I'm just a woman who loves her God, her husband, her 6 children, her grandbaby, her son-in-law, her family, herself, her peace, her job, her Pittsburgh Steelers and to read all in a nutshell. I LOVE LIFE!!!
She's a mess he can't help wanting to fix.
Congratulations!!!!! GeorgiaP, I'm happy for you and I will be getting my copy today!!!.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed
Wow! that apology was very sincere and I felt every word she said, there is hope for Elena. Elena is trying to correct her wrongs, she's trying to better herself for her son, she's trying to better herself for her sister, she's trying to better herself for herself, Bravo! Elena Bravo!. It's good that Aiden is being a child again and experiencing childhood the way it suppose to be, not worrying about adults and their life choices. Aiden is developing friendships and relationships with kids his own age, and with adults that has his best interest at heart. Brody is trying not to be a burden on anyone, but he must realize he's in a family that cares for one another, he has a family that's all about we, us and our not I and me. I believe he will do the right thing and tell his family because life is to short to try and handle everything by yourself, we all need help sometimes. Thanks for the update Ms. P
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed I LOVE THIS STORY, GOOD JOB!!!!!
Thank you!!!! :D
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed THANK YOU FOR YOUR VISON AND PUTTING IT ONLINE.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed Man, if i didn't have one at home right now, i would order two brodys to go.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed A man will not take care of himself unless a women makes him. I'm glad he told her about his heart condition. Man!! what a hopeless feeling hearing someone you love screaming on the phone and you are miles away from them. I hope her sister listen to reason and wise up and leave that man and think about what this is doing to her child, put the child first. I'm glad you are back GeorgiaP.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed What type of mother puts her child in harm's way, getting high with her abuser, hiding from the police, letting your child hide in a closet wondering If you are dead or alive. Having a sister you care nothing about risk the life of herself and the man she loves to come and try and save your sorry ass, B*TCH WOMEN UP!!. Alex you can't save a person who don't wants to be saved. The womanly and motherly thing for Elena to do and say, is Alex's I know that It's to late to save me but please save my son, please give him a stable home with people who will love him and protect him, Alex's I'm putting my child in your hands.If I were Alex I will not take this hoe anywhere with me and around my man. Elena has to want a better life for herself.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed I truly confuse about Elena do she really love Aiden or do she just don't want Alexa to have him. Maybe she just don't want to admit that she not a good mother and that she failed. Maybe she's jealous of Alexa and wishes she had the strenght to leave and better herself like Alexa tried to do, or maybe It's all about that good for nothing man. It's one thing to put your self in danger for the ones you love, but putting someone else life in danger for a lie Is another story. I understand how she feels about Aiden a defenseless child who can't fend for hisself, but for a women that only have contempt in her heart for you, is ridiculous to me. It doesn't matter what Alexa do for Elena she will never love her or accept her, that's a relationship she has to release or the rest of her life will be all about Elena. Brody has every right to be upset she put him in harms way and didn't tell him the truth, that like the blind leading the blind. My hope Is for Brody and Alexa to stand on their truth and trust each other wholeheartedly, and help Aiden. Thanks for the update.
So many great things here! And I agree about Elena. It's just tragic that Aiden is caught in the middle. We'll see a lot in the next few chapters and I can't wait to see what you think! You might have just been spot on, on some things ;)
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed I know Alexa and Brody will find themselves back In that special place again, they just realized that they are human and bound to make mistakes. When a man and women are in a new relationship they have blinders on all they see is the good In each other, but when the blinders comes off they see the truth, that no one Is perfect. I'm so sick of Elena playing the victim, the victims are Aiden and Alexa. It was Elena's choices that put them in that situation, It was Elena's choices that put Alexa in a place to be raped, It was Elena's choices that puts her son in a state of fear. Elena need to be the one to break the cycle or she's bound to repeat it over and over again. Someone has to step up and protect Aiden because his mother only sees her wants and needs not her childs. Elena finally told Alexa how she really feels in so little words, but Alexa heard her loud and clear. Elena needs to find her own way in life, Alexa can't live her life for her. What Alexa can do is shape and mold Aiden life and give him a sense of peace, love, happiness and validation. That's the maklngs of a great mother. Thanks for the update.
You're right about the true victims and sometimes it's just best to let the one you love go if they're toxic for you. Something does need to happen will Elena and she'll come to terms with that very soon! I'm posting a couple or tonight so look out! :-)
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed There's no place like grandma's house, what wonderful times I had when I was little going to grandma house for the summer. I think that is exactly what Aiden, Alexa and Elena needs, to see what a true family looks like and feels like. Grandma knows there's something going on with Brody they always do, she's just waiting on him to disclose it to her. Elena has got to get professional help to cope with her sudstance abuse, her anger, her guilt and her feelings of worthlessness. Time away from the problem (that man) the (drugs) will only help her if she's committed to fixing her problems, not carrying them around everywhere she goes.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed Wow! Alexa and Aiden having simultaneous nightmares, the whole family needs some professional help. Aiden needs to feel safe and cared for. Alexa needs to open up about her physical abuse and rape, she needs to release. Aiden see Joe as his protector and confidant this child is screaming out for help. Elena wants to protray herself as a goodmother in front of Alexa but Alexa knows it's all for show. Elena is so jealous of the bond Aiden has with Alexa. Brody needs professional help also they all are flawed, Brody needs to stop trying to play superman and hero and tell his family about his heart. If he don't life has a way of slowing us down and revealing it self to us and everybody. He's putting to much stress on his heart. No!! Elena did not bring drugs into this women house, THIS HOE HAS GOT TO GO!!!!!. This poor baby is a diabetic have Elena been giving him his insulin, or have she been strung out and he has to give it to himself, and be responsible for checking his on blood sugar levels. I'm so mad at Elena right now, to me it's all about Aiden. Thanks for the double updates.
