Penname: Aleta [Contact]

Real name: Arianna

Member Since: March 30 2013

Membership status: Member

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Farewell by intellectual titmouse
Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 419]
Summary:

Farewell

 

She didn't choose this Life. He chose It for her. And for that, he must pay the Ultimate Price.

Exceedingly Dope Banner by my homeskillet Valhalla.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Horror, Mystery, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 32
Completed:No
Word count: 92749
Read Count: 99692
Published: January 24 2011
Updated: March 20 2014

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Title: Chapter 32: Sullen Victory

you all kinds of wrong for leaving us another damn cliffy!  but so happy you are back with us again!

 Reviewer: Aleta Signed
Date: March 21 2014
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The Demon Seed by Happy2bNappy
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 276]
Summary:

The Demon Seed

Babies should be a blessing. But not all of them are.

Kickass banner by Missus James

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Horror
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 28219
Read Count: 50618
Published: March 29 2011
Updated: September 04 2013

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Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

hmmm lawd..have mercy...(uttered in true old southern Mother Johnson mumbles)

....NOW we know why its called the one eyed snake! Damn thang will "charm" you to your grave!..Oh but what a way  to go!!!...(said in true shameless Harlem Hussy Hustler shout)  : )   I'm a gemini ..I cant help it..and its your damn story's fault..girl What happens next?!

 Reviewer: Aleta Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: September 04 2013
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I dont appreciate you turning me into a straght feen!!  By the way love that you've cast Chloe K as Ana..love her and can so see her being that Bad Ass Banshee!

 

But I'mma need Ms Charly to start kickin some ass soon...pretty please?..

 Reviewer: Aleta Signed starstar
Date: September 04 2013
Right Place, Wrong Time by Bryleigh Lisette
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 101]
Summary:

Leslie West is a quiet beautiful southern belle who just moved up to New York, Blake Caldron is a fashion guru who can't seem to keep his eyes off of a new church attendee. Due to certain circumstances he needs to watch from a far... But for how long?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 28720
Read Count: 33057
Published: August 14 2011
Updated: December 31 2013

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Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- Time in Italy

one word:   DDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYUUUUUUMMMMMM

 

you are a wonderful storyteller, but gurl you have a GIFT for character casting.

 

Sho'nuff

 Reviewer: Aleta Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: August 30 2013
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7- Back in the NY Groove

i KNEW it!!!! DAYUM DAYUM DAYUM!

this is hurting my heart! my girl Les has her career and future set, white chocolate walks in steals half her soul AND breaks her heart! Imported Italian nutella struts up stirs her lust with his torn brooding dominant alpha ass and damn near wrecks ms kitty! now we find white chocolate about to have a mini me with a woman he cannot stand!

My girl I am sending you my therapy bills after the next chapter!

Keep it up!!!  HOOKED!

 Reviewer: Aleta Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: August 30 2013
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8- No BS

why are you committed to giviing me high blood pressure?! she said yes?!

 

please give Les a sidekick, best sistah friend to talk her thru all this Effery!

 Reviewer: Aleta Signed
Date: August 30 2013
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15- Dilemma

ah hell, imported italian chocolate is crazy as hell, isn't he?  I KNEW his ass was TOO fine to be true!

 

Damn x3!!

 Reviewer: Aleta Signed starstar
Date: August 30 2013
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17- Feel It In The Air

what?! CLIFFY?! You aint right!!

But I am glad Miss Leslie getting her sistah souljah on....

 Reviewer: Aleta Signed starstarstar
Date: August 30 2013
ME&U by Elizablu
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 586]
Summary:

 

 

Mal has wanted her since the first night they met. CoCo has been fighting her instant attraction from day one. Will past dirty deeds keep these two from the one thing they both need...each other.

DISCLAIMER: All publically recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. (ME!!) The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

ME&U is an original work of fiction please do not copy or post this story to any other websites.

ME&U © 2011 by C.E. Givens (Elizablu)

###DUE TO A FUCKING THIEF KALANI ZOLDYCK, I TOOK MY STORIES DOWN###



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Kitten's Bed & Bath
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 9674
Read Count: 127254
Published: September 02 2011
Updated: September 22 2014

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Title: ME&U

I heart you.... And Linny is my spirit animal.

