Penname: jacqua43 [Contact]

Real name: jacqueline

Member Since: March 25 2013

Membership status: Member

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I'm just a woman who loves her God, her husband, her 6 children, her grandbaby, her son-in-law, her family, herself, her peace, her job, her Pittsburgh Steelers and to read all in a nutshell. I LOVE LIFE!!!



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Summary:

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BOOK I | GENESIS 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content
Series: Undisclosed Desire Series
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 4493
Read Count: 84048
Published: July 13 2012
Updated: January 29 2020


Title: Chapter 2: Birth to a Goddess

Great start!

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Date: November 09 2017

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Samara, a model/actress, is sucked into the world of BDSM as she tries to figure out who murdered her photographer best friend and roommate, Ana, who belonged to a BDSM club called Bound in which she’s involved with a dominant who has a connection to Samara…Justin, a model by day and a Bound BDSM dominant by night.  Samara tries to keep a level head as she tries to avoid getting completely consumed by this BDSM lifestyle.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Mystery, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 39
Completed:Yes
Word count: 52663
Read Count: 68620
Published: November 15 2012
Updated: July 03 2018


Title: Chapter 1: cast pics

Leo is my favorite!

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Date: April 16 2017

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

He's a very cocky dude!!

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Date: April 16 2017

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

What!!!

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Date: April 16 2017

Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

What an apology LOL!

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Date: April 16 2017

Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Henry is bat crazy!

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Date: April 16 2017

Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Samara is the woman! Henry will suffer in prison believe that! Great story and great update.

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Date: April 16 2017

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Summary:

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In desperate need to be loved, Camille Sullivan was willing to do anything... even if it meant sleeping with the devil.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 3430
Read Count: 49946
Published: December 12 2012
Updated: July 18 2019


Title: Teach Me How To Be Loved

I'm sorry for your loss. Trust in the lord and he will see you through. There is no timetable for grief, live one day at a time and inspiration will come to you again. To me your mother is still your muse inspiring you from heaven. I hope you continue to write because it's a good outlet. I will continuously pray for you and your family.

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Date: June 12 2015

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Jayden made the biggest mistake of his life when he let the love of his life slip through his fingers.  Could he make it right and start anew?  Tamaeya had been burned by Jayden once and had no intentions of being burnt a second time, but it seemed that the heart had it's own mind.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 4965
Read Count: 108475
Published: February 06 2013
Updated: April 19 2017


Title: Regret

Nancy need to get used to being in a big family. It can get a bit overwhelming at times... but if she loosens up some it can be fun! Nancy is trying to guard her heart because she was abandon as a baby and felt unwanted. Plus she was trying to eliminate everyone she thought was a threat to her happiness... like her mother-in-law and Tam. But Dana wasn't going to let that happen! I love that child! They just got to keep working on her. Great update honey and welcome back!

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Date: April 19 2017

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Summary:

 

We all have that special someone. It just takes some a little longer to find theirs. 

Mila was always a happy girl, and her friends and family always said she was beautiful.. So why couldn’t she find a man?

Mac was a playboy (How cliché right?)! Tall, tan, and extremely handsome. He didn’t need a girlfriend or a love at the moment. He needed to make partner at the firm. 

Mac and Mila are two people who just happen to cross paths but can their interest in each other surface? or will it be another disappointment to Mila. Only time will tell. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 18172
Read Count: 12150
Published: February 10 2013
Updated: July 08 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Club X

Mac is in denial he knows he want some Mila on a plate. Man you have to watch what you say around kids they repeat everything. The part where Jackson was watching "Bride day friday" was so funny.



Author's Response:

LOL right, i have a thing for men who watch my shows with me. 

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Date: July 09 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Meet Mac and Mila

St. Jude Children's Research Hospital is a place after my own heart, my family and I donate monthly. I'm a Certified Registered Nurse Anesthetist in the NICU, children is basically my whole life. I like Hanna she's a feisty chica. Mila is sweet I can telll she's a force to be reckon with. Mac is just delicious he can stare at me anytime. Jackson that man is so yummy.



Author's Response:

Thats so great to here! Thanks, I love real aspects in stories. Also thank you for your service as a Nurse, YOU ROCK!

