Penname: jacqua43 [Contact]

Real name: jacqueline

Member Since: March 25 2013

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I'm just a woman who loves her God, her husband, her 6 children, her grandbaby, her son-in-law, her family, herself, her peace, her job, her Pittsburgh Steelers and to read all in a nutshell. I LOVE LIFE!!!



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COLORLESS by marchpisces92
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Summary:

 Camille Jackson was rejected since birth over her dark skin complexion. She has grown a tough skin and doesn’t get attached to anyone because of how some people have viewed her without even getting to know her. However Camille opens her heart to a baby in need and for the first six months Camille has grown to love the baby as if she were her own. That is until the baby's biological father comes into the picture.

Hiram Whitfield Jr was brought up in one of the most well known Ku Klux Klan families in the south and as the only son he feels the pressure to carry on his family's tradition. After finishing his prison sentence all Hiram wants to do is change his life for the better and be a good father to his child. If that means being disowned by his bigoted family then so be it. Ironically enough Hiram would have never thought that Camille would be the one to be his rock and strength to do so.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 51
Completed:Yes
Word count: 107887
Read Count: 215321
Published: October 09 2014
Updated: October 25 2015

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Title: Chapter 51: Epilogue

What a beautiful ending to this story. The Baxters got what they deserved, Stevie got what he deserved, Savannah got what she deserved, Hiram and Camille got what they deserved, which is happiness and a beautiful growing family. Aaron, Alex and Logan are becoming Good upstanding men. Savannah became a author, college graduate and now future Wife to the man of her dreams Ethan. " COLORLESS"  on Oprah's book club list, I say CLAIM!!! that for yourself MARCHPISCES92. Thanks for this wonderful story you have blessed us with MP.

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Date: October 25 2015
Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 46

Savvy's family tree project was superb, Chelsea wish she had that much knowledge and family history to compete with Savannah. Savannah's bat mitzvah was a beautiful ceremony, the words were elegantly stated. I'm glad Ethan came to Savvy's party and gave her, her first kiss. Thanks for the update MP

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Date: October 25 2015
Title: Chapter 7: Main Cast

I don't want to mess with the flow of the reviews, but the cast is beautiful.

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Date: August 22 2015
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8

It's hard to believe that Hiram came from that evil troll of a mother.

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Date: August 22 2015
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10

Sister Elaine is a judgemental trot, people change sister Elaine everyday.

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Date: August 22 2015
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 11

What! how the hell this woman can not want her child because her skin tone is darker then her other children. Black people come in different hues Mr and Mrs. Baxter, these people are tripping.

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Date: August 22 2015
Title: Chapter 14: Supporting Cast 1

Nice supporting cast, no you didn't cast George Hamilton as Larry the cable guy, that's hilarious.

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Date: August 22 2015
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 15

What a nightmare I'm hoping it don't come true.

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Date: August 22 2015
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 18

Good riddance!!!

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Date: August 22 2015
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 19

I would have bite those rednecks old shrivel up peckers off!! good thing Hiram came home when he did.

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Date: August 22 2015
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 21

This hoe have slept with the whole kkk and she's worrying about one man. This piece of Sh*t just don't want to except that she's not good enough for Hiram and Camille is.

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Date: August 22 2015
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 22

I love the fact that they are teaching themselves and Savannah about her culture.

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Date: August 22 2015
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 23

That was a very mature love scene , EXCELLENT!!!!

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Date: August 22 2015
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 24

I'm speechless.

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Date: August 22 2015
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 25

Man!! that's so straight up bullsh*t, no way they charge him with murder that fool was trying to kill him. That's so backwoods hillbilly justice.

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Date: August 22 2015
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 28

What done at night comes to the light, I can't wait for the white to be blowned off these recknecks.

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Date: August 22 2015
Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 30

Man I'm ready to kick some ass hurting that baby like that.

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Date: August 22 2015
Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 32

This hoe will never give it up!!!

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Date: August 22 2015
Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 33

Now that is a real man, he sounds like my beloved.

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Date: August 22 2015
Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 35

Why some people can't just live their lives and leave other people along.

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Date: August 22 2015
Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 36

The wicked witch is dead.

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Date: August 22 2015
Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 37

THIS STORY IS SO GOOD!!!!!!

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Date: August 22 2015
Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 38

YES!!!!!!

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Date: August 22 2015
Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 39

I always say just because you are born into a family it doesn't make you a family.

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Date: August 22 2015
Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 40

Twins what!!! you know I like that. I love these people.

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Date: August 22 2015

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