Penname: idiotendenial [Contact]

Real name: JB

Member Since: June 18 2009

Membership status: Member

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Web Site: lookattheawesome.tumblr.com
On Hiatus: No

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Drawn Together by Outlawstar615
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 113]
Summary:


Nia Jones, an amazing designer at Sohma Graphics, has strong feelings for her boss. She doesn't think they'll ever be reciprocated. In fact, she thinks he hates her. They both realize otherwise when his suave older half-brother is abruptly added to their lives.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 20126
Read Count: 22677
Published: July 23 2012
Updated: May 26 2014

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Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

A boss he is indeed. I like him. I'm not sure if Nia does, but I do...

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 25 2012
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great update!!! I can't believe we're at chapter 9 already!!! I'm not sure how I feel about Mr. H's brother....He's nice and all, but uhhhhh he needs to move out the way. Then again, there's nothing like healthy competition lol. I was wondering how Nia looks, especially from Mr. H's point of view. I really want to see him grovel. I think I'm getting ahead of myself :))

 

Thank you for sharing!!

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 29 2012
Noah's Orders by Kmaj
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 68]
Summary:

Noah Bianchi has been in lust for his new secretary Eliza from the moment he met her, but how will he introduce her to his dominant lifestlye? By bending her over his desk of course.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: BDSM, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Chains & Whips Excite Me
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 7176
Read Count: 8079
Published: July 26 2012
Updated: August 10 2012

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Title: Chapter 1: Come Into My Web

I love it already!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please continue!!!

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 26 2012
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Just Ordinary by Forks and Knives
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 193]
Summary:

Carmen Shelly preyed on married men and usually won her sought after prize. Business is booming until her partner sets his sights on her single sister.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 41535
Read Count: 39601
Published: July 29 2012
Updated: February 28 2016

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Title: Chapter 2: One - Target sighted

I like it!!!!! Carmen is...trashy, but you write her well!!!! I can't wait for Nichole and Richard to meet! I hope Manteri has mob connections and teaches Carmen a lesson.

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 29 2012
Title: Chapter 3: Two -The Invasion

I wonder if Carmen will try and solicit the help of this Wisconsin Rapist?? I really want Nich to lighten up, but I guess she and Richard would have to communicate more huh? Carmen is starting to make me itch. 

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 30 2012
My Girl, Friday by crocuslady
Rated: Members ONLY:Mature Content
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[Reviews - 36]
Summary:

Playboy and U.S. gold metal swimmer, Ryan Lochte had everything he wanted until he saw the one woman he couldn’t live without in teammate and arch rival Michael Phelps’ arms.  Friday Jones was not his type but he wasn’t going to leave London without making her his girl Friday.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1771
Read Count: 718
Published: August 10 2012
Updated: August 10 2012

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great Chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm loving Friday!! Lochte...ehhh not so much right now.



Author's Response:

He hot.  Really hot but if you watch some of his interviews during the Olympics you'll see he's a real playboy and while he says he wants to settle down its all about have the right woman make him happy.  It will take the right kind of woman to show him that he is not the center of the universe.  Thanks for the review.  CL

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 10 2012
In love with the dark side by Earth gave me life
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 57]
Summary:

 

How could she love them? They destroyed everything...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Horror, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 4425
Read Count: 6946
Published: August 21 2012
Updated: August 25 2012

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Title: Chapter 1: 1 - Storms on the distance.

Great chapter!!! I can't see the cast pics though-__-

I like the direction you're going and I can't wait for another installment.

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 21 2012
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I still can't see the pic of Raven, perhaps you can just post the link?? HOWEVER it does not stop her from being my favorite character thus far. I'm hooked!!

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 23 2012
Irreconcilable Love by Ladyzim
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 21]
Summary:

Kayleesi is just about to start her senior year when she starts reacquainting herself with her childhood friend Sebastian. Overcoming their own insercurities to come together may prove to be a challenge. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 6377
Read Count: 20160
Published: August 21 2012
Updated: February 06 2013

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I was confused at the formatting. Were there some copy and paste confusion? I do that all the time-__-

 

I hope she opts for something more serious than a fling I totally want the happy ending and the marriage and the kids!

 

I love your writing!

 

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 18 2012
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To Love the Devil by Benny Jude Road
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 286]
Summary:

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Loving a man is hard enough try loving the devil?

 

How do you love a man that doesn't want to be love?

 

How can you care for a person who could careless about you?

 

How do you try to find a soul mate from a soulless man?

 

Jacqueline finds herself sold to devil she try's to unfreeze a heart that seems untouchable.

