Penname: Annloveslit [Contact]

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Member Since: May 27 2014

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Summary:

In a world built on blood and violence, where the merciless thrive, falling in love carries with it its own special set of risks.  Never was that truer than for Carter Gerring, an electronics expert with a unique skill-set.  Carter is hired by Larry Hooks, a ruthless underworld kingpin with a number of potential legal problems he wants to disappear.  While eliminating the various forms of incrimination Hooks and his men create, Carter finds himself falling for the boss’s daughter.

 Tamryn Hooks is the much-loved daughter Larry Hooks would gladly kill to protect.  For most of her life, she’s been shielded from many of the harsh realities of her father’s business.  Then, a seemingly innocent favor for her doting father places her in the middle of an impossible situation she sees no way out of.  As Tamryn searches for a solution and an escape, her dilemma is further complicated by an ongoing feud with her sister and her deepening feelings for Carter, the unassuming intellectual with a dark reputation.   

 When Carter and Tamryn find themselves entrenched in the mire of her father’s criminal enterprise, the secrets they and others keep, and their need for one another, will their forbidden love be their saving grace?  Or will it be the Achilles’ heel that ultimately leads to their demise? 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 70686
Read Count: 14874
Published: June 06 2014
Updated: February 01 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love the direction this story is going! I love Tam's character so innocent but tough as nails. Carter's character however, his actions and the way he deals with it seems so weak when he's supposed to be a cold blooded killer! I think she should tell Carter it's been real or at least give him a serious case of blue balls! I look forward to your next chapter I love your writing :) can you please have Carter take more action? His scheming (though I know it's for Tams protection) puts me off and I find him less desirable. Again I love your work :)))



Author's Response:

Thanks Annloveslit!  I don't know if the next few chapters will give you the action on Carter's part that you're hoping for, but it should clarify some of his decisions (for better or worse) and his role in the underworld.  Thanks for reading and commenting.  I appreciate your input.   

Reviewer: Annloveslit Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: June 19 2014

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