Penname: mrmalone [Contact]

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Member Since: December 09 2012

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[Reviews - 415]
Summary:

 

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* ON THE CHAMBER'S TOP TEN MOST FAVORITE STORIES LIST

& NOW KINDLE VELLAS TOP 250 FAVORITES LIST *

FIVE STARS ON AMAZON

When the lines are drawn, will you risk your life to cross them for love?

In the Summer of 1988, tragedy hits home for Charlene Jacobson and her father when her little brother is killed playing a game of basketball in their Detroit housing projects.  She soon finds herself living in the small rural town of Millersville, Georgia, with her estranged grandmother. Millersville is a place where time stands still and the racial divide is as prevalent as the 1950s.  Secrets, lies, and betrayal lurk in every corner. Yet, through it all she finds solace in the arms of Ryan Quinn, a white senior track star and the son of the town Sherriff.  

Will their love cross the finish line?  

EDIT:  Crossing the Finish line has been removed from this site and a revised version with added new content has been published on Amazon Kindle Vella (as of November 2022) under the penname, Shelly B Williams. To those of you who have left reviews, added me to your Favorite Authors and Story Alerts, and helped to make CTFL one of the Top Ten Most Favorited Stories on Valent Chamber, I trully appreciate all the support you have shown me over the years. I hope you will continue to support me as I begin the next phase of my journey as a published author. I couldn't  have done this without you. 

Much Love!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Deep, dark, and mysterious
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5758
Read Count: 214485
Published: November 07 2010
Updated: January 09 2014


Title: Crossing the Finish Line

love this chapter, i was really believable and the twist at the end makes want more. I wait or the family dinner. I think the mom wont care as much but the father & brother will. Also im wondering if the fathers were fighting over Charlie's mom :)

Reviewer: mrmalone Signed
Date: April 18 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 615]
Summary:

 

When rockstar Adam Brand makes a racist remark during a drunken magazine interview, it becomes an international headline.  Within hours his PR Agent concocts the perfect plan to revive his rapidly sinking career before it’s too late, but will Adam be able to pull it off?

 

**** STEREO has been removed for editing, refining and if all goes according to plan, publishing! I couldn't have finished it without all my readers leaving their words and thoughts--even if I didn't always like them--so THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart. <3



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:Yes
Word count: 922
Read Count: 90698
Published: March 24 2012
Updated: August 30 2014


Title: Chapter 8: "You’ll be the biggest name in the modeling world before you open your eyes tomorrow morning."

great job, i really love the flow of this story.

Reviewer: mrmalone Signed
Date: March 16 2013

Title: Chapter 1: "My dick is sort of like a white supremacist."

Sad update but needed. I hope she take a new what he said an leave California and start a writing career.

Reviewer: mrmalone Signed
Date: May 15 2014

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 219]
Summary:

He loved to see them suffer. The pitiful humans that they desperately need to survive. Oh how she would suffer the girl who was nothing but a twinkling star, and he knew just as good as anyone that stars were never meant to stay. They were destined to fall and look beautiful as there innocence fades away.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 23
Completed:No
Word count: 60375
Read Count: 132369
Published: July 23 2012
Updated: June 18 2014


Title: Chapter 22: Stay Where You Can Be Seen

Sorry to hear about the robbery. I hope you r doing better.

Reviewer: mrmalone Signed
Date: July 01 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 217]
Summary:

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In desperate need to be loved, Camille Sullivan was willing to do anything... even if it meant sleeping with the devil.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 3430
Read Count: 49946
Published: December 12 2012
Updated: July 18 2019


Title: Teach Me How To Be Loved

Sorry for your lost. And it's ok to write and post other stories while your muse is away. Just go with what you feel & it will be great :)

Reviewer: mrmalone Signed
Date: June 12 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 40]
Summary:

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It has been Centuries since Human and Other Beings decided to live apart from each other thus the Southern and Northern Kingdoms.Two beings and Fate had other plans, what was decided by the humans, Weres and other beings had nothing to do with Kiero and Palesa most definately not Fate...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Family, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 36745
Read Count: 11211
Published: December 31 2012
Updated: July 27 2013


Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 7

This wasn't too confusing. But I think you should put mind conversation in italic, I believe it will make it flow better.

Reviewer: mrmalone Signed
Date: July 28 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 192]
Summary:

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Chance. I don't believe in it. Everything that happens in our life happens for a reason. I've always believed that. But, it's funny. Who would have thought a night of clubbing could result in my marriage to the tattooed quarterback for the San Francisco 49ers?    



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 29
Completed:No
Word count: 88367
Read Count: 172515
Published: March 16 2013
Updated: March 14 2016


Title: Chapter 14: Yes or No

I really enjoyed your 1st sex scene. Don't back down keep writing them they will get better.



Author's Response:

Haha. Thanks! Yeah, I know you're right, but that was just too difficult for me to write. Maybe, in the near future, I'll try my hand at it. But, for now, I'll leave the erotic stuff to the pros on here. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

-Amby

Reviewer: mrmalone Signed
Date: July 01 2013

Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 65]
Summary:

When it Hurts so Bad

 

 

When best childhood friends, Cassandra Bishops and Jae-Hoon Whitaker, share a night of passion, they find that making their new, intimate relationship prosper would prove to be more challenging than they realized. When heart breaking secrets come to light and obstacles arise, will they choose to fight for their love or will they go their separate ways?

