Penname: Musicluva [Contact]

Real name: Monica

Member Since: March 09 2013

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Retired
Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 286532
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 21

Psersonally, I like the length of your chapters. Please, don't change a thing in that respect. 

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Date: December 10 2014

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18

I'm surprised at her moms reaction to her having alternate plans. I get her being a concerned mom, but I would imagine she should be happy about Valerie coming out of her shell.  

It had to be awkward being in a group where someone tried to hook Henry up (not to mention with a model).  I think Valerie handled it like a champ though, so I'm proud of her for that.  I just hope it's not a case of where she would be willing to just disappear in the background, and thinking Rhea is the 'type' of girl Henry should be with. 

Loved this installment, please update again soon.😍

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Date: January 12 2014

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 PREVIEW

Yes!  Most definitely publishable material! 👍a86;a039;

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Date: December 11 2013

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16 FULL

Hot update!!!  A bit surprised at Valerie's insecurities as much encouragement that Henry has been giving her, but I suppose the wounds from her past run deep. I sure hope she can find it within herself to get passed it.

I was so glad to see your update. I hope to see more soon! :0)

 

Happy holidays all!

Musicluva

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Date: December 29 2013

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

💋💖💋💖💋 ** sigh ... Henry!! ** 💋💖💋💖 💋

 

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Date: October 12 2013

Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 23

Also, curious to see if Monica will make an appearance. 

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Date: December 25 2014

Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 23

Wow!  Daughters really do need their fathers! 😔 Awesome update!

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Date: December 25 2014

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Nice!  Waiting anxious for the next update 😊

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Date: October 06 2013

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

As I stated before, i loved this chapter (it was hot!!)

I really feel for Valerie.  I can see how she would be put off by and confused by Henrys actions.  For him to give her one of the best experiences of her life, and then not contact her for a month, and then give her so many mixed messages when they met again?!?  That's enough for anyone's head to spin. I'd be thinking, 'WTF?!?!'

It would be nice to get a view of this chapter from Henry's perspective.

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Date: October 05 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow, a month?!  Whats up with that?  Looking forward to the next submission. Please update soon :). 

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Date: September 23 2013

Title: Chapter 23: QUESTION

I personally do enjoy understanding what the characters are thinking/feeling from both the female and male POV's ( as long as it doesn't give up too much before you want it to).  If it gives up too much, then maybe a separate short story afterward would be better to ensure you don't interrupt the flow. I like the pace of the build up of the story, and your attention to detail.  Thanks!

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Date: January 26 2014

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Hmmm.  "At least that's what I though."?  I wonder what the underlying meaning behind that comment means? 💭d67;

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Date: October 02 2013

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

HOT!!!!!

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Date: July 22 2013

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 19

One thing I forgot to comment on was Chase.  He came off as a real asshole!  His remarks:

"I'm sorry to say but, dude! Why the fuck did you get all of those tattoos? No offense but it looks stupid."

C'mon now ... I'm just saying, no offense?

 

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Date: April 16 2014

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 18 pt 3

Damn it!  Again?!  WTH Henry ?!  Please, please update us with a new chapter soon!  

I love your writing style. So detailed, and you give us more than enough (but it's so good we always want more 😉)

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Date: January 24 2014

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 19

I can't wait to read what's next for these two. 💖 this story!!!

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Date: June 17 2014

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 20

Wow!  That was intense!  Another mind blowing chapter. Words can't express it ... Needless to say, I will be purchasing once you're published!  Please provide updates on when that happens. 

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Date: July 07 2014

Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 21

Ecstatic to see this update! 😄💥💖 I'm sorry to hear that Val is having a difficult time. Anxious to see where things go when Val and Henry actually see each other. Great update! 💖💖💖

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Date: December 06 2014

Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 22

Very intense!  It explains a lot about why Valerie is in the stated she's in right now.  Great update.   Keep 'em coming!

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Date: December 20 2014

Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 22

I had to reread this chapter, and my heart really goes out to Valerie!   To think that her parents put George on such a high pedastle after the pain that she's endured from him.  Not only that, but to have her mom suggest that they get back together.  I can't imagine not being able to confide in my parents about something like that (I'm assuming she never told them anything about George's true intentions).

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Date: December 20 2014

Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 24 pt 1

I'm glad Val was there for Henry in his time of need.  They actually seem to be comforting each other .  💗. Thanks for the update. 

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Date: January 19 2015

Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 24 pt 1

Can we expect an update soon? Pretty please?  I've been missing this story.😊

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Date: April 17 2015

Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 24 pt 1

Update soon?  Really miss this story. 

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Date: July 01 2015

Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 24 pt 2

So glad to see this update.  Seems like they're on the right path on establishing their friendship.  Val just needs to open up about her fears, and get out of her own way at this point.  Great update!

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Date: September 18 2015

Title: Unguarded

I'm so proud of Valerie!!!  😂 I know she has a way to go, but the hardest hurdle has been jumped. I know having Henry as support will be key. I just wonder if she'll get any form of closure with her parents. Loved it!! 

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Date: October 02 2015

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