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[Reviews - 73]
Summary:

At the Chicago Day Times, columnist Maxine Baker goes through the same routine everyday and wants a change. She really wasn't expecting murder. New shoes or a cute guy sure, but not murder....



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Mystery
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 11989
Read Count: 41670
Published: June 02 2010
Updated: September 19 2012


Title: Chapter 2: Character Pics

Love the cast pics.

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Date: June 03 2010

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting start.

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Date: June 03 2010

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow, is the killer apart of the staff and watching Maxie??? She better watch out before she gets hurt!!! If she does, she has no one to blame but herself.

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Date: June 05 2010

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 60]
Summary:

 

A'isha is a fashion designer by trade. Though she is in a business filled with superficial spoiled brats and air heads she is different. At 5’3 tall and what most would call a plus size girl she is far from the norm in her line of business, a tulip amongst roses. She shy’s away from the spot light and always has a kind word for everyone she meets her beauty shines from an inner light that refuses to be extinguished.

Elton is a prominent plastic surgeon. Making money from the insecurities of women and men alike in A’ishas line of business has been his way of life for many years. In every person he meets he can spot their flaws in an instant, but meeting A’isha changes his life. Opening his eyes to the possibility of someone who didn’t need to be changed in any way, someone dare he say it perfect.

When the two meet sparks fly and lives are changed forever.

 (The Banner is a temp until I can make something better. I just wanted to give the reader an idea of the characters I have in mind.)



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 4484
Read Count: 18771
Published: June 14 2010
Updated: November 19 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Me likey.

Author's Response:

Yay!!!

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Date: June 15 2010

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Me likey!! More please.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter, sorry for the long wait.

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Date: June 14 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 150]
Summary:

 

Natasha Roberts is a paediatrician with a healing touch and warm smile at 30 years of age, she is a beautiful woman with a broken spirit which she keeps hidden. When with her group of friends she is the listner, understander and the one her friends depend on for all the answers. Her secret is she that is unable to have children which is the reason her ex-husband gave her for their divorce, she lives to heal children even if it reminds her of what she can never have.

Angelo Luciano Salvatore is a mob boss and the head of the Salvatore Crime Family. He likes to think of himself as a business man when most would call him a ruthless bastard. The day his wife died he become a heartless shell who begins to neglect his son turning to his business for comfort. Until his son is taken to the hospital for a simple check up and is found to have the very disease that killed his mother Polycystic kidney disease. which in time would have killed him if not for Natasha who falls in love with the Christopher’s loving soul and finds herself as a match to donate one of her own kidneys to save his life. When Angelo meets Natasha he is cold and hurtful , Natasha in turn gives him a piece of her mind. Hands on her hips her eyes spitting fire she tells him off then walks away leaving Angelo to reflect on her words and the beautiful woman that Saved his son and made him whole once again.

 (The Banner is a temp until I can make something better. I just wanted to give the reader an idea of the characters I have in mind.)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 4521
Read Count: 11986
Published: June 14 2010
Updated: November 19 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Me likey!!! Yay!!! More please.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, Im glad you enjoyed the story thus far.

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Date: June 15 2010

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

LOVE IT!!! More please.

Author's Response:

 thank you for the review. I hope you enjoy the new chapter, sorry for the long wait.

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Date: June 14 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 172]
Summary: Connie thought she wanted revenge on her cheating husband. She got more than she bargained for.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 995
Read Count: 14798
Published: July 07 2010
Updated: July 07 2010


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved Connie's style. Brice was definitely a DAWG!!! He didn't deserve her.

Author's Response:

Brice definitely didn't deserve Connie. I say good riddance to bad rubbish! lol

Thanks for leaving a comment!

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Date: July 09 2010

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 59]
Summary:

International model Gia Campbell is tired of fighting Liz Webber for the attention of her love Nicholas. One fateful night of defiance will change her life forever and give her the possibility of a new love. Will she surrender to the power of Fate?

Carly never married Sonny. Liz has had affairs with Sonny, Jason, Nickolas, and Lucky. Taggart and Gia’s mother live in another town. I still don't like Robin, Sam, or Liz but I won't kill any of them off but that may change.



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, General Hospital
Characters: Gia Campbell
Classification: Alternate Universe, General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 24545
Read Count: 16007
Published: July 24 2010
Updated: March 20 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Me likey.

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Date: July 25 2010

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Loving this story so far.