 

Yay! Papa Jet bout to handle  thangs!

 Reviewer: Aleta Signed
Date: July 21 2013
Mother of the Heir by Asia Ralaia Schiegoh
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 117]
Summary:

mother of the heir

 

"My ascension to Hell is far from what you're after; the birth of the End of Days is hardly suited for the faint of heart. Even if it was my fate from a life before this one. No one teahes you how to trust yourself in times of uncertainty. Nor do they warn you about the power of your own vulnerability. The worst part is knowing too late that you're never whole until a vampire has consumed you into the absolute darkness."



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Horror
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 73939
Read Count: 19270
Published: January 27 2012
Updated: May 11 2018

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Title: Chapter 1: Meet the Cast

OMYGOSH!!! Where have you been lovelyOne?! I am WAITING for this to unfold!!! Love the tension! PLLLLEEEEZE stay with it!

 Reviewer: Aleta Signed starstar
Date: October 01 2013
Title: Chapter 6: TWO : Dismal Discourse

Woohoo! You're back!! Great! On with the tale!! 

 Reviewer: Aleta Signed starstar
Date: September 12 2015
Chocolate by HeyokaHeart
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 209]
Summary:

Loki

What happens after Loki falls from the Rainbow Bridge? My first fic EVER. M rating for later chapters.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Original Fiction
Characters: Other
Classification: Alternate Universe, Off Cannon , Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:No
Word count: 49769
Read Count: 40303
Published: April 13 2013
Updated: April 22 2014

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Title: Chapter 21: Medicine

Perfection! A high Loki is an adorable Loki and Can I h ave Terrance by my dragMama too?

 Reviewer: Aleta Signed starstarstar
Date: April 15 2014
Title: Chapter 1: Not Quite Dead

 absolutely adore this paring! loki is fantastically written + i am so drawn into noni's tale as well. please keep this up!! love this journey with these characters!!! you are very talented!!

 Reviewer: Aleta Signed
Date: April 19 2013
Guardian by shyangel
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 140]
Summary:

Kalila is the Guardian or so she is told…whatever that means she's not sure. All she really knows is that it involves a key and the destruction of the world.

Days before her 20th birthday she meets her father and his two best friends. Now her once boring life has become a roller-coaster of mystery, intrigue and romance. It’s nice to finally have a father but what are the feelings she holds for he father's friends Marcus and Caine? Will they live long enough to find out?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Fantasy, Friendship, Romance, Science Fiction , Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: End of the World, repent!
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 23156
Read Count: 9549
Published: May 04 2013
Updated: January 16 2014

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Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7- First Taste of Freedom

OMG you got me hooked!!!!!   Fantastic weaving of their stories! please update soon!

 Reviewer: Aleta Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: July 17 2013
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Sasha: The Wallflower by sha2011
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1032]
Summary:

   

 

A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196744
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015

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Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

alright now...this is a dang good start.  I am happy that Sasha womaned up and faced her demons and insecurities! Also kudos on seeing Dmitri head on,and not in a letter/email.  Super excited to see your note that this is a transition chapter!  I. AM. HERE. FOR. IT!!!

 

I wanna see some GROWN WOMAN outta Ms. Sasha.  Allow her some international success in her career path and by all means include some grown MAN loving too.  I am game for 5-8years later "reunion"  of sorts...dont mock it happens! Hell I recently was looked up by an ex-fiance a decade later....shoot I look better now than I did at 27! But I digress, I am happy for the catalyst for change!   GREAT JOB!!

 Reviewer: Aleta Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: December 18 2013
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

While I would have loved to see Nik tired ass read for filth I can see the 

growth and maturity in the main characters as more pressing. ; )

but don't test Ms Sasha, people and I would love to see what Ms Lola

Give her two cents. Seriously though great chapter! I'm happy and don't think I didn't notice your little pregnancy scare up in there! Hhhhmm shady! I see you !

