Penname: jacqua43 [Contact]

Real name: jacqueline

Member Since: March 25 2013

Membership status: Member

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I'm just a woman who loves her God, her husband, her 6 children, her grandbaby, her son-in-law, her family, herself, her peace, her job, her Pittsburgh Steelers and to read all in a nutshell. I LOVE LIFE!!!



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Zoey Vance woke up in the hospital with no memory of her life before that moment. She doesn't even know her own name. Now she has to try and put the pieces of her life back together with the help of the man who hit her with his car that fateful night. As her memories start to return she wonders if she is better off not knowing who she really is. 

Brian Preston is consumed with guilt, the woman just ran out into the street with no warning. He coudln't avoid hitting her. He feels it is his personal responsibility to care for her until she can care for herself and moves her in with him and his fiance, Macy. As time wears on he starts to wonder if he wants her around to ease his guilt or if there aren't bigger emotions at play.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 33
Completed:Yes
Word count: 77720
Read Count: 103484
Published: July 19 2014
Updated: October 14 2018


Title: Chapter 22: Feelings

It took a drunk mind to speak a sober heart and he spoke the truth. Kelly needs to be honest with herself and admit her truth to Brian too. Because hiding his truth was hurting him, that's why he was drinking so much. I feel for poor Adam because he didn't stand a chance. Great update honey!

Author's Response:

LOL Adam tried his best but it just wan't good enough.

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Date: April 17 2017

Title: Chapter 23: Revenge

That dang on Macy gets on my last nerve. Will she just give it up already.

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Date: June 19 2017

Title: Chapter 24: Games

I love playing games... they are so much fun and they keep the spice in every relationship. Thanks for the update honey.

Author's Response:

Brian was definitely going all our for this. Starting things off on the right foot.

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Date: June 19 2017

Title: Chapter 27: Atlanta

Zoey knows in her heart that there's something off about Henry ( woman's intuition ) When Marco showed up I was like ( good gravy! ) what's next for this girl. Great update honey!

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Date: October 12 2017

Title: Chapter 28: Blast from the Past

Finally the truth is out. I hope she confronts Henry. Great update honey!

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Date: October 29 2017

Title: Chapter 29: Broken

Dang! woman! how you going to stop it right there. Girl, I got to go, my Steelers is about to play. But if you post another update I will be back on this site after the game ( believe that! ) Great updates honey!

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Date: October 30 2017

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Leiya Tate was a woman on the run from the life she thought she wanted and the man she once loved. When she learns that her ex-husband plans to take sole custody of her son, she hatches a plan for the both of them to disappear forever. So how does the ex-wife of one of the most prominent and powerful businessmen in the country disappear? That was the question Leiya asked herself until she comes across a photo she'd tucked away of her mother and the aunt she never knew. Adele Waters was the light at end of a tunnel filled with darkness; her way out of Adrien's grasp. It didn't hurt that she resided in a town so small that someone like Adrien Tate would never take notice. Here, Leiya is able to breath again....to live again, if she dares. Just as she decides to let go, she finds herself facing the devil in a fight for everything she has.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 22230
Read Count: 12872
Published: September 10 2014
Updated: September 25 2016


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

I hate when people uses their children to hurt each other. I think the best thing for Jordan is to be with his mother. Girl, children forgives so easily I love their bond. Now it's time for Leiya and Nate to stop faking the funk and get down to it. Thanks for this update.

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Date: October 03 2016

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

MORE MORE MORE PLEASE!!!!

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Date: July 01 2015

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I like this story, her ex-husband treated her like a slave. I don't understand how someone could claim to love you, and treat you bad and think you will stay with them no matter what DELUSIONAL.

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Date: July 01 2015

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Adrien is a evil man, good riddance to him. There is nothing like your peace I would take peace of mind anyday over material things. Now it's time for Leiya to go out and find her happy and to know her worth, and i'm thinking Nate is the answer. Thanks for the update.

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Date: November 23 2015

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I'm happy!! they are about to get into the meat and potato of this new founded friendship/relationship. They both are scared of rejection and they have abandonment issues, Nate's mother abandon Nate and Rose, and Leiya mother death and that evil of a husband, they both needs that motherly love from Adele. Thanks for this update

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Date: May 31 2016

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

I'm glad she talked to someone and I'm glad it was Nate. I don't care how old we are we never forget a parent or any person we love. I just hope Adrien doesn't find out where they are. Thanks for this update.

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Date: July 31 2016

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Summary:

They thought she would take it lying down. They thought they had defeated her. They were so very wrong.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Torukia: Still I Rise is a original work by CM and is intended for publication so please do not upload, distort, edit, or remove and place on any other site. Respectfully yours, thank you. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Inspirational, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:No
Word count: 43105
Read Count: 62591
Published: September 19 2014
Updated: September 25 2018


Title: Chapter 8: Truth

Go get your woman!! This man is faithful!

Author's Response:

YES MA'AM! HE SURE IS HEHE!

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Date: July 03 2017

Title: Chapter 2: Character Pictures

The cast is beautiful D&L.

Author's Response:

Thank you Mama J <3

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Date: July 03 2017

Title: Chapter 3: Uprising

That's some deep love... He's going to get his wife back.

Author's Response:

YESSSSSS

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Date: July 03 2017

Title: Chapter 4: Xaen

Yes!!

Author's Response:

 ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Date: July 03 2017

Title: Chapter 5: Faie

D&L girl, I crying over here.

Author's Response:

Awwww Mama J!!!! Yeah it's very emotive all that they've gone through!!!

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Date: July 03 2017

Title: Chapter 6: Reminsce

When her mother said " you shall mold and shape him " I'm like AMEN!

Author's Response:

ehehehehehehehehe AMEN AND AMEN! ❤️

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Date: July 03 2017

Title: Chapter 12: The End Begins

I love this D&L you did a great job! and I can't wait for more. Thanks honey!

Author's Response:

THANK YOU MAMA J! hehe. THANK YOU!

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Date: July 03 2017

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Summary:

Sally McDonald is not who anyone thinks. Her life is filled with secrets. Some she doesn't even know about. But when Storm Monsello sees the terrified girl one night, he never expects how much her secrets would reveal the dark actions of the people he trusted the most.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Character Death, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 43
Completed:No
Word count: 133222
Read Count: 425039
Published: September 21 2014
Updated: April 26 2020


Title: Chapter 31: Salina Carter

Great update honey!

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Date: July 03 2017

Title: Chapter 30: Sally Revealed

They both were keeping secrets. Now the fun begins. Great update honey

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Date: April 16 2017

Title: Chapter 33: Secret and Lies

You know it's true love... when they put your needs and your safety before their own. They deserve each other. Great update honey!

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Date: October 11 2017

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Summary:


   Caleb Garrison has been in love with Grey ever since they were children. He even told his parents while a child that someday he would marry her. However, there was one problem...although adopted, she was legally his sister.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:Yes
Word count: 29115
Read Count: 36913
Published: October 07 2014
Updated: November 05 2017


Title: Chapter 11: Down Under

What a wonderful update!

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Date: July 31 2016

Title: Chapter 12: Lockers

Dang! they really went off on each other in front of everybody. I hope Jenna didn't follow Caleb and witness the interaction between he and Grey. I do believe that girl got stalker tendencies. Great update honey!

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Date: April 25 2017

Title: Chapter 13: Saying Good-Bye....For Now

Great story honey! I loved the ending. I'm wondering how the parents and everybody would feel about their relationship.

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Date: November 06 2017

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