Penname: cullensjonas [Contact]

Real name: hervela larsen

Member Since: March 16 2013

Membership status: Member

Bio:

i love reading; listening to music. i have a bored life if i didnt have my interracial stories to live on.




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SEQUEL to Sasha: the Wallflower. Adaline Lang is an up and coming photographer with more than her own set of problems. During her cousin's wedding she comes face-to-face with the man that she had fallen in love with as a child. Only to find out he was in love with someone else. What will she do to finally be heard and convince him that the perfect women he has been looking for is standing right in front of him?

Dominic Vikhrov is caught between a rock and a hard place. The woman he has fawned after for so many years has finally returned to the United States. But he isn't the only one who is fighting for her heart. Never one to lose, Dominic has his eye on the prize no matter the cost. But will his tunnel vision blind him to something even greater?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 37246
Read Count: 40808
Published: October 24 2014
Updated: November 20 2015


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Please get her to move on this is so sad to read she is! Weak, Pitiful, I just can't. She is the girl in the story that scares everyone with her stalker behavior. This is really getting weird.

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Date: July 03 2015

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Elle always played it safe. She was used to being in control. Every accomplishment in her life was meticulously planned. The only thing she didn't have reign over was her stale love life. When an old flame from a past complicated relationship comes back into her life, she soon finds out everything doesn't go as planned---and that secrets will always come to light.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 78339
Read Count: 69608
Published: November 03 2014
Updated: March 09 2015


Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

im so mad that this is happening between them. they were just getting started and now nothing. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, you’re not alone. Their basically frustrating everybody. Let’s hope something happens at the party to turn that around.  Thanks for reading and reviewing cullensjonas.

CG

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Date: December 24 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 65]
Summary:

He was stuck, having a midlife crisis before the ripe age of fifty. But then he met her. And she became much more than life. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 29164
Read Count: 30386
Published: November 28 2014
Updated: March 13 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I really like this story update please



Author's Response:

Thank you for your post! And no worries! Hopefully I will bust out a couple of chapters in the next two days because I have plans for these two. 

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Date: November 28 2014

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I hate when he's reminiscing about thaT w**** he call a wife. beautiful as always keep writing and keep updating.

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Date: November 30 2014

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Summary:

Lynne and Saul had been married for 25 years when he committed the ultimate betrayal. Lynne attempts forgiveness, but memories from her past make it hard to do that.  She loves Saul, but will she ever be able to trust him enough to take him back?  And when a new man enters her life, will she even WANT to?

 

This is a new version of the story I started earlier this month. In a comedy of errors I deleted the original version from my hard drive AND The Chamber.  I was depressed for a minute, but took it as an opportunity to re-work the story.  So here is the new, and hopefully improved, story.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 17066
Read Count: 74862
Published: March 19 2015
Updated: April 05 2015


Title: Chapter 17: Epilogue

your amazing. and I love this version of the story. 



Author's Response:

Awww...THANK YOU!  I appreciate that so much!

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Date: April 05 2015

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Her mistake was underestimating his obsession with her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 24639
Read Count: 40295
Published: April 23 2015
Updated: July 14 2016


Title: Chapter 11: Chapter eleven

Please please update it 

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Date: December 29 2016

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter eleven

PlEaseeeeeer update 

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Date: July 23 2016

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter eleven

Please update, it's getting so gold.

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Date: August 06 2016

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter eleven

pleasese please update i been waiting for you. i love this story....

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Date: September 15 2016

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Summary:

Part 2



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 11288
Read Count: 22094
Published: June 09 2015
Updated: October 05 2015


Title: Lovers' Dance Part 2

That is so cute. Ive been waiting for this story to come back. 



Author's Response:

Hey Cullensjonas,

Sorry for the wait but I hope to resume posting more soon. Thanks for reviewing.

K.

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Date: June 09 2015

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[Reviews - 433]
Summary:

 

Thoroughly revised and reuploaded!

