Penname: zoe zoey [Contact]

Real name: zoey

Member Since: February 01 2013

Membership status: Member

Bio:

 just love to read.                                     


 


 




[Report This]
Reviews by zoe zoey


Retired
To Love the Devil by Benny Jude Road
Rated: Mature Content
starstarstarstarhalf-star
[Reviews - 286]
Summary:

stories/2209/images/To_Love_the_Devil__copy_Fotor2.jpg

 

 

Loving a man is hard enough try loving the devil?

 

How do you love a man that doesn't want to be love?

 

How can you care for a person who could careless about you?

 

How do you try to find a soul mate from a soulless man?

 

Jacqueline finds herself sold to devil she try's to unfreeze a heart that seems untouchable.

 

The harder she try's to love him the more lost she gets into the battle of loving the devil.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 58549
Read Count: 113780
Published: September 24 2012
Updated: March 31 2016

[Report This]

Title: Chapter 10: So Seductive

Amazing update.

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed
Date: May 30 2013
Never Let Me Go by DramaQueenAmby
Rated: Mature Content
starstarstarstarstar
[Reviews - 192]
Summary:

stories/890/images/NLMGBanner.png

Chance. I don't believe in it. Everything that happens in our life happens for a reason. I've always believed that. But, it's funny. Who would have thought a night of clubbing could result in my marriage to the tattooed quarterback for the San Francisco 49ers?    



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 29
Completed:No
Word count: 88367
Read Count: 172437
Published: March 16 2013
Updated: March 14 2016

[Report This]

Title: Chapter 9: Mother? (Continued)

Loving this story and your are a superb writer.I love Arianna's personality...she's tough,honest and loyal.the banter between derrick and maya is sooo funny....just enjoying.Waiting to read more:)

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed
Date: April 06 2013
Merri's Secret Fantasy by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
starstarstarstarstar
[Reviews - 89]
Summary:

photo 9902e339-8b69-418a-afb6-ed01148b8816_zps0b50514a.jpg

Merri Tallon is a fifty year old widow that wants to have some fun.  Her single adult children think that she should sit in the corner and knit, but Merri has something else in mind!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Challenges: Can I Tell You My Fantasy?
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 14750
Read Count: 7548
Published: April 05 2013
Updated: April 09 2013

[Report This]

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Merri's Plans

Loving it.....Great response to the challenge.Caleb's right age should'nt stop you from being with and loving someone:)

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed
Date: April 07 2013
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Week of Bliss

Awwwww!Please don't end this story here.....I really want to see Merri and Caleb getting together

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed
Date: April 10 2013
Retired
Unguarded by notheruniverse
Rated: Mature Content
starstarstarstarstar
[Reviews - 629]
Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 287631
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015

[Report This]

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 PREVIEW

You should definitely publish this story.This is one of my favorite story on the Chamber. You are truly blessed with the gift to write....This preview has left me wanting to read more of this chapter.Plzzz update soon.

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed
Date: December 11 2013
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

OMG!!! That was so hot.The lovemaking scenes between Henry and Valerie were absolutely beautiful.The way Henry was so caring and attentive towards her was exactly what Val needed after the way her parents and George had treated her...Love this story and your writing.

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed
Date: October 11 2013
Title: Chapter 23: QUESTION

I would love to read Henry's POV because I really want to know how exactly he feels about Val......He definitely likes Val but then in last chapter after he went back, he ignored her calls and texts and that is not fair to Val after everything they have gone through.So I don't think one chapter in Henry's POV will affect the story but it will definitely give an insight into his character and the reason for the way he behaves with Val.But at the end it's your choice and opinion and I will love reading whatever you choose to go with.

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed
Date: January 26 2014
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Somebody has really scarred Val emotionally.She should take chance with Henry and I hope he helps Val to make her see herself in a new light becuz she really needs some confidence boost.

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed
Date: June 03 2013
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Loving this story........It's going to be really challenging for Henry to break the walls Val has around herself.

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed
Date: May 30 2013
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

I am so hooked to this story.I really hope Henry is somewhat serious about Val...don't want to see Val getting hurt.The are great together.

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed
Date: July 09 2013
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

So cute...Henry is just so awesome.Love this update.