 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 30419
Read Count: 9388
Published: March 19 2013
Updated: August 11 2013


Title: Chapter 17: Act 1: Ch 17

I really liked this story. My only problem was that I didn't understand why you use "the woman" & "the man" instead of "she" & "he"



Author's Response:

Ha ha ha! I don't know why I do that. I guess I like the ring of it. My friend says it's because I'm a weirdo. ^^

Reviewer: mrmalone Signed
Date: August 11 2013

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 629]
Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 287710
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 19

Loved it. Some of your names are mixed up. But this was worth the wait. Please don't take so long to update :)



Author's Response:

thank you. i made the editions thanks to your review.

Reviewer: mrmalone Signed
Date: April 15 2014

Title: Chapter 23: QUESTION

Henry pov can flow if u talk about the day he left a the past 4 since she's seen him :)

Reviewer: mrmalone Signed
Date: January 26 2014

Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 23

About time i was just about to give up on Val. I can't wait to read more on their relationship together 

Reviewer: mrmalone Signed
Date: December 25 2014

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 PREVIEW

Yes you should publish this story it's really good. At first I really wasn't sure which way the story was going but after this chapter I can see it. All I can say is please don't rush the ending.

Reviewer: mrmalone Signed
Date: December 14 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1032]
Summary:

   

 

A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196744
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015


Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Yes yes yes she should take him back!!! 

Great chapter :)

Reviewer: mrmalone Signed
Date: June 02 2014

Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

Nice chapter, I can't wait to read the meeting of the father :)

Reviewer: mrmalone Signed
Date: July 04 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 189]
Summary:

An innocent night of fun ruins the lives of two people who realize they are screwed without each other but especially with each other.

 

"My body is your party"



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:Yes
Word count: 44180
Read Count: 56975
Published: July 07 2013
Updated: October 04 2013


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Well I think she should keep the baby &  become more independent because her baby will have to join the family business. I know she was ok with that before but now it's here..... :)



Author's Response:

well she'll become more independent in the more upcoming chapters I'll tell you that much

Reviewer: mrmalone Signed
Date: July 28 2013

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I'm still with it :)



Author's Response:

yayy :)

Reviewer: mrmalone Signed
Date: August 08 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 301]
Summary:

She got the guy, the fairytale. But when complications of his new life come to light will she be strong enough to keep him?

 

***Please do not post this story to other sites. I post all my stories here with the intention of publication. I thank you all for your attention :)***



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 129
Read Count: 34240
Published: January 18 2014
Updated: March 31 2015


Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

Can't wait to see the reaction when he sees the new roxie



Author's Response:

We're getting there! ;)

Reviewer: mrmalone Signed
Date: January 27 2015

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

It flowing so well, can't wait for the next update

Reviewer: mrmalone Signed
Date: January 22 2015

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

This made me smile big. I just love them

Reviewer: mrmalone Signed
Date: December 19 2014

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

Roxie, Roxie, Roxie how could you not tell your dad....

Reviewer: mrmalone Signed
Date: December 24 2014

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

I've been waiting on someone to tell Griffin to slow his butt down. Good chapter 

Reviewer: mrmalone Signed
Date: February 05 2015

Title: Roxie and Griffin: Ever After

Wow this was a great emotional chapter. So I hope as she works through these issues she will give her dad a call. Maybe he's need to help get old Roxie back.



Author's Response:

I really like you're thinking here ;) Thanks mrmalone!!!

Reviewer: mrmalone Signed
Date: February 09 2015

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 542]
Summary:

How far will you go when you're lonely?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 75
Completed:No
Word count: 151713
Read Count: 143283
Published: March 13 2014
Updated: July 17 2015


Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I really hope you'll finish the story. I do at times fell like I don't know where this is going but I think some of the updates should have been written together. Because at times it seem like what you have written was just fillers and couldn't figure how they tie in to the rest of the story.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review, Mrmalone!

Reviewer: mrmalone Signed
Date: June 03 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 142]
Summary:

What do you do when your best friend you've secretly loved pops up and tells you about his pending nuptials to another woman? Kerri DuBois keeps it moving as if her heart hadn't been ripped from her chest. She's loved her best friend and will need to get over him and soon. And there is someone who can help her do just that.

 

Black sheep, Brandon Wesely, returns home after a long absence to hear of "Saint Kerri" and is instantly enamored. When he looks at her, he can see her pain and wants to help her get over his little brother…and he selfishly wants to keep her for himself.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 13930
Read Count: 26191
Published: April 09 2014
Updated: April 13 2014


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great story I just wished it was longer :)

Reviewer: mrmalone Signed
Date: April 14 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 572]
Summary:

Madison DuMont, English by birth but raised in New York, has returned to England to pursue her dream of being a top ballerina with her best friend and fellow dancer, Dante Palmer. After encountering the same racial issues with being a black ballerina in a predominantly white field she experienced in NY, Madison invests her inheritance in opening her own ballet company. A chance meeting with Matthew Bradley one night leads her down an unexpected path where she battles her personal perceptions of interracial relationships and whether they are worth it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 26
Read Count: 118377
Published: May 11 2014
Updated: September 05 2014


Title: Lovers' Dance

I am loving the way this story is coming together.  Please keep up the great work.

Reviewer: mrmalone Signed
Date: July 21 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.