Penname: IndiGrl [Contact]

Real name: Tannistha Gupta

Member Since: June 04 2013

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I love romances with dark skinned heroines....................  :) 




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Sasha: The Wallflower by sha2011
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1032]
Summary:

   

 

A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196744
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015

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Title: Chapter 1: Cast

Way to go Dmitri and Teagan!!! :D 

Teagan cares about Sasha more than I thought and she is not that self absorbed. Actually she does see and understand a lot of feelings in Sasha's minds and Dmitri's eyes... :)

And Dmitri is brave, honest, straight forward and truthful. I am liking him now..... :)

I wish Sasha wakes up in Dmitri's arms....lol  :P

I love the realistic and unpredictable bits of your writing  :D



Author's Response:

Thank you! I am happy you are enjoying the story! More to come.

 Reviewer: IndiGrl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 05 2013
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COLORLESS by marchpisces92
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 857]
Summary:

 Camille Jackson was rejected since birth over her dark skin complexion. She has grown a tough skin and doesn’t get attached to anyone because of how some people have viewed her without even getting to know her. However Camille opens her heart to a baby in need and for the first six months Camille has grown to love the baby as if she were her own. That is until the baby's biological father comes into the picture.

Hiram Whitfield Jr was brought up in one of the most well known Ku Klux Klan families in the south and as the only son he feels the pressure to carry on his family's tradition. After finishing his prison sentence all Hiram wants to do is change his life for the better and be a good father to his child. If that means being disowned by his bigoted family then so be it. Ironically enough Hiram would have never thought that Camille would be the one to be his rock and strength to do so.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 51
Completed:Yes
Word count: 107887
Read Count: 215320
Published: October 09 2014
Updated: October 25 2015

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Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7

 love your story, love Camille, love Hiram and love love Savannah.

i really enjoy reading the times when savannah is together with her mommy and daddy.

i actually read those sunny parts as slowly as a toddler, to make it last :)

Your plot is so good, and your writing so vivid, hey have you thought of printing your story? with a little tweaks here and there i think it would be good enough to publish :)

 

but i personally think that Hiram mourns Priscilla a teeny bit less than a loving husband like him would have....

i mean Hiram knew about his wife's death on june 25th and on july 16th, he is attracted to Camille. Now i understand that camille is adorable, we all love her, but to loving husband who just recently found out about his wife's death....is it possible for him to get attracted to another lady so soon?

i am sure i don't want Priscilla to come in between camille and hiram, but...

if hiram knew about his wife's death while he was in prison, he would have 6 months to know and come to terms with his wife's death. then when he would meet camille on 16th june, his attraction would be much more...sensible?

i would love to know how you feel about this... :)

 

hope i am not intervening, this is your story, and you are doing great! :)

all i can say is thankyou

:)

 Reviewer: IndiGrl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 18 2014
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8

Again, beautiful beyond words :)

 

and thanks for your views pmgayles

 

With tons of thanks to our author

 Reviewer: IndiGrl Signed
Date: October 20 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.