Penname: jacqua43 [Contact]

Real name: jacqueline

Member Since: March 25 2013

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I'm just a woman who loves her God, her husband, her 6 children, her grandbaby, her son-in-law, her family, herself, her peace, her job, her Pittsburgh Steelers and to read all in a nutshell. I LOVE LIFE!!!



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Sugar Baby Love by Jonara2010
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Elise is a struggling college student that can barely pay tuition. With a lousy job and is on the verge of getting kicked out of med school she has to find a way to pay. So with no only choice she looks in the personals and looks for a sugar daddy.

Jameson is a successful man that does not have time to date. With the pressure of his family to wed and women using him he just wants to experience a relationship without the drama. So he makes an ad to find a sugar baby.

What happens when both of these two get together?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 50520
Read Count: 111868
Published: June 24 2014
Updated: August 25 2017

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Title: Chapter 19: Ball of Fire

This hoe is getting on my last nerve. I hate women who can't understand when their relationships are over. Trying to make a man love you when he don't "pathetic". Trying to fabricate a baby really. Whats done at night comes to light eventually.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Date: June 01 2015
Title: Chapter 20: Whisper

Will jen ever give up, he don't want you boo. I think she is screwing the doctor or blackmailing him. Why do they still have that contract is it for Elise's protection. Inquiring minds want to know.

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Date: June 23 2015
Title: Chapter 23: Underground

Jameson is Gangster!!! I like it!! thanks for the update.

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Date: November 13 2015
Title: Chapter 24: New Friends

Elise girl stand by your man!!!

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Date: December 23 2015
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Great update!! she needs to know what is going on, so she can be prepared.

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Date: August 16 2016
Title: Chapter 29: Author Update

Honey concentrate on school first we will be here when you are ready. I can't wait for Nina and Lance's sequel.

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Date: April 03 2017
Title: Chapter 31: Lazy Day

Great update! Whatever you give us, I'm taking. I would love another story about Jameson and Elise. Plus I can't wait until part 2 of Lance and Nina story.

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Date: August 25 2017
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Memories Lost by CrimsonBlaze
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Zoey Vance woke up in the hospital with no memory of her life before that moment. She doesn't even know her own name. Now she has to try and put the pieces of her life back together with the help of the man who hit her with his car that fateful night. As her memories start to return she wonders if she is better off not knowing who she really is. 

Brian Preston is consumed with guilt, the woman just ran out into the street with no warning. He coudln't avoid hitting her. He feels it is his personal responsibility to care for her until she can care for herself and moves her in with him and his fiance, Macy. As time wears on he starts to wonder if he wants her around to ease his guilt or if there aren't bigger emotions at play.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 33
Completed:Yes
Word count: 77720
Read Count: 103484
Published: July 19 2014
Updated: October 14 2018

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Title: Chapter 26: Uninvited Pt. 2

It would be nice if that Private investigator Macy hired comes back into the picture and tell everything he knows... just blow slimy Henry right out the water. I love Brian, he's going to be stuck like white on rice to Kelly. Thanks honey for this update!

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Date: July 11 2017
Title: Chapter 16: Closer

It's time Brian to cut Macy loose so you can explore Kelly fully and honestly. I mean why? stay in a relationship where you are not happy? you was not happy before a potential pretend baby, you won't be happy in that relationship with a real baby. Thanks honey for this update and Merry Christmas.

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Date: December 20 2016
Title: Chapter 17: Trust Your Gut

I'm glad Harvey has a heart I hope he do right by Kelly. And someone needs to flip the script on Macy and investigate her( what's done in the night, will come to light ) Brian needs to get his act together with Macy before Kelly will even look his way. Thanks for the update honey and Happy New Year.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and Happy New Year to you too. Harvey is in a kind of tough position.

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Date: December 30 2016
Title: Chapter 1: Cast Pictures

Nice cast!

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Date: July 31 2016
Title: Chapter 3: Rise and Shine

I love this rewrite and I'm along for the ride.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you are hanging in there with me. thanks.

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Date: July 31 2016
Title: Chapter 4: Jane Doe

Girl.. I like this!! Miss. Macy is about to get a rude awakening. How she said she grew up with a maid, butler and cook. she is about to be all those things to Zoey If she insist on living in the house with them. This is going to be so much fun! Thanks honey for this update.

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Date: August 01 2016
Title: Chapter 5: Decisions

Macy is so cold and heartless, If the shoe was on the other foot and she was the one in a hospital bed with no memories of her past, I hope she would want someone like Brain in her life. I guess I would think differently If Macy and Brain was married and he chose to bring a stranger into their house without talking to her first. I wouldn't blame her for being PISSED! but they are not married and they don't even live in the same house, so she really don't have a say. I hope he ends his relationship with Macy before Zoey moves in because Macy will make that woman life a living hell. She would be over there from sunup until sundown watching like a hawk!!. Thanks for this update.

