair. 

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Date: June 29 2013

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Summary:

An innocent night of fun ruins the lives of two people who realize they are screwed without each other but especially with each other.

 

"My body is your party"



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:Yes
Word count: 44180
Read Count: 56973
Published: July 07 2013
Updated: October 04 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm liking this story.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed
Date: December 25 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 33]
Summary:

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What happens when a werewolf refuses to follow his nature,does his wolf take full control or will the human side win the battle of wills...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Family, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 10355
Read Count: 3508
Published: July 13 2013
Updated: September 08 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm curious as to why they both agreed to the marriage in name only.

Who are these people.



Author's Response:

Nadali, their reasons will be revealed more clearly in chapter 3, unless the muse sends me in another direction but that's the plan so far. I will slowly be reveealing them to you with each chapter, starting with chapter 2, the design is to keep you interested enough to piece together something but not annoy you with lack of info. My point is stick with me and I'll try to make this fun for both of us. thank you for reading & rating.

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Date: July 24 2013

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So both mates have stalkers and I guess that's where the story will pickup. 



Author's Response:

Scratch the stalkers, they won't even matter in the next few chapters. so stick with me and I'll try to make this an interesting tale. Thanks for reading.

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Date: September 09 2013

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Nice chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank you...

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 09 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 36]
Summary:

 

 

 

Beck hates his job. His model boss, Heather, is a complete bitch. The only upside to working there is looking at her in the little shorts stomping around the house. However Beck's luck on the job just may change when the opportunity arises to tame the beast. 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: Hollywood Gems
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 9431
Read Count: 8429
Published: July 15 2013
Updated: July 19 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Well isn't this a surprise...

Oooo, I think this is going to be a cute, funny and sexy story.

I can't wait to see what a big boy he is.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. He's a BIG boy. Not scary big but big. 

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Date: July 19 2013

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 5]
Summary:

 

Min Kimbrough comes across the strangest man.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Science Fiction
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 500
Read Count: 2891
Published: July 17 2013
Updated: July 17 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

If Minerva is supersticious she won't open the box.

 

Welcome to the Chamber.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the welcome!  It's so interesting that you birng up superstion.  Minevera won't open the box because because she would see it as a point of honor.  She would never go back on her word.  As a very pragmatic historian I wouldn't characterize her as someone who gave a lot of credence to supertitions.  Schuyler, however, is definitely suspertitious.  He's absurd that way.  

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Date: July 21 2013

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[Reviews - 33]
Summary:

BOOK 1

 

 

It's Nicole Brown's 10 year high school reunion. After the unfortunate events that have lead up to this day, she very reluctant to go. Mainly because she didn't want to run into Rich Machima. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: Hollywood Gems
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6414
Read Count: 11867
Published: July 19 2013
Updated: July 23 2013


Title: Chapter 4: Epilogue: Three Months Later

Nice story.

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Date: July 23 2013

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[Reviews - 109]
Summary:

Shanna's car craps out on her in the middle of now where.  In all honesty her poor planning is what has got her into this predicament but the rude yet goregeous guy that  is helping her out of has something about him that she just can't shake.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 14100
Read Count: 14243
Published: July 22 2013
Updated: January 05 2014


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I think she needs to play hard to get and make him chase her. 



Author's Response:

I don't think Shanna is even mature enough to play games and enjoy the chase but we will see.

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Date: October 27 2013

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Nice update with some interesting twists.
Her best friends a witch and may have a wolf mate herself.

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Date: January 05 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Nice update with some interesting twists.
Her best friends a witch and may have a wolf mate herself.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar
Date: January 05 2014

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This is a good story build up.  Does Shanna feel the mating pull or is she just so wrapped up in herself.



Author's Response:

She feels something but I doubt she is ready for it.

 

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 29 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.