Penname: 1nadali [Contact]

Real name: nadali w

Member Since: October 22 2012

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 277]
Summary:

Lance was a man who had it all and lost it all. He was down and out and was ready to give up because he had nothing to live for. Nina was a woman who had enough of being used and was trying to start her life over in a new city. When these two meet will Lance have something to live for? Or will he continue to live in misery. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 27
Completed:Yes
Word count: 40637
Read Count: 72032
Published: December 09 2013
Updated: July 06 2015


Title: Chapter 18: E-mails

Why can't Lance go to FBI and show them whatever evidence and have them watching over him and Nina.

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Date: September 14 2014

Title: Chapter 19: Photos

Frank is a perv and I don't think he realizes that Lance won't lose another loved one again.

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Date: October 19 2014

Title: Chapter 20: Nightly Visitiors

I thought his home had a lot of extra security?

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Date: November 22 2014

Title: Chapter 25:

Two formal galas are your characters overlapping?

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Date: May 23 2015

Title: Chapter 26: Makeovers

I hope that Lance and Nina don't have any snags to their happiness.

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Date: June 23 2015

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[Reviews - 97]
Summary:

*Revamped and revised version of former story The Assistant*

 

Marissa Jacobs is the assistant to her tyrannical boss Ron Kincaid who is going through a bitter divorce. As the holiday season approaches, her will and sanity is tested by Ron. When Ron shows up at Marissa's apartment drunk, Marissa makes it her mission to help Ron see there is more to life than just being bitter and mean. Of course, she wasn't expecting to fall in love with him.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:No
Word count: 28046
Read Count: 54398
Published: December 12 2013
Updated: December 24 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I hope she can keep her up beat personality.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 31 2014

Retired
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[Reviews - 292]
Summary:

She's a mess he can't help wanting to fix.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Southern Gentlemen
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 90
Read Count: 69509
Published: January 11 2014
Updated: October 19 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A knight coming to the rescue of someone in distress.

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Date: March 02 2015

Title: Alexa and Brody

Brody's going to fix her but will he allow himself to be fixed as well.

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Date: March 17 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 39]
Summary:

Rya, a dreamer at heart is as imaginative as her mind allows her to be. She can't wait to go off into world and live a life full of adventure. Haseem yearns for a normal safe life. After leaving a troubled past, he hopes to somehow atone for his sins and start with a clean slate. Without complications.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 8428
Read Count: 2651
Published: February 04 2014
Updated: February 17 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Save me.

That was a great opening chapter.

I'm at a loss for words because you can go so many directions with that opening.

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Date: March 29 2014

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2- Educate me.

I like how they are both flirting with fire.

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Date: March 29 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 16]
Summary:

He's tall. He's handsome. He's funny and charming and sweet. He's everything that you could want in a man. But, he has a sweet tooth... and it might just be for you.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Horror, Suspense
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 13191
Read Count: 5352
Published: February 19 2014
Updated: March 22 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Hunter/Gatherer

Great chapter.

I feel for Celia because her need for his happiness will be their downfall.

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Date: March 02 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Mind of a Killer

I see this is going to be a deep dark drama.

I'm going to hang in there with you.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Date: February 20 2014

Title: Chapter 3: The Kill

Good story and I can't feel sorry for her because she wanted this just as much as he did.

Be careful what you wish for.

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Date: March 22 2014

Retired
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[Reviews - 338]
Summary:

She was only a debt to him... or so she thought.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 26251
Read Count: 83529
Published: February 23 2014
Updated: July 08 2015


Title: Chapter 1: One

That was a great start and I can'twait to read the rest.

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Date: December 08 2014

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[Reviews - 40]
Summary:

Illyana is a young wolf during an age of lone wolves and fewer females...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 15180
Read Count: 10905
Published: March 19 2014
Updated: January 20 2015


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

That was a beautiful chapter.

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Date: January 23 2015

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Great update,  I can't wait to see who is invading their territory.

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Date: March 31 2014

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[Reviews - 142]
Summary:

What do you do when your best friend you've secretly loved pops up and tells you about his pending nuptials to another woman? Kerri DuBois keeps it moving as if her heart hadn't been ripped from her chest. She's loved her best friend and will need to get over him and soon. And there is someone who can help her do just that.

 

Black sheep, Brandon Wesely, returns home after a long absence to hear of "Saint Kerri" and is instantly enamored. When he looks at her, he can see her pain and wants to help her get over his little brother…and he selfishly wants to keep her for himself.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 13930
Read Count: 26192
Published: April 09 2014
Updated: April 13 2014


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great story and characters.

 

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Date: April 23 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It seems like Ker is wearing her heart on her sleeve and her sleeve has just been ripped off. 

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Date: April 22 2014

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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

What happens to a woman when the thing she dreams of becoming as a little girl, the thing she revels in as a young woman, is suddenly the thing that she must learn to let go of and live without? Is there a place for her in a world where this thing is the only thing that matters? Is it even something that she ever really loses?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Drabbles , General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff, Original Characters, Spritualism, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 2935
Read Count: 1296
Published: April 24 2014
Updated: May 10 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Intro

Who is she and why has she just realized that she isn't twenty years younger.



Author's Response:

This is just the introduction, and the story is still developing in my mind's eye, so as it stands she's just a woman. It isn't so much that she just now realizes that she isn't literally 18 or 20 anymore (for example), but that she isn't turning heads the way she once was. What made her finally notice? How does she react? Does she overcome and rise above, or does she succumb to the notion that beauty lies only with the young? Just a few ideas I'm mulling over

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Date: April 24 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 519]
Summary:

Elise is a struggling college student that can barely pay tuition. With a lousy job and is on the verge of getting kicked out of med school she has to find a way to pay. So with no only choice she looks in the personals and looks for a sugar daddy.

Jameson is a successful man that does not have time to date. With the pressure of his family to wed and women using him he just wants to experience a relationship without the drama. So he makes an ad to find a sugar baby.

What happens when both of these two get together?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 50520
Read Count: 111870
Published: June 24 2014
Updated: August 25 2017


Title: Chapter 12: Car Conversations

I thought her first priority was finishing medical school. Has she abandoned her dreams?

Author's Response:

Of course not she is still in school.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar
Date: November 22 2014

Title: Chapter 28: My Decision

Thanks for the update. So my question is Jamie and his associates former CIA or black ops assets? He seems to have connections that make him/them more than a vigilante.

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Date: January 06 2017

Title: Chapter 23: Underground

So he has a hidden mafia side.

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Date: November 07 2015

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[Reviews - 116]
Summary:


   Caleb Garrison has been in love with Grey ever since they were children. He even told his parents while a child that someday he would marry her. However, there was one problem...although adopted, she was legally his sister.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:Yes
Word count: 29115
Read Count: 36926
Published: October 07 2014
Updated: November 05 2017


Title: Chapter 1: Sister

A complicated love triangle.

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Date: August 07 2016

Title: Chapter 4: Erratic

That had to be extremely frightening for Grey.

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Date: August 07 2016

Title: Chapter 7: Jealousy* Kiss

Danger is up ahead.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 07 2016

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.