 

The harder she try's to love him the more lost she gets into the battle of loving the devil.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 58549
Read Count: 113803
Published: September 24 2012
Updated: March 31 2016

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Title: Chapter 1: Cast

I like this story, but I feel like it's missing something. I didn't see many grammatical errs and your writing style is just fine, but it's missing that exra something that makes it great. It has wonderful potential. I hope James doesn't rape her or do anything harmful, if he does can you add a warning in the chapter please? 

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstar
Date: January 23 2013
Illusions: The Beginning by Adi Milano
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 106]
Summary:

This story is the sequel of Illusions: The End.

Emma is on the brink of depression and she has lost herself. George finds it incredibly hard to cope with the guilt he feels for causing her to lose her psychological equilibrium. Will they be able to get back together, or will Taylor be the best person to pick Emma up and make her feel herself again?

© Adi Milano, 2012.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Illusions
Chapters: 11
Completed:Yes
Word count: 19016
Read Count: 36434
Published: October 13 2012
Updated: December 26 2012

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: George

Super excited for this. I want Emma to get better, but I'm not sure if I'm team George? Idk I'm having a hard time believing his feelings are genuine and not just guilt. 



Author's Response:

I never thought about George's feelings being fuelled by guilt. Cetainly, Emma might feel that way about George's new found love. I don't know if I'm team George either. Would getting back to him be beneficial to her? She depended a lot on George emotionally althought she was really independent. Maybe she needs to move on with her life.

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 13 2012
Blue Moon by Nsablo
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 198]
Summary:

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Banner done by Meme

Solana Blue is a young African American woman, who comes from a line of an ancient race of humaniod wolves that evolved to be able to survive the modern human world. As a young girl ,she had to learn what was like to be an Alpha as her parents were murdered in a wolf raid. She had no choice but to fight to protect her younger sister Eris Blue. 

Now at the adult age of 18, she must leave her grandmother's home with her sister to live with her potential mate Matthew Cruz in order to create a pack of her own. As the Blue sisters with under the Cruz house, Solana has to soon choose to become one with Matthew before the first Full Moon. But Solana is not sure if she can handle the sudden adulthood. 

Disclaimer:All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Fantasy, Horror, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 23
Completed:Yes
Word count: 68011
Read Count: 28727
Published: November 14 2012
Updated: August 03 2013

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Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Hi! I love your writing and I'm enjoying your story although I feel bad for Eris being left out so much. However, I saw the picture you posted (I love Tweet!), but in the first chapter you describe Solana as mocha skinned, then in the latest chapter she's caramel. I'm a very visual reader and I just wanted to know which one she is so I can do her character justice. Thank you!!

 

"Her hair complimented her mocha brown skin color" (Chapter 1)

"The fire light flashed her caramel brown skin as her blue eyes began to glisten in the light" (Chapter 3)



Author's Response:

 I am so sorry for the confusion, her skin is mocha brown. Don't worry I have the correction for everyone to avoid anymore confusion. Thank you for pointing it out to me, I would have never realized it. See I need more lovely reviewers like to point out things I don't see. ya know? 

My apoligizes.

Thank you for reading and reviewing, Nsablo

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 22 2012
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Esmee's (Not So) Little Brother by Yuukiyanagi
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 34]
Summary:

Rafael Vargas has been in love with Tomiko ever since his teens. When he hears she might be leaving for good he realizes he needs to make a move and soon. There’s only a slight problem. Tomiko is his big sister's best friend and Rafael knows convincing Tomiko to be his is not going to be easy.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Chamber Grindhouse Challenge 4
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 8369
Read Count: 29627
Published: January 03 2013
Updated: August 06 2013

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Title: Chapter 3: Crazy Little Things You Do for Lust and Love

This just got complicated!! I love Tommy!!! and I love Kai:) Officially hooked!!!



Author's Response:

hehe, it sure did ;) the Halloween Party is going to be something else, alright, lol! thanks for the review!

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 27 2013
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The Less Fortunate by FindingMyself
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 192]
Summary:

Terri Lawson, a middle-aged modeling agent had one job to do: find someone totally different then what the agency usually picks. When she runs into a young man way out of anything she'd ever consider...both of their lives change for the better.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back, On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: The Cougars
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 43892
Read Count: 64361
Published: January 04 2013
Updated: February 04 2014

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Title: Chapter 2: Cast Pics

I don't know why I imagined Terri as Gabrielle Union, I think it's her whole Deliver Us From Eva mentality lol



Author's Response:

i used gabrielle union in my last story, so i didnt wanna recycle actresses. but...please,  by all means, use what ever visualization you come up with. i was just sharing what i invisioned :)

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstar
Date: January 06 2013
Work by GloryBox
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 13]
Summary:

dv


"He's no good for you Ky."


