Penname: CaliKid44 [Contact]

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Member Since: February 14 2015

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I love to read about great tragedies, awkward situations, violence, hard core die hard never ending love, obsession, interracial relationships (and not just bw/wm couples), and of course... crazy and deranged people.


 


I'm a writer... but I can't seem to overcome my procrastination or the fear that some lame will copy and paste my hard work and claim it as their own.


 


Secretly... I want to be an eidtor. I read more stories than not that have (excuse my french..) a fuck load of grammatical errors, broken english, spelling errors, and well... just plain laziness in not using the spell check option on MS Word. Come on yall damn...


 


Ultimately... I just want to escape reality and get lost in a world of amazing literature. So please... entertain me before I have to find ways to entertain myself. Trust me... you don't want that to happen...




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[Reviews - 219]
Summary:

Lieutenant Brady Sloane was a good man, but always seemed to finish last with women, until now.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Love Is Blind
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 16076
Read Count: 24538
Published: March 03 2012
Updated: May 06 2016


Title: Chapter 3: Three

I'm here for Brady. That asshole who tried to shade him for being disabled can fuck all the way off. How low can one person be? Usually villains have redeeming qualities to humanize them... but this prick is severely lacking. Nothing I hate more than someone who tries to make fun of people who are disabled. And though Brady is partially disabled, he 10 times the man Harvey is.

Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed
Date: April 07 2016

Title: Chapter 4: Four

The anticipation is killing me with these two. 😁 Hoping Brady snaps Harvey's neck. Hoping Brady comes back later that night and gives Pen the business. 

 

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Date: May 06 2016

Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 59]
Summary:

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Stop fighting about the same old thing, Let's start over, We can't let our good love die, Maybe we can start over, Give love another life,

 

I know that this will hurt you, I know you'll cry, I know I called you selfish, but that's a lie, I feel I know that's the best for us,

 

Let's start over 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 31466
Read Count: 10916
Published: September 02 2013
Updated: September 19 2016


Title: Chapter 7: Ring the Alarm

Only thing I have an issue with in all this is how Ethan had his girlfriend around his daughter prior to discussing it with Aurora. That's blatantly disrespectful and an idiotic. Of course she would be pissed. To add insult to injury... he has sex with the woman while his daughter is visiting. The hell...? Like you couldn't keep it in your pants until your kid went back home? I dunno... I'm team Alma. She seems to be the person who has the most sense.

Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed
Date: January 09 2016

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Summary:

 Camille Jackson was rejected since birth over her dark skin complexion. She has grown a tough skin and doesn’t get attached to anyone because of how some people have viewed her without even getting to know her. However Camille opens her heart to a baby in need and for the first six months Camille has grown to love the baby as if she were her own. That is until the baby's biological father comes into the picture.

Hiram Whitfield Jr was brought up in one of the most well known Ku Klux Klan families in the south and as the only son he feels the pressure to carry on his family's tradition. After finishing his prison sentence all Hiram wants to do is change his life for the better and be a good father to his child. If that means being disowned by his bigoted family then so be it. Ironically enough Hiram would have never thought that Camille would be the one to be his rock and strength to do so.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 51
Completed:Yes
Word count: 107887
Read Count: 215320
Published: October 09 2014
Updated: October 25 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Ok so you know you got me over here fangirling right? Like I'm so into this story on the way home I was thinking that if you made a part 2 about Steven, you could call it Colorblind. I even was thinking of a part 3 for Savannah... ugh... I just love this story so much. I really adore their family. You did a really amazing job on this. 

Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed
Date: September 04 2015

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Summary:

Her mistake was underestimating his obsession with her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 24639
Read Count: 40295
Published: April 23 2015
Updated: July 14 2016


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter ten

Dude is a legit head case.

Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed starstarstar
Date: July 07 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 55]
Summary:

 Her life was to be scarificed. She was sent to die in order to keep the treaty of her people, her family from her same fate but Kora's intuition was soon brought to light of her true calling ... that involved her complete submission over her body. What awaited her was neither man or beast but both and he wanted to consume her whole with a fire that burned deep.

