Penname: 1nadali [Contact]

Real name: nadali w

Member Since: October 22 2012

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When it Hurts so Bad by LadySade
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[Reviews - 65]
Summary:

When it Hurts so Bad

 

 

When best childhood friends, Cassandra Bishops and Jae-Hoon Whitaker, share a night of passion, they find that making their new, intimate relationship prosper would prove to be more challenging than they realized. When heart breaking secrets come to light and obstacles arise, will they choose to fight for their love or will they go their separate ways?

 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 30419
Read Count: 9388
Published: March 19 2013
Updated: August 11 2013

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Title: Chapter 10: Act 1: Ch 10

So sad but at all shocking. 

 

 



Author's Response:

It is sad. This will prove to be a trial that they both have to face. They've been walking around their issues for too long, it was about time the truth came out.
Thanks so much for reading!

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar
Date: May 31 2013
Title: Chapter 17: Act 1: Ch 17

Wow.  Who is she trying to fool. 

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Date: August 12 2013
Chocolate by HeyokaHeart
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 209]
Summary:

Loki

What happens after Loki falls from the Rainbow Bridge? My first fic EVER. M rating for later chapters.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Original Fiction
Characters: Other
Classification: Alternate Universe, Off Cannon , Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:No
Word count: 49769
Read Count: 40306
Published: April 13 2013
Updated: April 22 2014

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Title: Chapter 15: The Gun in the Bun

Excellent chapter.

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Date: January 26 2014
Title: Chapter 16: Voices

Another great chapter.

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Date: January 26 2014
Title: Chapter 18: Whiskey

I think everyone has had a Danny moment.

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Date: January 26 2014
Title: Chapter 19: Rebound

Wow, I hope Danny doesn't become a stalker.



Author's Response:

I hope so too!

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Date: January 26 2014
Title: Chapter 14: Alone

Two star crossed brawlers.

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Date: January 26 2014
Title: Chapter 1: Not Quite Dead

Good intro and I can't wait to read more.

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Date: January 26 2014
Title: Chapter 2: Broadway

Good update.

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Date: January 26 2014
Title: Chapter 4: Chocolate

I'm enjoying this story and I can't wait to see what Noni finds at the library.

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Date: January 26 2014
Title: Chapter 5: Snow

I like how they are warming up to each other.

Trust in small steps.

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Date: January 26 2014
Retired
Hello Again Mr. Right by mya1967
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 86]
Summary:

Everyone has that someone who made them feel perfect and brilliant. How do we lose sight of those great loves and what happens when they come back into your orbit? Amelia and David were college sweethearts who run into each other 2 decades later-after marriages, divorces, kids, and careers--can they still be crazy in love?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9837
Read Count: 16837
Published: April 17 2013
Updated: June 12 2013

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Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 I Wonder If I Take You Home...

It was a great story with a good open ending. 

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Date: June 10 2013
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 5--Feenin'

Nice story... but it ended in the middle. 

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Date: April 18 2013
Title: Chapter 9: Epilogue

Thank you for a lovely evening.



Author's Response:

thank your for sticking with me and reviewing--

Peace

M.

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Date: June 12 2013
Forbidden by Acdromance
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 29]
Summary:

Sebastian and Sage want what they can't have.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content
Challenges: Can I Tell You My Fantasy?
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4846
Read Count: 5678
Published: May 02 2013
Updated: May 04 2013

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Cute story.

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Date: May 18 2013
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like the secret crush.

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Date: May 18 2013
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh no!

I hopethis doesn't end bad.  

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Date: May 18 2013
Retired
Unguarded by notheruniverse
Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 287959
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015

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Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Oh my,  I laughed, sighed and cringed while reading this chapter.  I'm glad that you're writing Valerie stronger in this chapter.

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Date: October 02 2013
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17

She is solely allowing him to tear down the walls she has built up over her heart.

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Date: January 01 2014
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 18 pt 2

OMG!

 

Another cliffhanger,  now I see why his sister is so protective. 

 

Every time you post a new chapter I'm reccomending this story to be "FEATURED"

 

It seems like the best stories on this site don't get recognized. 

 

 

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 22 2014
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16 FULL

This is a really good chapter and Val is entitled to her insecurities because this is all new for her. 



Author's Response:

thnx for seeing what I was trying to do :)

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Date: January 01 2014
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18

I hope she didn't make herself vomit.

I don't like Henry's friends because in their eyes he can only be seen with a white model. Val was invisible until his sister made a fool of herself. Thank God for Ben who gave her a confidence boost.

I have a feeling that this day will go downhill fast.

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Date: January 12 2014
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 24 pt 1

I wonder if both of them will keep their guard down.

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Date: January 23 2015
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Another great chapter. 

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Date: June 30 2013
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

So, I guess 27 will be her favorite number.

This was and very hot chapter.

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Date: July 23 2013

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