Penname: 1nadali [Contact]

Real name: nadali w

Member Since: October 22 2012

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[Reviews - 116]
Summary:


   Caleb Garrison has been in love with Grey ever since they were children. He even told his parents while a child that someday he would marry her. However, there was one problem...although adopted, she was legally his sister.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:Yes
Word count: 29115
Read Count: 36915
Published: October 07 2014
Updated: November 05 2017


Title: Chapter 11: Down Under

He has to leave for Australia but will he go alone.

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Date: August 07 2016

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[Reviews - 857]
Summary:

 Camille Jackson was rejected since birth over her dark skin complexion. She has grown a tough skin and doesn’t get attached to anyone because of how some people have viewed her without even getting to know her. However Camille opens her heart to a baby in need and for the first six months Camille has grown to love the baby as if she were her own. That is until the baby's biological father comes into the picture.

Hiram Whitfield Jr was brought up in one of the most well known Ku Klux Klan families in the south and as the only son he feels the pressure to carry on his family's tradition. After finishing his prison sentence all Hiram wants to do is change his life for the better and be a good father to his child. If that means being disowned by his bigoted family then so be it. Ironically enough Hiram would have never thought that Camille would be the one to be his rock and strength to do so.

 

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 51
Completed:Yes
Word count: 107887
Read Count: 215320
Published: October 09 2014
Updated: October 25 2015


Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 35

This was a good suspenseful chapter that I was nervous to read the ending.

I want to commend you on writing a story that for most was a difficult pairing.

My grandparents are from Mississippi and North Carolina and have to me how life was in the early 1900s. I live in Pennsylvania where the racism is hidden or disguised as I'm sure it is now all over the US.

You impressed me with your attention to detail and the conflicting emotions in the characters.

Thank you again for this tale of acceptance, forgiveness, love and redemption.

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Date: April 25 2015

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 15

This is a great story, please stay encouraged to continue their story.

I haven't read the comments but the people who only have negative things to say should write their own story.

I know this is set 20 years ago, have you thought about jumping forward for a few chapters.

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Date: November 06 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

This is a lovely story that had me reading all thirteen chapters in one sitting.

Well done.

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Date: October 26 2014

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 14

Excellent and sad insight into their childhood.

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Date: November 03 2014

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 16

Great chapter.

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Date: November 09 2014

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 17

The jealous haters waste so much time and energy plotting to do harm to others. It's a sad fact of life.

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Date: November 10 2014

Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 24

Another great and emotional chapter. I hope they can both heal each other one day.

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Date: December 06 2014

Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 25

Your chapters always stir up a variety of emotions.
Well done.

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Date: December 14 2014

Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 33

Thank you for the update.

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Date: March 02 2015

Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 36

Another great cliffhanger!

I'm so glad Debbie went over the cliff.

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Date: May 08 2015

Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 38

For a moment I thought that was final chapter. I can't wait to read epilogue.

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Date: July 16 2015

Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 40

Very touching ending.

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Date: August 20 2015

Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 41

Well written and tear inducing.
I hope Savannah doesn't break down from hearing her families history.

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Date: August 22 2015

Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 42

Thank you.

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Date: September 04 2015

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[Reviews - 286]
Summary:

SEQUEL to Sasha: the Wallflower. Adaline Lang is an up and coming photographer with more than her own set of problems. During her cousin's wedding she comes face-to-face with the man that she had fallen in love with as a child. Only to find out he was in love with someone else. What will she do to finally be heard and convince him that the perfect women he has been looking for is standing right in front of him?

Dominic Vikhrov is caught between a rock and a hard place. The woman he has fawned after for so many years has finally returned to the United States. But he isn't the only one who is fighting for her heart. Never one to lose, Dominic has his eye on the prize no matter the cost. But will his tunnel vision blind him to something even greater?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 37246
Read Count: 40808
Published: October 24 2014
Updated: November 20 2015


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I'm not sure about Dina and Dominic but I know that Adaline is tired of being a door mat and she is determined to have her independence.

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Date: January 23 2015

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

I thought Dina may have ran away to hide pregnancy but I thought she had other admirers around the same time she was seeing Dominic.

I don't want Adaline to become someone's doormat or lost puppy.

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Date: March 28 2015

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Sounds like Adeline has hidden inner strength and compassion.

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Date: October 26 2014

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Oh, she definitely needs to move on. Also, if he is drawn to shallow women then he can have them.

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Date: July 03 2015

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Great chapter, I had a feeling Dina's daughter was Slades. Since he couldn't commit to her due to his culture and didn't think Slade would slip up like that. I hope Dom doesn't explode during their family dinner.

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Date: June 12 2015

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

That wad her kiss goodbye and hopefully she'll realize her worth with someone who wants to truly know her.

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Date: July 21 2015

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I think she can be a stronger person if they're just friends. I believe she has accepted this but Dominic is still wanting that unconditional puppy love to fill the voids in his personal life.

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Date: November 21 2015

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Carla is going to ruin her new marriage by chasing someone that never wanted her.

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Date: November 21 2015

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[Reviews - 5]
Summary:

SIN 

            Every superhero has a past— a starting point— a trigger moment when it all comes together.  When he knows.

 

         Every superhero isn't  born noble, courageous or brave.  Some are forced into it.  Reluctant to cross that line— to become just, righteous.

 

            One hero  cannot feel, will not smile. She is human— limited by her physical strengths and weaknesses. 

 

            Sinclair Noels is a superhero living in a mortal body.  Her world is corrupt. Her city is lawless.

 

            She  should feel right at home in such a place for she has no religious compass— no moral barrier.  Lying is all she knows and what she does best.  Her value system is screwed up.  Wrong is right.  Bad is good.

 

             Yet all of that is about to change when one little girl asked for her help...

WWW.ELIZABETHGRIFFIN.NET 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 2458
Read Count: 1427
Published: November 29 2014
Updated: November 29 2014


Title: Chapter 1: SIN

Ooh, I like the beginning of this story and I can't wait to find out what changes Sin's life.

Author's Response:

I'm writing the next chapter.  I will be posting soon.  Thanks.

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Date: November 30 2014

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 14]
Summary:

A

 

Dynomite

 

Christmas

 

(Fan-fiction challenge)

(GOOD TIMES TV SITCOM FROM THE 1970's)

WWW.ELIZABETHGRIFFIN.NET 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 3715
Read Count: 6060
Published: December 22 2014
Updated: December 26 2014


Title: Chapter 1: A Dynomite Christmas

A nice Christmas story, I forgot how lively and loving the Evans family are with each other.
You brought back some good childhood memories.

Author's Response:

You touched my heart with your review.  I was out shopping for the holiday with my children and celebrating my brother's birthday when my middle son read your comments to me.  It made me smile and get emotional for what I really want in this life is to touch and affect people with my writing.  HAPPY HOLIDAYS TO YOU AND YOUR FAMILY!

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Date: December 23 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.