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Real name: Keiondra Sanders

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Summary:

 

The Scar

 

The Scar on her face....could never match the one on her heart. 

 

Kick ass Banner by the great Valhalla!! 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 53873
Read Count: 69064
Published: February 14 2011
Updated: June 28 2017


Title: Chapter 12: Black Beauty

Wow. DeShaun is horrible. Fine or not, money or not, I would not stay married to him. It's not worth it. That's Emma's fucked up sister Lisa!!! She definitely isn't going to leave him. Momma will not have it. That's how she and mom is eating. I think Zach should drop him as a client but at the same time I want him to keep him so that Lisa and Emma can cross paths. LOl. I'm glad that she is getting the procedure to get rid of her scar. It's the constant reminder of the horrid things she experienced. It's also going to be a big confidence booster for her! Now we just need her and Zach to get together!! I can't believe that Jeremy obsessed with Emma that much that he almost killed some prostitute. He really needs to rot in jail, he should not have been released at all. He is going to kill someone trying to get to Emma seriously. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: February 28 2017

Title: Chapter 2: Emma

Oh my goodness... I truly feel for this woman. Her life has been shit her entire life. Her mom is dead ass wrong and deserves everything she gets. You can't mistreat that girl because her dad was a piece of shit! You laid there and made her! What type of crap is that?! Her sister is just as bad, as the older sister you are supposed to protect your younger siblings and provide a good example. You should feel disrespected that people only talk to your sister in order to get close to you. I would snap if anyone attempted to disrespect my little sisters. I don't think so. Sure, you pick on your siblings but you don't allow other freaking people to do it!!!! And this so-called husband of hers... What an ass, doesn't even deserve to be called a man. You allowed this man to rape her and then accuse her of cheating?! Forreal? She needs to leave his fuck ass. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: February 24 2017

Title: Chapter 3: The Bluest Eye

Her mom is the scum of the earth. How could you do that to your child?! She told you this man was hurting her and you decide to fucking call back and tell the man what she told you? Don't call anymore? I'm sure she has no desire to, you don't even care that he man is hurting her. Hell, he could kill her and you wouldn't give a damn. What type of woman does that to a child? Did he seriously force her to throw herself at a man and then scar her because his sick and twisted plan didn't work?! 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: February 24 2017

Title: Chapter 4: The Color Purple

I hope that fucker is dead!!! I know that's wrong but I truly do. Thank God for Javier. Lord knows she would not have survived otherwise. I don't see why she wouldn't take that job. The dream is to get paid to do what you love. You love to read, so get paid for something related to that. You can't expect Javier to stay there forever love. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: February 24 2017

Title: Chapter 5: Great Expectations

Aww I love that Javier said those things to her. She needed to hear that. I hope the takes the job offer. It will be good for her and she will still be close to Javier since he will be in Manhattan. Ralph's description of her features is great too. She needs to know that she isn't some hideous monster or something! 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: February 24 2017

Title: Chapter 6: Through The Looking Glass

Holy crap!!! That ass is out of prison?! I hope he doesn't find her, it would tear her apart. She can barely handle life right now. Him showing up would kill her. And I'm sure that's what he intends to do. And you mean to tell me that Zach is the nephew. This is going to be interesting. I'm sure someone will know her story soon enough. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: February 24 2017

Title: Chapter 7: Pride and Prejudice

That is horrible. I'm glad that she finally somewhat told someone about her abuse. But she really should talk to that therapist. She needs it or she will forever be that girl. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: February 24 2017

Title: Chapter 8: Of Mice and Men

It's really hard to hear some of the stories that these women tell. No one deserves to be treated like that. But I'm really glad that Ralph brought her there, she needs to start her healing process. She's going to need it because I feel like Jeremy is going to show up sooner or later. Oh no!! Not fun spirited Luna!!!! I truly hope she's okay. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: February 24 2017

Title: Chapter 9: The Devil Wears Prada

Wow. I was just hoping that Polly didn't play the radio with him. Dang. She finally told Zach the truth!! Thank God. Now he needs to go beat the shit out of that asshole. His mother is a price of damn work. How can you act like that towards your mother?? I can see why Emma would treat her egg donor like that though. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: February 24 2017

Title: Chapter 10: Black Like Me

I like Kelly. I can see her and Emma becoming close friends, even if she and Zach don't get together. I can't believe his mom did that. How horrible are you? You drive that man to suicide! How can you live with yourself after that? Then you don't even take in your children. Crappy female. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: February 24 2017

Title: Chapter 11: A Walk To Remember

Yes!!! Ralph always comes through. I'm glad that he recognizes that he's damaged too. They both need to heal before they go into anything close to a relationship or they will hurt each other even more. Look at him, sending shivers up and down her spine. Lol