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed
Date: July 21 2013
Skin Deep by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
starstarstarstarstar
[Reviews - 417]
Summary:

Skin Deep photo SkinDeep_zps98a019b6.jpg

 

Benjamin Cunningham III decided to finally open the box that his adopted parents had given him which would reveal his past.  Little did he know that its contents would change his life forever.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Rape
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 82948
Read Count: 53952
Published: May 15 2013
Updated: September 05 2014

[Report This]

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 The Sour Taste of Revenge

Excellent chapter Brenda,five stars to you.I think you took the right decision by not killing Raymond because that would'nt have been justice.Raymond suffering due to his deformities,I think that is justice and he is now truly paying for his sins and wrongdoings.Revenge makes a person incapable to make sane decisions and that is what happened with Ophelia...She was so blind with revenge that she didn't see the consequences her decision was going to cause,and now she lost Bennie's trust and with a baby on it's way, it's going to be really complicated.It was also pretty funny to see Raymond scared of Ophelia...that will make him remember not to mess up with her.I also feel bad for Bennie becuz he's such a nice person and he's to go through this mess.He deserves Keisha....I just love her,the confidence and energy she has inspite of her disease, that's just awesome.......You are such an amazing writer,thanks for writing and sharing this wonderful story.



Author's Response:

I didn't want to kill him, I wanted to punish him.  LOL  Yes Raymond is afraid of Ophelia, because now she's the one in control and he doesn't know what she's going to do.  Bennie will have to reluctantly step in and keep an eye on her for sure.  More is coming!

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed
Date: June 03 2013
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 A Method to the Madness II

It's good to see Raymond finally getting a taste of his own medicine.I am slightly scared of Ophelia.......I mean I understand she wants to manipulate and control Raymond's life like he did her's but she's acting ape s**t crazy....She should really get help...She was sneakin to his room when she was a kid and that is really not normal.I hope Bennie understands her mental state and helps Ophelia before it's too late.I think Ophelia should know about her mother's deeds because like every coin has two faces,Ophelia knows only one side of the story and she should know that Margie is equally responsible for her separation from Bennie as much is Raymond.....She really failed to be a good mother.Reallly glad Bennie took a step forward in his relationship with Keisha,they deserve happiness together.



Author's Response:

Ophelia doesn't think she needs any help.  She's not crazy.  (so she thinks)  She's just paying Raymond back.  Will it ever end?  We'll see soon enough.  More is coming!

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed
Date: June 04 2013
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Reviving Relationships

I really feel bad for Bennie.....He seems so lost.After all the things he went through the year,I kind of understand his hesitancy to talk about his emotional problems.But he should really get help because it's affecting the relationships with his family and friends big time.He should be there for Justice....she needs him.Although I'm little mad at Bennie for dumping Keisha...They should be together.Hope Bennie gets her back and I hope Keisha makes him beg.Kevin and Alicia are super cute.LOL I just love them.

Great chptr as always Brenda.

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed
Date: July 12 2013
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Out in the Open

God!Margie is so damn greedy and selfish.How could she do this to her own daughter?I think she deserves life in prison.Raymond is so shameless.I mean come on Raymond for once in your life see the damn truth,how could you not regret sleeping with an eleven year old.Raymond seriously disgusts me.

LOL,Alicia is so funny.I laughed so hard when Alicia mentioned about his thick body and package.Kevin was completely flabbergasted.....Alicia,keep going girl,don't stop until you get your package.

I am so hooked to this story.You are just amazing Brenda.



Author's Response:

Thanks.  More is coming!

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed
Date: June 10 2013
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 A Baby Named Justice

OMG.....I am soooo shocked.I was not expecting Ophelia to die,didn't see it coming at all.Though I guess Raymond deserves this grief......There was definitely no happy ending for Ophelia and Raymond.Even though Raymond is depressed,I think Raymond should step up and take Justice's responsibility cuz he's already missed being a father to Bennie.Great chapter as always.



Author's Response:

Raymond needs to get his act together for sure.  More is coming!

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed
Date: June 13 2013
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Playing With Fire

Wow! What an amazing update!                                                                              Ophelia clearly loves Raymond but her revenge against him is dominating her love for him. He dosen't deserve her love cuz he literally ordered her to marry him.He's still a bastard. She should have listened to Benjamin and should have quit her plan for revenge. It's going to be really hard for Ophelia to handle things now.



Author's Response:

Oh you are so right.  Ophelia got what she wanted, but with a price. Raymond ordered her to marry him because he knew that he was in deeper emotionally than she was and he wanted to tie her to him.  He didn't force her to say, "I do" even with the Justice of the peace coming to the house.  She did that of her own free will because deep down thats what she wanted in the first place!

Since this story is from the male POV, I can't write what is in Ophelia's head, but you all get the picture.  She knows that she shouldn't love Raymond, so she says she doesn't but she does. She always has.  Yes eleven is way too young and he took advantage of her.  I don't think she has Stockholm Syndrome because he NEVER held her against her will, but she never had a father in her life, he paid her attention at a vulnerable age, and he took advantage.  He awakened her sexually and her enjoying it made it all the more confusing and strengthened the ties between them.

When she had Bennie and her baby looked just like his daddy, she felt that she at least had something, some token of him forever until Raymond snatched him from her. Her mother wanted to get rid of the baby for the very same reason that Ophelia wanted to keep him.  Bennie reminded Margie of her failure to protect her daughter. 