"I know but I love him."




I accidently deleted the story. I am sorry yall.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Rape, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 7216
Read Count: 3799
Published: January 16 2013
Updated: January 19 2013

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Title: Chapter 1: Cast

Did you re-post these chapters? Or were there edits done?

 

 

 

Still a 10!!<3

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 16 2013
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Regret by Brenda1257
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 776]
Summary:

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Jayden made the biggest mistake of his life when he let the love of his life slip through his fingers.  Could he make it right and start anew?  Tamaeya had been burned by Jayden once and had no intentions of being burnt a second time, but it seemed that the heart had it's own mind.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 4965
Read Count: 108475
Published: February 06 2013
Updated: April 19 2017

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Title: Regret

Tam really annoys me. She's super selfish and only does what she thinks is best. I get tired of reading her speak...its becoming ridiculous.



Author's Response:

Now, now....

Don't give up on her yet.  LOL

She's dealing with her own regret and being in what she perceives to be a hostile environment.

All mothers do what they think is best, even when it turns out that it's not.

Things will get better. 

Thanks for the review.

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed
Date: May 08 2013
UnRequited by midnightlove
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 73]
Summary:

“A mighty pain to love it is,
And 'tis a pain that pain to miss;
But of all pains, the greatest pain
It is to love, but love in vain.”



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 28555
Read Count: 11890
Published: April 01 2013
Updated: August 15 2023

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Title: UnRequited

I Wonder how her pregnancy happens.....update soon please!

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 28 2013
Beautiful Soul by DarkSovereign
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary: "I don't want another pretty face. I don't want just anyone to hold. I don't want my love to go to waste; I want you and your beautiful soul..."

Table of Contents
Categories: Music
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 3803
Read Count: 12601
Published: April 01 2013
Updated: April 04 2013

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Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 2 [part 2]

why hasn't he told her she's going to die?? what kind of doctor is this guy??

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed half-star
Date: April 04 2013
Payback by Black Coffee
Rated: Mature Content

[Reviews - 2]
Summary:

After breaking up with the love of your life, you are eager to get revenge. Well that's what Beyonce does, smashing her ex in a magazine she works for. But her ex gets revenge on her. (Justin Timberlake and Beyonce Knowles)



Table of Contents
Categories: Music
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1613
Read Count: 6504
Published: April 14 2013
Updated: April 14 2013

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Title: Chapter 1: Payback

I have such a hard time imagining beyonce...it's just weird lol



Author's Response:

LOL you would be surprised at how many ppl like the pairing. Thanks for reviewing.

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed
Date: April 15 2013
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Hello Again Mr. Right by mya1967
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 86]
Summary:

Everyone has that someone who made them feel perfect and brilliant. How do we lose sight of those great loves and what happens when they come back into your orbit? Amelia and David were college sweethearts who run into each other 2 decades later-after marriages, divorces, kids, and careers--can they still be crazy in love?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9837
Read Count: 16836
Published: April 17 2013
Updated: June 12 2013

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Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 5--Feenin'

Did we find out why she left him?!! This was so good, please continue!!

 

 

I hope DJ gets a story too;)

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 17 2013
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Unguarded by notheruniverse
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 629]
Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 287673
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015

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Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 19

I love how it ends now and the flow is much nicer! It was a good decision and I can't wait to see how this all turns out. 

 

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 15 2014
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 18 pt 3

awwww i knew it-__-

 

can't wait for the next update. i'm kind of tired of henry, but i feel bad for how insecure he is. i just want val to be okay. update soon:/

 

Im stressed 

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 24 2014
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16 FULL

I don't think Val was annoying at all. I think you're writing her insecurities very well and seeing them play out is making Henry all the more loveable. I just fear for when one of them eventually messes up and I kind of hope its Henry because it would be nice to have some insecurity in him or see his pov. I would love it if Val gets some self confidence and learns how awesome she is. I also would love it if she sees that Henry isn't perfect. I can't wait to see what roads you lead us down!

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30 2013
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Great chapter. I like Henry's charm and Val's (valerie) acknowledgement of her issues. 

How does Val look? We got everyone's else's description, but not hers..is it coming up?

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 10 2013
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 19

I really hope you update soon! This story is so amazing and one of the most developed that I've ever seen! 

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 13 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.