Penname: Musicluva [Contact]

Real name: Monica

Member Since: March 09 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 63]
Summary:

Will she be able to accept his destiny? 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 21775
Read Count: 15061
Published: December 12 2013
Updated: January 21 2014


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

It seems like Eva needs a little somethin' some thin'. Why is she so uptight?!  I hope she gets her some soon. 😉

So far so good. Update soon!

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Date: December 17 2013

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

I wonder what Ji Soon is into?!

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Date: January 11 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Some things are better left unsaid.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Psychological
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 11637
Read Count: 10000
Published: December 13 2013
Updated: April 23 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Wow!  That was intense ... please update soon! 💗

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Date: January 05 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Can't wait for more!  I'm in love with 'Unguarded', so I'm interested to see what's in store for Ben.

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Date: December 15 2013

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Summary:

In the wake of an ugly divorce, Natalia executes a scheme meant to move her beyond the hurt inflicted by her ex-husband, Richard.  The plan is to ease her suffering by increasing his, and her weapon, a younger man unwittingly drawn into the illicit plot. 

In the quest for revenge, will Natalia realize her goal of bringing Richard to his knees?  Or will vengeance and her weapon of choice become her undoing?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: December's Wrap-up!
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 120
Read Count: 91987
Published: December 13 2013
Updated: May 02 2015


Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

Alright Ms. JJ!  We back online, and it's on like pop'con!  I need my fix, so where's that update?! 😍



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Date: March 27 2015

Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Losing Another Talerico

Wow!  You really brought it with this one JJ (1000 stars!!!).  This was drama to the fullest!  I feel bad for all of them, (Natalia, Ant, and Rich).  Was a bit frustrating to see Ant still coming to his mama's defense after she talked so bad about Nat, but I suppose that's his mama.  Richard is a straight-up coward.  Still trying to save face with all of his lies.  Definitely not a good look for a 'real' man.  I hope Natalia is ok healthwise given the emotional and physical stress she's been put through.  A bit surprised that Rich spilled the beans, but I supposed he just couldn't take Mercede and her pitiful self-righteous act while throwing Natalia under the bus.  Again, i just hope Natalia's knowledge of the secret doesn't place a wedge between her and Ant.  Was wondering when one of the family members was going to show their bigotry and take it "there"(Uncle Joe).  

Great update!



Author's Response:

Yeah, Ant had a soft spot for Mercede and showed her way more concern than she deserved.  He won't be making that mistake again. 

Nat's okay at the moment, more worried about Ant than anything. 

Poor Rich, Mercede said the wrong thing at the wrong time and tapped into decades of resentment.  It was the worst possibiliy way for Ant to find out the truth, but it's out now.  Hopefully all their relationships with survive the fallout. 

Thanks Musicluva!  So happy you enjoyed the update : )

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Date: March 30 2015

Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - No More Maybes

Thank God!  Keeping her and the babies in my prayers. Now, Anthony needs to find his father. I also think it's time for a little sexual healing ('carefule' sexual healing) for Ant and Talia. With all the pressures of life they've experienced, they're way long over due. 😉

Lovely update!



Author's Response:

Lol @ the 'careful' sexual healing.  The setting for the epilogue won't really allow for any of that, but rest assured, as soon as the doctor gave the go ahead, these two were back at it.  Thanks Musicluva!

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Date: April 13 2015

Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Four's a Tough Crowd

I think Natalie said all she needed to say.  Good for her! She doesn't owe her ex a damn thing!



Author's Response:

She certainly doesn't.  Thanks Musicluva!

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Date: February 21 2015

Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Losing Another Talerico

One thing I forgot to mention is about Rich, and how he's impacted by all of this. Even though he acts all hard assed on the outside, you can really tell he cares about his family. His statement to Natalia at the end has my heart going out to him as well. Seems as if he feels that his own relationship with Ant has been jeaprodized by all of this when he mentioned that he thinks Natlia and the baby will be the only ones considered family. I just hope that once Ant gets past the initial impact of this, he'll come to realize what's really important and who has had his back the whole time. 

I wonder how much of the meealee of the argument between Ant's and his family will Natalia be subjected to on her voice mail?   Whew! Can't wait for the next update! 



Author's Response:

You're right.  Rich acts tough, but he's been affected by his father's and Mercede's lies and betrayal more than I think even he realized.  Of all the things and people he cares about, none rank higher than Anthony, which is why he's devastated to have had a hand in hurting him.  He pretty much assumes he's ruined their relationship.  Hopefully, he's wrong. 

What Nat heard will be revealed next chapter.  Thanks for sharing your insight, Musicluva!

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Date: March 30 2015

Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - The Bridges We Burn

Dag, Richard just needs to take a hint ( more like several ) and give up!



Author's Response:

I think he finally got it.  Thanks Musicluva!



Author's Response:

I think he finally got it.  Thanks Musicluva!

