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Member Since: February 18 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 359]
Summary:

  

 

Lila James knows that her friendship with seventeen year old Chase Almeida is extremely inappropriate, but she still isn't prepared when his older brother Jack decides to tell her just how inappropriate it actually is-- inadvertently igniting a fire that had been burning quietly inside of them for years.

*****Lila's Thunder has been removed for editing, refining and if all goes according to plan, publishing! I couldn't have finished it without all my readers leaving their words and thoughts--even if I didn't always like them--so THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart. <3



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 670
Read Count: 65030
Published: October 07 2011
Updated: September 09 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I started reading this and it was so good, I had to keep going until I reached the last chapter.

Chase: until Lila tells you she is in love with you, she is not, and NO means NO.  I wish that Chase would meet a brown-skinned beauty.

Jack: stop begging--- kinda wish Jack would meet another brown-skinned beauty, too.

Lila: leave the brothers alone and they may become friends, but then again there has been so much damage...oh yeah, trust has been broken on both sides at Dalton--time to leave.

I am thinking Ashley or her father got to Chase's keys.  Who initiated the investigation on Lila in the first place?

Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 11 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 615]
Summary:

 

When rockstar Adam Brand makes a racist remark during a drunken magazine interview, it becomes an international headline.  Within hours his PR Agent concocts the perfect plan to revive his rapidly sinking career before it’s too late, but will Adam be able to pull it off?

 

**** STEREO has been removed for editing, refining and if all goes according to plan, publishing! I couldn't have finished it without all my readers leaving their words and thoughts--even if I didn't always like them--so THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart. <3



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:Yes
Word count: 922
Read Count: 90698
Published: March 24 2012
Updated: August 30 2014


Title: Chapter 14: 'How to Land a Rockstar in Thirty Days'

This is so good and was wellworth the wait.  I am so glad he didn't try to kill her and he had tears in his eyes---oh, and he now misses her and realizes his part in this. 

Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 10 2014

Title: Chapter 15: "Are hose and garter your normal Friday night get-up?”

TIme for Shaun to move on and find a real job--away from Adam.

Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 14 2014

Title: Chapter 1: "My dick is sort of like a white supremacist."

WoW!! Read this at work and had to really work on keeping a serious expression on my face.  I love this story! 

Enough begging and apologizing for our Girl:  she should take the job and leave w/o telling him (let his PR team handle the press).   He will just act like he doesn't care about her moving, anyway, so she should keep herself busy, until the pain of losing him is bearable.  I hope she is not prego;  if she is and tells him, he will blame her for tricking him and if she doesn't tell him, he will blame her for keeping the baby from him. 

As for our Guy:  he needs to learn how to forgive and let go of the anger.  He loves S. but not enough to forgive her, sad to say but it's good he walked out.  Until he works on his feelings, I think our Guy deserves to be lonely and miserable and if he starts sleeping around, I am too through with his azz.

Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 15 2014

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 286]
Summary:

stories/2209/images/To_Love_the_Devil__copy_Fotor2.jpg

 

 

Loving a man is hard enough try loving the devil?

 

How do you love a man that doesn't want to be love?

 

How can you care for a person who could careless about you?

 

How do you try to find a soul mate from a soulless man?

 

Jacqueline finds herself sold to devil she try's to unfreeze a heart that seems untouchable.

 

The harder she try's to love him the more lost she gets into the battle of loving the devil.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 58549
Read Count: 113824
Published: September 24 2012
Updated: March 31 2016


Title: Chapter 14: If Your Girl Only Knew

I had seen this story on chamber and finally decided to read it.  What a gem--needs some editing, but still a diamond in the rough. 

I hope James did not have sex with Rox, but I was also glad Jack didn't give him any.  The show down between the two women was sweet---if Rox wasn't feeling threaten, she would have never shown up unannounced and dressed to intimidate.  Jack more than held her own and I hope Ace tells James about Rox's visit. 

I really like this story--thank you!

Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed
Date: February 26 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 117]
Summary:

Dr. Tyler Elijah Lenz Solomon Weber is a psychologist who works as the head of Human resources at a law firm. His life seems to be perfect. Not only he has the perfect job but he also is a visiting professor in many Universities for his innovitaive research in developmental psychology. He has a fiancée, Alexandra, who loves him unconditionatly.
However, under the surface lays a man that has been affected by his life experiences and cannot fully trust others. This is his story, and that of Alexandra, and Lucas, the man Tyler fears will take his woman away from him.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 49503
Read Count: 16670
Published: December 26 2012
Updated: February 21 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Against the Odds

Welcome back!  Well, although I love a HEA, I really don't think Alex or Ty is good for one another. 

Alex and her family totally disrespected Ty and then she topped it off by having sex with Lucas AND she is still undecided! 

Tyler has issues and one was him placing Alex on a pedestal where she really didn't belong--he seems obsessed with her, but he really didn't want to lose out to Lucas. 

Now Lucas on the other hand, deserves Alex.  Alex may think it is love, but imo, Lucas finally got him some and his vision cleared.  I really would like for Lucas to find someone that will love him and truly be there for him.  I hope he relalize it's ok to love someone deeply and to move on and remember what his dad said, 'everything will be ok'.

Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 22 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 73]
Summary:

“A mighty pain to love it is,
And 'tis a pain that pain to miss;
But of all pains, the greatest pain
It is to love, but love in vain.”



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 28555
Read Count: 11890
Published: April 01 2013
Updated: August 15 2023


Title: UnRequited

Great update and I do feel for Charley, but she will be ok with the baby--at least she will have a piece of him to love.  Rider cares for her, but I can't get a bead on him.  Seems he only thinks of her when she is right there in front of him. He didn't even hold the door for her and she noticed, but during sex he treated her tenderly, like he cared.

I wouldn't be surprise if he was insenstive enough to send her a wedding invite, and she should reciprocate with a birth announcement.

Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 02 2014

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 629]
Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 287715
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

As much as i want to jump on the 'to hell with Henry' train...after reading this update and sleep on 'it', bc Henry had me so mad I was thinking put the kitten in a box and drop her off at the animal shelter. 

Henry knew this girl had issues and still went after her as a knida bet to break her down, but he got caught up in his game, so he panics and pulls a Houdini. Tells her he loves her bc he is drinking and sees Chase touching her.  Henry is scared.

Chase knew how Val felt about Henry, bc he focus only on Henry to let his mouth write a check his azz couldn't cover.  Glad she had told him he was in the friends only category, prior to the party.  

I don't blame Val for running after Henry, bc this conversation will be part of her healing process--and she still loves him.  Val is finally learning to love herself and I am so glad she is finally progressing and no longer regressing.

Val needs to clear the air--talk to dad, stop throwing up (ruins your teeth and esophagus), lose weight to be healthier, and lose the baggage of memories of ex and Henry too, if necessary.

Now is the perfect time to give us Henry POV, oh, and welcome back and thank you for a job well done.    

Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 15 2014

Title: Chapter 23: QUESTION

ok...go ahead and give us Henry's pov--he better have a good reason for treating Val this way.  She could be deathly ill or pregnant---guess she would have to drop him a line on youtube then. 

Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed
Date: March 28 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 68]
Summary:

I never said I was the  good guy. I'm nobody's hero.

 

 

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 15545
Read Count: 8751
Published: May 11 2013
Updated: June 08 2014


Title: Chapter 1: The first time I met her

Found this gem and I love it.  Morgan has issues and Barb knows this.  He is going to consume Alicia, bc she is now his new OCD project.  She is going to mistake this for a healthy love--it is not! 

I fear this relationship is going to leave two badly damage souls.  In other words, they are going to have to walk on hot coals barefoot, before they are allowed true happiness, with or without one another (hint: my job is very stressful and requires I read only stories with HEA endings). 

Morgan is a man whore and these don't change overnight...

Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 09 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1032]
Summary:

   

 

A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196744
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015


Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

So glad to see D show up for her at the end and brought me to tears when she said no one ever chooses me.  Now D finally understands and said the right thing. 

He still has to face papa bear and sister dearest still needs to apologize for spitting in her face---would love Sasha to tell Nayla that it better never happen again.  Nayla sure acts like she has no remorse for her part in S&D relationship demise. 

Please give us an epilogue.  Great update!

 

Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 03 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Cast

Sasha needs to let Carter know where her heart really lies and what is going on between her and D (the good and the bad).  If Carter still wants to be her friend. then they hould do friend things and hang out---D has to work his azz off to win her back and I mean for more than a few weeks. 

I can't wait to see what D does when his dad finds out he is chasing Sash, wonder if he will tell Pops to butt out.  Still can't forgive or feel sorry for Nadia until she mans up and apologizes to Sasha. 

If I was Sasha I wouldn't hold my breath where this family is concerned---she should still live her life as if D is not in it, bc i just feel he still does not realize the damage he did to her. 

Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 08 2014

Title: Chapter 1: Cast

I also prefer the old pics of Sasha and Dimitri.

Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed
Date: May 09 2014

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

As I was reading this, all I could think was 'I know you're gonna give us a sequel :-).   You have written one of the best stories and the sex scene was not awkward; it was basically off the chart. 

I am so glad he won her heart and you brought it home!  I can't wait to see him stand up to his father and Sasha handle the sister.  They are going to be shocked, except for Dom, that Sasha now comes first in D's life.

Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 48]
Summary:

Roddrick Kennedy likes to think that a strong dose of worrying is good for her health, and keeps her in control of her life. When she finds herself taking on everyone and their problems, she sees that maybe she should turn her attention to herself every once in a while. When Milo Vitale comes along to teach her how life can be stress free, she discovers herself in for a whirlwind of change as he helps to flip everything upside down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Femslash, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 58790
Read Count: 46538
Published: July 23 2013
Updated: February 28 2014


Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

welcome back and time or our duo to grow up.  Are they just going to be parents or parents in a relationship with one another?

Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 01 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 23]
Summary:

Snippets into the lives of different characters. A foray into emotions and interactions.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 9617
Read Count: 5511
Published: November 14 2013
Updated: May 08 2015


Title: Chapter 6: It Started Out With a Kiss ...

