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Lana and Lucas have an arrangement. Something that works for the both of them. At least Lana thought it did.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 8868
Read Count: 11492
Published: March 12 2013
Updated: April 13 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Rituals

I love this, can't wait to see how their relationship plays out. 

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Date: March 12 2013

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She was his best kept secret, his most treasured possession, an exotic African-American beauty that won his heart from the very beginning. But keeping what he did for a living a secret from her and trying to keep her a secret from his enemies was proving to be the hardest job he'd ever had as an assassin. 

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 63805
Read Count: 103490
Published: April 02 2013
Updated: June 12 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Running Away

This is very good, I love it so far.

Reviewer: BreBre Signed
Date: April 03 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 48]
Summary:

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A chance meeting on a bus ride headed for closure. 

Much thanks to my amazing beta Curiously Amused



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 7159
Read Count: 8548
Published: April 30 2013
Updated: May 17 2013


Title: Chapter 1: 8 Hours (Washington, DC)

 I'm starting to love these characters already. There's something about growing up and wanting all the pieces to the puzzle to your life in hopes of finding out who you truly are, I think it is really interesting. 

Really great start, can't wait to read more.

 

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Date: April 30 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 77]
Summary:

For Jamie Watson, raising Alex was supposed to be a short time gig, a means to an end before starting her new life. But with it brings a type of love she never could have imagined with Alex's father Mitch. While caring for him brings them together, will doing what's best for him tear them apart? 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 20139
Read Count: 35601
Published: May 20 2013
Updated: October 25 2013


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I love how Jamie and Alex have this experience in common, she could help him so much by being in his life. I can't wait to see what her relationship with Mitch grows into and how it will affect Alex once he is old enough to understand.

Great and interesting story. Add more soon, can't wait to read more!

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Date: May 20 2013

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Good chapter. Add more soon, can't wait to see what happens.

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Date: May 29 2013

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow, really great update, Jamie and Mitch should just commit to a relationship because they are so good together, it would be great for Alex too.

Great chapter, add more soon!

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Date: June 07 2013

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Summary:

What's a girl to do when there are two after you? 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Threesome+
Challenges: Give Me a Mountain Man Anyday!
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 6583
Read Count: 43478
Published: September 02 2013
Updated: July 13 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I love the younger brother and I really want to find out why she was taken. More please! :)

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Date: September 02 2013

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Formally Ashes, Ashes

Red flashing lights…

Heavy footsteps echoed through the deserted hallway.

Fire alarms blared...

Breaths lodged in throats as the search for survival worsened.

Pungent smell of death overwhelmed as the Z’s closed in...

Survival was futile now, running was the only escape; in this new apocalyptic post war world, living was no longer guaranteed.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Horror
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content
Challenges: Chamber Grindhouse Challenge 6
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:Yes
Word count: 65447
Read Count: 39537
Published: October 12 2013
Updated: June 05 2014


Title: Chapter 9: Lady in White

Wow, this story is really awesome! One of the first stories on here that has kept me on the edge of my seat from the first chapter to the most recent. I really love the characters, the action and the suspense. What are they going to do to Celeste? and where is Michael? And I wonder if Jasper actually lived or if that was just a way for them to get Celeste to go willingly? Is the cove good or evil??? I can't wait for the next update! 

also, yes, I agree. the title kind of made me over look this story at first, I don't really know why I over looked it, you are a great writer and the title makes sense now after I've read it and I'm glad I did :)

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Date: November 25 2013

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[Reviews - 40]
Summary:

Illyana is a young wolf during an age of lone wolves and fewer females...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 15180
Read Count: 10703
Published: March 19 2014
Updated: January 20 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Baden is trying to be more understanding and showing concern for Illyana, but it makes sense if she's still grieving, she's been through so much. 

Cool story, hope you update soon :)

 

Reviewer: BreBre Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 20 2014

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Summary:

After living in the cold, dinky town of Fenway, Michigan for nearly two decades, seventeen year old Claudia Strauss is more than ready for something new. But when she finds herself living in a small Montana town that borders an Indian reservation, she will struggle to to find acceptance in an unfamiliar world. As the only black teenager on the Blackfoot reservation, Claudia must not only come to terms with cultural conflicts, but also deal with the unpleasant realities of transitioning to adulthood.