Lots going on Jacqua! And you're so right! Elena and Alex have some deep wounds going on here. And I love what you said about Joe! That little doll is Aiden's securtiy. He's been through it all with him. Hopefully tides will change soon and Aiden won't need him as much. Thanks for commenting again. I really appreciate it!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed That little boy is happy right now, he don't have to fear anything or anybody he can just be a child. I loved that Mrs. Rose got him to open up a little, offering to help her with dinner Is major to me. Then the wicked witch of the west came and tried to destroy his happy, protending like she concern about his whereabouts, and Aiden put up his shield (Joe) for protection. I'm glad Brody and Alexa talked and she released all the hurt and trauma that happen in her life to him, and Brody talking about his mother was very therapeutic for both of them. The release of pent-up aggression and frustration was on time. I knew it!!! Elena behavior towards Alexa was all about that man. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed Damn! Georgia P you are good. I loved seeing Aiden coming out of his shell and him keeping Joe around but at a safe distance. Children have discernment to, they can tell who's good and who's not. Let the truth come out It's about time Alexa spoke her mind and got all that off her chest. Elena couldn't handle the truth so she lashed out, but the truth is a hard pill to swallow, she's putting all the blame on the victim not the perpetrator. Elena knows in her heart that with Alexa, Aiden is happy and safe. Elena must come to grips with her part in all this, she must apologize to Alexa and Aiden. She must forgive herself also. Brody needs to tell his family the real reason he can't join the family business, but there have to be a way for him to still join the family business just not in a physical way. Oh hell no!!! please Hayden run, I hope Elena don't get her claws into him. Thanks for the update Ms.P
Hehe. Thanks Jacqua. This one had a LOT happening and I'm glad you guys all liked it! Joe is still around, but Aiden is loosening the grip a bit. Hopefully more growth ahead!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed It's like pops and Brody have this silent bond and understanding. Brody don't have to tell his pops about his illness, pops just knows. The part where Brody saw his father texting was hilarious, our children, nieces and nephews taught my 89 year old grandmother to texts and she texts every chance she gets, this woman texts me every morning at 4:30 am and tell me to wake my ass up! It's hilarious. Maybe if things don't work out for Dean that job can go to Brody. Thanks for the update Ms.P
They are so much alike! And I can totally see that scene with the text. It blows my mind how technology savvy kids are. My seven year old nephew has an iphone xD
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed I'm glad Elena is getting the help that she needs. Maybe she left before the cops could track Nathan down and he had his spies watching her all this time, knowing that she was talking to the police. No this fool did not hit my Brody with his car, if he did I hoped Alexa and Elena dragged his ass out that car and commence to whipping his ass. Wow! Brody was going to tell his family about his illness today, now they would have to hear about it from a hospital bed. I hope Nathan gets his just due. Thanks for the update Ms.P
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed This chapter made my heart stopped, I kept saying DAMN!DAMN!DAMN! in my Florida Evans voice.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed Yes!!!!! my sweet Brody is alive and doing better. Well for Nathan what goes around comes around karma is a b*tch, good riddance. I'm glad the family took it easy on him he went through a lot and he's in recovery. When you are a strong family unit you pay attention not only to individual family members but to the family as a group. I love that about this family and Alexa, Aiden and Elena will feel the same way because they are apart of that family now. Thanks for the double update Ms.P
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed I'm glad everything worked out for Brody and Alexa. I loved the fact Brody is encouraging his woman that's what a man should do. Pops is getting married and Aiden and Elena is happy and doing great. There's nothing like home and family. Thanks GeorgiaP for this story, your time and your vision, I can't wait to see what more you have up your sleeve for us next.
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All Camryn Clifford wanted to do was live out her dream. She had made it out of her dead end town but her old life wanted to pull her back in.
Richard Hammonds wanted Camryn and he would have her. He has skeletons in his closet that he needs to keep from her to win her.
Elise is a struggling college student that can barely pay tuition. With a lousy job and is on the verge of getting kicked out of med school she has to find a way to pay. So with no only choice she looks in the personals and looks for a sugar daddy.
Jameson is a successful man that does not have time to date. With the pressure of his family to wed and women using him he just wants to experience a relationship without the drama. So he makes an ad to find a sugar baby.
What happens when both of these two get together?
I think that the contract is stupid, I also think that Jameson is a scared insecure jerk!. Makes me wonder what is he going to be putting her through. If he honestly loved her, he would trust that she would love him regardless of a piece of paper. To me she has more to lose than him. To your question at the end, I say write what you feel. Love is love rather it's between a black women/ white man or a black women/black man.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed Elise is on a emotional rollercoaster and she needs help getting off. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed Take your time honey, we will be here when you get ready to post again. Take care of yourself honey.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed I think it the ex. As for Jameson parents not liking Elise " If people don't like you for who you are FUCK EM", Bernie Mac.
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