Penname: jahchannah [Contact]

Real name: Carlotta

Member Since: January 25 2015

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I love to read and support aspiring authors!




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Meet the Nichetti Family: Dominick, Carmine, Chase, and Christopher.  The Nichetti Men are easy to fall for, but sometimes hard to love. Their "family" business tends to get in the way of their love lives and sometimes ruins them altogether. This is their story.

*Contains strong language, adult situations, extreme language, violence and strong sexual content*

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Thank you Minx for an incredible banner!



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 93337
Read Count: 114271
Published: October 30 2009
Updated: July 28 2012


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Why do we think it's awesome for a woman to fall in love with a man-whore.  A woman can behave similarly and we'll 

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Date: June 05 2015

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Categories: Orphan
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Chapters: 0
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Published: January 01 1970
Updated: January 01 1970


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So beautifully written...

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Date: January 27 2015

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Natasha Roberts is a paediatrician with a healing touch and warm smile at 30 years of age, she is a beautiful woman with a broken spirit which she keeps hidden. When with her group of friends she is the listner, understander and the one her friends depend on for all the answers. Her secret is she that is unable to have children which is the reason her ex-husband gave her for their divorce, she lives to heal children even if it reminds her of what she can never have.

Angelo Luciano Salvatore is a mob boss and the head of the Salvatore Crime Family. He likes to think of himself as a business man when most would call him a ruthless bastard. The day his wife died he become a heartless shell who begins to neglect his son turning to his business for comfort. Until his son is taken to the hospital for a simple check up and is found to have the very disease that killed his mother Polycystic kidney disease. which in time would have killed him if not for Natasha who falls in love with the Christopher’s loving soul and finds herself as a match to donate one of her own kidneys to save his life. When Angelo meets Natasha he is cold and hurtful , Natasha in turn gives him a piece of her mind. Hands on her hips her eyes spitting fire she tells him off then walks away leaving Angelo to reflect on her words and the beautiful woman that Saved his son and made him whole once again.

 (The Banner is a temp until I can make something better. I just wanted to give the reader an idea of the characters I have in mind.)



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 4521
Read Count: 11726
Published: June 14 2010
Updated: November 19 2013


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Not sure why but for some reason I like this story and I usually don't like mobster stories...it's been a while since you updated...maybe  your muse will return and you'll get back to it as it was just getting interesting...

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Date: January 21 2016

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*** This story will be removed for editing in preparation for publication. ***

Kendra Dentaris is scared of her luck. At twenty-nine, she's the head graphic designer of a popular gaming website, the brand-new owner of a gorgeous downtown condo, and independent to the bone. And she may be in a relationship that's actually going somewhere. That's if Chase McGuire would stop cheating on her.

According to her best friend Prince, he's totally going to propose. That had to be why he invited her out to a remote village out in western Pennsylvania for the weekend. But Kendra takes a wrong turn and the life she knew before literally disappears.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 48
Completed:No
Word count: 51365
Read Count: 166685
Published: September 28 2010
Updated: August 25 2014


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Seems like Kendra is in love with Prince.  Hard to understand how they are so oblivious to their feelings...I don't get it so maybe as I keep reading I will...I do really like this story, still...

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Date: June 28 2015

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Dax is so cute that I hate for him to get hurt, but DeLeon and Kendra are written to have great chemistry...good story...

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Date: June 28 2015

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* NOW ON THE CHAMBER'S TOP TEN MOST FAVORITE STORIES LIST *

When the lines are drawn, will you risk your life to cross them for love?

In the Summer of 1988, tragedy hits home for Charlene Jacobson and her father when her little brother is killed playing a game of basketball in their Detroit housing projects.  She soon finds herself living in the small rural town of Millersville, Georgia, with her estranged grandmother. Millersville is a place where time stands still and the racial divide is as prevalent as the 1950s.  Secrets, lies, and betrayal lurk in every corner. Yet, through it all she finds solace in the arms of Ryan Quinn, a white senior track star and the son of the town Sherriff.  

Will their love cross the finish line?  Please R&R. 

