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Member Since: April 20 2013

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Welcome to the Family by philipa1234
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 439]
Summary:

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Ellie finds herself living the life that she could only imagine in her dreams. She has graduated from college with a degree in accounting, she is with the man she loves who is just as succesful, if not more than her, and he has just asked her to marry him. What more could a girl ask for? What could go wrong? Everything begins to change once she meets his family and realizes they dont like her. Can this break up their relationship? What is she to do? What about their "family" business? Will their marraige go on? After being on top the only place left to go is down, and Ellie is sure on her way there.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Work in Progress
Series: Mafioso Series
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 50333
Read Count: 89293
Published: May 20 2011
Updated: May 28 2014

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Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Your story was the first I read on this board.. and then you dissapeared so I assumed it was canceled. I'm glad it's not. 

 

Ellie's a better person then me, I wouldve kicked that hussy out if she came into my place talking crazy. Sometimes she's too forgiving. 

 

I know I'm being selfish, but I don't really want Nick at the birth. Maybe, its because he still isnt in my good graces from his previous actions, idk. I feel like something crazy is going to happen soon. 

 Reviewer: Fastidious Signed
Date: May 14 2013
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I forgot to rate :)

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Date: May 14 2013
Home by K Carr
Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 185]
Summary:

Coming home can be harder than staying away sometimes.

Home has now been published on Amazon and there's quite a bit more added from where I had originally ended this story. Hope you all enjoy it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 21
Completed:No
Word count: 21
Read Count: 18591
Published: June 10 2016
Updated: October 06 2016

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Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Glad you updated so soon. I'm glad they are wiling to give it another try. Their family dynamic is refreshing. I'm curious to learn more about the life she lived before she returned. I know she did forensic accounting, but how deep was her relationship with Pierre? 

 Reviewer: Fastidious Signed
Date: June 11 2016
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Amazing Story! I stayed up to read it. Some parts seriously had me in tears. I hope you add again soon. 



Author's Response:

Hi Fastidious,

Thanks for the review and I'm glad you like my story. 

K.

 Reviewer: Fastidious Signed
Date: June 11 2016
The Bones by Smartcooki3
Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 187]
Summary:

The Bones is the sequel to Outlander.

Four years after getting married, Landon and Daphne appear to be happily married. Behind closed doors, the two are struggling with fertility issues that threaten to claim their marriage.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Outlander
Chapters: 29
Completed:No
Word count: 85331
Read Count: 11479
Published: January 08 2020
Updated: November 02 2022

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Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16

Great update. Not gonna lie. Thought it would be longer after this wait. 

 Reviewer: Fastidious Signed
Date: June 26 2021
The Battle for Spock part 3 by Uhura the 9th
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 127]
Summary:

Commander Spock and Lt. Uhura are married, and the Enterprise is on a slow run to Vulcan. What could go wrong?

 

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Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Nyota Uhura (Television)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Uhura/Spock
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 36
Completed:Yes
Word count: 149344
Read Count: 37960
Published: June 04 2020
Updated: October 10 2022

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Saana's Hope

Can't wait for the next update!

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Date: July 17 2020
Forget Me Not by K Carr
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[Reviews - 77]
Summary:

New story



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 50846
Read Count: 3786
Published: October 17 2020
Updated: November 21 2020

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like the story, but it's dragging on a bit too slow and the updates are very short. I will be back after a few have happened, so that I have more to read. 

 Reviewer: Fastidious Signed
Date: October 24 2020

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