Penname: Chocolate Girl [Contact]

Real name: Renee

Member Since: March 03 2009

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*** This story will be removed for editing in preparation for publication. ***

Kendra Dentaris is scared of her luck. At twenty-nine, she's the head graphic designer of a popular gaming website, the brand-new owner of a gorgeous downtown condo, and independent to the bone. And she may be in a relationship that's actually going somewhere. That's if Chase McGuire would stop cheating on her.

According to her best friend Prince, he's totally going to propose. That had to be why he invited her out to a remote village out in western Pennsylvania for the weekend. But Kendra takes a wrong turn and the life she knew before literally disappears.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 48
Completed:No
Word count: 51365
Read Count: 168958
Published: September 28 2010
Updated: August 25 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Intro

I am so glad to see my story bad!!! Yeah!!! Please don't keep us hanging too long.



Author's Response:

i can't promise anything, but i will strongly assure you that i will try. lol

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 14 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 207]
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Shenai always wanted to be with Jeremy but with so many obstacles in her way it was impossible. Now that Jeremy’s father has passed away he’s rushed the next girl that best fit his father description to the altar. Shenai sees her window of opportunity with Jeremy quickly boarding up and wants to take the nails off the boards that are going keep her away from Jeremy forever but she doesn’t have the will to do it. Shenai truly believes after Jeremy is married; her life will be over but little does she know it’s only the beginning of chaotic a life and just maybe she might get what she’s always wanted in the beginning.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 38343
Read Count: 37561
Published: April 21 2011
Updated: February 02 2014


Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

I think she should be with Jeremiah.!maybe if he had spoken up when they were younger things would have been different for him, maybe he would have had a chance with Shania. Please don't let her be pregnant at least not yet. Maybe somewhere down the road when she and Jeremiah build their relationship.

Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 06 2013

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Tara does something she never thought she'd do, save one of the living dead. Now she's being hunted by the Authority. Eric is the only one who can protect her-that's if she agrees to give him what he wants in return.

Takes place during S4E9 Let's Get Out of Here. JUICY LEMONS! Tara/Eric with a little Sam/Tara and Alcide/Tara flirting on the side (just because I can't resist a little Tam and Talcide)



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Tara Thornton
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge, Deep, dark, and mysterious
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:Yes
Word count: 76043
Read Count: 48312
Published: August 28 2011
Updated: September 08 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Stop the Bitch

Nora, is a damn dummy!!!!! I guess this is were both Tara and Eric will have to make a choice as Godric said in their dreams..

Looking forward to the next chapter.. Update soon!!!!

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 04 2012

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Stop the Bitch

I'm so glad you're back! I live this story and I love Tara and Eric together. Please continue with the story. I do believe you are going in the right direction.



Author's Response:

Hi Chocolate Girl:

Thanks so much for your feedback. I truly appreciate it.  I'll hope you'll keep reading and reviewing.

 

 

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 31 2013

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Summary:

 

 

Mal has wanted her since the first night they met. CoCo has been fighting her instant attraction from day one. Will past dirty deeds keep these two from the one thing they both need...each other.

DISCLAIMER: All publically recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. (ME!!) The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

ME&U is an original work of fiction please do not copy or post this story to any other websites.

ME&U © 2011 by C.E. Givens (Elizablu)

###DUE TO A FUCKING THIEF KALANI ZOLDYCK, I TOOK MY STORIES DOWN###



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Kitten's Bed & Bath
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 9674
Read Count: 127254
Published: September 02 2011
Updated: September 22 2014


Title: ME&U

We need a new chapter of two soon! Don't want to start stalking you.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 06 2013

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Summary:

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Sometimes when it comes to family and their issues, a lie is more acceptable than reality.

 

Acceptable Lies is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 93404
Read Count: 94668
Published: December 23 2011
Updated: January 19 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Deception

All good things must come to an end and this is one of the.. Love the ending glad Franklin was got and Albert has decided to stop pursuing Sugar.. I'm glad Albert realizes that nothing good will come from him pursuing Sugar and it will cost him the love of his life.. I'm with Albert on this one.. Take it to the GRAVE!!!! What they dont know won't hurt you or them..

Looking forward to you next story..

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 20 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Deception

I ain't mad at Sugar.. Don't hate the playa hate the game!!!! Sugar used what she had to get what she wanted for her daughter.. She got nothing monetary out of that little tryst with Albert..

 Let's hope Albert learn to put this one time slip behind him and leave it there and when he thinks about tasting some of Sugar's brown sugar he'll go home and lay the pipe down on his wife instead..

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 16 2012

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Deception

Poor Albert his sprung from a taste.. I'm glad Honey was the voice of reason.. Hopefully, Albert will leave well enough alone but I don't see that happening anytime soon.. I think Albert will be Honey's stalker for a while.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 17 2012

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Deception

Okay, my last to reviews didn't post, so I'm going to really keep it short..

Great update!!! Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 15 2012

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Deception

Yay!!!! I love that Suga has someone special in her life, she deserves it and more..

Looking forward to the next chapter.

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Date: December 28 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

 

When rockstar Adam Brand makes a racist remark during a drunken magazine interview, it becomes an international headline.  Within hours his PR Agent concocts the perfect plan to revive his rapidly sinking career before it’s too late, but will Adam be able to pull it off?

