Penname: Musicluva [Contact]

Real name: Monica

Member Since: March 09 2013

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Accordance by DarkandLovely
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 129]
Summary:

There is such structure in life. But what happens when you break free? What exists beyond that prison?

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Accordance is a original work by CM and is intended for publication so please do not upload, distort, edit, or remove and place on any other site. Respectfully yours, thank you. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2400
Read Count: 101570
Published: November 23 2014
Updated: June 24 2019

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Title: Accordance

Wow ... you did that!!!!  That was off the chain and over the top!  I'm so ecstatic that Rad finally opened up to Hirito, and they're being open about their true feelings. That Emi is a leech!  I would t be surprised if she didn't pay her way out of trouble through. I don't condone men on women violence, but she deserved to be tagged a couple of times!  

Loved this update, now it's time to consummate!  Bring it 'ouwnn like pop 'couwnn!!! LOL 😍a86;a039;😍a86;a039;😆  



Author's Response:

Yes I don't condone a man hiting a woman either... it's kinda like dag what to do cause she deserved it but it came from a man... UGH lol. Emi is a vile girl. VERY VILE. BWAHAHAHA. I love your comment~ <3

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 29 2015
Title: Accordance

Steamy!  Can't wait for more. 



Author's Response:

hehehe thank you missy ma'am! :D me neither cause I was like LORT JESUS IT'S A FIYAR. lol. 

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Date: March 10 2015
Title: Accordance

Wow!  I'm sorry she has to endure that kind of treatment. It's hard enough being an outsider, but d@mn, to have to worry about being violated on a daily basis?  That's pretty heavy. Surely the faculty can do something about it?  I love the way Rae and Hirito's relationship is developing. Update soon. 



Author's Response:

Thank you Musicluva ^_^ It is hard man. I cannot even imagine. D: I love the way their relationship is growing too :D 

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 11 2015
Title: Accordance

Love the chemistry between these two!



Author's Response:

Thank you my love~ :D

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 12 2015
Title: Accordance

Wow!  That's messed up about her family. I'm sure she's feeling pretty lonely. I'm glad she's found a friend in Miso and now Hirito's. Keep the updates coming. I'm loving them so far. 



Author's Response:

hehe thank you so much!!

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 12 2015
Title: Accordance

Very intense, and I love it! I hope Hirito's continues to find some peace in his relationship with the Rae. What's up with his parents though?  Update soon. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :D <3 <3 <3  Me too! They deserve peace haha. His parents GOT TO GO. 

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Date: March 15 2015
Title: Accordance

I'm sooo glad that Ebere is time enough for all of his relatives and "friends"!  Stay strong Rae!



Author's Response:

Yes Rae is a tough cookie~ <3 Gotta be hanging with the Iwase's. <3

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 28 2015
Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

Missing this story. Update please? 😀

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 29 2015
Title: Accordance

Glad you're back. I love this story, and was missing it.  I love Rae and Hirito's relationship, and how they support each other.   I hope to see more revealed and their relationship continue to develop in the coming chapters. 



Author's Response:

Thank you Musicluva! <3 I was missing writing it to be honest! I love their whole dynamic! Their whole everything haha. It's beautiful to see two young people support and love each other (shoo better than some grown folk lol). Thank you for supporting thus far! I hope you continue to love the journey!

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Date: August 25 2015
Title: Accordance

D@mn!  People are so cruel. I'm not sure I agree with her putting their relationship on hold because of that foolishness. I think they would find some other reason to bully her regardless just because she's different. I hope she knows what she's doing. Stay strong Rae!

I understand about your studies and that takes priority, but please don't leave us hanging too long with that cliffhanger!  😅

 

Loved the update! 😀 



Author's Response:

Girl you ain't neva lied! They are so horrible! Yes, Rae's decisions are a bit at a loss. Girl, people be bullyin for the stupidest smallest reasons. Being one of the only black chicks there, that's all people need. Our poor Rae... Yes thank you. I will upload the final chapters soon! (if not in a couple days lol should I be able to wait that long). Thanks for the review. 

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 31 2015
Title: Accordance

So glad to see they open themselves up to each other. I suppose they had to separate to realize how much they meant to each other.   Absolutely loved this !!! 😍💓💖💓💖😍



Author's Response:

Mmhm! See, there is always a lesson in absence! <3 Everythin happen for a reason :D Thank you darlin!