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Date: July 25 2010

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

That was such a sweet update. Loved it !!!

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Date: July 27 2010

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Loved it!!! Mr Cassidine is gonna get it now. He's such a sicko.

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Date: August 12 2010

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Definitely a lovely surprise. More please.

Author's Response:

Thank you baha_malo. Almost done with next chapter.

 

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Date: July 17 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 57]
Summary:

 

Conceived on one planet. Raised on another. Who would have ever thought an alien of our own would be the one to help save planet Earth?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Fantasy, Inspirational, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Graphic Violence, Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 35
Completed:Yes
Word count: 54355
Read Count: 10338
Published: July 31 2010
Updated: August 01 2010


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Love me some Nasir! Real funny!

Author's Response: I luvs him too. tee-hee! Thanks for leaving a comment.

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Date: July 31 2010

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Definitely tugged at my heartstring. So sad that both of them died but happy Xander lived. Loving this story so far.

Author's Response: Thanks for the continual feedback, Baha_Malo. It is sooooo appreciated. As for this chapter, I already told ya how broke up I was about them dying. Had to walk away from the computer for a while. lol. I know. I can be quite the softy at times. tee-hee.

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Date: July 31 2010

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Me likey!!!

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you likey, Baha_Malo. You rock! :)

Thanks for being the first to leave a comment on this story.

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Date: July 31 2010

Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

Roni was determined to get her man but she saw in the end that it wasn't meant to be and that Afua was the better woman after all. Glad she had the grace to know when to stop fighting for Xander. Hope she finds another to love.

Author's Response: Afua was definitely a better fit for Xander's life than Roni. I'm glad the short Katanian wisely took a step back as well, lest Afua really show her claws. lol. Thanks for the comment.

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Date: August 01 2010

Title: Chapter 35: Extra Stuff

This story was so interesting that I was determined to finish it and I did eventhough it took me most of the day. Thanks again for sharing this adorable tale. I absolutely loved it!!!! Look forward to reading from you again in the future.

Author's Response:

WOWWWWWW!!!!!

You finished it all in one day?! Kudos to you for such dedication. I feel honored that you spent so much of your time reading my work. And that you actually enjoyed the experience. Wow again! And THANK YOU immensely for providing such wonderful feedback along the way. 

I look forward to hearing from you again in the future. Be blessed, Baha_Malo!

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Date: August 01 2010

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Great job of writing this story and I'm so happy you decided to share. Awesome story so far and I'm loving it.

Author's Response: Each new comment I get from you, Baha_Malo, makes me smile even wider. :D

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Date: August 01 2010

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary:

 

               Ghosts

A Supernatural Story

He wondered if he loved her, if he was even capable of loving her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1028
Read Count: 4497
Published: August 02 2010
Updated: August 02 2010


Title: Chapter 1: Ghosts

Not bad. Loved the short. Hope you write more. Thanks for sharing!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading I'm glad that you enjoyed it :)

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Date: August 02 2010

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 21]
Summary:

Simone always tried to help people out when they were at their lowest. When her flat mate and friend, Charlie, was fired she did whatever she could financially until he got a job. Simone has to juggle her job at London’s top model agency, her non-existent love life, and dealing with Charlie’s unemployment. Charlie tries his best to pay Simone back for her gratitude. One argument about the rent changes their relationship forever.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 5297
Read Count: 4744
Published: September 19 2010
Updated: October 15 2010


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hmmm, interesting...looks like they have the hots for each other. Yay!!!

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Date: October 04 2010

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great update.

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Date: September 27 2010

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Interesting start.

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Date: September 20 2010

Retired
Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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Summary:

*** This story will be removed for editing in preparation for publication. ***

Kendra Dentaris is scared of her luck. At twenty-nine, she's the head graphic designer of a popular gaming website, the brand-new owner of a gorgeous downtown condo, and independent to the bone. And she may be in a relationship that's actually going somewhere. That's if Chase McGuire would stop cheating on her.

According to her best friend Prince, he's totally going to propose. That had to be why he invited her out to a remote village out in western Pennsylvania for the weekend. But Kendra takes a wrong turn and the life she knew before literally disappears.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 48
Completed:No
Word count: 51365
Read Count: 168947
Published: September 28 2010
Updated: August 25 2014


Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Hmmm, makes me wonder if its really Dax's baby.

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Date: December 25 2010

Title: Chapter 1: Intro

Hmmm, interesting start. Can't wait to see where this story goes.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 28 2010

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.