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[Reviews - 629]
Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 286537
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 21

Okay I'm so excited you updated! yay! love this story.

val val val....gurl what are we going to do with you? I feel like this might be it for her. she might just have made it to the bottom. I feel for her but at the same time i'm starting to not anymore. I know its a hard process getting yourself self together especially when your not ready all around(mentally physically and emotionally) but its time for her to do what she has to do. She's going to have to truely seek help. I think val needs to take a step back and start talking to her therapist, tell her dad she doesn't want the promotion, hell maybe even quit her job I know she has to have money saved. Take that money focus on getting herself where she needs to be maybe even go back to school refresher course for gaming build her skills up again. She needs to start from the ground up.

okay enough of my ranting. great update

I really don't know how I feel about Peter I think he's just an ass just because and him and val will always clash so...

But Its good to hear Henry was doing well or atleast thats what he is telling peter only time will tell with these characters but I'm definitely here for the ride!

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Date: December 07 2014

Title: Chapter 31: A/N

No problem do what ya gotta do...can't wait to see how this journey your characters have been on comes full circle. Thanks for sharing this story can't wait to read the revamped chapter.

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Date: October 04 2015

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Summary:

In a world built on blood and violence, where the merciless thrive, falling in love carries with it its own special set of risks.  Never was that truer than for Carter Gerring, an electronics expert with a unique skill-set.  Carter is hired by Larry Hooks, a ruthless underworld kingpin with a number of potential legal problems he wants to disappear.  While eliminating the various forms of incrimination Hooks and his men create, Carter finds himself falling for the boss’s daughter.

 Tamryn Hooks is the much-loved daughter Larry Hooks would gladly kill to protect.  For most of her life, she’s been shielded from many of the harsh realities of her father’s business.  Then, a seemingly innocent favor for her doting father places her in the middle of an impossible situation she sees no way out of.  As Tamryn searches for a solution and an escape, her dilemma is further complicated by an ongoing feud with her sister and her deepening feelings for Carter, the unassuming intellectual with a dark reputation.   

 When Carter and Tamryn find themselves entrenched in the mire of her father’s criminal enterprise, the secrets they and others keep, and their need for one another, will their forbidden love be their saving grace?  Or will it be the Achilles’ heel that ultimately leads to their demise? 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 70686
Read Count: 14874
Published: June 06 2014
Updated: February 01 2015


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I choose D! I want to see what you have up your sleeve. Love your writing so I'm ready for it... Do your thing girlie!

Loved this chapter can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

Thanks Jetzero!  So glad you're enjoying my little twisted tale.

Reviewer: jetzero Signed
Date: February 01 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 62]
Summary:

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The trials we survive, the endurance, the scars that we bare both mentally and physically is what makes us survivors. Enduring one tragedy after the other, moving past the pain to reach a higher existence. To go beyond our statutory limitation, to go beyond our self and reveal the being beyond the flesh. This is what survival is all about. 

However this is easier said than done. Nonetheless she will endure, she will feel agony, pain, loss, devastation. She will be wronged, abused, and hated. She will be loved, cherished, and abandoned. She will fight. She will maim. She will kill. Then and only then can she call herself a Survivor.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Horror, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 74621
Read Count: 9858
Published: September 23 2014
Updated: May 23 2016


Title: Chapter 10: The Road to Hell...

Uh oh! Why do I feel like Nava  is about to make a deal with the devil. Love this story can't wait to see what will happen next!

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Date: April 09 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

SCRUBALICIOUS: one day her prince will come (The Scrub Series Book 2) by [Griffin, Elizabeth]



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 15061
Read Count: 2917
Published: November 27 2014
Updated: January 26 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

love this so far! can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the support.  I hope you enjoyed the update.

Reviewer: jetzero Signed
Date: November 28 2014

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Summary:

He was a bad boy who was used to getting whatever he wanted.

She was the good girl who refused to bow down to his ways.

