Penname: 1nadali [Contact]

Real name: nadali w

Member Since: October 22 2012

Membership status: Member

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Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 88]
Summary:

Can a beauty ever truly love a beast?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 15551
Read Count: 72105
Published: August 04 2013
Updated: October 19 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice start. 

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 25 2013

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 57]
Summary:

A race of aliens need females to survive.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Science Fiction
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 8688
Read Count: 11236
Published: August 15 2013
Updated: September 16 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a good start and it reminds me of an evangeline anderson story where women are needed to mate. 

I can't wait to find out the women were set up. 



Author's Response:

Keep reading and find out. Thanx for your reply.

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Date: August 15 2013

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I figured they would be sex slaves.

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Date: September 05 2013

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I was looking at your story a few weeks ago and I thought you just left this teaser.

I'm so glad you're back to writing this scifi story.

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Date: September 16 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 345]
Summary:

College student Rory Daniels has a problem, and it isn’t how she’s going to pass her final exams.

You see, she can do this thing where she can manipulate objects… and other things, and as far as she knows she’s the only one who can. So when she’s forced to use her powers at a crowded bookstore and attracts the attention of a fellow student, she’s anything but happy about it. When it turns out the student has no interest in turning her over to the government and actually wants, of all things, a double date, she’s pleasantly surprised. That is, until her date ditches her for her friend and she ends up stuck with his.

His friend turns out to be Victor Ryken. He’s tall. Built like a Greek god and has a set of the most memorizing hazel eyes Rory’s ever seen. And, oh yeah, he does nothing but infuriate her. After the date from hell, Vic has for some reason taken an increased interest in her and what’s worse… her powers light up every time he touches her. When Vic’s around her abilities go haywire and his presence marks the beginning of a string of unusual events. Suddenly, she’s become a person of interest to nearly everyone she meets and strange people pop up in her life that have her question her own weirdness. When Vic himself displays a whole new level of weird while saving her from an attacker, Rory ends up concluding one thing. 

Maybe she’s not as alone as she thinks.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 126441
Read Count: 55754
Published: August 22 2013
Updated: September 04 2013


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 1

Good start. 

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar
Date: September 02 2013

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 9

I woke up at 2am and started reading this story.  Some of your characters are intriguing and some annoying and I can't wait to find out more about Rory's background. 

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Date: September 02 2013

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 10

I need to run errands and I can't stop reading this story!

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Date: September 02 2013

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 15

As I read this story I guess I'm looking for more romance but they are still in the building stages.

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Date: September 02 2013

Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 37

I figured Rory was the cure.

This was a good young adult sci-fi story.

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Date: September 08 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 32]
Summary:

The sequel to Metamorphosis!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 7989
Read Count: 2980
Published: September 08 2013
Updated: April 14 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Prologue

Good start for Nates story.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar
Date: September 08 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 89]
Summary:

He's the world's most famous supermodel.

She's the church singer whose hypocritical lifestyle has been unveiled by one simple picture with him.

 

A story of redemption, love and family.  

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 26153
Read Count: 31585
Published: October 22 2013
Updated: October 24 2014


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10- Get It Right, Get it Tight

Great ending. 

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Date: December 17 2013

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13- Back to Square One

I hope her new celebrity status doesn't interfere with her law school application.

Admission boards can be extremely picky.

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Date: February 06 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 97]
Summary:

Denise is a young woman who is on the verge of giving up on love. Never having love in her life she is wondering what is wrong until she meets Issac. Issac has been avoiding relationships for the past few years to support himself but is ashamed of telling someone what he does for a living. Will he tell her his secret? But will she tell him hers?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:Yes
Word count: 35052
Read Count: 29403
Published: October 29 2013
Updated: December 08 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This seems like a cute story. 

I can't wait to the rest. 

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar
Date: December 09 2013

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm wondering how he will tell her the truth about his work. 

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Date: December 09 2013

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

That was a really good chapter...you had me gettin teary eyed.

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Date: December 10 2013

Title: Chapter 16: Epilogue

This was a very nice story.

Thank you.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 10 2013

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I was hoping that Denise would hold out a little longer.

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Date: December 10 2013

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I think Denise is about to kick some butt.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 10 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 277]
Summary:

Lance was a man who had it all and lost it all. He was down and out and was ready to give up because he had nothing to live for. Nina was a woman who had enough of being used and was trying to start her life over in a new city. When these two meet will Lance have something to live for? Or will he continue to live in misery. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 27
Completed:Yes
Word count: 40637
Read Count: 72031
Published: December 09 2013
Updated: July 06 2015


Title: Chapter 17: In Ten

I'm glad they finally were able to be together and I hope they are strong enough to weather the storm.

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Date: August 31 2014

Title: Chapter 10: Downtown Lunch

I don't know why this man, whose daughter is deceased, can hold anything over Lance's head.

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Date: January 12 2014

Title: Chapter 11: Give Me Time

She should be more patient. 

He's still homeless and is trying to get his life in order. 

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 03 2014

Title: Chapter 11: Give Me Time

She should be more patient. 

He's still homeless and is trying to get his life in order. 

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Date: February 03 2014

Title: Chapter 12: Leave

Not what I expected but insiteful.

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Date: April 26 2014

Title: Chapter 9: Fooled me Once

I think they both need therapy since they can't share their past to move forward. 

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar
Date: January 03 2014

Title: Chapter 13: Unexpected Meetings

I'm glad you're back to writing.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 20 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.