Along the way, she finds herself drawn to Tristan Whitefeather, the loner artist who is "different" in a way that both scares and intrigues her. She also feels the pull towards Lucas Good Blanket, who is a bad boy with a soft heart that has just as much as skill with the opposite sex as he does with his hand drum.

Through the trials of her teenage years to the problems of young adulthood, Claudia will find her life forever changed by the people on the rez. And in the process, learn more about herself than she ever could have imagined.


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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 23
Completed:No
Word count: 164750
Read Count: 72747
Published: March 21 2014
Updated: April 17 2017


Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

This is my favorite chapter so far!!😊 awesome update!!!

the description of the woods and camper really gave me a better understanding of how it feels to be in Tristan's world.

Reading the cutting scene, I hoped that he would eventually find another way to get rid of the negativity he absorbs, but I was so happy that Ahanu stopped him. I was surprised that it was his uncle's suicide that was driving him to cut, I thought that he was going to say it was the energy he talked about before, but it makes sense that it was something more personal because he seems strong enough to deal with the negative energy at school.

LOVED The New Years Eve party scene, that was my favorite! Tristan and Claudia are getting so comfortable with each other.

The part where he thanked her for accepting him was so beautiful. A true relationship is being built between them. It's great how Claudia is so open minded Tristan really does need someone like her there for him so he doesn't have to keep thing bottled up and handle everything by himself.

Please, add more soon! :)

 



Author's Response:

Cool!! So glad to hear that It's your fave!

I am also happy to hear you got more of an idea of what it is like to live in his world. That's exactly what I was hoping to accomplish with this chapter, so it's great to hear that I succeeded at doing that.

Glad you enjoyed the New year's scene. :) I had been wanting to write a scene which focused on Tristan and Claudia for some time. I just felt like it was the right time to bring them closer together as friends, while also showing that Claudia is beginning to develop some feelings for him. It just seemed like the natural thing to do.

Thank you for the feedback, BreBre. I enjoyed reading it. :)

Reviewer: BreBre Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 30 2014

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great chapter!

I don't like Lucas, I think he is lying..

The part about Tristan was so interesting, how he was born with a caul, can't wait to see his other supernatural abilities, he is amazing, and I missed him in this chapter 😢 lol Please, Add more soon :)

Reviewer: BreBre Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 14 2014

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great update! This is getting even more interesting.

Tristan is so intriguing. I want to know more about this ability he has. I definitely think Tristan and Claudia belong together lol

Loving this story so far, add more soon!😊

 

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Date: April 02 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Tristan is kind of mysterious, so I automatically love him lol, Claudia seems mature enough to ignore the high school drama by how she brushed off Misty's comments. Ignoring people like her is usually the best bet.. Speaking of Misty, she was wrong, because 90's fashion trends have made a comeback recently, so..lol Lucas is cute, but I think he is trouble..

I love this, the setting and coming-of-age theme, hope you add more soon!😊

Reviewer: BreBre Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 22 2014

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow that was a tough first day lol, but at least she made a friend :)

Again, Lucas is trouble. Claudia should stay away from Lucas before she becomes another Misty..

Love Tristan. He is so mysterious and I love how he is kind of a loner or it seems he is  for now. It was so sweet that he wanted to learn ASL to get Kimi's attention, but I think Tristan and Claudia would be cuter together lol

 

Add more soon, please!😊

Reviewer: BreBre Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 25 2014

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow, so much has happened, I love how quickly you update lol😁

Tristan's parts of the story are amazing. I'm so happy he has a guide looking out for him now.

I love how realistic this story is. Of course I love Tristan and want to see him together with Claudia, but their still young, these experiences are necessary for growth sometimes..  

I still do not like Lucas.

Kimi is cool, she took the blame from Claudia and apologized and like Claudia said it's ok to not follow the rules sometimes. About judgment, you can't follow your instincts and grow when you're so worried about what other people will think.

