Penname: jacqua43 [Contact]

Real name: jacqueline

Member Since: March 25 2013

Membership status: Member

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I'm just a woman who loves her God, her husband, her 6 children, her grandbaby, her son-in-law, her family, herself, her peace, her job, her Pittsburgh Steelers and to read all in a nutshell. I LOVE LIFE!!!



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 Camille Jackson was rejected since birth over her dark skin complexion. She has grown a tough skin and doesn’t get attached to anyone because of how some people have viewed her without even getting to know her. However Camille opens her heart to a baby in need and for the first six months Camille has grown to love the baby as if she were her own. That is until the baby's biological father comes into the picture.

Hiram Whitfield Jr was brought up in one of the most well known Ku Klux Klan families in the south and as the only son he feels the pressure to carry on his family's tradition. After finishing his prison sentence all Hiram wants to do is change his life for the better and be a good father to his child. If that means being disowned by his bigoted family then so be it. Ironically enough Hiram would have never thought that Camille would be the one to be his rock and strength to do so.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 51
Completed:Yes
Word count: 107887
Read Count: 215305
Published: October 09 2014
Updated: October 25 2015


Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 41

Little Logan was born on his grandfather Hiram Sr. birthday. I know that's right about more children we are done when our twins get here, 5 children will be enough. I hope Savvy don't let what the other children say get to her, kids can be so cruel I blame their parents no home training. My family is a plethora of a lot of nationalities to. My grandmother is black, my grandfather is Black/korean, my mother is Black/korean, my father is full Native American, I'm black/korean/native american, my husband is Full Italian so my children are Black/Italian/Korean/Native American that's alot. I be DAMN if I would give anything to save that women life, so who needs who now. If my skin color wasn't enough for you keep me, why would my blood be enough to save you, all you saw was the color of my skin not your blood that was flowing though me, so no lady you can't have my blood PEACE OUT!!!. This was one good story MP!

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Date: August 23 2015

Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 41

Man this story has been on my mind, I even had a dream about It. I just can't fathom a mother that carried a child for 9 months not wanting her because of her skin color. Then this same mother needs someone to help save her life and the only option could be the child you didn't want. I understand how Camille being a nurse could feel guilted into saving her mothers life she's human and she's a nurturer. Maybe It's the hormones talking being that I'm pregnant but I can't see myself laying down on my side while someone stick a needle in my pelvis for someone who thought I was beneath her and her family. If I were feeling generous I would let them take a Peripheral Blood Stem Cell donation where they take It through my blood. I wondering was Eugene even Camille's father, maybe Camille came out so dark because she was someone else's child.Maybe mama was a rolling stone, where ever she spread her legs was her home., maybe Camille was a reminder of her sin's. Maybe Camille needs a DNA test done because to me something in the milk isn't clean.Girl you know you are good when you have readers dreaming about your story. Good Job!!!

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Date: August 23 2015

Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 42

Steven is in college and he's in a interracial relationship, my how this young man has evolved. Steven, Hiram and Savannah should write to Hirams mother and Steven parents in prison, and let them know what they tried to do didn't break them it only made them into the family they are today and send them pictures of the family. Hiram's mother probably will have a heart attack, Steven's mother probably will have a nervous breakdown and Steven father probably will try to commit suicide. Camille and Hiram should let their children know that love could come out of hate and that they are a living testimony to the whole ugly past. Thanks for the update MP

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Date: September 04 2015

Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 43

Girl!!!!!! I was thinking the same thing f*ck Mildred Baxter, but Camille has a heart and she would save her mother. I would do what i have to do for Mildred and then let go and let God!!!!. Ethan seems like a good boy with a since of discernment he sees Chelsea for what she is a mean-spirited troublemaker and jealous person. I think God put people in our lives for a reason and some for a season. I think Camille will feel better knowing that she helped save a life. Thanks for the update MP

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Date: September 25 2015

Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 44

Savannah needs to know about Priscilla and the Jewish faith. So Mean Milly has died I hope she found the lord because hell is HOT and Busy. Camille should feel no worries she has good intentions but God choose another outcome. That evil sister trying to make her feel bad better watch out, because she could be in the same situation that evil mildred was in and need Camille herself. Thanks for the update MP

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Date: October 13 2015

Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 45

I'm glad Camille spoke her peace and let those evil people know that what they think of her doesn't matter anymore. That they are " The pot that called the kettle black" no pun intended. Girl I wanted Camille and Hiram to kick some " High yellow sidity butts" for messing with their children. I'm also happy Savannah finally got her answers, even though they  probably wasn't what she hoped for. The guilt this child was living with thinking she was the cause of Priscilla's death was heartbreaking. They are truly healing each other. Thanks for the update MP

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Date: October 13 2015

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SEQUEL to Sasha: the Wallflower. Adaline Lang is an up and coming photographer with more than her own set of problems. During her cousin's wedding she comes face-to-face with the man that she had fallen in love with as a child. Only to find out he was in love with someone else. What will she do to finally be heard and convince him that the perfect women he has been looking for is standing right in front of him?

