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[Reviews - 111]
Summary:

Smiling got her through the deaths of her parents. Therefore smiling will get her through her guardian's wedding. Not that she loves him or anything...

 

 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:Yes
Word count: 8390
Read Count: 18195
Published: December 20 2010
Updated: March 24 2012


Title: Chapter 3: Skinny Love

Oh boy!!! Talk about star crossed lovers. Something's gotta give!

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Date: December 22 2010

Title: Chapter 4: I just wanna be okay

Tobias needs to face facts and just tell her the truth. Him getting married in stead of dealing with his issues isn't gonna make things any better.

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Date: December 25 2010

Title: Chapter 1: At First

OMG!! Tobias is a tortured soul!! He's unable to deal with his feelings for Serena but she's sure feeling him!!! Hope he can work it out before its too late!

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Date: January 20 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 43]
Summary:

 

Lisa, a jilted magazine editor, must try to get over her two-year relationship with her adulterous ex-boyfriend Dante. One night she meets a cute Executive Chef of a Japanese Fusion restaurant. A relationship will evolve between Lisa and the Executive Chef, Vincent, but will Lisa’s manipulative ex drive a wedge between them?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 11931
Read Count: 10348
Published: December 24 2010
Updated: July 15 2011


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Glad she's loosening up abit and invited Vinny out. Loved the update!

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Date: January 26 2011

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Liking how Vincent and Lisa are bonding. She has definitely ventured outside her comfort zone.

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Date: December 31 2010

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Me likey!

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Date: December 25 2010

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Like the way Vincent is making his move. Hope she takes the cooking lesson.

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Date: December 27 2010

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

He was flirting with her and she totally missed the mark. Hopefully she picks up the cue next time.

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Date: December 28 2010

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Glad she's giving Vincent a chance.

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Date: January 03 2011

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Glad she's giving Vincent a chance.

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Date: January 03 2011

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Loved the update. Dante was a jerk!! but I guess he was curious about Vinny.

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Date: April 25 2011

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Glad to see this story is back. Loved the update.

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Date: July 16 2011

Retired
Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 83]
Summary:

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Can a chance meeting at an airport, a wedding, family and friends bring about love lost? Possibly, Maybe?

a romantic comedy

Banner by me.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 33261
Read Count: 47859
Published: December 27 2010
Updated: May 03 2012


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One

Me likey! What did he do to her all those years ago??!!



Author's Response: Hiya baha_malo.  Thanks for reading and leaving a review and the stars! You'll find out what happened between those two soon enough.

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Date: December 27 2010

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Two

Loved the update.

Author's Response: Thanks baha_malo! I'm glad you liked it!

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Date: December 29 2010

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Three

I'm sorry but I'm not liking Nina right now for ambushing Cam with Philip and now Erin. She knew these people represent something painful to Cam and she's forcing the issue. I'm sure if the shoe was on the other shoe, Nina wouldn't be so gong ho about it.

She might have good intentions but she needs to focus on her wedding before she causes more problems for Cam who isn't and hasn't been comfortable about what Nina is doing but is being accomodative to her so as not to cause her any issues about interfering in her life. Even Greg felt it was too much!



Author's Response:

Hi baha_malo.  Nina's doing the best she can with what she's working with, not knowing all the juicy tidbits of what actually went down.  Anyway, much will be revealed in coming chapters and maybe we'll get a better understanding as to why Nina shouldn't have done what she did.  Thanks for the review, I appreciate it. :)

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Date: February 02 2011

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Four

Phillip also needs to stop pushing the issue and give her a break ,obviously she's not ready. He and Nina are too much. Its all about what they want and what they think is best for Cam. What about what Cam wants?? They need to allow her her space. When she's ready she'll deal with her issues. Again Nina needs to keep her focus on her wedding. She was being abit too pushy.

Author's Response: Hi baha_malo! Philip was pushing her and probably a bit too much but he's just trying his best to pry her open.  Cam's got a tough little shell that's hard to crack open.  Nina is at her core a friend who wants what's best even if she doesn't know what's best.  Thanks so much for reading and the review! I appreciate it! :)

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Date: February 02 2011

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Five

Loved the update. Hope Nina learnt her lesson and let the chips fall where they may. Hope Erin isn't still up to no good and causing trouble. Hmmm, maybe Cam and Phillip can learn to trust each other again and become friends.

Author's Response: Hi baha_malo! (Cute screen name - what does it mean?) So glad you enjoyed the update.  Nina did indeed learn her lesson but she's a nosey, want to fix everyone, match maker by nature so she still very well may get herself in trouble elsewhere.  Cam and Philip will see a lot of revelations from past misconceptions surface in the coming chapters.  Hopefully you'll enjoy those moments as well.  Thanks so much for the kind words and the review.  I appreciate it! :)

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Date: April 05 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 115]
Summary:

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 Banner by Missus James. :)

 

"If you prick us do we not bleed? If you tickle us do we not laugh? If you poison us do we not die? And if you wrong us shall we not revenge?"- William Shakespeare

 

She didn’t believe in love at first sight, yet when she met Fabian she believed in anything. Even the belief of her death at the hands of her lover…

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Horror, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 10873
Read Count: 20774
Published: December 28 2010
Updated: July 17 2013


Title: Con Te Partiro

Great update but Fabian and his bro seem abit cloak and dagger. Are they casing the coffee shop??? or is he really interested in Meka??!!

Author's Response: Gosh I hope they aren't. That would be horrible. Lol. Hmm. I wonder if he really is. Considering he is giving her forty dollar tips!

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Date: December 31 2010

Title: Con Te Partiro

WTH??? Why is he threatening to kill her? Was she kidnapped??? Interesting start.

Author's Response: Well... Maybe he is. Maybe he is just a beast. We will find out. Haha.

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Date: December 29 2010

Title: Con Te Partiro

Interesting. Hmm, wonder what the 2 guys are up to and what did the note say??!!

Author's Response: I wonder what they are up to too. Mwuahehehe. Haha. It Translated means: for you. I'm sorry I'm going to try to limit how much language I put into this story.

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Date: December 30 2010

Title: Con Te Partiro

Loved the update! Glad that Fabian is looking out for her. Who was that in the living room and what were they saying??

Author's Response: Lol. You glad eh? Haha. He is a bad man. Oops. I forgot to post the translations. He was basically telling Garrick not to wait up for him. And in response Garrick told him not to take long with his drop off. ;}

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Date: January 02 2011

Title: Con Te Partiro

Glad we got some info on Fabian as he was a dark horse. He has it bad for Meka. Hope it works out for them.

Author's Response: Yes I'm really enjoying playing around with Fabian's character. I think I will mess around with him a little bit. Haha. ;p hmm. We will see.

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Date: January 03 2011

Title: Con Te Partiro

Will look out for the revised version. Thanks .

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Date: March 13 2011

Title: Con Te Partiro

Sad chapter. Hope Meka can keep her focus and don't let her mom's illness affect her too much.

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Date: April 02 2011

Title: Con Te Partiro

Interesting...loved it!! Can't wait to see what happens next.

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Date: June 07 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.