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Penny with a Hole in It by intellectual titmouse
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Summary:

*** This story will be removed for editing in preparation for publication. ***

Kendra Dentaris is scared of her luck. At twenty-nine, she's the head graphic designer of a popular gaming website, the brand-new owner of a gorgeous downtown condo, and independent to the bone. And she may be in a relationship that's actually going somewhere. That's if Chase McGuire would stop cheating on her.

According to her best friend Prince, he's totally going to propose. That had to be why he invited her out to a remote village out in western Pennsylvania for the weekend. But Kendra takes a wrong turn and the life she knew before literally disappears.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 48
Completed:No
Word count: 51365
Read Count: 168958
Published: September 28 2010
Updated: August 25 2014

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Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Loved the update. Hope she remembers soon.

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Date: November 14 2010
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32

Glad she was able to meet up with Prince and family but Prince was acting the fool and needed to be checked. Hope she and Deleon can make an honest go of it.

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Date: June 19 2011
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

Hmm, can't wait for the reunion with Prince. Hope they can all work it out.

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Date: March 21 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Hmmm, this story continues to get interesting.

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Date: September 30 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

What bee flew in Kendra's bonnet now??!!! I hope Dax don't let Tabitha fool him. He needs to get a DNA test before accepting her word as gospel truth about anything especially as she's also been running around with his best friend, the idiot!!!

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Date: December 24 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Loved it!!

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Date: October 04 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Love it!! More please!

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Date: October 03 2010
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

Loved the update! Hmmm, Kenny may just be preggers with all that loving DeLeon been putting on her.

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Date: January 10 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Loved it!! Deleon has some serious issues. He definitely has a lil something something for Kendra. What's a girl to do with all that attention???!!!

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Date: November 14 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Darn!!! What's with all these men lusting after Kendra??? What's up with that??? I hope they brothers don't have a fall out b/c of her.

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Date: November 25 2010
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34

Oh Noooo, hope she'll be ok. They need to strip the sheriff of his title and castrate the bastard!!

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Date: July 12 2011
Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33

The sheriff mind's den flew the coocoo's nest. WTH??? Is he the hard up for .....??? He needs a reality check with a foot up his ass. She really should have waited. Sheriff was just acting too strange. Hope Deleon can find them in time.

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Date: June 20 2011
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Wow, Caroline is evil and the most vicious out of the group of those vipers. Hope their plot is ruined.

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Date: December 13 2010
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Loved that the softer side of Deleon is shown.  He was so sweet! Unfortunately for Kendra, some of the women don't take to her and now will be gunning for her.

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Date: December 13 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Loved the update. Kendra is so prickly with Deleon, hope she mellows out soon.

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Date: December 07 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Oh those skanks just aint right! Hope Kendra will be alright but I can see the drama coming. Loved the update.

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Date: November 29 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Love the way Deleon's looking out for her. They definitely got some chemistry going on but I fear Cat will be out for revenge after this.

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Date: December 12 2010
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

Oh oh, Kenny running scared but she needs to answer her phone and deal with whatever happens.

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Date: March 19 2011
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Glad she has Riley on her side. The towns people are sure spooky. Deleon is abit rough but hopefully he tunes it down some.

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Date: November 28 2010
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

Loved the update. Deleon and Kendra sure burning up the sheets. Wonder what all happened in the discussion with Barry and Dax.

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Date: January 03 2011
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Hmmm, wonder if this is gonna be a love triangle and if not, which brother will she fall for???!!!

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Date: December 09 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Wow, Dax made his move huh..... hmmm, wonder how this is gonna play out. Kendra is gonna be in a bind.

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Date: December 12 2010
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

That was hot!! Reading that update had me sweating! Phew!!!

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Date: December 28 2010
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Wow, talk about instant combustion. Those two hot like fire. Can't wait to see what'll happen next.

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Date: December 27 2010
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29

Loved the update Prince and company are getting close to finding her. Can't wait to see what happens when they do.

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Date: January 24 2011

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