Dominic Vikhrov is caught between a rock and a hard place. The woman he has fawned after for so many years has finally returned to the United States. But he isn't the only one who is fighting for her heart. Never one to lose, Dominic has his eye on the prize no matter the cost. But will his tunnel vision blind him to something even greater?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 37246
Read Count: 40805
Published: October 24 2014
Updated: November 20 2015


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

I don't know who the father could be but please don't let it be Dmitri baby.

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Date: April 05 2015

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

The time a women become pregnant it is very stressful, she is not only thinking about her baby she's also thinking about what all she can do to keep herself healthy so her baby want suffer. Sasha was wrong for not telling Dmitri about the situation with the baby it's his child too. A "Heart Murmur" is a extra sound in your heartbeat, some can be very quiet and some can sound like waves crashing against some rocks in the ocean. The sound Sasha heard could be a "Innocent Murmur" they are very common in children and sometimes pregnant women, she would have to wait until the baby is born to get a true diagnosis. Sasha is 8 months pregnant if there were anything seriously wrong with the baby's heart they the (doctor's) would've notice it by now. The situation with Adaline and Dominic I can see it growing into a relationship but I like the fact that she has forgiven him and is trying to do the friend thing, it's going to be hard because she already has strong feelings for him. Ms. Carla is a different story altogether, this chick can't stand the fact that Dominic dumped her and preferred to be friends with Adaline and not her, I can see this situation with Carla playing out like the movie " Fatal Attraction" she's thinking if I can't have him then no one will have him, especially not my cousin (over her dead body). Thanks for the update and I'm happy to hear about the upcoming publishing of Sasha: the Wallflower.

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Date: November 20 2015

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Man, this is getting so good. Can't wait for the next update. GOOD JOB!!!

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Date: March 27 2015

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

My vote is for murphy. Adaline needs to stand up for herself, she should have checked Audrey. Dominic is a pussy, whether she's his friend or not you have to put your girlfriend in check. I love Sasha and Dmitri.

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Date: July 05 2015

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Uh oh! Dominic has some competition. Murphy seems like a cool dude, helping others is a plus in my book and helping children I think I'm in love. I'm thinking Dominic see Slade in Dina's baby's eyes. So could Slade be the father of Dina's baby. Sasha is so cute with her pregnant self, paying someone to bake when you can do it yourself, they are spoiled brats. I'm glad you are back.

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Date: June 12 2015

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

I'm glad Dominic put the trash out at the curb(Audrey). Damn! Adaline jumped right in there and took what she wanted good for her. Dominic is a basket case, he needs to find himself first before he touch one more women. Hot damn! Adaline found her voice about time, she needs to explore more give someone else a try. Thanks for the update.

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Date: July 20 2015

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

I love the fact that Dominic is getting his power back and singing again. I think Sofia is Dina story to tell to Slade not Dominic's.As far as him helping Dina with Sofia I think that's honorable because that is what a friend will do but he has to let the women in his life know first. I think Teagan is underestimating the depth of Carter's love for her. Sasha is freaking out because she's carrying more than just one baby. I love this story and I pray everything goes smoothly with your schooling and job. Thanks for the update.

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Date: November 14 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 151]
Summary:

Ezekiel's parents took extreme measures to keep him hidden from his controling racist grandfather.  Ezekiel was adopted and raised by Rosa a black woman and his life is now about to take a drastic change.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 11832
Read Count: 40496
Published: November 06 2014
Updated: June 17 2015


Title: Ezekiel Black

That old man has to be stopped!!!!!

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Date: June 12 2015

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Summary:

There is such structure in life. But what happens when you break free? What exists beyond that prison?

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Accordance is a original work by CM and is intended for publication so please do not upload, distort, edit, or remove and place on any other site. Respectfully yours, thank you. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2400
Read Count: 101423
Published: November 23 2014
Updated: June 24 2019


Title: Accordance

Amen!!!!!

