Penname: Lisastpaul [Contact]

Real name: Lisa

Member Since: February 02 2013

Membership status: Member

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[Reviews - 112]
Summary:

Duke and Duchess of York have produced three male heirs and their beloved Princess Diana Marie Claire. Diana isn't a normal child and has trouble living in the spotlight hiding a crucial secret... How will the love of her life react when he unfolds the secret note inside her heart.

 

"Love me; That's all I ask of you"

 

story theme song: All I ask of you- Phantom of the Opera



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Family, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: Royally Yours
Chapters: 28
Completed:Yes
Word count: 38043
Read Count: 32908
Published: November 23 2011
Updated: October 07 2013


Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28- Funeral

I am in the middle of Popeyes getting lunch and getting teary eyed. We all knew she was gonna die. But hoping a miracle would happen. Great story. 



Author's Response:

awe thank you! I hope I didn't ruin your lunch!

Reviewer: Lisastpaul Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 07 2013

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[Reviews - 332]
Summary:

When recent college grad, Lily Taylor became the personal paralegal to the notorious lawyer of the stars, Aiden Hawkins, she never knew that she would have her hands tied with him...literally.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 66387
Read Count: 66266
Published: October 03 2012
Updated: July 30 2013


Title: Chapter 10: Right As Rain

lol "You should get her a puppy, that might help." DEAD

Reviewer: Lisastpaul Signed
Date: June 27 2013

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[Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Bleeding Heart


She could feel the change, but she never imagined their relationship would end like this.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Original Characters, Rape
Series: How Does Her Garden Grow?
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3879
Read Count: 1406
Published: May 19 2013
Updated: May 19 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Bleeding Heart

Not saying she should have killed him. But I understand. Once she heard the word "Years" and he was going away with "her". I would have snapped too.



Author's Response:

Thanks. I honestly don't know how I'd react... I mean, rape alone makes me want to get a bat and fly someone's head. And at the same time, she loves this guy, he was supposed to be her protector and he just slowly turned into a rotten dude...
I just don't know. I'm gonna stop talking now lol
Thanks again for the input!

Reviewer: Lisastpaul Signed
Date: May 19 2013

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Paris finds herself on a deserted highway out of gas.  Little did she know that her life would be forever changed after that.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Lonely Highways, Love In Hard Times
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 558
Read Count: 82564
Published: July 17 2013
Updated: August 27 2013


Title: Chance Encounter

I love Billy.

 

Reviewer: Lisastpaul Signed
Date: July 29 2013

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[Reviews - 109]
Summary:

Shanna's car craps out on her in the middle of now where.  In all honesty her poor planning is what has got her into this predicament but the rude yet goregeous guy that  is helping her out of has something about him that she just can't shake.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 14100
Read Count: 14243
Published: July 22 2013
Updated: January 05 2014


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

It's a good story. Looks like Candy needs to talk to her parents. The only thing I suggest is try to get a beta reader. The grammar errors made it a little hard to follow. Who was talking, when was they done talking things like that. Keep it up can't wait for the date. 



Author's Response:

THANKS I HAVE ONE BUT I GET SO EXCITED WHEN MY BRAIN ACTUALLY COOPERATES I UPLOADINA HASTE. YOU MUST BE NEW READER BECAUSE I HAVE INFORMED THE MASSES THAT ME AND GRAMMAR BROKE UP AND IT WAS UGLY. LOL. I KID THANKS FOR READING.

Reviewer: Lisastpaul Signed
Date: January 05 2014

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Summary:

In the wake of an ugly divorce, Natalia executes a scheme meant to move her beyond the hurt inflicted by her ex-husband, Richard.  The plan is to ease her suffering by increasing his, and her weapon, a younger man unwittingly drawn into the illicit plot. 

In the quest for revenge, will Natalia realize her goal of bringing Richard to his knees?  Or will vengeance and her weapon of choice become her undoing?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: December's Wrap-up!
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 120
Read Count: 91987
Published: December 13 2013
Updated: May 02 2015


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - The Reaping

My heart is just whew. Thank goodness I'm not on my period or I would be a ugly crying mess. Please let them get thur this as friends and let them build on something. 



