Penname: peachmartini [Contact]

Real name: Pamela Mclain

Member Since: March 28 2013

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 415]
Summary:

 

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* ON THE CHAMBER'S TOP TEN MOST FAVORITE STORIES LIST

& NOW KINDLE VELLAS TOP 250 FAVORITES LIST *

FIVE STARS ON AMAZON

When the lines are drawn, will you risk your life to cross them for love?

In the Summer of 1988, tragedy hits home for Charlene Jacobson and her father when her little brother is killed playing a game of basketball in their Detroit housing projects.  She soon finds herself living in the small rural town of Millersville, Georgia, with her estranged grandmother. Millersville is a place where time stands still and the racial divide is as prevalent as the 1950s.  Secrets, lies, and betrayal lurk in every corner. Yet, through it all she finds solace in the arms of Ryan Quinn, a white senior track star and the son of the town Sherriff.  

Will their love cross the finish line?  

EDIT:  Crossing the Finish line has been removed from this site and a revised version with added new content has been published on Amazon Kindle Vella (as of November 2022) under the penname, Shelly B Williams. To those of you who have left reviews, added me to your Favorite Authors and Story Alerts, and helped to make CTFL one of the Top Ten Most Favorited Stories on Valent Chamber, I trully appreciate all the support you have shown me over the years. I hope you will continue to support me as I begin the next phase of my journey as a published author. I couldn't  have done this without you. 

Much Love!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Deep, dark, and mysterious
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5758
Read Count: 214655
Published: November 07 2010
Updated: January 09 2014


Title: Crossing the Finish Line

This is sooo good. I can't wait until we get all of the parents story. I really hope Ryan and Charlie continue to fight for each other and communicate this well.  I think Ryan's reason to forgive or not forgive Wes depends on why he is hooking up with Christi and why he's hiding it from Ryan.

I can't wait for the next update. Please make it soon, like tomorrow.

Reviewer: peachmartini Signed
Date: January 09 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 270]
Summary:

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Having chosen modeling over ministry, Jeremy Ferguson had often felt his father's scorn and disapproval.  Now he was coming home to visit and bringing the love of his life, Aura Vanderleigh who happens to be black.  Growing up in South Carolina, Jeremy knows what his father's reaction will be even if he is a minister!

 

The Preacher's Son is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2009 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2681
Read Count: 128890
Published: July 31 2011
Updated: June 02 2014


Title: Chapter 6: Things are slow but steady!

I got the Kindle version today. I can't wait to read it.

Reviewer: peachmartini Signed
Date: February 08 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 73]
Summary:

“A mighty pain to love it is,
And 'tis a pain that pain to miss;
But of all pains, the greatest pain
It is to love, but love in vain.”



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 28555
Read Count: 11890
Published: April 01 2013
Updated: August 15 2023


Title: Chapter 4: The First Supper

This is soo good and real. Please update frequently.

Reviewer: peachmartini Signed
Date: June 26 2013

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 86]
Summary:

Everyone has that someone who made them feel perfect and brilliant. How do we lose sight of those great loves and what happens when they come back into your orbit? Amelia and David were college sweethearts who run into each other 2 decades later-after marriages, divorces, kids, and careers--can they still be crazy in love?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9837
Read Count: 16837
Published: April 17 2013
Updated: June 12 2013


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6--Author Note

I just found this little gem, add me to the others that want more of this adorable couple....and a little DJ on the side.

Reviewer: peachmartini Signed
Date: April 19 2013

Retired
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 629]
Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 287978
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Valerie's reaction to her insecurities are really making her unlikeable. The worst part, is she knows this. I hope she loosens up because I want to keep reading because I like Henry and Ella very much.

Reviewer: peachmartini Signed
Date: June 04 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 53]
Summary:

Sometimes things just don't go as planned.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Sexual Healing, Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3801
Read Count: 17977
Published: May 14 2013
Updated: May 18 2013


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

loved it

Reviewer: peachmartini Signed
Date: May 19 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 417]
Summary:

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Benjamin Cunningham III decided to finally open the box that his adopted parents had given him which would reveal his past.  Little did he know that its contents would change his life forever.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Rape
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 82948
Read Count: 53958
Published: May 15 2013
Updated: September 05 2014


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 The Sour Taste of Revenge

Brenda, you deliver faster than Dominos! I like, like you.