Veles lived and breathed war.As a warrior of Drakon clan, battle was his only outlet, fighting with his brothers and taken the glory for all was the creed he lived by.When given the oppurtunity to take a slave for the sake of her village he agreed but what he didn't realize was the war it create to keep her.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Historical
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 15915
Read Count: 17784
Published: July 28 2015
Updated: September 03 2015


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

So glad you finished your story. I hate when I get really into reading something and the author goes m.i.a. and you never hear from them again. This is one story that was so good... I actually didn't mind the grammatical errors. Don't worry, the more you read and the more you write, your technique will improve. Also, an editor would be helpful as well. But really I just love stories like this with magic, mythical creatures, and adventure. Barbaric... but beautiful. So thank you. Hope to read more from you in the future.



Author's Response:

AWWWWW thank you much!! I appreciate your feed back and i'm humbled,truly!! I'm working on my errors and i know i have a long way to go but I write because i love it, and because of you guys who love the stories!!  You truly keep me going!! I will continue to write and won't leave you hanging!! Thank you so so much

Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: September 03 2015

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 31]
Summary:

 

Ireniva is a succubus in college, she works in a bar called, Temptation. Her boss happens to be Lilith, the oldest succubus known to history. While working at the bar, Iren meets and comes head-to-head with other supernatural beings. One being a vampire who's obsessed with her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Horror, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Femslash, Homosexuality, Kink, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content
Challenges: Chamber Grindhouse Challenge 7
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 12080
Read Count: 39374
Published: September 09 2015
Updated: November 13 2015


Title: Chapter 4: Party

Siraj is bae. More of him please. :)

Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed starstarstar
Date: September 22 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 21]
Summary:

 This story is a continuation from my first one Dragon Master! If you haven't read it please do so, just so you're up to date on the characters. I debated on this for a minute but knew this story would see the light!! Sorry it took so long but I wanted it to be right for you guys!! This is a historical, erotica love story about an alpha dragon and his woman who has her on fire!! Please enjoy and excuse my errors.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Historical
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 11592
Read Count: 4607
Published: September 18 2015
Updated: October 19 2015


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I really enjoyed that last line. Looking forward to the next chapter. 😊



Author's Response:

thank you sweetie more to come!! I knew that last line was going to go out with a bang!!! lol 

Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: October 05 2015

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Summary:

 

Thoroughly revised and reuploaded!

 

Willow Carter is a plus-sized girl with lots of attitude and very low self-esteem. When her mother and oler sister force her to jog to slim down for her sister's wedding, she is attacked by a madman and rescued by a savior. But just because a man saves your life doesn't mean you should trust him. Soon she throws herself into a thrilling game of cat and mouse that brings more pain than pleasure and puts everyone she loves in harm's way.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 90171
Read Count: 301289
Published: October 04 2015
Updated: April 17 2021


Title: Chapter 15: Breaking and Mending

So at the end I was reading along like... Sebastian gonna do this guy like he did Simon. But then I read that last line and was like... holy hell. Awaiting the next update. 👍

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Date: January 04 2016

Title: Chapter 16: Show and Tell

Omg... this chapter is life. This story is everything I'm about. And once again this proves... Sebastian is the business. 💋

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Date: February 08 2016

Title: Chapter 18: Monster's Wife

This gave me life...

"You're a sick fuck," she hissed.

He countered huskily, "I'm your sick fuck."

 

That was literary gold. 😉

Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed
Date: May 31 2016

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 13]
Summary:

This is a brief story about revenge. The prey and the victim's names are not included.



Table of Contents
Categories: Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 471
Read Count: 4804
Published: October 05 2015
Updated: October 05 2015


Title: Chapter 1: The Captive

I wish it was longer with more character background for the rapist and the victim. I also wish the justice wasn't carried out quite so swiftly - they say the devil is in the details for a reason. Lastly... I wish this was one of those stories that begins with the ending and ended at the beginning. But... you're not a genie...