I read all of your snippets submitted and could help but feel...



Author's Response:

It's a huge deal for me when I make people feel things so thanks.

Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 09 2014

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Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 702]
Summary:

In the wake of an ugly divorce, Natalia executes a scheme meant to move her beyond the hurt inflicted by her ex-husband, Richard.  The plan is to ease her suffering by increasing his, and her weapon, a younger man unwittingly drawn into the illicit plot. 

In the quest for revenge, will Natalia realize her goal of bringing Richard to his knees?  Or will vengeance and her weapon of choice become her undoing?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: December's Wrap-up!
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 120
Read Count: 91987
Published: December 13 2013
Updated: May 02 2015


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Too Little, Too Late

Poor Nat and poor Anthony.  He is going to go after Candace.  I think Nat should be friendly with Jamison.  I have a feeling this story is about to heat up...and wth does Richard want?

Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 01 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 67]
Summary:

 

What happens when you begin to second guess the gift you gave to someone? Do you ask them for it back? Or perhaps you just take it back? Maybe that gift was fine for then, but holds no value now. Five years later, Teddy considers re-gifting but Tanner is worried that it is the same old tired shit just wrapped up in a shinier package. *Sequel to “The Gift of Goodbye”



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 10569
Read Count: 7615
Published: January 23 2014
Updated: February 19 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Cast photos

newsflash for David:  when a woman continously calls her ex name, while having sex with you, then she is just not that into you.

Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed
Date: February 19 2014

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

David is passive-aggressive in his relationship with Tanner, while Teddy still has anger issues, but is working on it.  I think Tanner jumped out the skillet and into the fire when she hooked up with David; I was expecting him to hit her by the way she was acting.

Teddy reminds me of a guy I once worked with: involved with two women and loved whichever one he had to chase--it was just a game to him. It's been several yrs, so hopefully one has matured.   

Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 19 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Who doesn't want to be wanted



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 4460
Read Count: 5808
Published: January 30 2014
Updated: April 23 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am intrigued and they are having this chemistry, well at least she is...hopefully she won't just be a toy to him, bc from her scars and fragile emotions, she can easily be tipped over the edge--and all this in just two chapters.  Good job!



Author's Response:

Oh yes these two are gonna make something happen and not all of it is gonna be nice there with be hurt feelings and neither is going down without a fight 

Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 23 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

 

Every wife wants her husbands undivided attention, most definitely on their anniversary. Kara couldn't be more furious when her plans go to hell while her husband is nose deep with directing a new blockbuster movie, and as such she does what any red blooded woman would in her situation; go out and have a hell of a good time without him.



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Challenges: Beyonce
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5795
Read Count: 5323
Published: February 22 2014
Updated: February 24 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Marcus needs to get his priorities straight, bc it's lonely at the top.  Kara is hurt, but don't drop the drawers so fast for your ex--he's your ex for a reason.  Hopefully, her friends can keep those knees together bc K. just want some. 

If she chooses to stay with the ex when Marcus shows up, at least Marcus will now have planty of time to create his big break-through film.  Like Devvin told Marcus '...make it right'.  We love a HEA--hell, we need a HEA!    

Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 23 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 338]
Summary:

She was only a debt to him... or so she thought.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 26251
Read Count: 83529
Published: February 23 2014
Updated: July 08 2015


Title: Chapter 1: One

start out good but now something is missing...

Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed
Date: May 26 2014

Title: Chapter 1: One

Her dad knew she was his bargaining chip and that is why he insisted she be at the meeting.  I hope her lack of struggle was from shock, bc being weak in this situation will get you chained in some rich guy's basement...oops!

Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 24 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

Still not ready to open her eyes but ready to acknowledge him she angles her head. With her lips lightly grazing his jaw and the coarse stubble she whispers. “I want you to stay”.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 7179
Read Count: 3824
Published: March 15 2014
Updated: March 24 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Open Your Eyes

This was short, but filling, while leaving me wanting more.  Please continue.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I shall continue. I sort of have an idea with what I want to happen. I wasn't going to continue at first but I'm addcited to these character now. Stay tuned. 

Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 15 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

What happens to a woman when the thing she dreams of becoming as a little girl, the thing she revels in as a young woman, is suddenly the thing that she must learn to let go of and live without? Is there a place for her in a world where this thing is the only thing that matters? Is it even something that she ever really loses?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Drabbles , General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff, Original Characters, Spritualism, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 2935
Read Count: 1295
Published: April 24 2014
Updated: May 10 2014


Title: Chapter 2: The Beginning After the End

How long had they been married?  How old was she now?  How old are the kids now? 

The marriage was dead and just missing dirt. Her now ex never loved her and everything happens for a reason: his treatment of her should make her stronger and now she knows what she will and will not accept in a relationship.  Now she is for sure responsible for her own happiness.

I hope you stick with this gem and flesh it out.

 

 



Author's Response:

I'm not wanting to spend too much time on past events..just enough to give an idea of where Marissa's head is at. I'll try to be sure and answer all questions, but I don't want the story to come off as a boring list of facts and information. Thanks for reading and I hope you stay tuned :)

Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 13 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.