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Date: April 10 2015

Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - The Cruelties of Fate

Hopefully Ant can find some consolation in the fact that his real dad did make an honestly hard attempt to be in his life. I truly hope that he is able to connect with him. 



Author's Response:

Knowing his father wanted and fought so hard for him may be bitter-sweet for Anthony.  More on that next chapter.  Thanks Musicluva!

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Date: April 04 2015

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - "No Thanks" Giving

I'm relieved that Natalie isn't planning on giving into Richard. I can't imagine her being able to put her trust, time, and energy into someone who treated her the way that he did. At least she isn't going to string him along.  Something that he dev didn't do for her. Maybe this can be the beginning of her trying to move on and start fresh. 



Author's Response:

Hopefully.  But you know Richard's not going to give up that easy.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Musicluva!

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Date: January 30 2015

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - While the Cat's Away...

Wow!  Wonder what happened to Rich?  And why is he at Natalia's doorbetep?  Hmmmmm ?!?!



Author's Response:

Hmmmm indeed.  Thanks Musicluva!

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Date: February 01 2015

Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Impatience is a Virtue

Good 'ol Rich!  Loved it! 😄



Author's Response:

Thanks Musicluva!

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Date: February 04 2015

Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - The One That Got Away

It's a bitch that Ant's mom and Sabrina are trying to run his life. I understand being concerned as a parent, but after he told them what he wants and he's happy multiple times, at some point you have to let go and let them live their life.

I really hope things work out favorably for Natalia and Ant this time around.  



Author's Response:

I agree with your approach to parenting adults.  We'll keep our fingers crossed for a bouncing baby something.  Thanks Musicluva!

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Date: February 23 2015

Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Can You Keep a Secret?

Man, talk about being caught between a rock and a hard place!  I sure hope Natalia doesn't stress herself out about this and risk her health and the pregnancy. This new development came out of left field for me, but she'd some light on why Ant's father (or rather the man he though was his father) has been such a complete ass. Great update!



Author's Response:

Poor Nat.  She's in for one.  Thanks Musicluva!

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Date: March 02 2015

Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Friends and Foes

Well damn.  When it rain it pours. I wonder what the hell happened?!



Author's Response:

Yes, it does.  Pop-Pop died of natural causes/long-term illness.  Thanks Musicluva!

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Date: March 03 2015

Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Flight Plan

I'm glad Natalia was there for Anthony in his time of need, (again, thanks to Rich).  Also glad she had a chance to meet the family, and that Ant has learned from his and his fathers  past mistakes.   I sure hope Richard doesn't use the fact that Natalia had previous knowledge about his paternity as a way of trying to drive a wedge between them. Please update soon!   I am so loving this story ... can't get enough!!

 

 

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Date: March 14 2015

Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

D@mn!  Richard is such a creep!  Richard made it seem like he and Natalia were just screwing. I hope Natalia clears the air to let them know it was more than that. So much drama!  I love it!

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Date: March 15 2015

Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - The Cruelties of Fate

Wow!  My heart goes out to Ant. Learning that his mom chose that bastard Richard over him was f'ed up!  Not only that, but the fact that his real father fought so hard to be a part of his life makes Merced just as bad, if not worse than Richard. I wonder if he'll try to meet his dad. I hope so.   I'm glad that Natalia was truthful about her knowledge of the situation, and that he can find it in himself to forgive Rich. I wonder if he will ever confront Richard?  If so, I'm sure it'll be as crazy as before.  Praying that the baby is ok.   Awesome update !



Author's Response:

Mercede really did herself and, more importantly, her son a disservice.  But she's too self-absorbed to really grasp that.  Thanks for commenting, Musicluva!  All your very valid questions and curiosities will be answered in the next couple chapters.  

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Date: April 04 2015

Title: Chapter 40: Epilogue

Absolutely beautiful!  This was amazing, and I  just loved it! 😃😂💖💖💖😭😭😍😍😄



Author's Response:

Thanks Musicluva!  So glad to hear you enjoyed the story, and thanks for reviewing and taking this journey with me.

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Date: May 02 2015

Rated: Members ONLY:Mature Content
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Summary:

As Joss and Eshan prepare to wed, will the relationship survive long enough to see "for better" when their families become their "for worse"?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:Yes
Word count: 45613
Read Count: 29760
Published: December 20 2013
Updated: July 09 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Loved it!  Pearl is the absolute BEST!!!! a86;



Author's Response:

Thanks Musicluva!

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Date: December 27 2013

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I loved this story!  It is absolutely beautiful!! 💖💖💖💖



Author's Response:

Thanks Musicluva!

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Date: July 09 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow!  Stay strong Joss!  Know that true love conquers all, and that you and Eshen deserve to be happy together!



Author's Response:

You're so encouraging and supportive.  Poor Joss.  She's gonna need it.  Thanks Musicluva!

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Date: December 23 2013

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I know Joss would feel better with her family's support, but with Eshen there, it will be just fine. Love the update. 

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Date: June 09 2014

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