© All right reserved by Rachelle Patterson aka wisedec4u
Do not copy, publish, revise or distribute without the expressed written consent of the above author.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Deep, dark, and mysterious
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:No
Word count: 103732
Read Count: 154712
Published: November 07 2010
Updated: January 09 2014


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 - Competition

I'm really liking this story so far. Good job!

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Date: May 24 2015

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - Undeniable

I like Charlie and Ryan. Karen is a weak, unfortunately. Definitely not my kind of person.. Good story,!

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Date: May 24 2015

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 - Heat

That was a great chapter ending! Ryan is so jealous! And James is so full of himself.  Charlie's not in to him, but dude's clueless.

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Date: May 24 2015

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 - Darnell

Such a good book! I think there is history between Charlene's and Ryan's dads that involves Charlene's mother. Of course, I'm just speculating. I'm excited to read more of the story. Love Charlie and Ryan together!

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Date: May 24 2015

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 - Remake Me

Wow, unexpected! For Ryan the apple doesn't fall far from the tree.

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Date: May 24 2015

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - Broken Trust

Danny has a sad life. Good chapter!

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Date: May 24 2015

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 - Bon Fires and Heartbreak

I can't stand guys like James. What does Karen see in him. It's all superficial. Eric seems better suited. 

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Date: May 24 2015

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 - Tender Moments

Another excellent chapter. Love this book!

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Date: May 24 2015

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - Secrets in the Dark

Wow, another unexpected event! This book is so good.

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Date: May 24 2015

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 - The Other Woman

Wow, this book rocks!

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Date: May 24 2015

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - Something Real

Great chapter, great ending!

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Date: May 24 2015

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 - Choices

II keep saying excellent  book because it's true!

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Date: May 24 2015

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22 - No Looking Back

 Brilliant! Ryan's father is such a hypocrite.

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Date: May 24 2015

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22 - No Looking Back

 Brilliant! Ryan's father is such a hypocrite.

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Date: May 24 2015

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24 - Losing Grip

Ryan told Wes about his relationship with Charlie even though he was unsure of Wes' feelings about it.  Wes broke the bro code and as a real brother to Ryan, he should have shared the truth about Christi especially since she kept coming after Ryan.  There's going to be a lot of backlash if Ryan and Charlie out their relationship.  With the exceptional writing that has brought never ending surprises in this story, I'mexcited to see what's next.  I hope eventually you find it within yourself to update and finish this book.  I just love it!

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Date: May 24 2015

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[Reviews - 65]
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Shy loner white nerd developes caring and complex relationship with popular black girl at school.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 40411
Read Count: 24529
Published: August 02 2011
Updated: April 02 2017


Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Good to return after 5 years...Marva should apolgize...she chose popularity and fake friends over true love...Rick seems ready to listen...sweet story...



Author's Response:

Thank you! It's good to be back :)

Marva will apologize soon, she knows how much she's hurt Rick. Thanks for reading!

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Date: March 24 2017

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[Reviews - 527]
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Mal has wanted her since the first night they met. CoCo has been fighting her instant attraction from day one. Will past dirty deeds keep these two from the one thing they both need...each other.

DISCLAIMER: All publically recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. (ME!!) The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

ME&U is an original work of fiction please do not copy or post this story to any other websites.

ME&U © 2011 by C.E. Givens (Elizablu)

###DUE TO A FUCKING THIEF KALANI ZOLDYCK, I TOOK MY STORIES DOWN###



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Kitten's Bed & Bath
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 9674
Read Count: 126492
Published: September 02 2011
Updated: September 22 2014


Title: ME&U

Loving Coco and Mal...Coco is no weak woman looking for a white prince...she's crazy tough, yet full of love...hence, her appeal to Mal...

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Date: October 30 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Coco is a hot mess!  I like this girl!

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Date: October 30 2015

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Coco is tough, like Mal...they seem a good match...masked sensitivity under a tough exterior...good story so far...

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Date: October 30 2015

Title: ME&U

Wow, Cayenne is heinous...but people can really harbor such hatred...so sad...but a good story...

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Date: October 30 2015

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.