 

 Reviewer: Aleta Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 01 2014
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

more groveling is needed.  its a good start but folks dont appreciate the well till the water runs dry, so his ass has got to be put to work.  folk never appreciate things they have not worked for....happy for Dom & D though.

 Reviewer: Aleta Signed starstar
Date: February 17 2014
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

oooooh you so wrong for dat!!!

 Reviewer: Aleta Signed starhalf-star
Date: February 17 2014
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

Welp.

Shit, I can admit it. Sasha grew up and realizes she is lovable and if nobody else does she must love her damn self first! And D while I wanted to see him broken broke limp dicked and curled into fertile position on the floor I like your version of him evolved better. Thank you so much for continuing their story with such maturity grace and sincerity. Oh and girl the sex woo! Jesus be a quicker picker upper lawd! 

 

Please please make me even happier by let thing S&D lay the smack down on his trifling daddy!!! I'll be your best friend!! 

 Reviewer: Aleta Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 06 2014
Sunshine by dannimitch
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 20]
Summary:

You are my sunshine.


My only sunshine.


You make me happy, when skies are grey. 


You'll never know dear, how much I love you.


So please don't take, my sunshine away. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 6337
Read Count: 10551
Published: July 07 2013
Updated: July 12 2013

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

i hope you give Jamie some oracle like power to zap his ass.  I know he was wronged & she will change him, but he needs a black Jesus beatdown!

 

But I love it so far! great job!!

 Reviewer: Aleta Signed
Date: July 17 2013
Tempore Viator by kitten84
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

A stranger stops you on a busy street and hands you a small red box. Inside lies something that gives its owner the power to go back in time. He warns you not to open the box. Do you?

 

Why yes, yes I do!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content
Challenges: Second Chances
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 500
Read Count: 812
Published: July 18 2013
Updated: July 18 2013

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

nice!!! well done! would be interested to see where this goes!

 Reviewer: Aleta Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: August 29 2013
Nikoli by Beastlover 18
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 88]
Summary:

Can a beauty ever truly love a beast?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 15551
Read Count: 72107
Published: August 04 2013
Updated: October 19 2013

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

hell yes !!!! MORE!!!

 Reviewer: Aleta Signed starhalf-star
Date: August 05 2013
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

i know kendra is there for dramatic license but I really need to see Carolina get very dangerous and powerful ..and what is Nikoli's problem?! certuries old yet at times acts like a emotional frat boy! Your best friend/shaman has vision on harm coming to your mate, you get pissy with him instead of formulating plan of attack for mate's protection.  Your empath vampire bride gets "headaches" yet that doesnt seem strange to you? Dude sires nutzo vampiress, said vampiress threatens his beloved mate and warns the hoe instead of ripping her undead heart from her chest?!

yeah i'mma need Nick to get his balls back.  I want Nickoli from Chapter 1 back please and thank you.



Author's Response:

Yes, I'll admitt that Nikoli is very tame considering the fact that he had just rescued Carolina from three people who he didn't even hesitate killing. But there is a reason as to why he hasn't killed Kendra. Everything that he has been keeping from Carolina will be revealed in the next chapter. 

 Reviewer: Aleta Signed starstar
Date: August 29 2013
Hot Brown Beans by WrittenC
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary:

I didn't come to HBB just for the coffee...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Challenges: How Do You Like Your Coffee?
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 2117
Read Count: 1918
Published: August 28 2013
Updated: October 07 2013

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ooooh she a straight ho! An  i aint mad at her! get it gurl!!

This was great! Loved the unexpected twist of the "plain" brown girl + vibrant sexual huntress.  You should do a collection of shorts from p.b.'s point of view.

 

well done.

 Reviewer: Aleta Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: August 30 2013
Adonis by Beastlover 18
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 47]
Summary:

He was exactly the way she designed him...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Fantasy
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Challenges: Made to Order
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 4747
Read Count: 24063
Published: August 29 2013
Updated: October 19 2013

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Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

i'm hooked! damn damn damn!

 Reviewer: Aleta Signed starhalf-star
Date: August 29 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.