Also, Big John and Mona are too cute😄

Great updates! add more soon, please😊



Author's Response:

Thanks, BreBre. I appreciate you taking the time to leave feedback. And thank you for supporting this story and being a faithful reader!!

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Date: May 13 2014

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow.. Poor Lucas😔.. I hope he gets his drum back..

their argument just goes to show how hypocritical he is. Lucas is so immature and dramatic smh, Claudia is better off not getting involved with him. Even though he is upset, I can see him still trying to get with her..

That salmon..😑

I miss Tristan so much. I'm looking forward to seeing him in the next chapter, hopefully!😑

Amazing update, I can't wait for the party scenes. Update soon, please😊



Author's Response:

You're like one of only two people who felt bad for Lucas losing his drum. LOL. Not saying that everyone should have or anything, I just find it intersting that only a few did. :D

Yeah, Lucas can be a bit a dramatic! He just doesn't know how to control his emotions, so things get carried away real quick whenever he gets mad. Lol.

Aww...Tristan will be in the next chapter. I promise!! :)

Thanks the comment, BreBre!



Author's Response:

You're like one of only two people who felt bad for Lucas losing his drum. LOL. Not saying that everyone should have or anything, I just find it intersting that only a few did. :D

Yeah, Lucas can be a bit a dramatic! He just doesn't know how to control his emotions, so things get carried away real quick whenever he gets mad. Lol.

Aww...Tristan will be in the next chapter. I promise!! :)

Thanks the comment, BreBre!

Reviewer: BreBre Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 15 2014

Title: Chapter 12: This is not a chapter. Just want you guys to read this.

Wow, two great new chapters!! Thank you Virgofemme!😊 

Yes!! Tristan is back😁 I missed him so much. I feel bad that he feels so strongly for Kimi and she doesn't really like him back.. If he can sense Claudia's and Lucas' energies don't mix shouldn't he see it for him and Kimi? maybe he's just ignoring it because he likes her that much.. Tristan was right this is the ONLY thing he and Lucas have in common.. I can't wait for Claudia and Tristan to get closer to each other. I think they can connect to each other better than Kimi and Tristan.

Lucas is so much drama *sigh* smh.. Claudia needs to stay away from him, I feel like Lucas isn't really over the Sean thing and will do something..

re: the anonymous review on literotica

First of all, I LOVE this story.

Virgofemme, I disagree completely with the anon reviewer. In my opinion Claudia is a great heroine in a coming of age story. She isn't perfect and she doesn't make the best decisions sometimes, but that's what growing up and being a teenager is all about. 

There needs to be a few lessons learned and you can't do that with a straight to happily ever after story.. I think authors of stories with romance get a lot of pressure to keep the heroine on a straight path to the hero who is her one true love ... and some readers  get upset if she is intimate with another character.

The anon reviewer probably wants this to be a Tristan and Claudia or Lucas and Claudia love story, but from the beginning I could tell that wasn't the type of story you wanted to write, am I right? 

Also, sexism, misogyny and hypocrisy play a big part as well because if the hero of the story does something with another girl it gets looked over, as long as he's showing most interest in the heroine some readers can still enjoy the story. But, if the heroine does the the same, they get to judgmental to connect to the story because of double standards..

Some readers can't take a story seriously if the heroine isn't pure and perfect the whole time, but no ones perfect and I'm getting tired of reading the same stories because authors don't want to offend and it holds them back from writing what they want.. I really appreciate your story for being realistic and you're really talented

Don't listen to that anon I'm enjoying it and I will continue to read and review so please continue !!😊

 



Author's Response:

The thing with Tristan is, I feel as if we only see what we want to see. Like red flags may be there, but often we choose to ignore them. With Tristan, he fully understands that Kimi and him don't truly meld, but he just doesn't care. I mean, he's just so into her that he still wants it anyways, even though he can see that it may be leading to heartbreak.

You make a good point with readers not liking if the heroine interacts with other people, but I feel like in real life, we never walk a straight line, but rather make mistakes and sometimes do stupid things in the midst of trying to figure out who we are and just what it is that we want in life. So, I hope that gives you and other people a better idea of what Claudia is all about.