If Raymond had never shown up at her door, things would be different, but he did and he knew and she knew that they still wanted what they wanted even after 23 years.

Now they both have to deal with the consequences of their decisions. 

Thanks for the review.

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed
Date: May 30 2013
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Pain and Healing

Very emotional update..I'm glad that Raymond finally came to terms with his responsibilities towards Justice.I feel so bad for Bennie.He went through so much....Raymond did the first right thing in his entire life by apologising to Bennie and taking a step in the right direction....I hope Bennie forgives Raymond,even though he dosen't deserve it cuz life is too short to hold grudges and like Raymond said he should talk about his problems,harbouring them inside him is just going to harm him.The kind of feelings Ophelia had for Raymond when she was a kid, still sickens me.About Kara,I don't know what type of friend encourage such kind of behaviour....I hope more will be revealed about her in nxt update.Fantastic update.Waiting for more.



Author's Response:

Kara met Ophelia after she was pregnant.  She was only a child herself.  What was there to encourage?  The deed had already been done and Ophelia needed a friend.  More about Kara is coming.  Bennie does need help and hopefully he will get it.  thanks for the review.

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed
Date: July 09 2013
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Getting It Together

I am glad that Bennie finally decided to seek help and talk about his feelings.Although he should really some spend time with Justice....She's really cute. Raymond is doing a good job of being a father.He's trying really hard to be a good person.....I adore Alicia and Kevin so much.....LOVE their conversations. Shay,OMG she was hilarious. Emancipation Proclamation,seriously?God that was sooo crazy,I laughed so hard that my stomach started hurting.I don't even remember when was the last time I laughed so hard,so thanks for that......I wasn't expecting Bobbie to make an appearance...She's a crazy b**ch.Excellent chapter:)

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed
Date: July 18 2013
Retired
Sasha: The Wallflower by sha2011
Rated: 17 and older
starstarstarstarstar
[Reviews - 1032]
Summary:

   

 

A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196744
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015

[Report This]

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

First of all thanks for updating because I've truly missed this story....Like this new Sasha. I think Dominic has feelings for Sasha because in past he had always defended her and tried to reason with Dimitri. So glad to see that Nadia is finally undergoing therapy and accepting her mistakes.....About Carter,I don't want Sasha to be with him cuz I am sucker for happy endings and want to see Sasha and Dimitri together though Dimitri has lot of damage control to do..Good update.

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed
Date: January 17 2014
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Really good chapter.It's really difficult to figure out Dmitri.....He obviously has slight attraction towards Sasha.If things progress between Sasha and Dmitri,Taegan's going to be a big problem....Looking forward to nxt chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! I will include Dmitri's POV in future chapters to clear up any confusions and so there is a better understanding of where he is coming from. 

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed
Date: June 02 2013
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Like this chapter.I really feel bad for Sasha....those girls are so vain.Right now I am really not liking Dmitri for the way he dismissed Sasha for her looks.Looking forward for nxt chapter,



Author's Response:

I hope you grow to like him as the story unfolds! :-)

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed
Date: May 31 2013
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

WOW! Finally they take the nxt step in their relationship and that was so hot.Nadia is going to be a BIG trouble for Sasha and I hope that she's prepared for her and stands her ground for whatever Nadia throws at her.Looking forward to the nxt update.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! I should be updating soon.

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed
Date: July 05 2013
Medication by SPimpernel
Rated: Mature Content
starstarstarstarstar
[Reviews - 32]
Summary:

medication title pic

Troubled FBI Special Agent Michael Wolfe knows his fair share of loss and pain.  As a criminal profiler within the Behavioural Analyst Unit, he has seen many horrors. But none more haunting than witnessing the death of his wife. Consumed with grief and guilt Michael drowns himself in work.  His partner Special Agent Patrick Kepler suggests a very unconventional form of therapy.  Will he take it?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Psychological
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 3656
Read Count: 12917
Published: June 06 2013
Updated: October 14 2015

[Report This]

Title: Chapter 2: Xanax

Really enjoyed the story so far.Looking forward to nxt update.

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed
Date: June 06 2013
Retired
Bloody Wrists and Broken Hearts by shyangel
Rated: 17 and older
starstarstarstarstar
[Reviews - 64]
Summary:

 

10 years went by in the blink of an eye. Now eveyone was gathered in a tiny town for there highschool reunion. Sparks will fly as old 'friends' meet again.

Then enters two guys who have come with the intention of wooing the one girl they shouldnt have let go of in the first place. The only problem is there after the same girl.

On this unlevel playing field where hurt, love and jealousy run wild everyone is playing for keeps



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 15228
Read Count: 10427
Published: June 22 2013
Updated: November 16 2013

[Report This]

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Reunion

Love the start.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed
Date: June 22 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.