Author's Response:

Lol @ the ugly cry.  I promise to eventually get them both to a decent place emotionally, but I can't say they'll be there together.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: Lisastpaul Signed
Date: July 30 2014

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[Reviews - 192]
Summary:

Welcome to the city of Baltimore, Maryland and into the life of Elise Roberts. Elise lives the life of a pampered princess. Designer clothes, expensive cars and fancy parties are the center of her world. She is a woman who has everything she ever wanted until she meets Lukas Weiss. Faced for the first time in her life with rejection, Elise hatches a plan designed to heal her wounded pride. A game of seduction and the ultimate rejection. Funny thing, though, about the game of love....it is always unpredictable.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Journey
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 55134
Read Count: 40858
Published: January 08 2014
Updated: October 16 2016


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Ohh this is gonna be good. 

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Date: January 19 2014

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Summary:

 Camille Jackson was rejected since birth over her dark skin complexion. She has grown a tough skin and doesn’t get attached to anyone because of how some people have viewed her without even getting to know her. However Camille opens her heart to a baby in need and for the first six months Camille has grown to love the baby as if she were her own. That is until the baby's biological father comes into the picture.

Hiram Whitfield Jr was brought up in one of the most well known Ku Klux Klan families in the south and as the only son he feels the pressure to carry on his family's tradition. After finishing his prison sentence all Hiram wants to do is change his life for the better and be a good father to his child. If that means being disowned by his bigoted family then so be it. Ironically enough Hiram would have never thought that Camille would be the one to be his rock and strength to do so.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 51
Completed:Yes
Word count: 107887
Read Count: 215304
Published: October 09 2014
Updated: October 25 2015


Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 40

I wish her family could see her now. Assholes. So happy they are getting thier happy ending. 

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Date: August 20 2015

Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 41

God don't like ugly.

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Date: August 22 2015

Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 43

I want Ethan to go to Savvys bar mitzvah. As for Camille. I want her to listen to her heart. Let go and let God. It would be nice if one of the siblings have a come to Jesus moment. But with people like these that will never happen. It's sad that if Carmilles heart leads her help this woman. The family will go back to ignoring her after its done. 

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Date: September 25 2015

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SEQUEL to Sasha: the Wallflower. Adaline Lang is an up and coming photographer with more than her own set of problems. During her cousin's wedding she comes face-to-face with the man that she had fallen in love with as a child. Only to find out he was in love with someone else. What will she do to finally be heard and convince him that the perfect women he has been looking for is standing right in front of him?

Dominic Vikhrov is caught between a rock and a hard place. The woman he has fawned after for so many years has finally returned to the United States. But he isn't the only one who is fighting for her heart. Never one to lose, Dominic has his eye on the prize no matter the cost. But will his tunnel vision blind him to something even greater?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 37246
Read Count: 40805
Published: October 24 2014
Updated: November 20 2015


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Am I the only one wishing Sasha or Teegan overheard her? Of I am ok. Going back to my corner. Mumbling "it would have been really cool if Sasha overheard and told both Dom and Audrey about themselves." 

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Date: July 03 2015

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Summary:

Working as a Home Health Aide and struggling to make ends meet. All Aries Washington wanted to do was prove the child she had three years ago, was in fact the son of Cameron Marino. She didn't have any delusions about them putting their differences aside and falling madly in love. Why would she? Cameron was engaged to her ex best friend Ambrosia, A.K.A Ms. Perfect. So imagine her surprise when he not only demands she moves in with him, but marry him too.

Aries had no idea that once she gave birth to her own little Marino, that, that meant she automatically belonged to the whole Marino family. With a group of people who take their strong family ties seriously, she's about to find out that once your in, there's no out. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Marino Family
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 19092
Read Count: 53177
Published: May 14 2015
Updated: June 01 2015


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Hahaha ha hahaha ha HA. As Chris Rock says. "You should never hit a person. That wrong. But you should be able to shake the shit out of them." So someone shake the shit out of Posion. Cuz that trick is NOT Ambrosia. 

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Date: May 16 2015

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Damn damn damn. So who knows which babies was Cams? If any at all. Damn damn damn that's all I got. 

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Date: May 17 2015

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7

Damn, Cam where's the love? lol. Ohh shit bout to go down in NYC. I'm waiting for Cams excuse on why he didn't stop Posion in college from bullying Aries. 