Together they clashed.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 9292
Read Count: 10871
Published: December 01 2014
Updated: March 16 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i like this so far. can't wait to see where this story goes!

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Date: December 01 2014

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Summary:

You can pick your friends. You can pick your nose. But you can't pick your family.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:No
Word count: 87982
Read Count: 45723
Published: April 06 2015
Updated: February 14 2019


Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Great update! Good teaser! Loved being in Matt's brain when he became aware of his feeling for Shyla. Can't wait to see what happens next between these two.

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Date: July 21 2017

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Loved the update.I was happy that Matt had a chance to speak with Shyla's mother...it shed some light on her and her personality more.

Abby is hilarious and Shyla better listen to Abby and go and get that D! Lol!

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Date: December 30 2018

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Summary:

Sequel to "Love, God & Ultimatums"



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:No
Word count: 227600
Read Count: 78660
Published: July 03 2015
Updated: May 09 2021


Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Rite of Possession

Beautiful, intense, and real. Wow just an amazing chapter what a wonderful way to truely bring together these two characters.

Very well written I don't even 

Know what to really say except thank you for this update and sharing for your talent.

Reviewer: jetzero Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 07 2016

Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the End (The Last Supper Part II)

I don't know how to feel right now because I'm feeling so much. Superb chapter. I feel for these two. Diya needs a break from her family like her sisters be doing way too much just to get on their dad's good side like they aren't grown women. Goodness don't get me started on her parents. Its crazy to me that in a family that big not one of her family members stood up for her or were willing to talk things through.They all basically let the dad through a tantrum and try to bully his way to get what he wants.Brandon and Diya have a lot to work on and through with and without the other.Communication being the biggest thing here.They both need to lay it on the line.Hopefully this road for them will lead them to happiness.

Once again amazing work I love these intense scenes in the story because you r writing makes me feel like I'm right there with these characters in those moments.

Reviewer: jetzero Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 30 2018

Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Who You Love

Gurl! I could not be Diya right now! I would be actin like a straight fool like "who?what?when?where?and why?" wow she needs to be like you gots to go Brandon. Bye!

He shouldn't have played Diya like this.Questioning her feelings for him and where he stands in her heart its like bruh that day with her family in the end she came home to you like she essentially chose him and she went with her heart.

Marisol she knows that she has Brandon and she keeps manipulating every situation with Brandon because she likes that attention. To a degree I believe what Oscar was saying about her and I think Brandon's mom was hinting to Diya about Brandon taking on other peoples worries even if they don't diserve it.

Brandon needs to look at himself and check his feeling because I don't think this situation will no longer allow him to have his cake and it eat it too.He' sbeing dragged along by Marisol but to be honest maybe he likes that kind of drama.

Diya needs a diyacation and to peace out on these folks and take care of herself because she has been through it with Brandon and her whole family.

Great chapter as always.I love the detail you put into your work and the characters. You got me in my feelings! Can't wait for the next chapter because the cliffy is killing me.



Author's Response:

Why Brandon questions Diya's feelings for him and is still involved with Marisol should become clearer in the next couple chapters--not that it'll make things better for him and Diya.  Katherine knows all the tea and is willing to spill it under the right circumstances.  You'll see.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, jetzero!!!  I'll try not to keep you waiting too long.

Reviewer: jetzero Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 15 2019

Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Who I Thought I Knew

So good! Can't wait to see how this plays out. I really wish Brandon could lay everything all out at once even tho its hard for him to do so... I strongly suggest therapy and. Then he can truely open his eyes to his past and especially where Marisol is concerned.They have to find a way through this they are both keeping walls up around their hearts but they are only hurting themselves.  They are still keeping each other at a distance playing tug a war / give and take with their hearts and one another. Wow they both have a journey on their hands both individually and together.

