Penname: Dallas5star [Contact]

Real name: Qwen

Member Since: February 17 2014

Membership status: Member

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[Reviews - 217]
Summary:

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In desperate need to be loved, Camille Sullivan was willing to do anything... even if it meant sleeping with the devil.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 3430
Read Count: 49946
Published: December 12 2012
Updated: July 18 2019


Title: Teach Me How To Be Loved

I ran across this story and you are doing a really good job with it. You feel the brokenness between both characters. I love it. My thoughts and prayers are with you on the loss of your Mom. Take it one moment at a time. 

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: June 11 2015

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Summary:

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Could she not comprehend that he had a reckoning to deliver?

The Fire Rises



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: General, Off Cannon
Genre: Action-Adventure
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:No
Word count: 39404
Read Count: 34837
Published: April 09 2013
Updated: August 26 2016


Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I am a lover of all things Batman. Bane is a character that is just so hard to feel for in the comic and movies. But you have done it very successfully. I actually hear his voice in these conversations. Along w the reveal of him without the mask, I see Tom Hardy coming to shape to become this new Bane. The story is very well put together and I am glad you brought the pool. I wonder will Nem have the madness that one encounters from the pool or will she have to routinely use it now. Again, wonderful style bridging all the forms of the Batman story.

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Date: December 07 2015

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[Reviews - 629]
Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 287976
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 21

I am so happy to see this story, I love it.

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: December 06 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I think I just died a lil. That rat bastard George deserves to but cut w a small knife and alcohol poured on it for a week. My heart hurts for Val, I know what she feels like, that is the worst feeling in the world.

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Date: December 20 2014

Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 24 pt 1

Nothing to say, but it was simple beautiful.

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: January 19 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

This is one of the very few stories that I will stalk the chamber for updates. I can so identify with Peaches. It's like I am reading about myself and I want to know how I end up. I can read this story and find something new each time that I read it. Thank you for continuing on with and can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: September 23 2015

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[Reviews - 1032]
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A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196744
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015


Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

Omg, I was so happy for these two. I had tears and screamed tell him! I can't believe it's almost over. I love these two.

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: September 02 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 125]
Summary:

I am currently NOT working on this story and don't know when I will be again. Writing this takes a toll on me and I have kinda been posting other things here. Give them a looksie. :]

 

Kensington's battered body ached from abuse, each blow recieved slowly tearing her apart. She was drowning in the hell that once used to be her home until a mysterious stranger comes along. Will he be the one restrore Kensington's faith in the world?

Heads up: The beginning (meaning the first few chapters)  of this story is a bit DARK. If you are of a faint heart than I fear this story is not going to be appealing to you. 


 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 10114
Read Count: 12990
Published: July 25 2013
Updated: May 29 2015


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

The story is interesting and I hope you continue.



Author's Response:

Thank-you kindly! 

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: May 24 2015

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh i felt the rush of air as she ran out the door, that was so good. I can't wait to find out more about the voice.

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 29 2015

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In the wake of an ugly divorce, Natalia executes a scheme meant to move her beyond the hurt inflicted by her ex-husband, Richard.  The plan is to ease her suffering by increasing his, and her weapon, a younger man unwittingly drawn into the illicit plot. 

In the quest for revenge, will Natalia realize her goal of bringing Richard to his knees?  Or will vengeance and her weapon of choice become her undoing?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: December's Wrap-up!
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 120
Read Count: 91991
Published: December 13 2013
Updated: May 02 2015


Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Losing Another Talerico

My heart broke in amillion pieces. I actually cried for them both, but Anthony I did not want him to find out like that. I pray that he never finds out Talia knew. That will be a betrayal that he may never recover from. I need Richard to pay. He needs to pay.



Author's Response:

I didn't mean to make you cry, but I love that you sympathize with the characters to the point of tears.  Nat keeping the fact that she knew from Ant is a risky proposition.  Richard and Rich both know she knew.  And while Rich would never rat her out (at least not on purpose), Richard has shown himself prone to that sort of malice.  Telling Ant will be difficult, but hiding her prior knowledge may be worse.  We'll soon see which she chooses and how it all turns out.

Thanks Dallas5star!

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 31 2015

Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - The End of Ignorance and Bliss

I knew it was something up with Richard and why he was doing anthony like that. I don't know if I could tell him or not because I don't want him to feel as if I betrayed Anthony, but then I don't want him to go and catch a murder charge. This is so good.



Author's Response:

Thanks Dallas5star!

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: February 28 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Cougars

I hate to see this end, but it has too. This is a well rounded story. Are you going to tell a story about Rich? He is the ass that you have to love.  I want him to get his happiness too.



Author's Response:

Thanks Dallas5Star!  I'm kind of fond of Rich myself.  I hope to write his story.  Just waiting for inspiration to hit. 

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Date: April 14 2015

Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Burying the Dead

I have tears for my boys. That was real poetry. I am so glad this finally closes the door on Sabrina. I don't know why she was stupid enough to come, but I know now she won't come back. Oh Rich, I feel so bad for him. I am glad Talia was there to help him. They are the men that was raised by a true man, Pop Pop. When is Richard going to finally get it?

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Date: March 16 2015

Title: Chapter 40: Epilogue

This is just too beautiful. From a deep, dark place of black hatred loneliness to a place of joy, love and family that is the true consequence. It's a fitting end for both of these characters. I had to cry at the end. I love it.



Author's Response:

Wonderfully put.  Thanks Dallas5star!

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 03 2015

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Summary:

How far will you go when you're lonely?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 75
Completed:No
Word count: 151713
Read Count: 143284
Published: March 13 2014
Updated: July 17 2015


Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Wow and wow Kirk. He is really a sick person.



Author's Response:

Yep!

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: August 24 2014

Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Oh my goodness, please finish this story. I need to know how this ends. You have captured my interest from the first chapter.  This story is not meant to be a fairy tale. This explores so mant sides from abuse, to pleasure to just an in need to be. Write the story that needs to be told. Not the story everyone thinks they want to read.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review, Dallas5star!

I have decided to continue.

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Date: June 04 2014

Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

If I could pour some honey all over Kirk and lay him on a bed of fire ants.......love it.



Author's Response:

Yeah, and an enormous amount of honey bees added to the mix wouldnt hurt!

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: June 11 2014

Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Please tell me Kirk will get his karma. I am so happy for Jodi at this point it's seems maybe  this will start to bring her to seeking help.



Author's Response:

Yes, Karma = Kirk! Stay tuned...

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: June 30 2014

Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

I still hate Kirk.



Author's Response:

LOL!

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: August 14 2014

Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Are you going into Jodi's sessions w Dr. Townsend? I am curious about what happened ther. I so love this story. 



Author's Response:

Refer to Chapter 41...there is a paragraph near the end regarding Dr. Townsend.

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: September 08 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I was just thinking about this story. I am so glad that you are back.  This is an emotional roller coaster, I love it. 

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: March 14 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi, just checking in and hoping all is well.

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: April 17 2015

Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

I am so glad to see a post from this story. Jodi is a hot mess and I love her!



Author's Response:

HI, I've been trying to upload my images for an hour! It serves me right for being gone so long. I have them uploaded to the images list but they aren't showing on the other screen for me to insert them...sorry guys I had surgery and other issues - but all is well now. Thank God I feel great! :)    

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: May 25 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am so glad that you have recovered from your surgery. Keep focusing on getting better!

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: May 27 2015

Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

Garrett, I knew that joker was too slick for some reason. This is so good.

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: June 07 2015

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.