 

Willow Carter is a plus-sized girl with lots of attitude and very low self-esteem. When her mother and oler sister force her to jog to slim down for her sister's wedding, she is attacked by a madman and rescued by a savior. But just because a man saves your life doesn't mean you should trust him. Soon she throws herself into a thrilling game of cat and mouse that brings more pain than pleasure and puts everyone she loves in harm's way.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 90171
Read Count: 301264
Published: October 04 2015
Updated: April 17 2021


Title: Chapter 24: A First Time for Everything

Make my day and please update this amazing story 

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Date: December 27 2017

Title: Chapter 22: Lost Children

More more more I missed this story so much

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Date: July 10 2017

Title: Chapter 24: A First Time for Everything

Please updat, I love this storyyy

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Date: December 27 2017

Title: Chapter 24: A First Time for Everything

He is a freak alright! I love this story so much

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Date: December 19 2017

Title: Chapter 24: A First Time for Everything

Please update I love your writing 

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Date: April 08 2018

Title: Chapter 25: Truth Be Told

Omg omg I love this story!!!!!!!! I can't wait to read more... and 

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Date: June 10 2018

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Summary:

 

Sometimes people are beautiful. Not in looks. Not in what they say. Just in what they are.     




Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 36570
Read Count: 15093
Published: July 15 2017
Updated: September 30 2017


Title: Chapter 3: No Regrets, No More Subtlety

Yessss I love this already. Please update updat update



Author's Response:

Thank you! Update is on the way. :)

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Date: July 25 2017

Title: Chapter 4: He Is Not Himself

Please update 



Author's Response:

Already up! :)

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Date: August 19 2017

Title: Chapter 5: He Finally Snapped

This lowkey made me mad. He didn't have to make johnny feel so bad. I understand telling him to be a man, but to make him feel like your  embarrassed to be his parent is horrible. I can only imagine how many parents so this routine with there shy and close off children. I love your writing, keep updating and writing. I love this version so far. 



Author's Response:

Mr. King is definitely a character that is going to be hard to like for a while. He is tough and not very emotional. I don't think he understands his son too well and John's shyness and unwillingness to defend himself is seen as weak in Garrett's eyes. It was very sad to write this chapter but it needed to be done. 

Thank you so much for reading! :)

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Date: August 20 2017

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Summary:

 

COMPLETED! (CHAPTER 30 & 31 UPDATED ON 4/20)

 

Thirty-seven-year-old Sugar Wallace used her bitter divorce as a sweet inspiration to pursue her lifelong dream of opening a trendy dessert and wine restaurant called Sugar Mama. Her friends and family want her to dive back into the dating game, but Sugar refuses to open her heart to another. Not when the man she gave her heart to for eighteen years of marriage crushed it after cheating on her with a young Instagram model. She's perfectly content with a busy life of running a successful business. Then one night, she witnesses a forty-six-year-old beaten man get pushed from a car and everything changes.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 119166
Read Count: 283574
Published: July 18 2017
Updated: April 20 2019


Title: Chapter 3: Bitter Treasure

Why are your such a great writer ugh I'm obsess with your stories. Please update as soon as possible. 



Author's Response:

thank you

Cullenjonas, you hit me right in the feels. 

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Date: July 22 2017

Title: Chapter 5: Salty Reunion

So cute I can't handle it, give me more..... your amazing 



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Date: July 25 2017

Title: Chapter 9: Sweet Talk

I live for your writing. Update moreeeeee of this beautiful story.



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you so much! A nice big update is coming your way!

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Date: August 09 2017

Title: Chapter 10: Hot Affair

Please update this lovely story



Author's Response:

An update is coming soon! So sorry for the wait. 

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Date: August 20 2017

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Summary:

After an unexpected encounter, Michonne and Rick find themselves as rivals on opposite sides of a polarizing court case. Will their uncompromising opinions keep them from what they both really want?

This is an AU/no ZA Richonne story, that is Rated M (Content is only suitable for mature adults. May contain explicit language and adult themes)



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Michonne
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:Yes
Word count: 173753
Read Count: 61564
Published: October 26 2017
Updated: April 29 2018


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I hate mike so much that I feel like I can't breath

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Date: January 01 2018

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.