Penname: jacqua43 [Contact]

Real name: jacqueline

Member Since: March 25 2013

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I'm just a woman who loves her God, her husband, her 6 children, her grandbaby, her son-in-law, her family, herself, her peace, her job, her Pittsburgh Steelers and to read all in a nutshell. I LOVE LIFE!!!



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Summary:

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Troubled FBI Special Agent Michael Wolfe knows his fair share of loss and pain.  As a criminal profiler within the Behavioural Analyst Unit, he has seen many horrors. But none more haunting than witnessing the death of his wife. Consumed with grief and guilt Michael drowns himself in work.  His partner Special Agent Patrick Kepler suggests a very unconventional form of therapy.  Will he take it?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Psychological
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 3656
Read Count: 12918
Published: June 06 2013
Updated: October 14 2015


Title: Chapter 3: Lithium

When I read this I keep hearing that song by K.Michelle, the part where she say "what you going to do when I put this pretty thing on you" well Savannah put her pretty thang on James and the man is "SPRUNG". Don't James know he can't make no hoe into a house wife, I'm just kidding. Savannah is just not feeling James that way, now when she meets Micheal that's another story because they seem like to broke souls that needs each other to heal. Thanks for the update.

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Date: October 15 2015

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Summary:

An innocent night of fun ruins the lives of two people who realize they are screwed without each other but especially with each other.

 

"My body is your party"



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:Yes
Word count: 44180
Read Count: 56975
Published: July 07 2013
Updated: October 04 2013


Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19- Epilogue 1

This is a great story and I hope you come back and grace us with a sequel.

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Date: December 05 2016

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Summary:

What's a girl to do when there are two after you? 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Threesome+
Challenges: Give Me a Mountain Man Anyday!
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 6583
Read Count: 43900
Published: September 02 2013
Updated: July 13 2015


Title: The McRyan Brothers

I love this story, both the guy's are hot how can she choose.

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Date: June 28 2015

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Response to the Made to Order challenge!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death
Challenges: Made to Order
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:Yes
Word count: 54406
Read Count: 50801
Published: September 11 2013
Updated: December 18 2013


Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Unresolved Conclusion

This is a great story!!!

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Date: December 05 2016

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Simone Alexander was not adventurous by nature but she was a go-getter. When an unbelievable opportunity comes her way, she does not hesitate to seize it. Now, she finds herself half way around the world immersed in a culture completely different from her own. Here she faces challenges that push her grow in every aspect of her life; the most unexpected of them all......love.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 38379
Read Count: 34597
Published: November 11 2013
Updated: June 28 2017


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Jiro is just looking out for his brother. He's afraid that Simone will end up breaking Ryu already fragile heart. He loves his brother. Thanks for the update honey it was great!

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Date: July 03 2017

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Ryu is showing his gentle side and I love it. I can't wait to see how their love blossoms. Thanks for this update.

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Date: September 06 2016

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

He's fighting his attraction for her, but the grits are about to hit the fan. Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Lol...they sure are

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Date: May 09 2016

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Sometimes as mothers we have to prepare our children's wings so they can fly. Simone has to find her own way not her mother's way. Ryu needs to make a decision whether he wants her or not, and Simone has to make him work for her love and goodies. He's playing to many games for me. Thanks honey for this update.

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Date: December 05 2016

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Summary:

Lance was a man who had it all and lost it all. He was down and out and was ready to give up because he had nothing to live for. Nina was a woman who had enough of being used and was trying to start her life over in a new city. When these two meet will Lance have something to live for? Or will he continue to live in misery. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 27
Completed:Yes
Word count: 40637
Read Count: 72031
Published: December 09 2013
Updated: July 06 2015


Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue

I love their story I'm glad you are doing a sequel.

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Date: July 07 2015

Title: Chapter 25:

I think they are cute together and that baby will be gorgeous. I'm happy to see Lance live a little, love a lot and forgive himself for the past.

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Date: May 22 2015

Title: Chapter 26: Makeovers

Oh my godness! that nursery is beautiful. You are giving me ideas, I don't know if I can do the white. But the floor is just like the floor I have in my Babies nursery, right now it's a clean slate. I know about being tired, I mean you feel as though you have no energy. I'm still working to, hey I love my job. I'm not stopping untill my doctor makes me.  Our babies don't want to reveal their sex either, hopefully we will know next week. For Lance to do that for her and actually listen to her ideals, that was very sweet.



Author's Response:

Aww I'm excited for you. I found this nursery on pinterest my favorite obsession.

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Date: June 23 2015

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Summary:

In the wake of an ugly divorce, Natalia executes a scheme meant to move her beyond the hurt inflicted by her ex-husband, Richard.  The plan is to ease her suffering by increasing his, and her weapon, a younger man unwittingly drawn into the illicit plot. 

In the quest for revenge, will Natalia realize her goal of bringing Richard to his knees?  Or will vengeance and her weapon of choice become her undoing?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: December's Wrap-up!
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 120
Read Count: 91987
Published: December 13 2013
Updated: May 02 2015


Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Losing Another Talerico

Man that was so good,I hope ant is alright. He should have really put the beat down on Richard. I hope nat and the baby is okay. Isn't it just like a women who have skeletons in her closet, trying to out a nother woman. She need to sweep around her on door before she sweep arond someone elses. GOOD JOB!!!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, Mercede thought her secret was safe.  Leave it to Rich to blow up her spot.  Unfortunately, Anthony (and possibly his relaitonship with Nat) will suffer.  The fall-out from this sh*t storm is coming next chapter.  Thanks Jacqua43!

