Penname: Heleana503 [Contact]

Real name: Heleana

Member Since: May 12 2013

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I started writing when i was a kid and just recently started writing up again. I hope you enjoy my stories! 



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COLORLESS by marchpisces92
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Summary:

 Camille Jackson was rejected since birth over her dark skin complexion. She has grown a tough skin and doesn’t get attached to anyone because of how some people have viewed her without even getting to know her. However Camille opens her heart to a baby in need and for the first six months Camille has grown to love the baby as if she were her own. That is until the baby's biological father comes into the picture.

Hiram Whitfield Jr was brought up in one of the most well known Ku Klux Klan families in the south and as the only son he feels the pressure to carry on his family's tradition. After finishing his prison sentence all Hiram wants to do is change his life for the better and be a good father to his child. If that means being disowned by his bigoted family then so be it. Ironically enough Hiram would have never thought that Camille would be the one to be his rock and strength to do so.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 51
Completed:Yes
Word count: 107887
Read Count: 215320
Published: October 09 2014
Updated: October 25 2015

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Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 6

Awesome ! I was waiting to see how they interact while parenting savannah together

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Date: October 15 2014
Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 34

Oh no ! Now they know where they live ! :(

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Date: March 29 2015
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 19

Yaaaaaaaas! Finally moving ! Thank god none of them were seriously hurt . Great job :)

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Date: November 18 2014
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7

Awwwww! It was good to see Hiramn and Savannah one on one . He's a great father so far.

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Date: October 17 2014
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Oooooh i can't wait to see how this co parenting thing is goign to go ! :)

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Date: October 11 2014
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I think its safe to say they should move out of that town hell that state

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Date: October 12 2014
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

I think Camille should tell Hiram about moving and that even though theyre not a couple they are raising a child and they would both benefit from the move

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Date: October 13 2014
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Daaaamn ! This is crazy ! Seems good ! :)

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Date: October 09 2014
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Daaaamn ! This is crazy ! Seems good ! :)

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Date: October 09 2014
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8

The moving topic came up  Yippie ! Hopefully they talk about it a bit more and get this move on the road lol ! Great chapter ! KeEp up the great work ! :)

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Date: October 20 2014
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 9

Smh ! Debbie needs to take a hint and step to the side ! All these klan members lol 

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Date: October 22 2014
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 15

Guuuuuuuuurl ! You scared me ! Laaaaaawd ! I had to go back to the previous chapter to check if anything had happened ! Woooooo! This chapter was strong lol

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Date: November 05 2014
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10

Awww poor Camille ! 

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Date: October 25 2014
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 11

Damn crazy ass people smh

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Date: October 26 2014
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 12

Oh damn ! Shits about to go down ! 

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Date: October 27 2014
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 16

they better start saving up lol

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Date: November 09 2014
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 17

Ooooooh girl hurry ! Im anxious ! Lol

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Date: November 13 2014
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 20

Ooooooh snaps ! Its getting serious ! Theyve admitted thier feelings ! WooHoo

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Date: November 20 2014
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 21

They better get to thinking quickly before the klan finds them 

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Date: November 26 2014
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 22

this was such a precious chapter ! I loved it ! :)

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Date: November 28 2014
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 23

Yaaaaay ! After the calm theres always a storm though huh ?

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Date: December 04 2014
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 24

Awwww poor Camille, She didnt need them anyways ! Im not ready for the bad to bein lol

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Date: December 07 2014
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 28

Poor Savannah ! :( 

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Date: December 30 2014
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 25

This was a powerful chapter ! Hopefully they can gather up enough money to get the heck out of there

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Date: December 15 2014
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 26

Their getting closer and closer to getting the heck out of dodge

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Date: December 22 2014

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