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Date: August 03 2016
Title: Chapter 6: What's In A Name?

I like the name " Kelly " and the meaning behind it. I wished they would've let her pick the name she wanted though. Girl, all I see is trouble for Zoey- Kelly coming from that evil witch Macy. I hope Brian can cast out the evil spirit that is Macy away from our girl. Thanks for this update.



Author's Response:

She wouldn't have been happy either way. Yes Macy will shake things up in a major way later down the line. 

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Date: August 08 2016
Title: Chapter 7: A Whole New World

Girl, 2 gas stoves are essential, 2 ovens is a blessing and a brick pizza oven is necessary, when you have a big family and they all eat like food is about to be extinct at any minute. I think Brian and Kelly( Zoey ) has some type of connection, but I think they shouldn't explore it until Macy is out of the picture. Why do I have this feeling that Macy is about to make an appearance at the house while Brian is at the store. Stopping by to mark her territory. All I can say is poor Kelly. Thanks for this update



Author's Response:

Girl! How big of a family are you cooking for! I'm good with my one over. lol Macy is like an annoying little gnat she'll be around for a little while. Thanks for reading 

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Date: August 11 2016
Title: Chapter 8: Meet the Fiancée

Girl... I would've checked Macy from the start and said " Look w!tch don't come at me that way, you need to check your man, he's the one who invited me to re-group at his house." and then I would've say " Deuces" and walked out. This is really going to be some trying times for Kelly, and she has 99 problems but Macy is not one of them. Thanks honey for this update.

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Date: August 26 2016
Title: Chapter 11: The Pier

Girl, Macy is dangerous. I'm scared for Kelly and what Macy will do next. Brian don't fall for the lies, go get a home pregnancy test and make her pee on the stick. Then go with her to the doctor and make her take a blood test. This chick is so desperate, now she's going to claim that Kelly is stressing her out and harming the baby. I hope Brian finds out the truth real quick. I loved their time at the pier and their budding friendship. I'm team Macy has to go!! Thanks honey for this update.

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Date: November 05 2016
Title: Chapter 10: Working Girl

Brian it's time to let Macy go. This jealousy is getting out of hand, plus you don't want her anymore. I'm sure your business will still stand without Macy and her family. I knew work life was going to be fun!! but Kelly girl, don't lay where you play. Find someone who's not your "crush" bestfriend. Not cool Brian, get rid of Macy first and then make your move. Thanks for this update.

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Date: November 04 2016
Title: Chapter 9: Nightmares

I think her memory is slowly coming back. I hope when she do remember who's chasing her she would tell Brian, so he can protect himself. Girl, this is about to get real! when Zoey goes to work for Darren. I know we are about to laugh our butts off! thanks honey for this update.

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Date: September 19 2016
Title: Chapter 12: Confessions

Girl... this was deep!! I would've let Diablo kill him. Why? do I have to suffer for your addiction and mistakes. I hope in my heart she don't take him back. Girl, Macy is a trip!! this woman is so diabolical, she must be used to everything going her way. I like the idea of Kelly living with his parents, then she would be away from that evil woman. And his parents can see what Macy is truly about, because she will show her hand. Thanks honey for this update.

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Date: November 20 2016
Title: Chapter 13: Dinner

I like Brian's parents already.

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Date: December 01 2016
Title: Chapter 14: Strange Behavior

It's time for Brian to become a investigator. Macy needs to be stopped, I believe this chick will try to steal someone's baby to pass it off as Brian's. Thanks honey for the double updates.

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Date: December 01 2016
Title: Chapter 15: A Break In the Case

I hope Harvey has a conscience and don't give Macy the information he found out about Kelly. Now I see why she went along with that crazy deal ( to protect her father not David ) Thanks honey for this update.

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Date: December 05 2016
Title: Chapter 25: Uninvited Pt. 1

Girl, I got a house full of people and more people on the way to our 4th of July cookout. I'm in the kitchen cooking and trying to read at the same time. I'm glad you updated this story. Macy was so wrong for that. Poor Kelly didn't knew what hit her. Slimy Henry shouldn't even be there... it's all his fault she in that situation. I loved how Brian, Derrick, Danica and Darren stepped up to protect her. I feel for Allen, because that's his child but Henry can go jump in traffic for all I care. I hope Kelly memory comes back fully before she go anywhere with Henry. One thing I know, husband or no husband Brian is not going anywhere without Kelly. Thanks honey for this update.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! Enjoy your cookout. :) Thanks to Macy things are about to get a whole lot messier.

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Date: July 04 2017

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