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Date: March 30 2015

Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - No More Maybes

What a BLESSING, I'm happy for them they deserve it. Don't make me reminisce about when my babies were born, we have 15 year old triplets 2 boys and 1 girl and they are a handfull now and then i wouldn't trade it for the world. I hope anthony finds his father for the sake of his children and his self. I'm glad that nat is truly happy. GOOD JOB!!!!



Author's Response:

Triplets?  And teenagers?  OMG, you're a soldier.  Then again, they're a blessing at any age.  Thanks Jacqua!

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Date: April 13 2015

Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Flight Plan

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!

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Date: March 13 2015

Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

That man oh i mean little boy got some nerves. It take a HOE to know a HOE, THOSE ARE FIGHTING WORDS. IT'S ON NOW!!!!!

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Date: March 15 2015

Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - The Cruelties of Fate

Anthony is a REAL MAN, I hope he gets to meet his real father soon. Anthony and Rich relationship is a little off right now, but i will rather know the truth any day then continuously living a lie. I'm a little surprise his mother told him the truth, because she was stuck on stupid for so long. We always tell the man to man up, Women old or young needs to WOMEN UP and GROW THE HELL UP. GOOD JOB!!!



Author's Response:

Ant is a real man, and his mother's candor is an attempt at damage control.  I know a lot of people would prefer to know the truth rather than live a lie, but Ant might not be one of them.  A little more on that next chapter.  Thanks Jacqua!  

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Date: April 03 2015

Title: Chapter 40: Epilogue

I'm so happy Anthony got to meet his father. Now for his mother,I dislike this women more and more. Don't she know whats done in the night always comes to light, saying that Anthony drowned, that is someone with a dark heart. I'm glad she's not allowed around the twins. J.J. Thank you for your vision, your talent and your time.



Author's Response:

You are so very welcome, Jacqua43.  Thanks for reviewing!

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Date: May 03 2015

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Summary:

Porter had been gone for while, traveling and moving on with his life. His father’s illness brings him home, but what he didn’t expect was to be drawn back in by the reason why he left—her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 14802
Read Count: 11209
Published: December 28 2013
Updated: April 12 2016


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Ok so Hudson has a son too. So Hudson and Avery both have a child, so they are raising their children together. I like how Travis interact with Porter in the store, not knowing that maybe they are father and son. I think Hudson and Porter are related to each other or were bestfriends back in the day. Things are getting very interesting Mrs.P. Thanks for the update.

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Date: April 12 2016

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I love how gentle Avery was with Payton. I do believe that the woman Porter saw in his house at the start of the story, was the same lady years ago that brought Avery into their lives. I love this story Mrs. P. Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Thank you jacqua43! Avery and Payton have a really strong connection. We'll see more in the upcoming chapters :)

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Date: April 11 2016

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

I think Porter and Jess are two people running from something or someone in their life, they just happen to meet and discover that they had some kind of connection with the troubles in their lives and that they are not in love with each other but have love for each other. I think deep down Porter still have love for Avery but he's trying to will it away because it will hurt a lot of people. I love the relationship Porter have with Payton, and the Sign Language is a wonderful way to communicate with someone with Cerebral Palsy, I'm teaching my grandbaby how to use sign language now, along with Spanish, Italian and Korean. I'm thinking in my head that Porter's father didn't want Avery and Porter together so he was the reason they are not together.



Author's Response:

Yes!!! All of this is so great. I'm reading all you guys comments with a big ole smile on my face. I'll show everyone what is up and can't wait to see your reactions as everything unfolds! And I'd love to learn Korean! I'm thinking about studying it soon.

I've seen a few mentions of dad. He has his far share in the history of everyhing ;)

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Date: April 11 2016

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I saw the picture of Hudson, that man is not gay!!. Girl... I just love when my beloved, our children and my grandbaby feel the need to tell me about their day, they talk so much and so long and they get animated with it, I love it!!. What type of pills are Travis taking, does he have Epilepsy or do he have ADHD?. I like Hudson, I think he's Avery very bestfriend who secretly has deep feelings for her, but she's holding out for the love of her life ( Porter ). I thinking Hudson is helping out Avery with Travis, because he know it's hard to raise a child by yourself and he wants to be the love of Avery's life.



Author's Response:

Hehe! You're so funny. Travis really is a ball of excitement! I see you noticed the medications... all in due time! Hudson and Avery have a long history and it's just as long as she and Porter. They all are connected and I'm excited to flesh it out and show you all! By the way, love your theories!!!

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Date: April 11 2016

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Welcome back Mrs. P , I love this new to me refresh story.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Date: April 11 2016

Title: Chapter 2: The Leads

Beautiful!!!

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Date: April 11 2016

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Summary:

Welcome to the city of Baltimore, Maryland and into the life of Elise Roberts. Elise lives the life of a pampered princess. Designer clothes, expensive cars and fancy parties are the center of her world. She is a woman who has everything she ever wanted until she meets Lukas Weiss. Faced for the first time in her life with rejection, Elise hatches a plan designed to heal her wounded pride. A game of seduction and the ultimate rejection. Funny thing, though, about the game of love....it is always unpredictable.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Journey
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 55134
Read Count: 40859
Published: January 08 2014
Updated: October 16 2016


Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Great update honey! children understands more than we know.

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Date: September 06 2016

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

It's time for Lukas to tell Mila everything. She's at that age where she's going to ask a lot of questions. I believe she can handle it, just tell her the truth. And watch their relationship grow even better, because she will feel like she can go to him and tell him anything and not have to hide. There will be times when he think, I know this child did not just tell me that, girl WE KNOW. But we wouldn't change a thing. I think Elise should sit back and let this be father, daughter time. Thanks honey for this update.

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Date: October 17 2016

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