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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 164]
Summary:

In the small southern town of Perry, Mississippi, an unlikely pair get much more than they bargained for when they fall madly in love.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 24408
Read Count: 54408
Published: April 27 2014
Updated: November 27 2014


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three

I love this already, I like Charlie and I'm glad she's giving him a hard time. Make him work for it, because it shouldn't be that easy to get the goods especially, in that racist ass town. I can't wait to read more, update soon. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! I agree with you completely that Charlie should have her guard up, especially in the beginning. And I'm glad you caught on to what I'm trying to do as far as making Reese work for her "goods." :)

Reviewer: RAPTUSMIND Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 03 2014

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Damn...that was so steamy, I want to kill Charlie for stoping him. I mean I'm not that kinda girl either but damn if I would of stop him from putting it on me. That man is sexy as hell, lard I got chills. I can't wait for more of this update soon.



Author's Response:

Lol I'm glad you enjoyed their scene together!

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Date: May 09 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six

Damn I think I'm falling for Reese too lol, more please.

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Date: May 15 2014

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 296]
Summary:

Sally McDonald is not who anyone thinks. Her life is filled with secrets. Some she doesn't even know about. But when Storm Monsello sees the terrified girl one night, he never expects how much her secrets would reveal the dark actions of the people he trusted the most.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Character Death, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 43
Completed:No
Word count: 133222
Read Count: 423603
Published: September 21 2014
Updated: April 26 2020


Title: Chapter 10: Fighting A Lost Battle

Wow....so it looks like Storm couldn't take it anymore...he basically said fuck it...literally 😉 

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Date: February 16 2015

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:


Sequel to The Chozen;


Years after the start of the end, the Undead still walked amongst the living. Mutated, they became a tougher force to eradicate, but they were no longer the only threat. While Haven's Cove was dismantled, their secrets hid within the walls of the new government and their plans were in full force. 


 


Some people were born to be a hero, some just stumbled upon the role, however we were never given a choice. We all had a role, a place connected to the cure. If Karen is the Doctor, Jasper became the Carrier, and I was made the Chozen, then who was the Rouge...


 


Photo's not mine; belongs to Kubickiof Deviantart. 


 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Horror
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 26821
Read Count: 38021
Published: October 03 2014
Updated: January 16 2015


Title: Chapter 3: Am I Not Human?

Holy crap this is good. So celest's baby is infected and not her? I don't know if that's a good or bad thing but I need to know who is the father? I can't remember if u told us or not.... Anyway I'm so enjoying this story please continue.

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Date: October 13 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I'm so ready for your come back. Awesome start, I can't wait for more. 

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Date: October 07 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 12]
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Summary: Modern Love Story
Zane was just hitting his stride in the modeling world. He had good friends and family and he enjoyed being able to support himself. However he didn't have one inkling of how hard it was to maintain happiness and good fortune in a world of sycophants and envious frenemies until that fateful night. Yet on that same night he discovered that there were still good people in the world, one person in particular in whom he may have found paradise. Although both of them have their struggles they will soon discover through passion and turmoil how to make love thrive in a modern world.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Erotica, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 9914
Read Count: 4145
Published: October 14 2014
Updated: October 29 2014


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

They're so cute, I can't wait to read more.

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Date: October 19 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 95]
Summary:

 

 

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Joss just knows this summer will change her life... If she can manage to tolerate her bunk leader 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff, Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 14449
Read Count: 16593
Published: November 08 2014
Updated: May 06 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Camp Outlook

When are u gunna update, I'm dying to read more. I love these two, their sweet and hot at the same time. I also need it after reading a story that made me want to scratch my eyes out, only this story can keep me sane lol. 

Reviewer: RAPTUSMIND Signed
Date: March 14 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 45]
Summary:

Who knew Montana had so many temptations?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 5577
Read Count: 5082
Published: June 21 2015
Updated: June 23 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok 1. These guys have no chill around Camilla 2. I hope this is not a love triangle 3. I'm hoping Camilla can have both men because first guy and sawyer sound hot as fuck. 4. UPDATE now now NOW!!!! 5. PLEASE 

Reviewer: RAPTUSMIND Signed
Date: June 21 2015

Title: Chapter 2: Cast

Damn girl, perfect casting... And who is this Adam looking fine af.. Still waiting for that update. And don't apologize anyone with a brain knows this is a fictional story with FANTASIES. RL boy would of got fucked up putting his hands in a black woman's panties lmao. I love where your going, don't let anyone stop your creativity. 

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Date: June 22 2015

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

💦💧💦💦👍🏾💀💀💀💀 damnnnnnnn sawyer is hot af... and Adam emmmm I want me some Adam. Girly gave up the panties hella quick lmao. Superb update... Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: RAPTUSMIND Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 24 2015

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