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Date: August 31 2015
Title: Accordance

Lovely!!!! 💎💍💗💖💗💖💗💍💎



Author's Response:

heheheheh ^_^ <3 <3 <3 Thank  you~

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 02 2015
Title: Accordance

Whaaaa!?!? Is Aiko weilding a sword?  Dag, this threw me.  Was unexpected.  D@mn backstabbers! 👿

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 03 2015
Title: Accordance

Wow!  That's was intense!  I can't believe after all of what hisnparentsbdidnto him that his father would give in to his mothers wishes.   Hirito should consult with a lawyer or something. Poor Rae! 💔. It's like she's back at square one when she just moved there with losing her man and supposedley her best friend. It's so messed up. The only good thing for her is that she'll be returning to the states in two days time. I know she's going to be hurting though.  I can only hope she tries to stay strong. 😞

Loved this story, and looking forward to the sequel!  100 stars if I could!

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Date: September 05 2015
UNSCRUBBED: the tale of a sleeping beauty by Elizabeth Griffin
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 67]
Summary:

UNSCRUBBED: The tale of a sleeping beauty (The Scrub Series Book 1) by [Griffin, Elizabeth]             WWW.ELIZABETHGRIFFIN.NET 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 22462
Read Count: 4647
Published: November 27 2014
Updated: January 28 2015

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Chapter 5

Hmmmm.  I wonder what is Dr. Lee's angle?  I hope he's not trying to play any games.

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Date: January 29 2015
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Dig by Madds
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 138]
Summary:

Dig

 

Avery "Hades" Jones is the number one producer in the metal and hardcore music game. She's more talented with any instrument she lays her hands on than most of the popular bands and every record she touches turns to gold.

Then why doesn't she have the respect she so rightfully deserves?

When her good friend Adam Nuro invites her to tour with his number one band to play with his band while featuring some of her songs, she hops at the chance.

But the opportunity presents more challenges than she was ready for, obstacles that threaten to break her.

Will Avery make her dreams come true? Will her adoptive band support her?

And what has been following them since day one?

 

Shout Out to Elizablu for the Banner



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, General, Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Horror, Mystery, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Kink, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 23829
Read Count: 18135
Published: November 30 2014
Updated: February 14 2016

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Title: Chapter 8: Old Black Crow

Wow!  What a cliff hanger. Can't wait to find out what that was all about. 

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 27 2015
Title: Chapter 6: Only in Dreams

I went back and read this chapter again. I think I agree with a previous reviewers comment. I'm sensing a super natural vibe after reading it again from multiple clues. Will wait to see where this goes. Awesome story!

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Date: January 12 2015
Title: Chapter 6: Only in Dreams

Happy New Year!  

Well, I suppose if Adam can't decide what he really wants, then Avery must move on. Though, I do love a love triangle! 😋

Thanks for the update!  Look forward to more. 

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 12 2015
Title: Chapter 10: FKA

Was missing this story so much. A GREAT comeback. Looking forward to seeing more updates soon. I'm thinking maybe its time they clue Avery in on what's truly going on. 

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Date: February 15 2016
Title: Chapter 4: Butterflies of Steel

Loving this so far. 😏

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Date: December 04 2014
Title: Chapter 5: Rumours of War

I'm glad they whipped up on their racists asses! 😡 Adam seems to be scared of his true feelings for Avery. He better tighten up before it becomes a lost opportunity. I wonder how he would take to her f'ing some random groupie 😒. I'm sure he wld'nt be able to handle it ... Men! 😏 Great update. 

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Date: December 15 2014
Title: Chapter 7: Ms. Self Destruct

I think Adam has some explaining to do. Seems he can at least tell Avary why he "can't", when they both so obviously have feelings for each other, and want to take things to the next level. Great update I'm glad Avery got some relief. Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Me too! Not too many people agree with her finding relief, so I'm glad you do! Adam will get it together soon. Promise!

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Date: February 22 2015
Title: Chapter 9: Descent

Noooo!  Why'd you have to leave us hanging like this?!? 😆. Loved it. That was intense. Please update soon. 

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 02 2015
Title: Chapter 1: Band Mates: The Cast

Update coming soon? 

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25 2015
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The devil wears leather by imbatman
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 53]
Summary:

He was a bad boy who was used to getting whatever he wanted.

She was the good girl who refused to bow down to his ways.

Together they clashed.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 9292
Read Count: 10872
Published: December 01 2014
Updated: March 16 2015

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Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The argument

I think she has feelings for Darren. One thing for sure, I wouldn't let them fuck things up with my scholarship. I hope she's smarter than that. 

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 17 2015

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