Penname: FeelSoClose [Contact]

Real name: Mackenzie

Member Since: January 21 2014

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[Reviews - 433]
Summary:

 

Thoroughly revised and reuploaded!

 

Willow Carter is a plus-sized girl with lots of attitude and very low self-esteem. When her mother and oler sister force her to jog to slim down for her sister's wedding, she is attacked by a madman and rescued by a savior. But just because a man saves your life doesn't mean you should trust him. Soon she throws herself into a thrilling game of cat and mouse that brings more pain than pleasure and puts everyone she loves in harm's way.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 90171
Read Count: 300128
Published: October 04 2015
Updated: April 17 2021


Title: Chapter 25: Truth Be Told

I am so happy that my favorite author, couple and story are back.

I can understand Will's fear but she should talked to Seb first and figured out together what to do. Beacause when Seb finds out, it was in the worst way. 

And like really ? Like if Seb will never knew, comme on Will !

I'm glad Seb confronts her directly and didn't pretend to not know.

Can't wait to see how Willow will responds this. 

My best advice is probably to run (even if she will not go so far) but GUUURL YOU ARE IN TROUBLES !!!

Reviewer: FeelSoClose Signed
Date: April 10 2018

Title: Chapter 19: Self Destruct

Wow. I have to say that I am really impressed to see that Nathaniel said all the truth (right ?). That show us how much he cares about Willow, but we already know. Even if he killed someone for her, he told her. Trust someone at this point to speak about something like this is crazy... But I kind of like it. The end of the chapter is heart breaking. Willow wants to kill herself because she loves Sebastian. 

 

Sorry for bad english but I'm french.



Author's Response:

Nathaniel loves Willow unconditionally (no doubt unhealthily), but he cares about her deeply and trusts her entirely. He kept mim because she didn't know that he orchestrated Simon's death, but once she did and he realized that he was going to lose her from all of the secrets, he spilled it all no matter how painful for him and importantly, her. Willow is in a very difficult place in an extremely difficult situation. She thought killing herself might be the easy way out, but we all know it's not. Also, your English is perfectly fine! :)

Reviewer: FeelSoClose Signed
Date: August 28 2016

Title: Chapter 1: The Lucky Unlucky Girl

Merci pour ce ansewring! Et bien sûr, ne peut pas attendre de voir ce qui se passe ensuite :)

 

Seriously, you made my day !

Reviewer: FeelSoClose Signed
Date: August 28 2016

Title: Chapter 21: Step in the Right Direction

Ok first of all, thank you so much for this update. 

And, I am really obsessed with this story. 

There is something beautiful between the two of them. I used to think that Willow needed him to save her from her low selfestime but she's also like a therapy for him. 

I'm curious to see how and when she will forgive him (maybe never). But it is up to you Miss. 

By the way, you made my week. Really needed this !!

Reviewer: FeelSoClose Signed
Date: April 26 2017

Title: Chapter 22: Lost Children

Great update as always.

I am really curious to see how Willow will save Sebastian. This journey is like a roller coaster. When I think of something, you always push me in the other direction. This trip was for Willow's forgiveness and now it is more to Sebastian's humanity. 

I hope your muse is not going anywhere soon and that you can post more chapters.

And for your job issues : keep calm, say hello, say goodbye, answers her questions but don't try more. People always try to have informations from you to turn it against yourself. So, minimize contact as possible with her. 

Have a great day. 

Reviewer: FeelSoClose Signed
Date: July 09 2017

Title: Chapter 23: Tiny Punishments

Thank you so much for this update !

I am really curious to know how and why Sebastian reconnected with his father because if I understood well he was raised by his crazy "single" mother...

I didn't know that he was à policeman too...

There is so mych to discover about his past ! And the futur for Willow and him.

 

Reviewer: FeelSoClose Signed
Date: July 13 2017

Title: Chapter 23: Tiny Punishments

I am dying to see what happens next !!!!

Reviewer: FeelSoClose Signed
Date: September 05 2017

Title: Chapter 28: Crucial Hours (Part II)

I am so happy for this update ! 

I love this story so much and I really love the rollercoaster you are putting on us.

I don't know what to expect next but for real, I was holding my breath this wole chapter lol. 

Reviewer: FeelSoClose Signed
Date: April 23 2021

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Summary:

Fourteen years after his twin brother's suicide Brian Callaghan has to face all the guilt and emotions that he's been carrying for years head on. An unlikely companion from high school Mahalia Evans is there to see him through.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Psychological
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 18262
Read Count: 2622
Published: January 05 2018
Updated: March 08 2018


Title: Chapter 3: BEING STUBBORN

I love this story and I hope that you can update soon.

They both have struggle in their lives but they can bring out the best of each other and support.

Thank you To share such an important storyline. (weight and suicide)

Reviewer: FeelSoClose Signed
Date: January 11 2018

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 64]
Summary:

The Mamba is one of the deadliest snakes in the world. It's fast, lethally venomous, and when threatened, highly aggressive. Despite its toxicity, the venom has healing properties. Can Omari's bite heal all wounds? 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Rape, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:Yes
Word count: 98818
Read Count: 16084
Published: February 09 2018
Updated: December 30 2019


Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Hi,

Beautiful story here.

I like the fact that they didn't eachother in 3 years.

But with the new danger I hope they find a way to protect their family.

I prefer small chapters update every week than long one every century.

By the way english is not my first language so pardon my mistakes.

Reviewer: FeelSoClose Signed
Date: April 16 2018

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 42]
Summary:

Stop your boss from committing suicide. It might result in him falling in love with you.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 12604
Read Count: 8474
Published: April 09 2021
Updated: August 23 2021


Title: Chapter 1: ONE

Veuillez mettre à jour bientôt.

I feel like it's gonna be a sweet one.

Reviewer: FeelSoClose Signed
Date: April 10 2021

Title: Chapter 3: THREE

Dang that Trent Guy is crazy.

Thank God Sabrina was quick to react.

It's very important to make kids aware of danger eventought they are young. 

Reviewer: FeelSoClose Signed
Date: April 24 2021

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