Penname: jahchannah [Contact]

Real name: Carlotta

Member Since: January 25 2015

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I love to read and support aspiring authors!




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Summary:

What's a girl to do when there are two after you? 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Threesome+
Challenges: Give Me a Mountain Man Anyday!
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 6583
Read Count: 43900
Published: September 02 2013
Updated: July 13 2015


Title: The McRyan Brothers

Why would Sallie want Hayes since he's been an ass to her...Casey is nice so I can understand an attraction there but why is a woman expected to yield to the advances of a man who treats her badly...he's handsome and white so it doesn't matter? Sure he saved her supposedly but now her family has seen him...couldn't they expose him as well?...Hayes could have dropped her off at the police station...she hit her head on a rock but it doesn't sound like he gave her any care since she was tied to a chair and dirty so again why did he save her especially since he's in hiding himself and doesn't seem to like Sallie at all...the premise that set up them being together seems just a bit far fetched but hey that's just me...

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Date: June 26 2015

Title: The McRyan Brothers

Again this story is not making sense...How did Sallie know who the Hayes brothers are yet Casey has no clue?  And since Hayes is so well known in town then someone else would have figured out who he is...

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Date: June 26 2015

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Summary:

Snippets into the lives of different characters. A foray into emotions and interactions.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 9617
Read Count: 5511
Published: November 14 2013
Updated: May 08 2015


Title: Chapter 6: It Started Out With a Kiss ...

I like a lot. You should explore further.

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Date: May 08 2015

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Summary:

In the wake of an ugly divorce, Natalia executes a scheme meant to move her beyond the hurt inflicted by her ex-husband, Richard.  The plan is to ease her suffering by increasing his, and her weapon, a younger man unwittingly drawn into the illicit plot. 

In the quest for revenge, will Natalia realize her goal of bringing Richard to his knees?  Or will vengeance and her weapon of choice become her undoing?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: December's Wrap-up!
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 120
Read Count: 91987
Published: December 13 2013
Updated: May 02 2015


Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - The End of Ignorance and Bliss

Wow, so unexpected, so awesome a story!



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Date: February 28 2015

Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Losing Another Talerico

Wow, that chapter was worth the wait!  Great writing!


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Date: March 30 2015

Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - The Bridges We Burn

Brilliant...



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Date: April 10 2015

Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - No More Maybes

Another brilliant chapter!  Love it!



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Date: April 13 2015

Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - No More Maybes

Another brilliant chapter!  Love it!

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Date: April 13 2015

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - The Reaping

You did an excellent job dealing with such difficult subject matter. This book is quite good. So many authors lack originality in dealing with relationships that start due to unplanned pregnancy. You took that storyline and made it heavy, heartfelt and very emotionally real.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the awesome review, Jahchannah!  So glad you're enjoying this tale.

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Date: February 21 2015

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - The Parent Trap

Natalia is stuck on stupid, but this book is good!



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Thanks, Jahchannah!

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Date: February 21 2015

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Lamb of Sacrifice

Good chapter again in showing the emotion of the characters. You really drew me to them.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Jahchannah!

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Date: February 21 2015

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - "No Thanks" Giving

Good for Natalia to have gained some sense. I do continue to enjoy this book.



Author's Response:

Glad to hear it.  Thanks, Jahchannah!

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Date: February 21 2015

Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Happy New Year?

Such a good reunion.



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Date: February 21 2015

Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Four's a Tough Crowd

Another good chapter.  I enjoy the growth I see in Talia and Anthony.  I look forward to more.



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Date: February 21 2015

Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - The One That Got Away

Brilliant!



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Date: February 23 2015

Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Can You Keep a Secret?

Such a good book keeps getting better. You rock!



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Thanks Jachannah!

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Date: March 02 2015

Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - If I Can't Have You...

Dang, she should have left as soon as she knew he was there because she knows he's nothing but vindictive.  Excellent chapter.

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Date: March 15 2015

Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - The Cruelties of Fate

Wow, that was incredibly heart wrenching. I love this book.



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Date: April 03 2015

Title: Chapter 40: Epilogue

Brilliant!



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Date: May 03 2015

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[Reviews - 92]
Summary:

Porter had been gone for while, traveling and moving on with his life. His father’s illness brings him home, but what he didn’t expect was to be drawn back in by the reason why he left—her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 14802
Read Count: 11210
Published: December 28 2013
Updated: April 12 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Your stories have always been good so please continue...Porter and Avery are not finished with each other...



Author's Response:

They sure aren't! And thank you. I love the Chamber. Happy to be back!

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Date: April 07 2016

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Porter and Jess' engagement almost seems like a business arrangement...they don't seem in love and maybe it's meant to give that impression...not really much information given here about Porter's reasons for leaving and the relationship between Avery and him...I'm waiting for more...



Author's Response:

Thank you! Oh, why Porter left... It's going to come out in layers and we'll defintiely see him grow as we do! Thanks for your comment. Can't wait to show you more ^.^

 

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Date: April 07 2016

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Who wants Porter when Avery can have Hudson...I wouldn't want Porter if I had Hudson...just saying...this story is confusing...more layers of mystery are added without really providing real clues as to what is happening...but it's still quite early...hopefully clarity will be provided with subsequent chapters...



Author's Response:

Hey! It is complicated but I promise all will be revealed. Thanks for your comment!

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Date: April 08 2016

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

The story didn't progress much this chapter...learned that Porter seemed to feel some type of way about Hudson but who knows what that means...it's still early so clearly you are setting up the story...actually if I had to choose between Porter and Hudson based on looks alone, Hudson would win hands down so you really got to bring it to make a romance between Porter and Avery believable, imo...looking forward to see how you do it...

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Date: April 12 2016

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Summary:

Welcome to the city of Baltimore, Maryland and into the life of Elise Roberts. Elise lives the life of a pampered princess. Designer clothes, expensive cars and fancy parties are the center of her world. She is a woman who has everything she ever wanted until she meets Lukas Weiss. Faced for the first time in her life with rejection, Elise hatches a plan designed to heal her wounded pride. A game of seduction and the ultimate rejection. Funny thing, though, about the game of love....it is always unpredictable.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Journey
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 55134
Read Count: 40859
Published: January 08 2014
Updated: October 16 2016


Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Good turn of events...both Elise and Lukas are changing...growing...but trouble waits in the wings in the form of Oliver...looking forward for what's to come...

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Date: April 03 2016

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Such an immature girl...her father's company is being sabotaged and she is still worrying about getting some man to want her...at least she did forget for a minute...not liking Elise at all...

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Date: April 03 2016

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