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Date: July 09 2015

Title: Chapter 3: Club X part 2

What is Mac trying to do eye fuck her. Maybe I read wrong but did Mac suggest that Mila and Hanna leave with him so they could have some fun, like a threesome. Mac is a asshole a fine one at that. Hanna was ready to kick Jackson's ass for spilling his drink on her. If Mac was to snatch my phone from my hands, I will be snatching his balls from his pants SPLAT!!!!!.



Author's Response:

Im actually crying at this review lolol but no Mac just wanted Mila! lol Yeah ive actually had a guy snatch my phone once. i kicked him in the balls so it worked out well. 

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Date: July 09 2015

Title: Chapter 4: Breakfast shenanigans

Sometimes people love eachother but they just can live together. Mac needs to grow up and deal with his parents split. I think there's some sexual tension between Mickey and Hanna.



Author's Response:

Yeah hes still butt hurt. But thats not it for his family though!

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Date: July 09 2015

Title: Chapter 5: Casting Call

Love the cast, Is that the Basketball player who play for the San Antonio Spurs.



Author's Response:

No idea, just tried to look it up and i didnt see any players like that. 

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Date: July 09 2015

Title: Chapter 6: Blow the wistle

That's right Mila don't be the hunter be the hunted. I knew there was sexual tension between Hanna and Mickey.



Author's Response:

Yeah their sexual tension is crazy.

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Date: July 09 2015

Title: Chapter 7: Open the door

Mac is a mess talking about he can watch her bent over and wiggle anytime. He's right white on a black women is pretty amazing, my husband love to see me in white.



Author's Response:

I love white, but i neder wear it because i feel like i will get it dirty lol such a shame. 

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Date: July 09 2015

Title: Chapter 8: Are Charity Events Fun?

I love Mila's personality. Jackson and Nia are some trips, Nia is in love with Jackson. Jackson has a secret he loves Nia too. I'm liking mama Sara. More please!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I cant help but write about people i love. I need to throw some ass holes in here lol 

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Date: July 09 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

To everyone who knew Liam and Lacey they knew that they were truely in love. Lacey a 29 year old mother and wife nurse to many and lover of all things good, is ready to give up on her love. Can she really continue to be that woman who stays when she knows everything is wrong? 

Liam loves his wife and his daughter he will do anything to keep them safe. When a threat comes aginst his family he always makes sure they are taken care of. Why cant his wife see that he's trying?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: The Tough and The Gritty
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 9815
Read Count: 5957
Published: February 11 2013
Updated: July 08 2015


Title: Chapter 5: How Harry Met Sally

Liam is really freaking out, why? Is he afraid of his father or other people in the organization. Lacey is a ride or die chick, I like that.



Author's Response:

Umm good question, i just think hes worried because he has a family you know. A single guy would probably be like fuck it, lets go and he has an obligation to his adoptive father. But hells yeah, Lacey is about that life when it comes to her loved ones. 

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Date: July 09 2015

Title: Chapter 4: IHOP TALKS

Bella is going to be a heartbreaker, Liam better get his shotgun ready.



Author's Response:

RIGHT! Love the kid, and hes gonna need more than that! 

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Date: July 09 2015

Title: Chapter 3: Casting Call

What a beautiful cast.



Author's Response:

Ugh i know. I need Jackson in my life & Liam if im being completley honest. 

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Date: July 09 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Is their love lost?

That was hot!!!



Author's Response:

:) :) :) :) 

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Date: July 09 2015

Title: Chapter 2: The talk with the Lawyer

I love this family, I hope he can get out with no problems.



Author's Response:

Lets all just cross our fingers! lol 

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Date: July 09 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Sebastian and Sage want what they can't have.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content
Challenges: Can I Tell You My Fantasy?
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4846
Read Count: 5678
Published: May 02 2013
Updated: May 04 2013


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love this story.

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Date: May 01 2015

Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

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Troubled FBI Special Agent Michael Wolfe knows his fair share of loss and pain.  As a criminal profiler within the Behavioural Analyst Unit, he has seen many horrors. But none more haunting than witnessing the death of his wife. Consumed with grief and guilt Michael drowns himself in work.  His partner Special Agent Patrick Kepler suggests a very unconventional form of therapy.  Will he take it?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Psychological
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 3656
Read Count: 12922
Published: June 06 2013
Updated: October 14 2015


Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

 I like the cast!

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Date: October 15 2015

Title: Chapter 2: Xanax

I'm feeling Micheal's pain, he needs to get out that pent up aggression, he don't have to talk he can let his strokes do all the talking for him. I like this story.

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Date: October 15 2015

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.