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Date: August 21 2019

Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Them or Me

Brandon, Brandon, Brandon...I can't. Brandon has been real out of pocket these last few chapters. I feel like it's time for them to split and grow on their own. Like I feel like everyone is doin my gurl Diya wrong and not listening to her. Brandon's mom and Rafe are telling her to be careful with Brandon's heart and Rafe acts like she is suppose to be Brandon's fixer but he's a grown man who  I feel like is consumed with his feeling about his past and marisol's needs. And he doesn't really see Diya's. Like he keeps bringing up her family and I'm like but she is with you though brah she choose you like would he truely do the same? They need time apart because Diya is going to have to figure out if she can be with Brandon when he's Marisol's "fixer" because until he really take a look at his relationship with Marisol from the outside he will continue to want to be the one to fix things for her. It kills me that no one in his family see how he doesn't give his all to Diya but expects her to that for him. He opens up then falls back to doing the bare minimum with regards to Diya. He needs to stop this running from his problems mess that he does. Great chapter as always I'm obviously in my feels over Brand and Di.



Author's Response:

Wonderful insight, jetzero. Katherine and Rafe are blinded by loyalty and fear; and, to be honest, so is Brandon. He's hung up on his friendship with Marisol and Diya staying behind the night of the family dinner disaster, but doesn't seem to recognize that Diya's refusal to side with her family is her chosing him, at least as far as the De la Roys are concerned. He sees them as an ongoing threat to ther relationship, just as Diya sees Marisol.

It's a mess, and destined to get messier. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing, jetzero!

Reviewer: jetzero Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 31 2020

Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Hell Hath...

Whoa! This chapter right here gurl. This was a lot for my heart but I must commend you on your writing this chapter. It deals with so many heavy subjects but you did an amazing job with the scenes as they played out. The details and the way you painted the scene with gramps and Tyler along with Katherine and Gary were so well done that it was like watching a movie. I wonder how this will play out with Brandon now or even Diya's family if they find out about the assault. Can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

Thank, jetzero! Despite the dark subject matter, this review does my heart good : )

If either family finds out what happened, things will get exponentially worse for both Brandon and Diya. Loose ends like Katherine and Zeria make it more likely than not, as we may soon find out.

Update posted.

 

Reviewer: jetzero Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 06 2020

Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - Leave of Absence

So good can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks jetzero! I'll try not to keep you waiting too much longer.

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Date: March 26 2021

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Summary:

Follow the story of Luciana Esther Carter who is just another girl conditioned by the "she is better than me" mentality that plagues so many young females in the 21st century.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 34
Completed:Yes
Word count: 67208
Read Count: 141499
Published: August 17 2015
Updated: November 24 2015


Title: The Untitled Girl

Love this story. Both of these characters are so young I would love to see them grow maybe a sequel??? Very good writing a lovely story. It's definitely a fav of mine! I hate to see it go in a couple of days. But you have gained a new reader.can't wait to read more from you.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and I definitely do agree with characters being so young - we'll just have to see what happens :-P

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Date: August 21 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 458]
Summary:

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(Chapter 19,  20, & Epilogue uploaded as of 12/19/2018)


Growing up in a southern town like Glenmount, Alabama was never easy for Mercy Stovall especially if your personal demon eventually grow up to be 6'4'' and over 200 lbs. Then one night at a Halloween party, everything changed. It all started with one spanking and spiraled downward from there.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Kink, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:Yes
Word count: 73730
Read Count: 113592
Published: November 03 2015
Updated: December 19 2018


Title: Chapter 6: Open Seas and Olive Branches

Loved this story the first time around can't wait to see where you take it this time! I'm ready!

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Date: November 03 2015

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Summary:

Derek Walker was not interested in surrendering his playa's card. His friends were falling like flies but he'd be damned if he was going down that road. He liked his life. He got to take pictures of beautiful women all day long. He had his pick of models, celebrities, and debutantes. His family loved him and he had great friends. Why in the world would he sacrifice that to wake up besides one woman every morning? He'd been repeating this mantra since his senior year in college. Hell, since the day his cousin brought that red-haired witch to a family dinner when he was in the 10th grade. Then . . . she got engaged and everything changed.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Chi -Town Shenanigans
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 12722
Read Count: 11808
Published: April 13 2016
Updated: May 02 2016


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Good chapter. I liked reading where Derek's head is at with Chloe's engagement. Can't wait to read the flashbacks and find out what really went down with those two!