 

The meeting with Bennie's friend was interesting. As a southerner who has been all over the US, I don't think the girlfriend had to be from Alabama to have had the confederate tattoo or be a racist, but I digress.

 

I'm glad Bennie didn't back down on calling his "girlfriend" to join them once he met Kevin's girl and defended not only keisha, but himself in the end. He's such a good boy.

 

Poor Keisha, Propecia can really weigh on anyone's  self-esteem, especially awoman's.

 

Ophelia denying the rape and wanting Bennie to have a relationship with Raymond is beyond r-diculous!

Reviewer: peachmartini Signed
Date: June 04 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Facing Facts

You always bring it, and this is no exception.  Truthfully,  I thought the mother could end up being black because of her name. The only problem I had with his reaction was him saying he wasn't racist, but his was uncomfortable around blacks...it sounds like latent racism to me. I guess he will get a chance to work on that now. Update immediately or sooner. I have so many question already that I know you will answer later....Will this be a story about Mom and son? Will he get a romance with a non-black woman?  Does his bio father own Milner's Department store? So many question...



Author's Response:

Yes, there are a few surprises ahead.  Yes, he will get to know his mom better and yes there will be a romance.  Bennie has questions and I can tell you he won't like some of the answers.  More is coming soon.

Reviewer: peachmartini Signed
Date: May 15 2013

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 A Method to the Madness II

Abigail's conversation with Raymond was great, she's a really good person.

Keisha and Bennie are cute as a litter of puppies. Margie should be the one disowned, not the other way around....heifer.



Author's Response:

Margie didn't think her secret would ever get out, but it did.  More is coming!

Reviewer: peachmartini Signed
Date: June 05 2013

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Playing With Fire

There is never a dull moment in this story! I still cringe thinking about Raymond/Ophelia, yuck! I like Keisha, she's all kinds of adorbs. I would like to see some of Bennie's white friends reaction to his new found blackness. Brenda, thank you for always entertaining me with you writing.



Author's Response:

Raymond and Ophelia both have issues.  Yes, I have to write about Bennie's friends.  Thanks for the reminder.

Reviewer: peachmartini Signed
Date: May 31 2013

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Moving Forward...Moving Backward

What the Hello Kitty was that?! I feel like she just got raped again. Please be a dream sequence...please, please, please.



Author's Response:

Sorry, but it's no dream.  Don't give up on Ophelia yet.  She has a plan....

 

Reviewer: peachmartini Signed
Date: May 29 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 46]
Summary:

No matter what happens, there's no crying in baseball. On the field that is. Skylar Rose Lansing tries her best not too anyway. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 10984
Read Count: 6910
Published: June 04 2013
Updated: June 14 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Initially, I read this fiction because I lovelove, love baseball and hoped it would relate to the story. After reading the first chapter. I'm not so sure she will even attend another ball game. Haha.

Skylar should celebrate, she just got rid of some dead weight in the form of a boyfriend/best friend. I hope the cheating doesn't turn into insecurities for her or stops her from looking for love. I will still read, but I would love some variety.

Reviewer: peachmartini Signed
Date: June 06 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 36]
Summary:

 

 

 

Beck hates his job. His model boss, Heather, is a complete bitch. The only upside to working there is looking at her in the little shorts stomping around the house. However Beck's luck on the job just may change when the opportunity arises to tame the beast. 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: Hollywood Gems
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 9431
Read Count: 8431
Published: July 15 2013
Updated: July 19 2013


Title: Chapter 4: Pick Me Up Then...

I am really enjoying this. Beck is going show this woman was a relationship/love is really about without being her lap dog or turning into a jerk himself.. I also like your approach to the bratty main character, you don't want to slap Heather during every scene or chapter. She knows,she can be a pill, but she tries in her own rich and bossy way to do better when it comes to Beck. I'm sure she will fall back into her bitchy and bossiness sooner or later, but it's tolerable here. Good job.

Reviewer: peachmartini Signed
Date: July 22 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 353]
Summary:

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Paris finds herself on a deserted highway out of gas.  Little did she know that her life would be forever changed after that.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Lonely Highways, Love In Hard Times
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 558
Read Count: 82569
Published: July 17 2013
Updated: August 27 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a great start. I really want to see where this goes.