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Date: October 01 2015

Title: Accordance

Oh my goodness!!! this story was so freaking good I can't wait to read Transcendence. I will start reading it tomorrow. Thank you DL you are a Poet, an amazing writer and a visionary, thank you!!!

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Date: October 01 2015

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Summary:

Dig

 

Avery "Hades" Jones is the number one producer in the metal and hardcore music game. She's more talented with any instrument she lays her hands on than most of the popular bands and every record she touches turns to gold.

Then why doesn't she have the respect she so rightfully deserves?

When her good friend Adam Nuro invites her to tour with his number one band to play with his band while featuring some of her songs, she hops at the chance.

But the opportunity presents more challenges than she was ready for, obstacles that threaten to break her.

Will Avery make her dreams come true? Will her adoptive band support her?

And what has been following them since day one?

 

Shout Out to Elizablu for the Banner



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, General, Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Horror, Mystery, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Kink, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 23829
Read Count: 18107
Published: November 30 2014
Updated: February 14 2016


Title: Chapter 10: FKA

Great update!! I'm glad you are back.

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Date: February 24 2016

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 52]
Summary:

They were always a "could of been"...

A collection of storts/drabbles about their love story; all it was, wasnt, and could have been...

Cassie Robinson & Dean Winchester

Gif CassiexDean



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Cassie Robinson
Classification: Alternate Universe, Cannon, Drabbles , Off Cannon , Supernatural
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Character Death, Fluff, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: A Love Story
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 3278
Read Count: 16741
Published: December 18 2014
Updated: June 24 2017


Title: Chapter 4: Memories

Great update honey!

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Date: July 03 2017

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Summary:

Felicia Adams doesn't have a regular life. She's a single mother working two jobs trying to keep a roof over her and her son's heads. One of those jobs includes being a webcam girl. She does it all for guys who are too shy to meet girls in reality, from harmless flirting to sexual acts. She then meets Andrew Harper, the sexy mysterious billionaire. Andrew just can't keep a girlfriend. His dates are selfish gold diggers, and all they want is to shine in the spotlight. All he wants is a girl to one day marry, he can't possibly find a wife on Virtualdates.com, right?




Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 9176
Read Count: 25125
Published: December 21 2014
Updated: April 08 2015


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I love this story.

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Date: April 08 2015

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Summary:

A series of short stories written in a post-apoctalyptic world, following the lives of the girls and boys of Dianne's brothel.

Nneka suffers from a rare skin condition that attracts the wrong kind of attention.

Pokow has the mind of a doctor, but half the respect and none of the rescources.

Amnon is the spoiled son of Dianne herself.

Their stories and more are told in the endless dust bowl that is their home.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 2261
Read Count: 6587
Published: January 27 2015
Updated: September 23 2017


Title: Chapter 2: Several Years Later

Great start...

Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Date: September 19 2017

Title: Chapter 3: Pokow's Bedroom

Great update honey!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Date: September 25 2017

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 30]
Summary:

Years of craving can only end in satisfaction. Kory Lane and Kai Wu will soon learn that not all cravings can be appeased.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 16033
Read Count: 5573
Published: February 04 2015
Updated: July 10 2016


Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

This was hot!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much jacqua! I try my best and I'm glad you enjoy it! 

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Date: August 16 2015

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Kory done went and turned this man out. He's acting like a stalker, he's hooked.

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Date: August 16 2015

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Summary:

It had been five years.  Cynthia had moved on with career and her life after not hearing from Caleb, her drug addict mess of a rock star boss, for four of those years.  When Caleb returns from Ireland, she faces her feelings for him while trying to survive a new strained relationship with another man.  Will Caleb be clean and will he find his way back into her life and her heart?

 

Sequel to Foolish



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 56219
Read Count: 30787
Published: March 01 2015
Updated: April 24 2016


Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I'm glad that Flo and Armand are giving Caleb a chance. Men seem to give each other the benefit of the doubt quicker than women do. I do believe you are going to have some funny happenings going on when they all go to Jamaica. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 20 2015

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I like the fact that Caleb is trying to get to know Cynthia, like my grandmother would say " They put the cart before the horse" the first time. Taking thing slow and really getting to know eachother is the right way to go, don't make it all about the sex. Building a friendship alone with the relationship is "Priceless". Thanks for the update.

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Date: August 07 2015

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.