Reviewer: jetzero Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 17 2016

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Ahh! I'm super excited to read Chloe and Derek's story. So far so good lovin the this first chapter can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks Jetzero! These two wouldn't leave me alone:-)

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Date: April 13 2016

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

I loved Derek's mom and the whole family and I can't wait to see what miss Jackie Walker plans for her son and Chloe. This is going to be a ride especially with Derek not acknowledging his feelings. Amazing chapter as always!

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Date: May 02 2016

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Summary:

 

Sometimes people are beautiful. Not in looks. Not in what they say. Just in what they are.     




Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 36570
Read Count: 15084
Published: July 15 2017
Updated: September 30 2017


Title: Chapter 3: No Regrets, No More Subtlety

Raeann really put it on Johnny! That scene was too cute but I hope they didn't get hurt when Johnny fainted, that poor boy didn't know what to do. Lol! Lovin this version of your story! Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

LOL! He tried to hold on but it just became too much for him. He went down and took her with him so we'll see how that ended! ;)

Reviewer: jetzero Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 24 2017

Title: Chapter 5: He Finally Snapped

So I had read this earlier but didn't have time to comment, plus I was taken aback by John's father.I understand that he feels like John needs some tough love but there's a different way of going about it. I think maybe that's the only way he knows how to show tough love but I feel like he as a parent needs to relearn his son...if that makes since.His son went through some form of trauma at a young age and its still getting to his teenage mind.Both parents need to look into alternatives on how to bring Johnny out of his shell.

Any who I did really like this chapter, I liked see the different aspects of his family life. Hopefully this can be a turning point for John as an individual and for his family as a whole.

 

I can't wait for Little to find out that John has no memory of the kisses or her spilling the beans about her true feeling!



Author's Response:

He was kind a little out of line and he really took it there. Garrett is so strong and in your face and that's not always good. He probably crossed the line but there is a reason for that! Stay tuned. ;)

Reviewer: jetzero Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 20 2017

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Summary:

Daphne Gregory is on the run. She's looking for a place to lay low until things calm down back home. When she lands in Oklahoma, the last thing she expects to find is a friend in resident playboy Landon Phelps.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Outlander
Chapters: 27
Completed:Yes
Word count: 53311
Read Count: 22077
Published: November 15 2017
Updated: October 03 2019


Title: Chapter 14: May 2011: Wheelhouse

Aww I really like this story and these two characters that you have created. They are just too stinkin cute! Keep up the good work and I can't wait to see what's next for them!

Reviewer: jetzero Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 26 2018

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

A werebear/werewolf story



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 18877
Read Count: 8408
Published: April 08 2018
Updated: July 28 2020


Title: Chapter 4: EXILE

Wow, I haven't been on here in awhile and I almost missed this story of yours. I have fell in love with this story. It looks like your two main characters are going to have a journey ahead of them...channing learning to live without his mate and Ursula learning her own strength mentally, emotionally, and physically. I here for it all the way! Can't wait to see what you have coming next!

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Date: April 26 2018

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Summary:

The Bones is the sequel to Outlander.

Four years after getting married, Landon and Daphne appear to be happily married. Behind closed doors, the two are struggling with fertility issues that threaten to claim their marriage.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Outlander
Chapters: 29
Completed:No
Word count: 85331
Read Count: 11478
Published: January 08 2020
Updated: November 02 2022


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 6

Good update for sure. I'm interested in what kind of journey this will be for Daphne and Landon. Especially with everything they had been through and the stress Landon is facing at work.

Reviewer: jetzero Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 07 2020

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