 

**** STEREO has been removed for editing, refining and if all goes according to plan, publishing! I couldn't have finished it without all my readers leaving their words and thoughts--even if I didn't always like them--so THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart. <3



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:Yes
Word count: 922
Read Count: 90698
Published: March 24 2012
Updated: August 30 2014


Title: Chapter 1: "My dick is sort of like a white supremacist."

There has to be a way out for Shaun... I don't want her or Adam to get hurt.. She needs to leave Ceclia and her so called advice alone..

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 11 2013

Title: Chapter 1: "My dick is sort of like a white supremacist."

They need to get it on already!!!

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Date: March 16 2013

Title: Chapter 1: "My dick is sort of like a white supremacist."

Shaun should have said "who am I to deny you the pleasure of pleasuring me?" At least that's what I would have said.. I love me some Adam Levine so he could get it anytime, anywhere..

I am not looking forward to the truth coming out but it needs to come out like ASAP so they and work on building a real relationship..

Great update!

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 12 2013

Title: Chapter 1: "My dick is sort of like a white supremacist."

Shaun is getting on my nerve now. She needs to shit or get off the pot. Adam is going to be hurt regardless if she tells him or someone else so might as well woman up and tell him all ready damn!!

Great update

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 01 2013

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The Redtips Wolf clan wrongfully accused of hunting humans on Vampire Lord Jye's land; must give the only maiden of their pack,Sarason as concubine, to save their clan from destruction.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Fantasy, Horror, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 33031
Read Count: 32745
Published: May 31 2012
Updated: August 10 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue~

Awesome update!!!! So glad to see you back and with a great update. 

Looking forward to the next chapter. Hopefully it will be soon.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 24 2013

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Summary:

He loved to see them suffer. The pitiful humans that they desperately need to survive. Oh how she would suffer the girl who was nothing but a twinkling star, and he knew just as good as anyone that stars were never meant to stay. They were destined to fall and look beautiful as there innocence fades away.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 23
Completed:No
Word count: 60375
Read Count: 132358
Published: July 23 2012
Updated: June 18 2014


Title: Chapter 1: The old lion.

I love this story but there is one thing I don't understand why do the princes let the help talk to an treat Clara any old kind of way..  I know they think of her as cattle or someone beneath them but it's not cool at all the way they treat her. They should at least have some fear that if they treat her too badly one of the princes would punish them.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10 2012

Title: Chapter 1: The old lion.

Awesome update!!!

It's good to see Carla standing up for herself and Aza trying to show more emotions towards her.. I think once they both realze Vita is sick they will help him find a way to get better.. I'm not so sure we can trust Vita guard..

Looking forward to the next update.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09 2012

Title: Chapter 1: The old lion.

Someone needs to tell Vita what happened to Carla.. Has he anyone that is truly loyal to him??

Just whan the chapter is getting good it's over.. Bummer!!! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21 2013

Title: Chapter 1: The old lion.

I am so glad to see that I'm not the only one that dislikes the way they man handle Carla and think it's okay.. It's not okay.. Vita needs to find out what happen to Carla and handle it accordingly..

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 22 2013

Title: Chapter 1: The old lion.

When will someone notice that Vita mood swings come with the headaches? Carla really needs to get a backbone for real and stand up to someone. Stop letting the servants treat and talk to her any kind of way.  

Glad you are back looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 30 2013

Title: Chapter 1: The old lion.

I wish the would stop speaking to her that way it's annoying the hell out of me. I don't understand why Carla doesn't say something to Aza or Vita. I don't think Vita would appreciate the way his servants are treating her.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 20 2013

Title: Chapter 1: The old lion.

I'm so sorry to hear what happened to you and your family.. I'm glad to hear that no one was hurt.. I'm sure it will take time to get over this scare.. We'll be here patiently waiting for the next chapter..

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 01 2013

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Summary:

Playboy and U.S. gold metal swimmer, Ryan Lochte had everything he wanted until he saw the one woman he couldn’t live without in teammate and arch rival Michael Phelps’ arms.  Friday Jones was not his type but he wasn’t going to leave London without making her his girl Friday.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1771
Read Count: 718
Published: August 10 2012
Updated: August 10 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Looking forward to the next chapter..

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 12 2012

Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

Nyla Rogers is a 26 year old widow, she has just rrecently begun to live again when she meets handsome Dr. Gavin McKeough. She doesnt feel she'll ever love again. Gavin wants to pick up the peices of her shattered heart will she let him?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:No
Word count: 70273
Read Count: 218397
Published: August 23 2012
Updated: August 29 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Still reading. 



Author's Response:

Keep reading and commenting. It definetly motivates me and some interesting things are coming.

 

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 24 2013

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Summary:

Matt was the love them and leave them type till he met Azalea. She turned the tables on him but not for the reasons he thinks. Will he forgive her when he learns the truth?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 45561
Read Count: 65817
Published: August 25 2012
Updated: June 02 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Is this the latest chapter? I thought I read this chapter last week?



Author's Response:

I am sorry for the confusion. I posted the update then took it down to be edited. 

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.