 

Good one off tho...



Author's Response:

Hello, I posted this scene because I wanted to see if readers would be interested in this story. If so, I planned to write the entire story after I've completed the one I'm currently invested in. I was surprised by all the great responses, and I thank each and every one of you for enjoying the scene. I shall return with a more fleshed out story, from beginning to end, in the future. Thank you again. ~ Virginia Gilbert

Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed
Date: October 05 2015

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Summary:

Isabella "Izzy" Salvatore is just like any other first grader who likes to draw and color pictures and is living the happy carefree days of childhood. However some of Izzy's drawings are not so happy and carefree some are just really dark and twisted.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Psychological
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 27153
Read Count: 7089
Published: February 07 2016
Updated: November 26 2016


Title: Chapter 4: CAST

That's cold how you made Remy Ma that lil girl's mother.

Kinda wish there were no pics for tjis story... but when I saw Blair Underwood... I was like...  yeah... I can imagine him as Keith. After watching him in that movie Asunder... yeah... you picking him to play Keith is legit. Ugh... I hate stories like this. Mainly because kids get abused everyday and in a lot of the cases the parent(s) know and don't do shit... or are in some way involved. Good writing. Horrible situation.

Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed
Date: February 20 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

She saw no other way out.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 377
Read Count: 1642
Published: February 10 2016
Updated: February 10 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm dying laughing over here. This came to you in church? You're my kind of girl. 😁



Author's Response:

My mind wonders in church lol

Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 20 2016

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 24]
Summary:

Kind of a companion piece to Stone Cold, but it can be considered a stand alone piece. It's another drabble for another song.



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: None
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: Stand Alone but Together
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1247
Read Count: 3016
Published: March 06 2016
Updated: March 06 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I wish this was the first chapter of a new story... but I've very happy to have read this one off. Nicely done. Closure is very underestimated these days. Again, nicely done.

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Date: March 07 2016

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[Reviews - 58]
Summary: Siriphana Howard, was alone in this world until she met Nicholas Clayton. Who becomes her best friend, and anchor. With a trip back to his home for the holidays, she discovers that the man she secretly pins for has an unexpected surprise.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Kink, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 31246
Read Count: 12552
Published: March 10 2016
Updated: June 05 2016


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Mmmk... so I'm confused as to why Noah and Jennifer are engaged. Who doesn't it benefit and why? From my understanding they're just friends with benefits... so why the need to get married? Why does Noah feel like his parents favor Nicholas? And last... is Nicholas possibly gay? ... just things I was thinking as I was reading. Lovely story. Hope you update soon. 😊

Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed
Date: April 07 2016

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 28]
Summary:

Two ex-lovers meet in an airport terminal years after ending their relationship. The fourth and final installment of my series of one shots based on a song. And to be fair, this one was inspired by three songs--Hello, Send My Love and These Days.



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: Stand Alone but Together
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1554
Read Count: 3886
Published: March 24 2016
Updated: March 24 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

No sympathy for fuckboys. She was very charitable during that whole interaction. I feel bad for her husband who had to pick up the pieces and deal with her trust issues after the number this one did on her. I read all the related stories to this one off and I would be interested to read one from her husband's POV on his journey with her from when they met until the present and I would be oh so curious to find out what would happen if the hubby had his own run in with the ex.

Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed
Date: March 24 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 55]
Summary:

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Emery and Nicholas have been friends forever. But when Nicholas finds out he's sick he asks for something that could change their friendship forever



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 4365
Read Count: 5808
Published: April 13 2016
Updated: August 21 2019


Title: Chapter 2: Requests

This is going to sound cold... but ok ol boy already dying. So... why put your friend - no, your "brother" and his wife thru the hell of dealing with the fallout from a one night stand? God... the balls on this guy. 😕


 


Not to mention... what if this one time results in a pregnancy? 😬


Just... No

Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 20 2016

Title: Chapter 3: We All Make Choices

Ooooooh Olivia is a foul ass bitch... and Nicolas is no better. I hope Emery divorces her and finds someone worthy of being with him. The nerve of this tramp amazes me. She has some brass balls to make her husband feel bad because she decided to fuck his friend. GTFO 😑 

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Date: May 02 2016

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Summary:

"You have thought about it, haven't you? How it would feel to be with both of us."