That's right. I actually neevr intended for this to be a romance story, but more a coming of age tale that chronicles the craziness of teenage life, and what happens along that pathway which leads from the teenage years into adulthood. So, you are absolutely right about that.

Yeah, I just don't like the whole double standard thing, and I don't understand why heroes can sow their wild oats, but women can't? Lol. that's not to say I want to make my characters go wild and have sex with anyone and everyone, but I felt like there should be some sort of experimentation along they way by Claudia. Especially seeing as she has the type of friend who is like the exact opposite of who she is. So I just thought that some of Kimi would eventually rub off on her (NOT change her) and that she would fall into a situation that she wouldn't necessarily have done if she were by herself.

Well it's nice to hear that you find this story realistic. That tells me that I am at least doing something right. Lol.

I appreciate you taking the time to leave a comment. Thanks a bunch, BreBre.

Reviewer: BreBre Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 20 2014

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Awww, Tristan and Claudia are so sweet! I can't wait until they actually get together, they will make an amazing couple.😄

Lucas' attitude is making me kind of sad😔, but I know he will get over it after Claudia leaves.. Lucas and Claudia's relationship doesn't seem that deep IMO... 

As always, Great chapter😊please, add more soon!



Author's Response:

They are indeed very sweet together. I just love writing scenes where they interact. :)

Even though I know what lays ahead in Lucas's future, even I can't help feeling sad for him, myself!!

Thank you for the comment. And the new chapter will be posted by the week of 7/28-8/1. I do apologize for the long wait!!

Reviewer: BreBre Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 28 2014

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I'm so happy you updated! :)

This chapter brought tears to my eyes😢 I'm so happy Lucas survived, it's like everything that happened in the whole school year including his near death experience helped him mature and for the first time I can really appreciate Lucas. I hope we get to see more of him, I don't want him to be left behind :(

It was great that Claudia got closure with the Misty feud.

Thank you for the great update! Please update again soon😊



Author's Response:

Well hey, glad I could make you happy, BreBre! :)

Aww, really? :P Well knowing that you now accepreciate Lucas in the story makes me feel good. :) Oh yes, there will definitely be more of Lucas to come, as I have some pretty big plans for him!!

And regarding Claudia and Misty, it just seemed right for that to happen, as the story is nearly finished, so I felt that them having some closure was important. Also, I did realize that Misty hadn't been mentioned or shown up in a chapter since like forever, so I wanted to let the readers know that she did still exist, that way it wouldn't just be like... Errr...okay. And what happened to Misty??? Lol.

Thanks for the comment and your continued support!!

Reviewer: BreBre Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 25 2014

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

This story is one of my favs, I love it!😃 Thank You Virgofemme for these awesome characters, it was great reading as they grew and evolved and I can't believe I now love Lucas😳😊(I'm still Team Tristan though lol). I can't wait for the sequel to see what lies ahead!



Author's Response:

Oh, yay. So glad to hear that. :) You are so very welcome, and I would like to thank YOU for reading, reviewing, and supporting this story. And It's really cool to hear that I made you like Lucas. That's incredible to hear, because I must admit that I was hoping to do just that, at least for a few of the readers. Not that I would want anyone to change teams when they were already feelng a particular character, but I know that some Loathed Lucas at the beginning of the story, so by the end of Lost Girl, I was hoping to at least make people realize that he really wasn't so bad. Lol. And hey, nothing wrong with staying faithful on the T team. :)

I am currently writing the first chapter of the sequel, and aiming to post it up within the next week, or two!

Reviewer: BreBre Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 29 2014

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Summary:

He was a bad boy who was used to getting whatever he wanted.

She was the good girl who refused to bow down to his ways.