Reviewer: peachmartini Signed
Date: July 18 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

 

No, Brenda! There is no way this can be the end (give or take 500 itsy bitsy words), there is so much more you haven't given us with this pairing. So I can wait until you return from vacation, just don't kill this story early.

 

Oh yeah, I'm picturing Bradley James as Billy. Heehee.

Reviewer: peachmartini Signed
Date: July 22 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

I'm guessing Billy knows what type of person his father is, hopefully he can confide in him because I think if he doesn't it will make both his parents even more curious as to what's going on with him. Especially since his mother has her mind set on who she thinks is right for her boy. Thank you so much for continuing this, Brenda!

Reviewer: peachmartini Signed
Date: July 24 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

I really enjoyed this chapter, Brenda.

I'm glad that at least one of his grandparents is open to meet Paris before completely writing off Billy's relationship with her. It should be an interesting conversation.

The advice  paris mother gave her was very honest and rather liberal for the times. I totally get where she's coming from, but I don't think Billy or her husband will.

I think Billy needs this commitment to focus graduating, then med school. If they were of the same race the parents would probably be a little hesistant until he finished school, but not outright discouring. Billy may be young, but he's he's a planner, rock solid in what he wants by nature. He is focused and loyal, so get married now with just make him more secure.

I really like the way you have gone with Janie and Charles. They have an interesting relationship. They are both somewhat broken and very protective of the other. I would like to see where this goes. Thanks for the frequent updates.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review.  You are right on point about Billy.  He is a planner, loyal and dedicated.  This "compromise"  will not sit well with him.  Paris mother did it out of fear and Paris accepted it because of her own awakening libido.  But this is more than just the convenience of sex and satisfaction for Billy and more will be revealed in the next installment.

As for Charles and Janie, yes they are going to be each other's protector.  Charles has been wandering around lost with no purpose and little self esteem for years.  He's always questioned his own manhood and his hatred of Billy stemmed from his perceiving Billy to be all he ever wanted to be.

More is coming up later on this morning....

Reviewer: peachmartini Signed
Date: August 06 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

I guess the reality of the marriage is not only starting to hit our couple, but their familues too.  The reaction of the clerk and other shoppers was very much a sign of the times and could have happened anywhere in America. I think that Millie being a  mature black woman, gave her a lot more insight in to what to expect from the rest of the world. Not to say, she doesn't fear reprecussions for her daughter, Billy and both families. Like Paris, she is not ashamed of the marrying couple, but she would rather not stir the pot. Having rarely, if ever been a victim of any type of prejudice, this is going to hit Billy's family like a sucker punch to the groin. I liked that Candace not only proudly acknowledge her son, but defended her future daughter-in-law. I wonder how well she will continue to handle the criticism of Billy and Paris' relationship and her parenting skills?



Author's Response:

Candace was shaken by this encounter.  However, she's not going to reject her only son or his choice because she loves him so much.  She's just afraid of what may happen.  thanks for the review!

Reviewer: peachmartini Signed
Date: August 08 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 10]
Summary:

When everything else fails, always remember that the last thing to rely on...

 

 

Is your vehiclele. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Lonely Highways
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 500
Read Count: 757
Published: July 18 2013
Updated: July 18 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Just Not Worth It

I guess the good doctor just found a cure for heartbreak.

Reviewer: peachmartini Signed
Date: July 18 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

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A collection of romantic/erotic short stories based on black women and the men that loves them.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5911
Read Count: 4806
Published: August 05 2013
Updated: August 07 2013


Title: Chapter 3: Baby, I'm Home (chapter II)

I love happy couples making time for each other..... more like this please.

Reviewer: peachmartini Signed
Date: August 09 2013

Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

A response to the "How Do You Like Your Coffee" prompt.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: None
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Challenges: How Do You Like Your Coffee?
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 750
Read Count: 1154
Published: August 12 2013
Updated: August 12 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my goodness!



Author's Response:

Lol.

Reviewer: peachmartini Signed
Date: August 13 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 47]
Summary:

Brody has been in love with his best friend Jordan for years. Technically she is bi sexual so he is hoping he has a shot. She's only dated women since forever so the shots in hell but he is willing to take it. Because he has 2 weeks to get her to give them a chance at being more than friends. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Homosexuality, Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 11584
Read Count: 4561
Published: January 13 2014
Updated: June 11 2019


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm loving this already.

Reviewer: peachmartini Signed
Date: January 13 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.