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Date: May 19 2015

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Summary:

While returning home to Chicago from a business trip Anika Wallace and Hunter Sterling IV find themselves the only surviors of a plane crash on a South Pacific island. There's no telling when they'll make it back home or if they ever will make it back home for that matter. One thing is for sure they're going to have to learn how to get along their survival is depending on it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 36
Completed:No
Word count: 54201
Read Count: 121614
Published: August 12 2015
Updated: March 02 2017


Title: Chapter 24: BACK AT HOME 4

Oh shit oh shit oh shit

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Date: January 30 2016

Title: Chapter 25: BACK AT HOME 5

Oh shit. Corrine bout to have a moment. Just have so she's stealing money from

the company and gave Sterling divorce her. 

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Date: February 07 2016

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COMPLETED! (CHAPTER 30 & 31 UPDATED ON 4/20)

 

Thirty-seven-year-old Sugar Wallace used her bitter divorce as a sweet inspiration to pursue her lifelong dream of opening a trendy dessert and wine restaurant called Sugar Mama. Her friends and family want her to dive back into the dating game, but Sugar refuses to open her heart to another. Not when the man she gave her heart to for eighteen years of marriage crushed it after cheating on her with a young Instagram model. She's perfectly content with a busy life of running a successful business. Then one night, she witnesses a forty-six-year-old beaten man get pushed from a car and everything changes.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 119166
Read Count: 280766
Published: July 18 2017
Updated: April 20 2019


Title: Chapter 14: Sweet Satisfaction

I am in LOVE with Chefd84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039; This whole chapter gave me life. I think my fave part is when Victora came down the hall with the water and turn right back around. It’s so small but so great. 



Author's Response:

Victoria knew Lance deserved to get his ass whooped, LOL. I am glad ya'll are enjoying Chef as much as I enjoy writing him. Also, YOUR REVIEW IS THE 300TH REVIEW FOR SUGAR MAMA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love everyone's reviews, the feedback, and the discussions about the characters because it makes me a better writer. Thank you for your support.

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Date: December 16 2017

Title: Chapter 8: Yummy Cake

Anyone else hear Sam Elliot's voice as Chef. Good Lord that man!!!!! 



Author's Response:

OH! Sam Elliot has a nice deep voice! He's in one of my favorite movies of all time. 

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Date: August 03 2017

Title: Chapter 9: Sweet Talk

Oh Lordy, Chef sending dick pics like a youngster. Whew that man that man. I just... if I wasn't married, I would try to find me a Chef. 

 

I vote for for a sisterly talk. lol lol. 



Author's Response:

LMAO, Chef is the kind of person that doesn't hold back at all, especially when it comes to Sugar. He keeps saying he wants Sugar to see ALL of him (emotional, physical, psychological) and he means it. Naughty pics just come with the territory. 

 

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Date: August 07 2017

Title: Chapter 1: Bittersweet

So how old is Chef? I'm piture him 45-50.



Author's Response:

At this point of the story, Chef is 46. 

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Date: August 07 2017

Title: Chapter 10: Hot Affair

Lol lol lol lol lol Karma,karma,karma. Ok a few things. Lance better call DNA. 😝😝😝When is Mariah gonna learn Shug ain't the one. 👊🏾👊🏾👊🏾And last one. Please use condoms. Because the type of sex Chef and Shug are about to have. It almost always produces a baby. I'm just saying. d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;🤰🏽🤰🏽🤰🏽



Author's Response:

LMAO, you are so right about dem condoms, but they just might forget... ;)

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Date: August 13 2017

Title: Chapter 1: Bittersweet

I hope you had a good first day. Let that coworker do her. Just document everything and focus on the kids. 



Author's Response:

Our first week was pretty good! :D And my co-worker has settled down a lot, but I try to keep my distance from her unless absolutely necessary. 

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Date: August 15 2017

Title: Chapter 1: Bittersweet

I hope you had a good first day. Let that coworker do her. Just document everything and focus on the kids. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

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Date: August 15 2017

Title: Chapter 22: Bittersweet Past

I can’t wait. I need to know what happen with Uncle Rusty😳😳😳



Author's Response:

It's about to unravel. Watch and see. 

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Date: June 28 2018

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Summary:

Daphne Gregory is on the run. She's looking for a place to lay low until things calm down back home. When she lands in Oklahoma, the last thing she expects to find is a friend in resident playboy Landon Phelps.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Outlander
Chapters: 27
Completed:Yes
Word count: 53311
Read Count: 22077
Published: November 15 2017
Updated: October 03 2019


Title: Chapter 17: July 2011: Brawling

So they was both wildin out. Love them as a couple. 

Reviewer: Lisastpaul Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 21 2018

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.