Together they clashed.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 9292
Read Count: 10663
Published: December 01 2014
Updated: March 16 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Detention

Love it, I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: BreBre Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01 2014

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Summary:

This story is a follow up to Lost Girl, so if you haven't read it yet, please do, as this is the sequl to that story. To those who have already read Lost Girl, yes, I know the title is unimaginative and sorta lame, but It's just a working title, so it won't be permament. :P

To all of my readers who have been following this series since the beginning of Lost Girl, I would like to welcome you back. And thank you for your continued interest in these characters and the storyline!!

I hope you enjoy the first chapter, and thank you so much in advance for reading and reviewing!!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Kink, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 42
Completed:No
Word count: 313802
Read Count: 51986
Published: December 22 2014
Updated: June 15 2020


Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Thankfully Chloe and Mona are well thanks to June. I was tearing up during the birth, it was so heartwarming how Big John and June supported Mona. I knew that once June got to Mona’s hospital room everything would be alright, she’s great and very knowledgeable. I liked the contrast of modern medicine and traditional.

Tristan is being so disrespectful. I love Tristan, but he should fall back. He has a daughter and I really don’t think Claudia is trying to be a stepmom. So, even if Lucas wasn’t in the picture, I don’t think Claudia would want to be with Tristan.

That last part with Tristan and Maggie was adorable. He is a great dad and I think that’s what he needs to continue to focus on right now. 



Author's Response:

Hey Brebre,

So glad to hear you enjoyed the chapter! Plus the traditional vs modern medicine, yes...June is way traditional and I am glad people seem to dig her character. :)

Yes, emotionally, Tristan is quite in his feelings! 

Thanks for seeing he is a great father. I enjoy writing scenes between him and Maggie, because there is unconditional love between the two of them. So i'm glad you liked that scene between them, too!! :)

Thanks for reading, reviewing, and sticking with this story!!!

Reviewer: BreBre Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12 2018

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Great update! heartbreaking😔, but it was good. I'm interested to see how Claudia handles going back to university. Hopefully, everything will work out and Lucas and Tristan can track that monster down and get some closure and justice for Claudia.

I'm officially strictly Team Lucas now lol. I used to be so Team Tristan😄 but now I love Lucas so much, I love reading chapters where he appears a lot.😊

Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapters!



Author's Response:

Wow, another Team Lucas convert. He's steadily gaining new fans! Lol. It's cool to hear you're enjoying the chapters centered around him.

Thanks for leaving a comment!!

Reviewer: BreBre Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07 2015

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

@jahchannah said everything I wanted to say lol, I agree, basically Tristan's priorities are all wrong and it wouldn't surprise me if he ended up with Shauna in the end.

Watching Tristan and Claudia drift apart is sad, but this is a coming of age story so I never expected them to stay together forever, they are only teenagers after all and no one expects to stay with their high school or college sweetheart forever. In life people change and then they aren't compatible anymore, and Tristan and Claudia have just gone through life changing experiences, so slowly but surely they will drift apart or break up.

I loved Lucas in his regalia at The pow wow!! 😍😍😍 his pride in his culture is so beautiful and his scenes are always so fun to read.😊 

Great chapters as always, thanks for updating and I can't wait to read more!😃

Reviewer: BreBre Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 11 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 @pmgayles Yeah, You are right, Tristan and Claudia have an otherworldly connection, but whose to say that connection is meant to be forever, maybe they were meant to meet each other and be together for a certain amount of time, for a reason or maybe a lesson in life and love, or whatever lol. Soul mates are meant to meet each other at certain points in their lives for a reason, and sometimes it's not meant to be a lifelong connection.a85;a039;

Also, maybe Lucas is the best choice for now, and maybe they've both changed enough to also form a connection of their own. They do seem kind of drawn to each other, but then again who wouldn't be drawn to Lucas😊lol.

And I know I'm Team Lucas now, so this might seem biased, but honestly Tristan is so intense and Lucas is so lighthearted and fun, so Maybe a relationship between Lucas and Claudia would serve a purpose and help her get through this difficult time. Who knows what's going to happen next, that's the best part about this story, you never know what could happen. Also, I want more Lucas, yes I'm biased..😂 

And, I agree with @theprincessbride10, because this is a coming of age story, it would be cool to see them try a real relationship.

Reviewer: BreBre Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 11 2015

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