"If we do this...promise me that nothing changes. The thought of losing you both..."

Dante took a moment and then nodded. He shifted his gaze to her shoulder and Hope felt Emil grip her tighter, leaning further into her when his mouth brushed her ear and he said.

"This changes nothing."

 

Caution:

MFM Short Story!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Kink, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4029
Read Count: 15464
Published: April 25 2016
Updated: December 25 2016


Title: Chapter 2: The Confession

Good start! 



Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed
Date: April 25 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Thomas Bedford is actor, rich and handsome. He's got beautiful women, fast cars, and fans begging for selfies. He's looking for something serious now, no more flings, just a woman for him and only him. He meets Misa, a painter who shies away from the limelight. She hasn't been with anyone in almost a year, and this handsome man comes out of nowhere, making her feel new sensations. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1220
Read Count: 2574
Published: May 02 2016
Updated: May 02 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really love your writing style. Very refreshing. As for the story, I'm curious to see where this goes. Meh... not really here for Tommy's fake friends. Yup. That's how much I liked this story - I gave the main character a nickname 😊. 

Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed
Date: May 05 2016

Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 185]
Summary:

Coming home can be harder than staying away sometimes.

Home has now been published on Amazon and there's quite a bit more added from where I had originally ended this story. Hope you all enjoy it.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 21
Completed:No
Word count: 21
Read Count: 18591
Published: June 10 2016
Updated: October 06 2016


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Charlie is a better woman than I. Lord knows that both Alec and Vanessa both would be laid up in the ICU down the hall from Olly if I was her when he finally dragged his ass into that hospital. The nerve... 😶



Author's Response:

Oh CaliKid44, that made me cackle! Great stuff!

 

K.

Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 07 2016

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Amazing story. This was my first read and I really enjoyed it. I hate deadbeat parents, so I was relieved when the reveal was made as to why Charlie left. I'm hoping the next chapter focuses on these two healing their marriage. Bye Vanessa.



Author's Response:

Hi CaliKid44,

Thanks for your review and have a nice week.

K.

Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 13 2016

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[Reviews - 173]
Summary:

 

Sometimes people are beautiful. Not in looks. Not in what they say. Just in what they are.     




Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 36570
Read Count: 15093
Published: July 15 2017
Updated: September 30 2017


Title: Chapter 2: Love Is Definitely In the Air

Girl... what? Why would you take a perfectly good story that everybody loved, trash it, and then put out multiple revised versions? Have you no loyalty or respect for your readers? As much as I loved the original, I'm tapping out. As the wishy washy writer you seem to be, I wish all the fans of this story good luck with what I am almost sure will be extended periods of absence with no story updates, more revisions, and endless excuses by the author for wasting your time.



Author's Response:

That's the beauty of this site. You don't have to read anything you don't want to. You don't have to pay for something you don't want and are free to move on without any regret! You calling me wishy washy and pretty much trying to insult me is fine because my skin has grown very thick during my hiatus from writing so it doesn't bother me. I must correct you on something, this story is already written, I just have to do some editing to it so there will be no extended periods of absence unless my work and outside life gets in the way. I am a real person outside of this site by the way. I've been gone for a year I think, so I've had a lot of time to write and get my stories together. ;)

P.S. That little crack about loyalty to readers was so ridiculous and you're coming across as someone who is entitled and that's not good. My readers know that their reviews and feelings are important to me and I'm not an author who usually leaves stories unfinished. Asked around, I've had stories, sequels and one shots that I've completed so you're definitely wrong there but I thank you for reading what you did and I appreciate the love you had for the first story.  

-CC

Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed
Date: July 21 2017

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.