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: February 25 2017

Title: Chapter 13: Waiting To Exhale

Shit!! I just knew he would get the money somehow. Just didn't expect him to get it that way. Of all damn ways too! I'm sooo glad that Emma and Zach kissed!!!! Yes ma'am. Now this fucker wants to come and fuck things up. She finally starting to get over things and even open up about them, I truly don't need him to come and screw up everything she worked soo hard for. I know Zach is going to protect her but still. Just the sight of him is going to cause her to shut completely down, I know it. Been there, done that. I knew Lisa ass wasn't going to leave him, what is she without him? I kinda hope the stripper goes to the public on both their ass. They deserve it. I wonder what happened to the prostitute? Did she live? I hope she did so she can get his ass locked up! Or her pimp can find Jeremy and handle his punk ass!!!! 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: March 01 2017

Title: Chapter 14: Brave New World

Polly's brothers should have wooped his ass for doing that to her!!! Hopefully this Sandy girl is not with the games and will get him together. I bet you this dude is her father or something. He knows her. I think it clicked. Is that man her father or some relative on her father's side?! I'm super excited. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: March 01 2017

Title: Chapter 15: Author's Note

Yes!!! I can't wait! You're on Wattpad? Whats your username? I'm on there under KeiKei1005. Add me or whatever so I can read more of your work. 

UPdate soon. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: March 01 2017

Title: Chapter 15: Author's Note

What's your username on Wattpad? I'm on there and would love to read it. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 24 2017

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Summary:

*Warning* There is a LOT of explicit sex and language - Read at your own titillation- I mean risk.

Danielle is a beautiful, rich, and successful single mother who has been hurt one too many times. On the same night that she decides to give up on love, fate not only delivered to her the man of her dreams (Leonardo DiCaprio), it also sent her two new friends (Brandy & Maks). Just when things couldn't seem to get any better, the past rears its ugly head and threatens to take away everything she holds dear.


This is the FIRST edition in the "Unbreakable Bonds" series. The next is Brandy and Maks- A New York State Of Mind" and the last is Facing Your Destiny".Check the "End Notes" of each chapter for crossover info.

~:~:~:~:~:~Happy reading. ~:~:~:~:~:~



Table of Contents
Categories: Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: Unbreakable Bonds
Chapters: 127
Completed:No
Word count: 261153
Read Count: 1103898
Published: November 25 2011
Updated: January 19 2018


Title: Chapter 50: Baby Steps...

I'm glad that everything was okay at the hospital. Brand and Mel are starting over, Leo was able to be there for his wife and cousin. Dani was able to be there for Mel and let her know she wasn't alone and Jake was there to support Mel. All in all, a good day. Considering the circumstances. Lol 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 26 2015

Title: Chapter 51: Breaking Through

Did he really give her a moo moo. LOl. That is hilarious. They are just the cutest couple ever. Mel better let go of the past. Gavin has moved on and so should you. Jake seems like a good guy. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 26 2015

Title: Chapter 37: You See Right Through Me...

Awwwwwww she is having twins!!! He was not playing about giving her tiwns. LOl. I can't wait. And she got a complete set. A boy and girl. Adorable. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 25 2015

Title: Chapter 36: Decisions... Decisions

I feel for Brandy. I hope she knows what she's doing. That tit for tat thing never works. It only makes the pain worse. Take a break to get your head together but think and come to a clear decision and then get back in the fight. She definitely needs a break, that crap she pulled with Dani in the car was just too wreckless. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 25 2015

Title: Chapter 40: Starting Over

I'm glad that he really wants to make things right with her. But it's going to take a lot more than just that to get things right. I wonder how he is going to make her fall in love with him again. Make his ass work Brandy!!! 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 26 2015

Title: Chapter 41: Walls

Aww Brandy!! Well I guess you can't resist good penis. LOl. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 26 2015

Title: Chapter 42: Moving On

Not writer's block trying to make things bad. LOl. Haha. I'm glad that he and Dani were able to move past things. Mad it almost came to blows between him and Leo. But I'm also glad that Leo took up for his wife and stood by her even though he didn't agree with her getting invlolved from the beginning. Very good husband. They are going to get married!!!!! Yay

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 26 2015

Title: Chapter 39: Lost & Found

Oh yay!!! He isn't trying to get with her. That is definitely ironic. I'm glad that he realizes what he did. He better make good on those words. I know Brandy is going to make his ass earn every bit of her. He needs to understand that she doesn't need him but she wants him. She can live without him if need be. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 26 2015

Title: Chapter 35: The Flipside

Lol oh gosh. I hope Maks isn't acting stupid in NY. Do we need to beat his ass!!! I can't wait to find out what Leo an Dani are having. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 25 2015

Title: Chapter 35: The Flipside

Lol oh gosh. I hope Maks isn't acting stupid in NY. Do we need to beat his ass!!! I can't wait to find out what Leo an Dani are having. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: April 25 2015

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